Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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[] Plan Home Invasion
-[] Yao visibly protects the backline.
-[] Manuel, backed by the full force of all the legions, heads up the Scorpion Road.
-[] If Jingshen wishes to have any hope of stopping Manuel and the Hoplite Formation, he and his daughter will need to defend at Wangshen Fort with the Great Spirit Cannon.
[] Meanwhile, Kleisthenes enters the Underworld Spirit Palace while the Nascents are gone. If she can keep them out, she should do so, conquering most of Jingshen's wealth in one fell swoop. If she can't, she should wreak havoc among the royalty, steal the piles of tribulation treasures, and ruin fortifications before running away.
[] If Jingshen's Nascents do not come out, possibly because the Wangshen Nascent Cannon may not be online, Manuel is then to head South, splitting off from the legions, leaving both more vulnerable to attack, with Kleisthenes still hiding in the wings.
I've received feedback that Manuel's assault in this plan is too powerful. That Jingshen will either raise a Nascent or bunker down in the USP, denying us entry or using up half the treasures.

[] Home Invasion V2:
-[] Yao defends the back.
-[] Kleisthenes enters Jingshen lands, but stays hidden.
-[] Manuel attacks alone from the West, hoping to draw away both Nascents so hidden Kleisthenes can sneak into the Underworld Spirit Palace.
-[] The legions are to start sieging the True Son Peak. If both J&J attack the legions, Manuel is to assist while Kleisthenes enters the USP. If Jiao attacks, Kleisthenes is instead to follow, defeat, and replace her with a transformed Yao, who will then infiltrate the USP while Kleisthenes defends the backline. If only Jingshen attacks south, Manuel is to follow and try to kill him, hopefully drawing Jiao out as well so Kleisthenes can take the USP.

Thoughts, feedback?
 
Why the insistence to make Kleisthenes the infiltrator? We have word that Yao has good sneak skills. If she stays hidden, they would probably assume that she's the one holding base.

In fact, that was her role in the original Forgiveness, Not Permission plan, which makes it surprising that people just take her sitting this out in stride.
 
Why the insistence to make Kleisthenes the infiltrator? We have word that Yao has good sneak skills. If she stays hidden, they would probably assume that she's the one holding base.

In fact, that was her role in the original Forgiveness, Not Permission plan, which makes it surprising that people just take her sitting this out in stride.
She can be the infiltrator. We could use her Dao to impersonate one of the main characters. The reason I'm not using her as the hidden Nascent is because Jingshen knows we have her and will be unwilling to fight Manuel if they can be blindsided with a surprise Yao.

Admitted, we don't need Yao for the backline, we could set Kliesthenes (hidden) and a Hoplite as a backline trap, while Yao transforms into a Jingshen scion and infiltrates. They'd know Yao is around somewhere so they won't attack Manuel. We'd need to build a different plan around that. Manuel & Kliesthenes and the legions attack from the outside while Yao attacks from the inside, maybe.
 
Could Yao transform into a lineal Jingshen descendant and volunteer to break their core, and so be given a set of the tribulation treasures and fix one of their Nascents in a known place to guard them during their alleged breakthrough?

We can then ambush whichever Nascent that is.
 
[] Home Invasion V3
-[] Kleisthenes stays hidden in the back with our defensive Legions as a reserve. This keeps her a secret, but may also surprise an attacking Nascent that expects only a Hoplite.
-[] Yao is sent to transform and infiltrate the Underworld Spirit Palace. Objectives include spying, wrecking defenses, stealing treasures, and killing Princes and Princesses. We will try to draw both Nascents out.
-[] Manuel attacks the fortresses, but not with enough legions to defeat Jingshen and Jiao at Wangshen. The Spear is hidden. The main goal is to draw them out, not win. If we brought enough forces to win outright, they wouldn't come out.
-[] The rest of the legions should attack from the south. If Jingshen heads south, with or without Jiao, Manuel is to abandon the west flank and give chase. If Jiao stays with the forts, good, we get the USP at the cost of some legions. If she stays home with Yao, we get the forts. If she heads south, Manuel can beat her and her father while Yao solidifies control.

