Wow. Fou's fight with Daji was very... memey.

Do we really need both Tamaterasu and ROMA for Daji, or is there another major threat?

Oh wait. Lev and Remus. Ha.

I'm not sure if Manaka picked this world randomly, either. Especially because the thing singling this one out is Matthew's existence.
A few other things to note are a female Artoria, as well as Morgan's plan somehow changing the world. I am very concerned.
 
BB wheezed, slumping onto the floor. "I'll be good Mama, I promise, BB is a good girl," she babbled.

BB gets traumatised bad.
once more proof that Fluffy Mascots are a Magical Girl's natural enemy.

"FOU! BUSTER BRAVE CHAIN FOOOOOUUUU!" Lightning lashed around his body, and he began to spiral like a corkscrew before vanishing.

Was that a Face Card-chain or of a Buster NP?

Also looking more and more like Amaterasu!Tamamo

Basically Tama's Mama or rather her original form from waaaaay back.
I remember seeing a translated meeting of Hakunon with her in a CCC-video.
Amaterasu is one scary Giga-Fox-Girl.
 
Wow. Fou's fight with Daji was very... memey.

Do we really need both Tamaterasu and ROMA for Daji, or is there another major threat?

Oh wait. Lev and Remus. Ha.

I'm not sure if Manaka picked this world randomly, either. Especially because the thing singling this one out is Matthew's existence.
A few other things to note are a female Artoria, as well as Morgan's plan somehow changing the world. I am very concerned.

Daji's problem is that it takes something nonhuman to really hurt her thanks to Nega-Weapon - quote the entire fight she had against Team Ophelia. She shrugged off Gram, and none of Matthew's attacks had the punch to stick. Fou burned himself out to drive her off, so he's not going to hit the field again for at least a whole Singularity. Also she'll be fresh as a daisy once all is said and done, so as memetacularly cathartic as Fou's beat down was, it was at its core a delaying action.

I'm drawing on Actual Ars Goetia Flauros for Lev, which means fire along with a fun surprise at the climax. Remus hasn't even fought yet, and now he's not spreading his power over the whole Singularity.

Manaka is taking inspiration from Morgan. They have a very similar goal with wildly different outcomes. The instability of the timeline and one event in very early on made the plot possible. That event will be clarified in the Septem climax.
 
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Fou burned himself out to drive her off, so he's not going to hit the field again for at least a whole Singularity. Also she'll be fresh as a daisy once all is said and done, so as memetacularly cathartic as Fou's beat down was, it was at its core a delaying action.
Of course it's also a massive hit to her pride and confidence while allowing for team Chaldea to finish their missions and better prepare for round 2.
 
Boudica
Class: Avenger
Alias: Queen of Victory
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Basis: Historical Fact
Origin: Man

Consumed by her rage and hate, Boudica given reign to the darkness. Even beyond that, her Saint Graph has been tampered with. Fundamentally, an entirely different person from her Rider incarnation. Her base is pain.

Parameters:

STR: B
END: B+
AGI: C+
MAN: C
LUK: E
NP: A

Skills:

Avenger (A)

Oblivion Correction (A+): Normally it would hold a lower rank, but it has been tampered with.

Riding: B

Self-Replenishment (Mana) (C)

Vow to the Goddess (B)

Queen of Victory (A)

Outrage of Andraste (A): Functions as a lower-ranked Battle Continuation alongside Mad Enhancement. An added skill that came from the Demon God.

Noble Phantasms:

Chariot of Boudica (B++): Changed from a defense-type Noble Phantasm to an offense-type trampling assault. Pulled by demonic hares to symbolize her covenant with Andraste and twisted to fit her class container.

Sword of Boudica (B+): Now with additional 'fire'power. The flames of war seep from Boudica's body, giving this attack greater strength.

Ashes of Andraste (A): A high thaumaturgy appended to Boudica's Saint Graph. A technique that would never be used as a Rider, or normal Berserker/Avenger. Using dark power to animate the bodies of the dead to fight, it has a rank-up when creating incorporeal familiars through cremated targets. A symbol of how far the Queen of Victory fell, or was dragged - disgracing the lives of her beloved people, disgracing their deaths.
Fan made Servant profiles are really fun to read when made with love.

