La Chanson de la Victoire (The Song of Victory): La Petite Arpenteuse (Non, SV, you are a General of France in the Napoleonic War!)

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Join Thérèse Auclair, a surveyor for the French Army, in her romp around France during the Napoleonic Era!
Vive la Révolution! Vive la République! Vive la France!
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Les Filles Magiques: Roi Fou Arthur (AilingStar)
Another Omake, because I can't help myself.

Have you ever wondered where this quest might end up if it was a magical girl anime? Well I've got something to satisfy your incredibly specific tastes.

La Chanson de la Victoire: Édition Fille Magique

Épisode ???: Roi Fou Arthur

Thérèse grimaced as she fell against the ground. "No… I came so close…!"

The Duke of Wellington smiled at the girl. "You know, this is not the first time I have fought against France." He idly slashed to his side, knocking Adalene off of Cramoise. "It was a long, long time ago. A man I trusted had slept with my wife." He slashed again, sending Renée to the ground. "I chased him to France. He had stolen my wife from me!" He shouted as he fired a beam at Tempeste, sending her plummeting to the ground. "His trickery made her go mad, made her think me mad!" He rode over the fallen bodies of Joséphine and d'Oettlinger. "So I chased the man, the prince of France, all the way to his kingdom, as the coward hid in the Dolorous Guarde."

Thérèse gasped. A Prince of France… the Dolorous Guarde…?! The man in front of her, he couldn't be…?

"Ah, I see you now understand!" The man laughed darkly. "I am not merely the Duke of Wellington! I am King Arthur, reborn after all these years, arisen to protect my kingdom from their greatest threat." He smiled at her. "And when I've defeated you, I'll make sure nobody threatens England again. Waterloo is only the first step.

"There were only two who could possibly defeat me." He smiled at her. "Lancelot's descendants. When I was asleep, I had very little influence over the world, but I was not completely powerless. Over the generations, I have manipulated events so that Lancelot's lineage petered out." He frowned and blasted at Thérèse as she was getting up. "It should have been EASY! Galahad had only been able to have one child! I should have been able to kill them off easily!" He shot at her again, causing her to cry out in pain. "But no! No matter how much I tried, they just refused to die! The Black Plague, the wars, no matter what I caused, one child of the Lake would always slip through my fingers.

"But when I was born again..." He chuckled. "There was only one left. A young girl. The moment I had regained enough power, I laid her low, and soon enough she died." His grin twisted into a snarl. "But I had… miscalculated. While I grew in power, the girl became a woman, and she had two children.

"Imagine my horror when I learned of her children because her daughter had summoned cannons and used them to fight back the Prussians at Valmy single-handed."

Thérèse understood. She finally understood.

This man… no, this monster was behind everything that had went wrong in her life. Her mother dying, her father growing distant…

And… Brian...

"Your brother was pathetic by comparison," Arthur gloated, not noticing Thérèse standing up, "but I would not take chances. I refused to allow a child of the Lake to once again cause my downfall." He looked at Thérèse and frowned. "So… you're still alive, Child of the Lake. Even when I have taken everything from you." He got off his horse and gripped his sword, Excalibur. "That shall soon be rectified." He swung forward…

And missed.

His eyes widened. "What? How-"

"You are wrong, Mad King Arthur." He looked up to see Thérèse floating above him, eyes shining bright. "You may have taken my mother from me, and my brother as well." She hummoned a cannon, bigger and more powerful than she had ever summoned before. "But you have not taken my Will." He fired a beam, but it didn't even singe Thérèse.

"You have not taken my country." The cannon began to charge, it's light falling upon the soldiers of France.

"And you have not taken my friends." Arthur felt magical binds form on him, and he looked around to see the other Filles Magique, faces full of determination, surrounding him.

"Now take this!" Thérèse shouted as the cannon finished charging. "Artillerie Céleste: Saint Graal!"

And the cannon fired.

And the Duke of Wellington, the Mad King Arthur Reborn, was no more.

Thérèse smiled even as she felt herself transforming back to normal, even as she fell to the ground. Even as her friends crowded around her, begging for her to be alive. "Brian… did I do well?"

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I must be insane.

Joséphine and d'Oettlinger are Magical Girl versions of actual people. Adalene was the star of my previous Omake. Renée and Tempeste were also made by me.