Feedback, comments, questions?

Edit: Home Invasion V3 is just too risky.
 
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I do not believe that any of the plans suggested so far are actually any better than the two proposed, rather than just being micromangely versions of the same effects.
 
No... because then our victory cannot possibly be complete. We have a chance to end this, without interference from anyone, and the payoff for doing so is extreme. We should take this blessed chance that we have been given. A "negotiated settlement" that does not end with "we own the desert" is not acceptable... and I don't believe we'll get that from our first few exchanges.
I wasn't clear. Yes owning the desert is mandatory. But I'm fine giving up concessions such as letting Jingshen cultivators to flee, or not seizing their entire treasury, or vassalizing some of the minor cultivators if it means ending the war sooner.

I don't really care about any if those items. Just that we gain control of the desert from an economic and military perspective going forward. Basically a negotiation with the Jingshen is fine, a negotiation brokered by the SPS is not.
 
Just because you're the only one doing a stupid thing doesn't make it smart.
Jeez, I'm bleeding.

Q: How good is Yao at sneaking? Does her Dao of Transformation lend itself to infiltration or just a toolset for combat?
A: Very good. She's very, very sneaky. She uses transformation in combat but she's not a combat beast, she's just adaptable.
Yao's Transformation is perfectly well-suited to infiltration. As Occi says, she's very, very sneaky. Home Invasion V3 leaves enough bait to get Jiao and Jingshen out of the USP, which will make her job easier. And if they don't leave, Yao will take however much risk she feels is appropriate for the reward.
[ ] Write-in. Note that both Sheng Yu and Manuel will alter any write-in plans if they think there are unworkable parts to something they consider workable.
 
Magnus Centenius 24 - Pillars 4-6, Yuan Realm, Bandit Talks, Healing, More Base Building, and the beginning of the healing process
Magnus Pt.-24 Pillars 4-6, Yuan Realm, Bandit Talks, Healing, More Base Building, and the beginning of the healing process
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The 4th Pillar Magnus formed was of the Dao of Earth. The pillar took on the appearance of a growing crystal of Blues, Silvers, Golds, Greens, and some Red material at the core. After closer inspection, you can see the colored crystals were made of Arsenic, Sulfur, Uranium(Torbernite look it up, scary stuff), Asbestos, and Cinnabar(Mercury mixed with Sulfur). These crystal grew at a visiable rate, before breaking off and landing at the foot of the pillar. The piece were then absorbed back into the pillar to grow again.

The 5th Pillar was the pillar of the Dao of Water. This pillar ended up a bit cliché as it looked like a large pillar of purple water giving off purple smoke. It is a large pillar of poisoned liquids, not much else to say.

The 6th Pillar was the pillar of the Dao of Wood. The pillar a collection of dangerous plants that grew together into a pillar like form, but several vines connected to the Water pillar to help it grow more deadly. In the pillar, if anyone else could enter Magnus's inner realm, they would see dozens of fruits and vegetables growing out of the pillar enticing those around it to take a bite. Of course, this would end up killing anyone almost instantly seeing as many of the fruit bearing plants have become even more poisonous than in nature.

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Magnus had gotten arrogant and cocky, there was no other explanation for it. After his first experience in a secret realm, and robbing so many cultivation resources so easily, be believed this Yuan Realm would easy as well.

It started out surprisingly mixed. These stories normally start out with great or terrible luck, but this story starts with both. Soon after entering, Magnus ran into a Jingshen Elder at Core realm. Normally, any semi-sane FB cultivator, even one nearing core realm himself, would avoid causing any kind of trouble for the Elder. Magnus would normally run away as well, but 2 successful, if damaging trials, killing a core realm elder as a Qi cultivator in the first trial, several spare LST, and suddenly jumping from 3rd Pillar to 6th Pillar, had inflated his head like a balloon. Magnus, even with his inflated ego, knew he couldn't win a straight up fight, so he waited in secret to ambush the Elder. He used a breath hiding pillar, and a cultivation masking pill to sneak up on the Elder, who, to be fair, was not really paying proper attention in a secret realm if a FB Poison Master could sneak up on him. Magnus released several poisons mixed with smoke screens, and rushed forward. Along with his rush, he sent his puppet bull to ram into the Elder.