Solid chapter; with Tamavitch fleeing with her tails between her legs and Remus's stolen authority neutered, looks like we'll be heading to the climax soon(right after Bryn's fixed I suppose?).

And is this our first description of Fou(influenced by Matthew?); he appears very different from his canon appearance.

And speaking of Bryn, will her reforged Spear look anything like her chainsaw sword from her swimsuit form? :wink2:
 
Yep, the first part of the chapter will be Bryn recruitment followed by regrouping. Then off to the big fight! Which will spill over into the following chapter, naturally.

Fou takes after his Master - and note my 'subtle foreshadowing' given the attributes Matthew hasn't been shown with.

I have plans for Brynhildr, as my 'very subtle foreshadowing' has indicated. The one spoiler I'll give is there's gonna be more smooching than stabbing Sigurd from here on in. Also INaRM!Bryn OP, no nerf.
 
Solid chapter; with Tamavitch fleeing with her tails between her legs and Remus's stolen authority neutered, looks like we'll be heading to the climax soon(right after Bryn's fixed I suppose?).
Nonsense, Tamavitch wasn't fleeing with her tails between her legs. Fou didn't leave enough for said appendages to reach her legs. :p
Fou hung in midair, facing down Daji - now wielding nine stubs instead of nine tails as she clung to a tree, shaking. Light revolved around him.
Though they're still on a time limit. They have to get everybody ready and move ASAP before Tamavitch and Remus recover.
 
I have very mixed feelings about Fou's adoption being lifted from Mash to Matthew. I realize that Matthew shares a backstory with Mash, but Mash and Fou's relationship is probably the most direct bit of Mash agency and is so essential to her canon story that it feels... wrong to transpose it onto Matthew.

The same narrative goals could be achieved by Mash doing the adoption and naming, with Matthew joining in and getting really into it, (or them meeting and adopting and naming Fou together) which I think drives most of my dissatisfaction.

...it is very cute though.
 
I can see that. The main reason I went for that is because of the changes to canon itself in this AU.

It's been stated that Mash, with the comparison of Matthew in existence, had an easier time of it - she was more warmly received by the staff of Chaldea, and though I wouldn't go so far as to say she was popular, she still was treated with an amount of respect and compassion. She had Roman and, after the incident with Beryl, Ophelia. Both were attentive and made ample time for her emotional needs. Outside of that were several acquaintances that while she was never close to them, she was never maltreated and had pleasant associations.

Compare Matthew, who had a voice in his head (Morgan), Da Vinci (who does her best but is still insanely busy), and Hinako (who we will refer to as mildly distant tsundere at the time). At that point, Pepe was still working on getting through to him, and Matthew was insanely suspicious of anyone remotely 'human'. He was feared if not outright hated by no small number of people thanks to lashing back at Animusphere, and riding the self-imposed isolation train thanks to Beryl. Enter Fou. A small, non-threatening (visually) animal that had wrecked shop the instant someone stepped to him. Matthew met him first, and immediately latched onto him because... well.

-gestures at the support system he had-

Fou is still attached to Mash, but Matthew's powers and attitude influence him directly. By which I mean, Fou is using Mash and Ritsuka as a barometer to whether humanity has something worth saving/sparing. Matthew plays a role more like Altrouge or Merlin, but with a more emotional component on both sides. Mash is still Fou's favorite human (with Ritsuka as a close second as of late), while Matthew is his... well, his.

tl;dr: Mash and Fou still have roughly the same role to each other, but Fou acknowledges Matthew as his master, so his relationship to each has very different connotations. Narrative changes happened because of how the timeline was altered.
 
Yep, the first part of the chapter will be Bryn recruitment followed by regrouping. Then off to the big fight! Which will spill over into the following chapter, naturally.

Fou takes after his Master - and note my 'subtle foreshadowing' given the attributes Matthew hasn't been shown with.

I have plans for Brynhildr, as my 'very subtle foreshadowing' has indicated. The one spoiler I'll give is there's gonna be more smooching than stabbing Sigurd from here on in. Also INaRM!Bryn OP, no nerf.
As it should be. I am still fucking mad that I didn't roll him on the Lostbelt 2 Banner. It feels wrong to have Brynhildr but not him.
 
