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"I can create anything?"
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Just like a spell would.
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I like this, it show's the mind set of the more likely more primitive among the Lantern's in regards to their Ring's capabilities by equating it to some kind of cultural significance and yet showcasing how smart Louise is with:
Jaune Pendragon said:
"How fast is light?"
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Asking for clarifcation even witht the previously highlighted asssumption and mental blocks for when she uses the ring eventually.
 
Cuber said:
I like this, it show's the mind set of the more likely more primitive among the Lantern's in regards to their Ring's capabilities by equating it to some kind of cultural significance and yet showcasing how smart Louise is with:

Asking for clarifcation even witht the previously highlighted asssumption and mental blocks for when she uses the ring eventually.
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Yes. The Ring also adjusted itself to someone of the planet's Civilization level.
 
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The switching between first- and third-person viewpoints (including one mid-sentence) was slightly jarring, but it's an interesting concept.
 
An AU Izuku receives a downgraded composite "Emiya" (Servants relating to Shirou Emiya: Archer and Alter are Shirou, Assassin is an alternate version of his dad, Muramasa is a possible ancestor and gets summoned in his body) servant class card (Archer, Alter, Assassin, the Muramasa that isn't Alter Ego). He as a result gets a more jaded view of the world, can do the magecraft and methods they use, use their NP's (downgraded but he can use them to a higher level but severely injures himself, to the point that if it wasn't for restrictions in the card he could start getting injured in the same way HF Shirou does because he'd be able to go too far), has their knowledge and gets their experience as he trains and naturally as time goes on, so he becomes more like the concept of a no One for All Izuku who uses gadgets instead. He still gets one for all but uses it as a literal energy stockpile for his circuits he gets from the EMIYA's
 
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Teacher fate SI 3.0
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    • Darkness slowly began to fade away as her eyes blinked open.

    Where in the world was she?

    The last thing she remembered was ...her mistake!

    She sat forward with a gasp.

    What had happened? She was lying in a futon. The room looked like traditional Japanese architecture.

    She then noticed she didn't seem to feel any pain.

    With a breath, she opened her circuits to check if anything was wrong with her body.

    Strukturanalyse

    She was completely fine? No, it seemed even better than before, the slight tears in her muscles and the scars in her skin had disappeared. In fact for some strange reason, her body seemed to be filled with energy.

    Her teacher...He had healed her.

    Idiot teacher! He didn't make any sense!

    What did he want? He didn't want money! He didn't want power, he hadn't said that she owed him anything so he didn't want favours either, he didn't even seem to want her body! So why?

    Why was he helping her so much when she took so many precious resources from him every month?

    What was driving him to help her so much?

    She didn't understand.

    The door slid open as Rin turned her head she saw her Sensei, who let out a sigh.

    "Thank God, how are you feeling? Does anything feel wrong?" His eyes filled with genuine concern.

    What type of Magus was this?

    A powerful magus who was an actual decent human being.

    Something that shouldn't exist. Yet in front of her he stood.

    "You know, I never expected you to fail that test."

    Wait, what?

    "I was so sure that I had managed to teach you well enough to successfully complete Raffinert regnbue."

    Why was he blaming himself instead of her?

    "I suppose this shows me I'm not that great of a teacher as I thought I was. Well, it doesn't matter. I promised to teach you so even if I have to start from the beginning. Rest for now Rin, We will continue our Lessons next week. I'll bring you some food."

    Before she could even reply her teacher had left...

    God, what had she done? The one person who actually taught her well and now he was doubting his ability as a teacher! Because of her stupidity.

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    God, what had I done? I had somehow managed to completely destroy Rin's potential as a mage. I was so sure that she was a Prodigy mage who could pick up things with ease, and unlike Shirou where I had to explain several times and simplify it so he could understand it, I only had to explain things once for her she was able to pick it up. Or at least I thought she had picked it up.

    She was hiding the fact she didn't understand instead of telling me she didn't understand.

    Of course, she would why wouldn't she, she was someone who had the burden of being the heir of a mage family. She was someone who was expected to excel in all fields, and with her Mother passing away shortly before I had come into contact with her she had no one left.

    Of course, she wasn't going to tell me she didn't understand. She had a lot of pride after all.

    "Sensei...." A cold voice came behind me. "What are you doing in my Kitchen?" The voice was soft and yet so threatening that goosebumps popped all over my skin. However this time I had to stand my ground.

    "Sorry Shirou, but you were not home and someone I was teaching magecraft got injured when her spell misfired. So I couldn't really wait for you to come home."

    The feeling of doom disappeared almost immediately and I left the kitchen to him now that he was here.

    "Yes, she is in the Guest Room."

    "Alright then, I'll bring the food when it's done. Now leave the Kitchen please."

    I left the kitchen at once and began to head to the guest room, the only reason why Shirou's anger calmed down, was because for him, saving people was something far,, far more important to him than cooking, if it saving someone he would not hesitate to give it up.