The Bull was mighty, but compared to the Core Realm Elder, it was a toy. Still, a massive wood and metal bull crashing into you while your in a cloud of poison dust is pretty distracting. Magnus was lucky enough to blindly grab something from the waist of the Elder before fleeing. Unfortunately, what he grabbed were the Clock-Dagger and Sharpened Ruler. The weapons held uses of Space and Time Daos, which were not only forbidden, but likely to get the owner killed. It's little wonder that the Elder chased Magnus from one end of the Realm to the other. The most powerful poisons at Magnus' disposal did little to slow down the Elder and maybe even strengthened his resistance to future poisons. That Elder should thank Magnus, Poison resistance is very difficult to improve without killing yourself. In the end, Magnus used several Life Saving Treasures he had spent decades collecting and even the power of the Sharpened Ruler before finally escaping into a Trial to hide for years. Even with the power of the Ruler, the Elder was able to launch one final strike, shattering Magnus' Dantian and crippling him.

Lucky for Magnus, even with a crippled Dantian, he could still control his puppet arms and combat puppets. He was able to easily return home to heal his main physical wounds.

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One would think that losing their Dantian would be a reason not to head into Bandit territory, but for Magnus, it just challenged him to try another method. Just like in his last missing, Magnus disguised himself as a simple merchant and entered the Bandit kingdom. He brought wagons full of his best and most powerful alcohols to temp the bandits into joining forces with the clan. Soon after, he realized that any merchant that dares enter a place known as the Bandit Kingdoms were either very strong or very insane.

Magnus, even with his Dantian crippled, fell into the former category. He still had many poisons that could easily kill any non Emperor FB rank and even weaken a Core Realm expert. He left a trail of dead bandits that tried to steal his wines, or were simply too weak to handle the strength of his brews. It wasn't until he ran into Tao, a Heavenly Bandit King, that he found someone worthy to work with.

Magnus had a new drink known as Maotai. It was five times more potent than his stronger wines and could eat through solid rock. Tao was the first one Magnus offered it to, to drink the whole saucer and ask for more. Not only that, he was the only one who could keep drinking with Magnus until they both passed out together.

In the morning, Tao had sworn an oath of friendship with Magnus and agreed to work with the Golden Devils for certain benefits including a steady supply of the powerful drink. Magnus left the stock he brought with him and returned home to spread the good news.

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A shattered Dantian is a difficult thing to repair and more often then not, will be permanent. Magnus being both an expert of healing pills and an expert in replacing body parts, decided if his dantian was destroyed, he would get a better one.

He spent months learning exactly how a Dantian was shape and how its functions worked to an extent. He gain much more knowledge dissecting various spirit beast and enemy prisoners. For spirit beast, their core works almost the same as a Dantian, but they seem to produce more energy for the same levels and tissue volume. The beast cores also seemed to contain less Qi that human's Dantian, even though they are generally stronger at the same level. After extensive research and killing animals to see what happens to their Qi. Magnus concluded that much of the beast's Qi is subconsciously drawn into it's body strengthening it and setting up a sort of automatic growth. Their Qi is constantly flowing through their bodies giving a continuous strength boost and the constant use and strain allows the body to keep improving. The downside, or upside for humanity, is that it means that most beast never learn to consciously use Qi until they reach RB realm and therefore, they gain Qi very slowly. Also, with the bodies dependent on their cores, if the spirit core is removed or destroyed, the lack of Qi kills the beast quickly as their bodies can no longer sustain themselves.

For Humans and animals with wisdom, the Dantian or core doesn't tend to leak energy as much. An intelligent beast learns to control their Qi so it doesn't leak out as much and they can raise their Qi faster, but their bodies tend to be weaker then other beast. Humans start having to consciously learn to manipulate Qi, but that gives them better control, and a faster increase in cultivation level. On the other other hand, Human's "core" is more integrated with the body, so removing a Dantain requires a lot more work than removing a beast core. This does mean that a Dantian's destruction wont mean the death of the user.