Again, saving my +10 for later.
 
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Les Filles Magiques: Arpenteuse et Cavalier (AilingStar)
MOAR OMAKE! MOAR BONUS!

La Chanson de la Victoire: Édition Fille Magique

Épisode ???: Arpenteuse et Cavalier


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Thérèse frowned. She had never asked for the life of a Fille Magique, but… well, someone had to do it, and she was the only one who could do it. She was the only one who could fight against the power that the Prussians used.

That was before Fille Magique Cavalier Inébranlable came along on her blood-red horse and mowed down the metal abominations that the Prussians had made.

After seeing the girl in combat, Thérèse had so many thoughts to sift through as she lay on her cot. Why was a girl younger than her by at least a few months fighting so skillfully? Why did Cavalier's powers seem so different from her own?

...Was she even needed anymore?

She was interrupted by the sound of footsteps outside. Thérèse stood and peered outside.

It was Cavalier. She may not have been dressed in vibrant red, but it was unmistakably Cavalier.

"Bonjour." Cavalier spoke softly. "You're Petite Arpenteuse, right?"

Thérèse bristled a bit at her Fille Magique title. "Please, call me Thérèse."

"A-ah, right." Cavalier seemed to blush a bit. "I apologize, I am a bit of an admirer. I'm Adalene."

Thérèse smiled. "It is nice to meet you." She looked at the moonstone charm that hung from Adalene's neck, one of a horse in motion. Idly, she touched her own cannon charm. "So… how did you get your charm?"

"A-ah, it was in my grand-père's old belongings. I think it belonged to Grand-mère, though." She sighed. "I have so many questions about my family now. What about you?"

Thérèse shrugged. "I just found it when the Prussians were attacking. I don't know where it came from, but it just seemed to call out to me."

"Ah, so did mine!" Adalene seemed to brighten a bit. "That was so odd! Do you think it might have been some form of magic?"

"Perhaps it was." Thérèse smiled. Perhaps it would be best to stick around for the time being...

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Save the +10 for later.

My mind works in mysterious ways... that not even I understand.

Edit: posted right after a co-writer post encouraging more Omakes... :lol:
 
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Discussions with a friend (CGTM2002)
Trying my hand at writing an omake, all credits to Jean-Philippe Laurens goes to Telamon

Discussions with a friend

1794

Jean-Philippe Laurens stared at his friend, mouth slightly agape. He had just asked him quite an odd question, it being something he never expected from him.

"My friend, may I ask for your help in courting a girl?" Napoleon had just asked him.

This caught Laurens off guard, he had never expected Napoleon, the hero of Saorgio and the most brilliant man he had ever met, to have a love life, but now just realizing that despite his brilliance, he was just as human as he was.

Laurens quickly composed himself and responded with confidence, "Certainly, my friend, you have come to the right man."

Napoleon just smiled at him, "Laurens, this particular woman is not one of those naive little girls or dirty whores that frequent your tent."

Oh, this piqued Laurens' interest, "And, if I may be so bold, who is this woman you are referring to?

"Thérèse Auclair, surely you must know her."

That was a name that Laurens was familiar with, it was a name familiar to most of France. She was the shield of Valmy, a hero of France, and apparently, the apple of Napoleon's eye.

"Oh, you have picked quite a woman, my friend, but do not worry." Laurens said arrogantly, remembering his past conquests "I know all there is to know about woman, and I know exactly what you must do"

Napoleon gave a sigh, as his friend and fellow officer started talking about his various seduction methods and tricks in bed, perhaps he shouldn't have bothered to ask.


Its a bit rough, but I think it works.
 
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A Changed impression (CGTM2002)
Alright let's see if I got this right.

A Changed impression

1798

Therese Auclair was not all that sure about Jean-Philippe Laurens. When she first met him at the start of the campaign, she was not all that impressed with him, only seeing his womanizing, with her coming to the conclusion that he only got to where he is because of his friendship with Napoleon.

All of those previous thoughts were immediately wiped from her mind after she saw his actions at the battle of the Pyramid.

The battle had been going quite well, she recalled, Monsieur Napoleon's brilliant tactics managing to counter the famed Mamluk Cavalry, but just when they let their guard down, one last Mamluk charge awaited them, they were unprepared for it, and many of them tried to brace themselves for the inevitable impact that awaited them.

