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Well the it his either Kerbal space program, or FTL, but seriously i could be here all day mentioning specialities and not get it right.
 
Sechs said:
Like a certain brother an sister once said "IT'S A SHIT GAME".
Or like AngryJoe " YOU DONE FUCK IT UP "
It is a bad game that was made as a cash cow, the only good thing about it was the graphics and the music.
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Guess you must have played it when it launched and not after it was updated didn't you? Its pretty good now
 
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I'd read a prompt of that. Shit at that point? You've already beaten Salem. You just haven't acted yet.
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Wouldn't she be able to the the same stuff as Okita and Kojiro and probably more since they only use sword techniques and the Multi-Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon while she has the actual Kaleidoscope and also sword techniques? No matter how OP you are that's still very useful until a certain point. A point which RWBY doesn't reach in power levels

SI idea: Dual SI (Two separate people SI) as a maxed out (I don't just mean max level, but NP, grailed, ascension, bond 10 CE or whatever, I don't know all of this stuff since I'm not an fgo player) Dioscuri from FGO in Worm
 
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if I know none of these things I would say that he has knowledge of Star trek or Star wars ships
 
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Kakashi SI (Rewrite) 1
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    • Finding myself waking up one of the most powerful Shinobi in the leaf was not something I had expected after death. I more expected something like a blank void, not something like this....

    I had two sets of memories, and I was able to recall quite a lot more details of this life than my last, most likely because of the mental training Kakashi has done to strengthen his mind.

    Still, from my memories today was the day after Kakashi had administered the bell test..

    One question though...try to keep it as canon or not?

    ....

    Fuck it. Cannon is going out the window anyway.

    Besides with everything that's going to come around I needed to train them well, though that didn't mean no D-Ranks, Gennin needed them, especially orphans since once they become ninja they are considered an adult in the eyes of the village and no longer receive a stipend.

    It just meant I was going to train them while they do D-Ranks.

    Though first things first... They should have at least Basic Chakra control...

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    Unlike Kakashi however, I had arrived at the training grounds at 5am on the dot. Sasuke was already there, and Naruto and Sakura were nearing the training ground.

    "Good morning Kakashi sensei," Sakura murmured tiredly rubbing the sleep out of her eyes.

    "morning Kakashi-sensei." Naruto yawned.

    "Hn." went Sasuke.

    Well, time to get this started.

    "Before we do anything else such as missions I need to make sure you all have at least good enough chakra control. So that's what we will be training now we will only begin missions once all three of you complete them no matter how long you take. The ones who complete it will receive personal training from me until the others manage to get this exercise down."

    And so I showed them the Tree walking exercise, and just like canon, Sakura managed it in one try.

    "Well, looks like Sakura will be the first to receive personal training from me after all, maybe she'll be next Hokage instead?"

    Sasuke sent a dark glance at her and tried to run up the tree once more, as did Naruto, with both of them motivated they would challenge each other while.

    "Well, for you first things first, you've been dieting haven't you?"

    "of course, I have to look good for Sasuke."

    "Then we will have to correct that first.."

    "Wait? Correct what?"

    "Why your diet, of course, I can't have you dieting, you are going to need all the energy you can get if you want to train properly."

    "But...Sasuke-kun-"

    "Let me interrupt you there Sakura, the only way you are going to get Sasuke's attention is by becoming strong enough to stand beside him, if Sasuke was someone who cared about appearance then there were a lot of girls in the academy he could have paid attention to but he didn't pay attention to any one of them do you know why? Because Sasuke's type is a girl who is strong enough to stand by him." I gave her an eye smile, "So if you want to win Sasuke's heart you need to get stronger, strong enough that you can support Sasuke on the field, strong enough that he can trust his back to you. Though you have to earn his trust first... So....do you still want to continue to diet?"

    Sakura's eyes widened as I could almost see the gears in the head of the top kunoichi in the academy begin to spin as she began to process my words.

    This should be enough.

    A few seconds later she had an answer.

    "Please guide me sensei." her eyes filled with determination, so much so I thought they were on fire. "What do I need to do?"

    "Good, I'll write down a list of foods as suggestions of what to eat to help you prepare."

    I hope the Original is having a better time with his training.

    Considering the things that are coming...we will need every bit of strength.

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    • I wonder if shadow clones work on memory or was it bullshit, because if they do....well it's time to turn Naruto into the monster he always should have been.
    Sakura has been manipulated successfully, Naruto just needs a little attention and he will listen basically to everything you say, Sasuke is complicated but he wants power, Kakashi has a lot of techniques he could teach.
     
    Honestly I found that the Shadow Clone memory thing was BS done to make up for how nothing was done about Naruto's sabotaged Education, Kakashi's teaching, and Jiraya's way of teaching. Seriously if Shadow Clone's sent memories then why did Naruto not get the Memory from being used as a Fuuma Shuriken against Zabuza?!
     
    Rezero but Return by death doesn't just send subaru's soul back in time instead it sends his body as well and merges it with his past self...

    Essentially doubling his strength, speed, reaction time and thinking speed....oh and I forgot endurance...
     
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    mudadio said:
    i think heracles is definitely stroger than 7 subarus
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    Hmmmm...

    Say for example after the first death Subaru fuses with his past self. So he is twice as strong, twice as fast and can take twice as much endurance.

    In the second timeline he exchanges the phone for the insignia but elsa kills him when he reveals that he is going to return it to its owner...

    And so he dies again and fuses with his past self....

    So he has the strength, speed and endurance of 3 of himself...

    This loop in the original he is killed by the hoodlums but with the Power of three subaru's, perhaps he manages to beat them and the story changes there or perhaps he dies perhaps due to a cheap shot or other plot convinience...

    So say he dies again following the plot and this time he has the strength, speed, and endurance of four subaru's...

    This might help him not end up in critical condition after riendhard defeats elsa, here the story may change drastically.

    Subaru might be injured but not as much as he was much four time faster and stronger than he was originally. Perhaps it was enough to push Emilia out of the way of elsa without himself getting him bowels sliced open in the process.

    Regardless this changes the story a lot and the next time he dies he will loop likely loop to where ever the next check point is..

    However unlike before the body where his new check point is saved has the power of 4 Subaru's .

    SO the 5th loop will add to that.

    The power of a body with 4 subaru's of the past plus a body with the power of four subaru's from the future fused together will make subaru be 8 times stronger and faster than he originally was...

    If he this power is not enough to save him and he dies again then it will be 12, if thats not enough it will be 16.

    But if 8 times the power was enough for the check point to be updated then the next death would add 8 making it 16. Should that not be enough 8 will be added again making it 24...

    Get it?
     
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