At first, he tried to build an artificial one like his arms. The first trials were on Spirit beast to see if replacing their core with the artifical one would keep them alive and make them stronger. It was made from some of the strongest most Qi conductive materials he could get a hold of, but in the end they were complete failures. They could hold Qi, and after some work, could generate a small of it from absorbing bit from the atmosphere. The problem was, dead wood and metal do not grow like a natural dantian. Whatever level Magnus made them at, it was what level it would stay. So a Qi level Dantian at 5th Heavenstage would never allow someone to reach 6th Heavenstage, much less Foundation. The other limits were that the Dantian could not be inserted without the previous one being either destroyed or removed. Finally, at most a Dantian 1 small realm larger than the current natural dantian can be installed in the patient without mess consequences. An experiment with a captured 6th heavenstage being given an 8th heavenstage artificial dantian showed promise. The installation was successful, and for a few minutes, the subject gained 8thheavenstage strength. Unfortunately, the energy was too much for the body and it exploded. This was with a beast's stronger body, a human probably would die if you added even 1 small realm stronger.

So, with that avenue of experiments hitting a dead end, Magnus went to see if transplanting a core into a human or the core/dantian mix thing that an intelligent animal would work. At first, Magnus started by moving cores between beast to see if a quick enough move to a beast with a newly removed core would save it and what changes would happen. Magnus was amazed to see all the interactions. Though, he nearly cleared out his new Beast Taming Hall to finish his work.

For example, he tried placing a fire elemental beast's core into a beast with wood attributes, and the beast ended up lighting itself on fire before dies. Then, he tried putting a fire core in a metal beast. This one became stronger than before and could start using fire in addition to its metal properties. From there, Magnus tried several more complimentary mixes and for the most part they ended with the beast getting stronger. The interesting side effect was that only the new element continued to grow, and Magnus believes that if they live long enough, their main element would eventually change to the new core, with their old element being a minor boost.

As for giving beasts the core of an intelligent beast, it was a complete waste. While the beast would survive, the hybrid core did nothing special to the beast(besides normal elemental changes). Also, after a few years, the hybrid core turned into a normal core.

On the opposite end, giving a normal core to an intelligent beast gave similar elemental boost, but after a year, the core would become a hybrid core as well. With a renewable source of hybrid cores, Magnus turned his experiments to them.

First, Magnus tried to absorb a hybrid core for cultivation, but found them too different to work properly. So, he then moved on to adding cores and hybrid cores to humans. The pure beast cores would kill any human who wasn't a spirit beast core cultivator, which in the desert was basically everyone. It was noted by Magnus, that beast core cultivators would survive 50% of the time, and would be horribly mutated by the cores. The survivors were the ones who received cores from beasts that were similar to humans; 2 legs, 2 arms, non-compound eyes, and the like. Insect beast cores made rather interesting, but very short lived mixes. The hybrid cores did allow most who received them to live. They only received minor mutation at most, and that mostly came from donors that were stronger than the recipient. Careful study of the humans with hybrid cores showed that they had gained a passive body strength increase like spirit beast, and their cultivation speed would improve or slow depending on how compatible the new core was to the new body.

Finally, Magnus did what he saw as the most boring, but need control part, moving dantians between humans. Once again, a dantain stronger than 1 realm above the subject would cause a messy bloody death. Weaker dantians would regress the cultivation, but in most cases, the one who received a new dantain could regain their old strength at an average of 1 small realm per year until they reached their old level. Other than that, except a few cases where even a properly implanted dantain would be rejected by the host body, nothing unusual happened to Magnus's great disappointment.