    Still, I had managed to put some pride and selfishness in what used to be an empty little boy, even if it was pride in cooking and selfishness in refusing to share his kitchen, the only person he allowed to use his kitchen was Sakura and that was because she was somehow even more stubborn than him. It was still better than how he was originally.

    Someone who had no pride in anything and would give up anything to make others happy.

    But now...

    I managed to help him regain a bit of humanity.

    It may not be much, but baby steps...baby steps.

    After all, slow and steady wins the race.
     
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    • This was great character development for both the SI and Rin.
    I think Rin will be a little better student, but I don't know if she'll admit that this mistake was her fault trying to test the teacher, but as she's both a kid and a tsundere it's going to be harder than it looks, she'll be irritated that she can't apologize no matter how hard she tries.
     
    Lantern SI /WORM IDEA
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    • Self-inserts in WORM except not on earth. But a planet on the other side of the Galaxy.

    The self-insert will be a White Lantern, with a ring and a Power Battery.



    On the Planet will be the central White Battery.

    There will be 7 other planets in this star system each one having a Central battery of each emotional spectrum.

    The SI will be given the 7 rings, but he won't be able to use them. No, Once he reaches earth he has to select someone else to wield a ring. Unlike normal, these rings are programmed to accept whoever the SI gives to them as their users. Unless they die in which case they resume their normal function.

    RAGE - Lung?

    AVARICE - ?

    FEAR - Dinah

    WILL-Taylor

    HOPE - Amy

    COMPASSION - Dragon

    LOVE - Missy or Kayden
     
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    • Crashdash said:
    the only problem I see with Dragon is that if one body is destroyed it will take her ring a while to get to her next one.
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    You forget one thing. What is the RIng?

    It may be one of the most powerful weapons in the universe, but it is also a ridiculously powerful alien supercomputer. This means dragon doesn't need any servers once she gets the ring she'll just run on the Ring itself.
     
    AGiantB said:
    Obviously Sophia! She's so full of Love and kind-heartedness after all! Or maybe the Rat Broodmother (That woman who's ability makes her produce rat's in her womb or something)
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    Why not just mail it to Heartbreaker and be done with it? Or that Birdcage lady who falls dramatically in love with a single target?
     
    WOrm FGO Si Snippet
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    • She enjoyed the wind blowing across her face as she ran, jumping from roof to roof on her patrol, keeping an eye out for anyone in trouble or anything unusual. So far it has been fairly quiet.

    Her master had said that this was merely the calm before the storm and she was inclined to believe him, not just because he was her master, but also because she could sense the tension and uncertainty in the air.

    Speaking of her master...he was a strange man.

    Very strange. Not in the manner in which most magi were. If it was just that then she would have shrugged it off.

    No, her master gazed at her, not with the fear that she was used to. But with fondness and admiration.

    She had never had anyone look at her with such fondness in their gaze.

    Not even her own sisters.

    She didn't know how to respond.

    What was she supposed to do?

    She didn't know, so for now she did what she was ordered to do.

    Continue her patrol.

    Well, he hadn't really ordered her, he merely requested her instead of ordering her. Truly he was a strange master. But perhaps strange didn't mean it was bad?

    After all his cooking was 'strange' in that it was simple but delicious, one could tell the amount of care he put into it.

    She couldn't wait to get home for dinner. She wondered if Master had made sweets again? She really liked the sweets he baked.

    Eager to get home, her stomach rumbling in anticipation Ana sped up with a burst of speed.

    Only to come to a halt when she spotted a large fire.

    An unnaturally large fire.

    Any hopes that it was something she could let the authorities take care of and continue on her way home was gone when she heard the guttural roar of a beast?

    "LL ILL OUUU! RE EAD!"

    With a sigh, she vanished from her spot in a burst of speed reappearing near where the flames had occurred. Only to see what appeared to be.... a dragon/human hybrid? No, this wasn't a dragon, there was not a drop of magical energy coming from it.

    It was merely an abomination.

    And then there was a girl covered in dark skin-tight clothes and was apparently trying to fight the beast with nothing but bugs and a spray bottle of some kind.

    So, this was the Hero Master spoke of? The one who would have sacrificed everything to save countless worlds had he not appeared?

    She didn't look like much, but Ana knew better than to judge someone from how they looked.

    Materializing Harpe, she jumped into what she would hesitate to even call a battle, she needed to end this fast, she had sweets waiting for her...and master of course.




    Just a snippet...might grow into something bigger who knows?
     
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    • RWBY AU with Character's semblances having to do with more literal and/or scientific meanings e.g Ruby ROSE- Telekinesis or partial gravity manipulation, Cinder FALL- Partial gravity manipulation on the other end of the spectrum to Ruby, Yang XIAO LONG- turns into a "small" yellow Chinese dragon, Mercury Black- Volumen Hydrargyrum or whatever it's called, Jaune ARC- Something with Yellow ARCs of lightning, Brawnz Ni- Something to do with giving his body the "positive" properties of bronze and nickel, Oz-pin- Has something to do with Oz and maybe grenades since PIN
    Jaune Pendragon said:
    She enjoyed the wind blowing across her face as she ran, jumping from roof to roof on her patrol, keeping an eye out for anyone in trouble or anything unusual. So far it has been fairly quiet.