Speaking of Brynhildr... Passionlip was made by BB using Brynhildr's data, along with Parvati and Durga. With Brynhildr's Saint Graph and NP getting an upgrade and makeover, will BB be using this new data to upgrade Passionlip later on?
 
Could not Gilgamesh have just changed his GoB barrage to firing weapons specifically designed to counter Lev's hell flames? It's always a bother in fanfics when GoB is just reduced to throwing sharp objects at people when in fact it is super powered artifacts that can be of whatever attribute or effect Gil wants.

Fou has been affected by Matthew's like of modern media, it appears.

I found Cu shouting "let him go" to honestly be a little OOC in its naive pointlessness.

Looks like Fou coming upon Matthew when he was younger and more inclined to lavish his affection on individuals instead of in general (like Mash) tied him to Matthew a bit more than Mash.
 
I kind of went with the bit of canon that said the inside of GoB is a mess from flinging the weapons around (a bad habit, as the wiki states). So it takes time to pull out specific things (that aren't Enkidu or Ea), which Lev didn't give him. He had the shields and the healing potion queued up because he was more than happy to let Nobunaga and the rest deal with Boudica; he didn't expect to need specific weapons because he couldn't see Lev (due to not focusing but what else is new). The other stuff he had because he was setting up to babysit Ritsuka just in case.

Fou is heavily influenced by Matthew in behavior and appearance, as well as abilities.

Honestly I don't know if Cu was OOC since people yell when they're frustrated and he's no exception. Daji had a death grip on his spear and was starting to remove Matthew's head, so it felt like it fit the situation. It could go either way, I guess.
 
Honestly I don't know if Cu was OOC since people yell when they're frustrated and he's no exception. Daji had a death grip on his spear and was starting to remove Matthew's head, so it felt like it fit the situation. It could go either way, I guess.
I like how he wasn't tired this time from his Gae Bolg. Gae Bolg is very energy efficient, so it bugged me that he was panting and exhausted when he used it last time in France.
 
I like how he wasn't tired this time from his Gae Bolg. Gae Bolg is very energy efficient, so it bugged me that he was panting and exhausted when he used it last time in France.

That was because he took the full blast of Christine, Christine first and failed the resistance checks. It was less that he was tired and more he got beat on, then used a Noble Phantasm. Also Matthew was the narrator at that point and made an assumption on mana consumption.
 
Is this fic even in the same multisport community center as Grail and Keys?

Nope! Entirely new work, keeping to FGO. I may do references to other works of fiction, but no crossovers. I have a plot line with more than a few concrete details. Things are pretty firm through London. After, I'm trying not to poke at Daybit until Camelot depending on canon (because I have no idea what's going on there), and trying to keep flexible on Beryl's skillset.

Things that won't match canon: Beryl's Servant. Possibly Daybit's if I reach Camelot before it's revealed. Both character's abilities will also be up for debate depending on if I hit their arcs soon enough. Big if, though.
 
Twisted and Corrupted Saint Graphs entering into play... so, what are we getting in Okeanos? Megaros or Alcides?

I want to joke about Minotaur but I can't do that to my boy. Asterios is a good bean and deserves friendship.

Though I will say that the local Bargain Bin Beast will be fun. For me. You guys will probably hate them worse than Daji.
 
I'm Hoping for Gorgon!Euryale or Gorgon!Stheno.

Those two aren't capable of becoming Gorgon, despite being Medusa's sisters. Both their personalities and their nature makes them completely incompatible with Gorgon.

I want to joke about Minotaur but I can't do that to my boy. Asterios is a good bean and deserves friendship.

Though I will say that the local Bargain Bin Beast will be fun. For me. You guys will probably hate them worse than Daji.

Doesn't really matter who's in Okeanos. Even if Poseidon himself shows up having survived Drake and come to reclaim the Grail she took from him, David is still there. And even without the Ark, Roman's deadbeat dad still has an A-rank Anti-Army NP which is basically God smiting the enemy.
 
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