So, in the pursuit of greater heights of power, Magnus searched for a poisonous beast with intelligence no less then a humans. These kinds of beasts were usually smart enough to avoid fighting humans and stuck to the wilds where dumber beasts were easy to control. Magnus went deep into the desert where he eventually found a 8-Star-Eyed Rainbow Death Spider of Doom. This spider had eight sided star shaped eyes that glowed a different color of the rainbow and literal name aside, the Spider was known to be a very intelligent and patient hunter with a poison able to kill anything in the same realm. Not only that, the spider had 8 cores, 1 behind each eye, and each charged with a different aspect of nature and poison. Normally, this spider would be a perfect cultivation aid for Magnus to solidify his pillar and ready himself for Core realm, but now, the cores would be the perfect thing to replace his Dantian and possibly make him stronger. Also, since he has been using 8 limbs for so long, and his natural limbs had been lost for so long, the cores should not create much of the problem.

The battle with the spider was actually a bit anti-climatic. Magnus as a poison master, and someone who had lived through holding a poison in his body that could kill a Core Realm Elder, was mostly immune to the spider's poisons. Magnus simple waited for the spider to try to bite him after faking defeat from the poison gases and stabbed the spider in its brain.

After bringing the cores back to his home, Magnus placed his puppet arms on a mannequin and added the cores to himself in a rather questionable operation. In the end, Magnus could cultivate again, and was ready to fight in the coming war with Jingshen.

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Before Magnus left on the mission to recruit bandits, he hired an up and coming group with a leader only known as the builder. He tasked them with making a Medicine hall to be the equal and opposite of the Poison hall, All Things in Perfect Balance. Also, Magnus asked them to make a Beast Tamer's Hall. Magnus had some ideas to fix his Dantian problem and he needed many beasts and a safe place to work on medical experiments.

When Magnus met the Builders, he was surprised at how enthusiastic they were with working with one of the 13 from the trials over a hundred years ago. While Magnus clearly remembers the desperate struggle to save the city and nearly dying to kill a Core Realm Elder while still a lower Qi Cultivator, lately, fewer and fewer of the new generation remembered the story. Now they remembered him because of all the weaklings he saved from the latest Trials. Still, the builders energy could only be a good thing when building uo his base.

With a set of plans Magnus had been holding on to for over a century, the builders got to work setting up the large areas needed for the Beast Hall. There would be several buildings to handle the different beast. There would be a roost for birds, a temperature controlled building for reptiles, a small water tank for the lake/oasis creatures, and large individual rooms for extra large beast.

When Magnus returned from his mission, the Builders had not only finished both halls, they had set up the Herb gardens as well. Instead of a single location, they made many smaller garden all over the empty spaces of the base leaving only the planned sites for future buildings alone. These small herb gardens dotted the base in different environments using similar formations as the ones on the poison and medicine halls to concentrate certain Qi. Thanks to that, the gardens could make all kinds of herbs that were needed for all the halls and Magnus's wine experiments.

After thanking the builders for their hard work, Magnus set up a contract with them to build the rest of the base as soon as he had the funds for it.

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Jin Miyu was a friend.
Jin was a fighter.
Jin was Loyal.
I was there when Jin gave up his humanity to help buy just a little more time for the poison to be completed.
He was the first among the 13 to reach Core realm.
He found, was consumed, and fought back against a treasure that could battle a Nascent Soul equally.
He gave his life to ensure the future of the clan.
He will be missed.

Magnus finished his words to himself before pouring a jug of his strongest and most potent Wood wine on the remains of Jin's vines. Magnus then got up and left as quickly as his speech did. If he had stayed, he would have seen a small bud growing where he poured the wine.

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Almost 3K words anew record for me

@Mochinator if you ever want to start over with Jin or his offspring thing, I left a way, if not, it was just for me then

@Alectai @ReaderOfFate @Kaboomatic link please

Also I would like to heal the crippling Magnus got and hope it doesn't get worse thanks to the war(really bad time for me)
 
the builder. He tasked them with making a Medicine hall to be the equal and opposite of the Poison hall, All Things in Perfect Balance
From this part alone I already know that the brotherhood will go all plus ultra in the mission^^. As so as RL allow I will finish the war omakes, do the gold mine omake and do the reaction for this one^^.

I glad that with who I selected as mayor in the brotherhood city. That getting exotic beasts will be reasonable easy for them. After all their city had a 'monster of the week problem' :D
 
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