    Her master had said that this was merely the calm before the storm and she was inclined to believe him, not just because he was her master, but also because she could sense the tension and uncertainty in the air.

    Speaking of her master...he was a strange man.

    Very strange. Not in the manner in which most magi were. If it was just that then she would have shrugged it off.

    No, her master gazed at her, not with the fear that she was used to. But with fondness and admiration.

    She had never had anyone look at her with such fondness in their gaze.

    Not even her own sisters.

    She didn't know how to respond.

    What was she supposed to do?

    She didn't know, so for now she did what she was ordered to do.

    Continue her patrol.

    Well, he hadn't really ordered her, he merely requested her instead of ordering her. Truly he was a strange master. But perhaps strange didn't mean it was bad?

    After all his cooking was 'strange' in that it was simple but delicious, one could tell the amount of care he put into it.

    She couldn't wait to get home for dinner. She wondered if Master had made sweets again? She really liked the sweets he baked.

    Eager to get home, her stomach rumbling in anticipation Ana sped up with a burst of speed.

    Only to come to a halt when she spotted a large fire.

    An unnaturally large fire.

    Any hopes that it was something she could let the authorities take care of and continue on her way home was gone when she heard the guttural roar of a beast?

    "LL ILL OUUU! RE EAD!"

    With a sigh, she vanished from her spot in a burst of speed reappearing near where the flames had occurred. Only to see what appeared to be.... a dragon/human hybrid? No, this wasn't a dragon, there was not a drop of magical energy coming from it.

    It was merely an abomination.

    And then there was a girl covered in dark skin-tight clothes and was apparently trying to fight the beast with nothing but bugs and a spray bottle of some kind.

    So, this was the Hero Master spoke of? The one who would have sacrificed everything to save countless worlds had he not appeared?

    She didn't look like much, but Ana knew better than to judge someone from how they looked.

    Materializing Harpe, she jumped into what she would hesitate to even call a battle, she needed to end this fast, she had sweets waiting for her...and master of course.




    Just a snippet...might grow into something bigger who knows?
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    Is this the sequel to the one where the Chaldea master SI drives a car to the PRT and explains a small bit about his alternate world?
     
    Worm/Angel beats Crossover.
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    • What if Taylor died in the Locker and ends up in Angel beats? About an year before cannon?

    She makes friends with Kanade, and the SSS attacking Kanade when she doesn't attack first reminds her of the Trio which only makes her want to help Kanade out more.

    The two eventually become best friends and Taylor eventually becomes a User of Angel player as well, defending Kanade and fighting beside her when the SSS attacks.

    When Canon comes around and Taylor also vanishes somehow satisfied (How exactly I haven't considered), her soul returns to bet and she is in the hospital with the doctors scrambling around her trying to understand how someone who was dead a few moments ago was now alive again.

    However, here Taylor would have one thing to her advantage.

    She spent a year using the Angel player and learning how to code from Kanade so she'd try to replicate it here.
     
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    • The Angel Beats world is pretty much a therapy world. Kids with regrets and unfortunates/tragic deaths are sent their to enjoy their youth until they can move on.

    So it wont be just the Angel Player she gets out of it, she would be coming out much more well adjusted mentally.
     
    Need_More_Frames said:
    The Angel Beats world is pretty much a therapy world. Kids with regrets and unfortunates/tragic deaths are sent their to enjoy their youth until they can move on.

    So it wont be just the Angel Player she gets out of it, she would be coming out much more well adjusted mentally.
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    Does that mean she wouldn't be able to trigger? Because she already "triggered" but died before she could become a parahuman, and you can't trigger twice unless you "double trigger" soon after your original trigger right?
     
    Jaune Pendragon said:
    What if Taylor died in the Locker and ends up in Angel beats? About an year before cannon?

    She makes friends with Kanade, and the SSS attacking Kanade when she doesn't attack first reminds her of the Trio which only makes her want to help Kanade out more.

    The two eventually become best friends and Taylor eventually becomes a User of Angel player as well, defending Kanade and fighting beside her when the SSS attacks.

    When Canon comes around and Taylor also vanishes somehow satisfied (How exactly I haven't considered), her soul returns to bet and she is in the hospital with the doctors scrambling around her trying to understand how someone who was dead a few moments ago was now alive again.

    However, here Taylor would have one thing to her advantage.

    She spent a year using the Angel player and learning how to code from Kanade so she'd try to replicate it here.
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    okay, i know this is a thread for that, but i wanted to ask: can i repost this in the Wormverse thread? we would love to talk about this idea.
     
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