But, what they did not factor in was Lauren's cavalry. They had not brought much cavalry with them, having only a few thousand with them, but Lauren's was able to utilize their tiny cavalry force to their full extent. Taking initiative to save the day, he took what cavalry they had and charged. It was said that Laurens was at the forefront of the charge, ever brave in leading his men to glory. The Mamluks were taken by complete surprise at this unexpected action, breaking the momentum of the charge, gifting Napoleon enough time to compose his men and finish off the last off the Mamluks.

As Therese watches Napoleon come towards Laurens, embracing him and congratulating him for his brave actions, something about awarding him "A Legion of Honour" she thinks to herself, "Perhaps there is more to this man than I originally thought."


I wanted to put in a part about Laurens logistical abilities coming in to, doubly impressing Therese with them, but I don't know how to do that.
 
Les Filles Magiques: Noël Magique (AilingStar)
Well if Plausitivity is writing a Christmas episode for the canon 'verse, I can't exactly fall behind...

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La Chanson de la Victoire: Édition Fille Magique

Épisode ???: Noël Magique


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Thérèse smiled as she looked around the room. She had only been a Fille Magique for a few months, and yet she had already made two amazing friends.

On one hand, there was Adalene, La Cavalier Inébranlable. On the battlefield she was so determined and steadfast, but off the battlefield, she was so kind, even if she had a biting wit.

Then there was Renée, La Soldat de la Forêt, who was exciteable and hot-blooded. Yet she was simultaneously loyal and supportive.

They were the best friends Thérèse could ask for.

"Oi, Thérèse!" Renée called. "C'mon, we've got a holiday to celebrate!" She gave Thérèse a box wrapped in colorful paper. "H-here, to celebrate the holidays!"

Thérèse gingerly unwrapped the present to find a beautiful heart-shaped pendant. She smiled. "Renée, c'est beau!"

Renée blushed slightly. "Y-you really like it?"

"I love it!" Thérèse embraced Renée, whose blush deepened further. "Thank you so much, Renée!"

"Y-yeah… no problem..." Renée said blissfully.

Adalene sighed and shook her head. "Thérèse, vous caché ignorante..." She whispered.

"I hate to interrupt this wondrous holiday, but..." The girls turned to see Jo, the friendly ghost that had served as the girls' mentor. "I have a dire warning."

Thérèse released the madly blushing Renée and turned to Jo. "What is it?"

Jo created a picture of a strange goat-demon. "One of my old enemies has returned, it seems. The Krampus, a brutal spirit. He used to be a benevolent spirit of Noël, but he has been corrupted, and now seeks to destroy Noël entirely. He seeks to use his influence to drive the government of France against the holiday, so that he may use our glorious nation as a springboard to destroy the holiday entirely."

Renée frowned. "That con! We can't let him get away with that!"

Adalene nodded. "Noël is a grand holiday meant to celebrate our family and loved ones. We can't let it be destroyed."

Thérèse nodded and turned to the girls. "Well, are we ready, girls?"

The three nodded as one, and clutched their pendants tight. "Nous Métamorphosons!"

Once the three had fully transformed, Arpenteuse looked at Cavalier and Soldat. "Alright, Filles Magiques! Let's save Noël!"

As they flew out the window, Jo sighed. "Stay safe, girls..."

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The question is: Who is Jo? And what's her secret...?

Save my bonus for later.
 
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Epic Rap Battles of la Révolution (T-Reese vs Nappy B)
Epic Rap Battles of le Révolution!

Thérèse Auclair! (T-Reese)

VERSUS​

Napoleon Bonaparte! (Nappy B)​

Begin!

(Thérèse)
Merde! The timing of this damnable situation,
Having to babysit Le Petit Corps of this nation
My battle station is above yours,
We both fight in the same wars,
Both for a revolutionary cause,
But when it comes to women, your soldiers drop the balls!
Un, deux, trois... quatorze ans?
Did you leave for Italy, or forget your fromage in the oven?
Kids call me giantess, I guess they're right.
I am the Alps that you can't cross in this fight!
You're a Jacobin dictator, shooting crowds grape seeds,
At least when I survey men, they would die Valmy!

(Napoleon)
Sacrébleu! A woman, running an army?
You belong in the kitchen, running the cantine!
La Petite Arpenteuse? Vous-êtes an insolent worm!
My soldiers are fine, push you all the way to Perm!
I am the greatest general France has seen!
No one knows you, except for SV!
Brainchild of a disorderly mob,
I sob!
For you are truly triste!
You may be géante, but you fight under moi!
Don't ascend any further or you'll end up like le roi!
Mere work of fiction, I can think you away!
Go back to the kitchen, get me souffler.​

(Thérèse)
Sexism and femme jokes, that the best you can spit at me?
You aren't tall enough to see your initials're NB!?
Your Code oppresses women, it should be remade!
Maybe include some actual Égalité?
I know you're proud of beating all those Russians off,
But tell me, when winter comes, where does that rush end up?!
I bleed the tricolor, born in the Pope's French seat,
You bleed stomach acid, lived and died on rocks in the sea!
Fool, my worms will eat up all your grape shot,
I am imaginary/
But Waterloo was not!

(Napoleon)
I crown myself emperor, leader of France!
You should retreat, because there's no second chance!
My followers are historians, military men!
Your fans are naval nerds, addicted to shows from Japan!
Wannabe Jeanne d'Arc, your future becomes dark,
End up burned and roasted, I'll help light up a spark!
I've conquered Italy and Egypt,
Broke the Coalitions,
While you masqueraded as a man to chase away broke Prussians!
Thérèse looks lost, her mapping must be rare...
If I wanted children's doodles, I'd ask for your frère!
At Austerlitz I crushed two empires,
So get off the lit, and attend to my desires!​

AN: Enjoy.
 
Les Filles Magiques: Noël Éthéré (AilingStar)
Hey you should have seen the magical girl one.
You mean... this one?

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Noël Éthéré
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Thérèse smiled. Noël had been so peaceful, despite what had happened during the year. Happy times, all things considered.

Then, to her surprise, as she had been walking down the Avignon streets, a flash of light enveloped her. She could just barely see Brian crying out and reaching to her.

Then, suddenly, she was back in Avignon. But it was different. Dreamlike, almost. And it was depressingly empty. She seemed to be the only person there…

No, wait! There was a woman on the street! She was dressed in what looked like an odd mixture of high fashion and French army fatigues, and she was laying there in the snow, unconscious…!

Thérèse rushed over to the woman. "Hey, are you alright?!"

The woman groaned. "Oui, I'm-"

The woman stopped as her eyes met Thérèse.

The woman had the same face as her. And come to think of it, she also had Thérèse's exceptional height.

Needless to say, when the woman started screaming, Thérèse screamed as well.

"Wh-who are you?!" The woman asked. "A-and why do you look like me?!"

"I could ask the same thing!" Thérèse demanded. "What is this place, anyway?!"

The woman looked at Thérèse oddly. "This is Le Monde Éthéré, where Filles Magiques fight the conceptual enemies of humanity and France."

"...Quoi?"

The other Thérèse sighed. "I guess it does sound odd..." She chuckled. "So I guess you must not be a Fille Magique in your world?"

"I've never even heard of them," Thérèse replied.

Other-Thérèse gasped. "Y-you didn't? But then how are you managing to fight MechaPrussia?!"

"...Quoi?!"

She sighed. "Okay, well that answers that..." She shook her head. "MechaPrussia is basically… Prussia, except it's a huge metal man."

Thérèse nodded as if she understood. "So… the military of Prussia?"

"No, the actual nation of Prussia. The towns, the people… everything."

Thérèse groaned. "Of course… how did you manage to defeat it?"

"We haven't yet," Other-Thérèse replied. "The three of us – Cavalier, Soldat and I – we managed to do some pretty good damage to it recently, but then there was the whole incident with the Krampus, and… it's all been very convoluted."

Thérèse groaned. "Of course it has..." She looked at Other-Thérèse and blinked. "Are you okay? You seem to be fading..."

Other-Thérèse smiled. "Oh, I'm okay. You're just waking up."

And then Thérèse woke up in her bed. She rubbed her head in confusion. "What an odd dream..."

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I have written my part! Now I fly! AilingStar, AWAY!
 
The Star Wars Fanfic You Never Asked For (Magoose)
The Star Wars Fanfic You Never Asked For: Staring Napoleon as Anakin, France as Padme and Theresa as Obi-Wan.

France looked at Napoleon with confusion in her eyes. All around them the muddy battlefield of the Vendee was littered with the flower of French youth, boys, men and women alike laid face down in the mud and gore that this place had become. Fertile farmlands and quiet villages now completely turned to mud, ruin and fiery hell.

France herself was used to such carnage, for centuries before, the men and kings of the ancien régime had fought to secure their own power, influence and domination in her name.

But now they fought each other here, against the republic, against the ideologies that tore her apart from the seams.

Monarchy or Republicanism… ancien régime or the New Republic…

One man to rule them all, or millions of voices shouting together in unison.

Here before you however, there was no such qualms, no such tear… only complete and utter horror.

"What are you doing out here?" He questions, as he still stood tall on the battlefield.

"Napoleon… what have you done?" She whispered as the canons fell silent and the man… the hero of the nation stood before her. " Thérèse has told me terrible things… what you have done here in Vendee."

"I have done what is necessary to save France… to save you." He stated, his voice was emotionless and still. His eyes showed nothing but contempt, hatred, and exhaustion.

He was tired, oh so tired. Gone was the man who could be up for hours on end and still focus on what needed to be done.

It was like something was broken on the inside.

"They were traitors, all of them… They would rise up again i did not stop them. They would continue to fight for the ancien régime if I did not show them what would happen if they rose against France. Against you!" He shouted, his anger bubbling to the surface.

"I don't understand… She told me that Robespierre is a monarchist, and that you have fallen to the path of the Monarchy." France replied.

"I… have done no such thing." He stated. "I have done everything in my power to protect you." Napoleon than turned and in the corner of his eye, saw the woman in blue. The Tricolor that adorned her generals outfit was plain to see, Red, blue, white.

"What is she doing here!" He growled, and without thinking, France felt Napoleon's hands around her throat. "You brought her here!"

"Let her go, Napoleon!" Thérèse ordered.

Napoleon did, and France fell to the ground. Both generals of France began to circle one another, their eyes never leaving one another.

"Why have you done this." Thérèse asked. "Why have you betrayed the republic?"

"I have seen through the lies of the republic and from you." He continued to circle. "I do not fear the monarchs as you do." Thérèse finally reached France, and knelt down to feel her. She was weak and horribly horribly battered. "I have peace, freedom, and justice to my new Empire!"

"Your new empire?" Thérèse asked.

Napoleon's back was to Theresa. "It is the only way to make she lives."

Thérèse shook her head. "Napoleon my Allegiance is to the Republic, to Democracy and to France!… don't tell me you have forgotten Liberté, Égalité, and Fraternité. You swore to uphold them, and you said you would do it with me by your side. There is another way. I am not your enemy. We both servants of France!"

There was a sniffle. "If you are not my friend… than you are my enemy." His sword left its scabbard.

"Only a Tyrant deals in absolutes." Thérèse nodded, understanding precisely what was happening. "I will do what I must to protect France." Both swords were drawn now.

And a battle for the soul of France began.

AN: I did it and I don't care.

Hope you all have a good laugh.

Edit: HAHAHAHA I write the damn thing in ten minutes so gravity.
 
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The Death of Empress-Marshal Therese Aulclair (An Alternate Future) (Magoose)
The Death of Empress-Marshal Therese Aulclair (An Alternate Future)

You were dragged through the muddy field of the final battlefield that marked the end of an era.You knew as well as anyone else with a mind as great as yours.

Waterloo, a muddy plain with hills overlooking a flatlands, with two monstrous armies clashing for the fate of the world. Because one man, willed the world to listen to him. And the world was not ready for him.

It was almost poetic at this point, that a woman who started her career as a surveyor, had told him that this place was the best place to attack the enemy.

But you were wrong. It was a strange thing to think of now… But you had accepted that fact when the battle was over, and the Prussians had taken you prisoner.

The Grande Armée was shattered by the coalition forces, for a second time. The Prussians, not the British had finally broken the Old Guard of Napoleon, and your own Republican Guard.

Wellington of course would take the credit, that was something you knew when you met the man once, in London, when you had rescued Tallyrand from assassins. It was quite a predicament, and having to trust Arthur Weslly was not something you had ever thought you would do, under any circumstances.

But he helped you, believing you were another woman, Tallyrand's lover, and innocent to the politics that had plagued Europe, and it seemed Tallyrand had said something that shook the General to the core, both of beliefs and his own personal honor.

Your uniform from Robespierre, that gift from so long ago, was in tatters, the sleeves torn, the leggings ripped, holes from pistol shots covered much of the loose fabric.

Hardly befitting for a Marshal of the Grande Armée, but it was all you had now. That and you reputation.

The Prussian von Blucher looked at you and spat in your face. "Let me kill her."

Wesley nodded. "No." He replied, the order clear and the british soldiers pointed weapons at his men to be sure no one would kill you. "She is our prisoner, and she shall be treated as such."

"This whore has ravaged the German countryside under Napoleon's orders, killing thousands of men in battle." The Prussian replied. "He has ruined dozens of officers, professionally and personally with her tactics, both terrorizing the citizens and nobility alike."

Somehow you managed to smile. "Yes. Chamans was quite efficient at his job. But during the war, I could not control my men as I wanted… otherwise there would not have been such unnecessary deaths… The nobles I have no regret putting to the sword, I shall admit General. As for the officers, they should have learned from Brunswick's mistakes, and let their anger cloud their judgement. Their downfall was their own."

That earned you a punch into the face. "WHORE!"

The British soldiers pointed weapons at him, to keep him from attacking you further.

Arthur helped you to your feet. "My apologies."

"Thank you." You replied with your broken English.

You were escorted to the prisoner's tent, with the survivors of the Grande Armée.
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You arrived in Paris with a fanfare of love and mourning. The entire city it seemed was pleading for your life, as you were brought towards the court of Louis XVIII, the recently returned Bourbon king of France.

Paris had changed since you first came to it as a young girl, now as a woman nearing fifty, you saw the grandeur as victory was gained, and it's fear, as you had returned in defeat.

The court was filled with many Austrian and Prussian nobles, and the survivors of the Purges by the Republican government almost thirty years ago now.

The Trial was a quick one. But you were not going to go down quietly.

"Gentleman of the Chamber of Peers of France." You started as you maintained the dignity of your rank, that of Marshal and Empress. It was quite a strange thing to think of, even after all those years of marriage. You had despised Napoleon when he took power and even threatened to kill him, deprive him of a general, and of his wife.

But he had helped bring true republicanism, not the anarchy of Robespierre to prominence. He had a prime minister, an elected Parliament, suffrage for women… even as he claimed to be emperor, he never gave into Tyranny.

There were moments yes… but you were there to remind him of his duty.

"The charges brought before me, are ludicrous. Treason: For my entire adult life, I have done nothing but serve the nation of France, in whatever shape, whatever form, whatever government, because I believed in France. I believed in many things in my life, as a youth I believed only the revolution could save Europe. As I grew older, it was my husband, Napoleon, and his reforms. Now I only see that France will always change, no matter who leads it. My only regret is that you do not believe the same." You stated. "That if you kill me, all you will prove is that none of you are loyal to France."

The chamber of Peers was moved. But nothing changed.

The vote was clear. There was no need to pressure them, no need to remind the world that you were a woman, a hero and a savior of France several times over.

Death was your sentence.
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Your last request was to write a letter to your Five children. They were far away, safe in Italy, with friends, allies, and family.

You remembered Brian and the Kingdom of Italy he had founded in the two years since he had taken the throne with Murat before Murat died.

The House of Auclair would rule Italy, as Brian ruled as king, with a parliament, as he so promised to give to the people of Italy, that much was agreed upon when Brian betrayed you and Napoleon when you returned from Elba.

You did not blame Brian for the betrayal of your trust, nor did Napoleon in the end.

He was saddened, but you told him that Brian now had a duty to Italy, not to him.

He would protect your children from the entire world if he had to… he owes you and Napoleon that much at least.


My Dear Children: Napoleon, Jacques, Alexis, Angélique, Thérèse



When you receive this letter, I will be dead, and my body will be buried with my father, and his family, not in the grand tombs of France, or a mausoleum that Napoleon wished to build for our family, so that we may never be separated, even in death.



Your father has been exiled to St. Helana, but I was not allowed to join him. The Prussians in court and abroad made sure of that. Their anger and hatred fill their hearts and all they want is for a woman who caused them so much grief to die. To soothe their aching hearts and destroyed pride.



The people of France begged the king not to, but his anger at me is as strong as the Prussians. I represent your father, I represent the Republic of France… I represent France in a way. The mother who brought it into the modern world.



They want to break your father, the same as I broke those generals in the field. I am sure my death will destroy him, for that I am certain.



They cannot break me, my spirit, or my belief in France, so they must kill me instead.



You Uncle Brian will protect you, for that I know for certain, so do not fear death.



I wish for you not to weep for me when the news reaches you. I only ask that you do not seek revenge. There are far better and greater things to focus your life on, than that.



Promise me that and I shall watch over you in Heaven in whatever you do.



Live your life, long and true and we shall meet again.



Your loving mother-



Thérèse Auclair-Bonaparte


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The men refused to follow the orders of the king and dismantled the guillotine.

"We shall give you the death you deserve, Marshal." the General replied. "Your orders Marshal!?"

You nodded to them and saw a crowd of soldiers, civilians, and citizens of France. They looked at you. It seemed the entire city came to watch you die.

"People of France. I have one final order to give as your Empress and your Marshal. Follow no god but the one in your heart, follow no man you do not believe in! But fight for France always! No matter her enemies, no matter your friends, no matter where destiny may lead you. The world is changing, so be ready, and change with it as well!" You shouted.

"Soldiers of France." you saluted to them. "Prepare a firing Squad! I am sentenced to death by France, and you shall carry it out."

The soldiers were surprised. "Marshal!" A soldier asked.

"Follow my order!" You screamed and the men, after hesitation, did the same. Their attention was on you, their weapons ready, to kill you.

"This is my final order to you, soldiers of France! You shall obey it faithfully, and without hesitation! When I give the order, you will shoot me in the heart! You shoot me and I will die! Soldier! FIRE!"

The muskets fired, without hesitation and slugs went through your chest.

You fell. And in a moment you would die.

But your final words would carry on for generations.

The Bourbons of France would die that day, and the Revolution would begin anew.

This time, it would be for good.

The people would rule, with no masters but themselves to guide them. They would struggle, they would fight, and they would fall.

But they would never bow to a King they themselves did not choose.

That was what you hoped for at least as you shut your eyes for the final time.

AN: Enjoy this omake of the "Mostly canon future" where Thérèse married Napoleon in his youth instead of Josephine, and where Thérèse had a knack for destroying Prussian armies.

Edit: So What do you think?
 
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The Emperor Returns (An Alternate Future) (Magoose)
The Emperor Returns (An Alternate Future)

You knew the man walking in front of the garrison was your husband before you saw him. Marching in front of the column of soldiers, his jacket bellowing in the wind, his hat firmly placed on his head, and the sparkle of the Legion DE Honor was shining brightly on his chest, the only medal in the world that he had not given himself, but rather, you gave to him, after Austerlitz, for his amazing victory against the enemy forces.

The same Medal he gave you after you saved his life in Italy, all those years ago.

Italy… all those years and it was Italy where Napoleon came into his own… truly. Corsica was a taste of his talents. Toulon another flash of brilliance… But Italy was where the man you met, became a legend that could not be stopped.

His pride had made him bold, but he never lost sight of his humanity, nor his duty to the republic, and to France.

Perhaps in many ways, it made him realize the path he needed to walk. He believed in himself, and made others believe in him as well.

You are no stranger to the aura that he had, but even it has its limits. You did not follow him blindly, like so many others had. You had a critical eye to his plans, his wants, his desires. His ambition.

You had confronted him when you learned he would take power, taking the finest men in the whole world, loyal to France with you, to confront him, and if needed, kill him.

But he did not have fear, and he was not angry at you, in his eyes, it was clear that only one thing was on his mind.

Power, Power and glory, that could be gained under him, and him alone.

It was enough even for you to falter, in your will, and follow him, to see him crowned emperor, and you Empress shortly after.

It had gone against everything you had stood for, everything that you fought and bled on the battlefield for was soon about to be forgotten in pageantry, in titles, in lands and the total control that only a man ordained by god could have.

By god, or his fellow man.

You had worked quickly, gathering your allies and remembering the great idealism that had flowed through your veins as a young girl.

You wished for the people of France to never be held in Tyranny again.

Tallyrand, and other republican and France loving statesmen came with you with to Face Napoleon. You and an army, with one demand.

"The Republic will stay, the Estates shall reform and the People of France, will be heard… or nothing of your empire shall remain."

It was the only time you saw fear in Napoleon's eyes, as he stared upon you as the true believer you were in the ideas of Liberté, Égalité, Fraternité.

He agreed. The only concession being the code that you only saw once. The code of Napoleon.

The code you felt proud of in supporting.

The republic may have been defanged, but it was not destroyed as you feared. Napoleon could lead his armies, and even dictat matters of state.

But the Revolution never lost… never was stamped out as you feared.

But the Ancient Regime threatened that, and there was nothing you could do about it, nothing but weep and serve the nation you strived to see as the republic.

You were reassigned to the Southern Garrison, with only a few thousand men. You wished to serve France as best as you could… but you could not.

You wished to see it back to the republic that you knew it wanted to be.
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Napoleon marched to the front and you saw his face smile as he saw you. His men were ready to kill French killing French, but he waved his hand down, his soldiers shouldering their weapons, relaxing.

Your men did no such thing. They looked to you, but you could do nothing but stare at the man.

He held his hand up, and your officers raised their swords. Your men prepared to fire, even as Napoleon continued to stride forward.

"Soldiers of the Fifth!" His voice carried the same strength as before he abdicated. He was strong, but you saw his hand shake. And tears were beneath his eyes. "Do you recognize me?"

Your husband was still the same short man he always was, though he was just a little fatter, and a little older than when you last saw him, all those months ago. He looked weary, and his face was that of an aged man.

But his posture betrayed anything but. He was full of energy, and even as he sounded tired, he could quickly come up with something. Anything in a moment.

The weapons of your soldiers were still pointed at Napoleon. Squarely at your husband's chest.

"If, you wish to kill your emperor." There was a small pause, and a laugh. "Here I am."

No… That blasted fool. You were about to move forward when he looked forward, past the soldiers, past the cannons…

All he could focus on was you.

You were the only one who would decide. No one else. Not god, not fate, not even the soldiers who pointed their weapons at him.

It was you he was talking too It was you, where he wanted the confirmation of his own love… or was it his own pride.

Or maybe it was both.

"FIRE!" He shouted, his voice echoing across the whole world, it seemed. Your heart skipped a beat, and everyone, knowingly or unknowingly, looked back to you.

And you said the only words that came to mind. "Vive la France."

"VIVE LA FRANCE!" Your men shouted as the army broke ranks and ran towards their emperor. Their screams and shouts were in celebration.

Cries of Emperor, Napoleon, General, Marshal were heard from all around.

Napoleon waved to the men but never getting close to his men, walking through the line, towards you.

Members of the Old Guard were pushing the celebrating men away, so that he could see you.

He stood before you and the horse you rode on. "Thérèse."

You drew your pistol and pointed it at him. "Give me one reason not to kill you?" You said quietly.

"Because France will fall without me. If you allow the Ancient Regime to kill me, all you have worked for would be for naught." He replied.

"And what of me Napoleon?" you asked, "What of me?"

"You are the only one who believed in the revolution to let ambition blind you to what was truly needed for France. You are the only one who stopped me from going too far… to become the Ancient Regime." He stated.

He paused, and bowed his head to you. "You are the only one who still burns bright, with the fire of the Revolution. The Revolution is the only thing that can save france. And I need you to help me do that."

Your hands trembled, and the gun slowly fell from your hands. "Help me save France Thérèse Auclair-Bonaparte. Marshal of France, and the woman I love and call my Empress."

There was nothing more to say, as you dismount your horse. Nothing more needed to be said, as you hugged Napoleon.

It was a moment you wished lasted forever.

AN: Or I just decided to make Napoleon's seizure of Power 100 times more heartwarming.

I can just imagine the movie scenes being made. Just think of the awesomeness and awws that it would produce.

Also Damn I wrote this in an hour, you may get a Paris scene next.
 
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