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The Grand Elder had insisted that each party to the talks get given an equal space to prepare before entering, and so to his left sat hundreds of wounded experts from the Strength Purity Sect, to his right the flower of the Jingshen Clan.
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Lastly was Elder Glorious Strike, having named herself in the style of the Strength Purity Sect. A badly wounded Nascent Soul in the Early stage, she was beautiful.

I was re-reading the Four-Power Conference post, and noticed that the SPS people in attendance were all "wounded", and their Nascent Soul representative is even "badly wounded".

Why did the SPS go out of their way to send an entire party of wounded people to the conference? Are they trying to:

(a) Show that this conference is so minor and inconsequential to them that they are treating it as a rest & recreational break for their wounded personnel?

(b) Show off how much they are contributing to the Great Battlefield and their martyrdom status arising therefrom?

(c) Provide a display of strength and confidence i.e. "our wounded warriors are the equals of your perfectly healthy ones"?
 
Gaius Antonius Omake #15: Much Ado About Dirt, Part 1
Gaius Antonius Omake #15: Much Ado About Dirt, Part 1

The hot desert winds blew strongly, sending barrages of sand lashing out like whips of glass. A man walked through this storm, unperturbed, his bronze-like skin protecting against these micro-lacerations even at a baseline, without any qi expenditure. His dark cloak fluttered in the wind, and he pressed his hat in place with a hand to stop it from flying.

Gaius hated sandstorms; so did every other lifeform in the world, most likely. He would never travel under such conditions, if not for the urgency of his search. The Seeker would be going off to war soon, and he would like an insurance policy, in case things got bad. This search wasn't supposed to take so long, but things always had a way of dragging on; He'd combed through this entire 100 square kilometer stretch of land in the southwestern edge of Clan territory multiple times over the past two months, searching for the entrance. It was only on the third sweep that Gaius realized the wind always picked up in this stretch of desert when he was nearby - an automatic defense or array, most likely.

The Cave of Resurrection. Supposedly, several times in the past, the dead had returned to life and emerged from beneath the earth in this place. Some rumors conflicted with each other, but the common thread was that the cave itself was greedy - those who carried with them something from the cave would be returned there along with what they carried upon death, rather than thrown into the cycle of reincarnation. The ability to return from the dead, even if it was only once, was a highly coveted prize, and any cultivator who rose above the rabble would typically carry at least one method of resurrection or death-protection on their person. As one following the most dangerous path, Gaius would need one, and finally, after such a long search, the cove's entrance was before him.

You wouldn't notice it unless you were looking for it; The mouth was halfway buried beneath the sand, which took a few hours to shovel away. After moving about ten tons of the tightly-packed detrius - easier said than done when the howling wind undid his progress nearly as fast as he made it, Gaius got a better look at the interior, immediately noting how unnatural it looked. Not only was the stone a bit too smooth, but there was far too much moss and fungus and the air was too damp. This was by no means a natural formation in the earth.

And so, before the entrance could close itself up once again, Gaius entered. Possibly a foolish mistake, but he was prepared for situations like this. Shaking out some loose bits of sand and detrius that had, despite his minor sealing arrays, found a way into his bag, he retrieved an unassuming iron stake and hammer. He pounded it into the rocky floor of the cave, careful not to use excessive force and risk a cave-in. Once the minor treasure was embedded fairly deep, Gaius took several steps back and retrieved a bag of iron sand so make sure everything was working.

As expected, when he threw a handful of the particles, they were unerringly pulled through the air toward the stake, sticking fastly to it when they reached. This Guiding Magnesis Rod was a handy pathfinding tool that Gaius had purchased in Emporikipolis at a fair value, and would guide him back to the entrance even if it closed up completely.

Drawing out a qi lantern and carefully making his way deeper into the earth, Gaius noted again how fertile and humid the Cave of Resurrection was, especially compared to the arid and barren wasteland above his head. A few beads of sweat dripped down his forehead, which he wiped away absentmindedly. The tunnel kept going deeper and deeper for a while longer, until Gaius began to lose track of how far he had gone.

In the end, Gaius spent nearly an entire day slowly descending into the earth. A few times, he went down incorrect paths which lead to dead-ends and was forced to double back. By the time the descent finally let up, he must have been miles beneath the ground, but the sheer depth wasn't even the strangest thing about this place. After levelling off, the tunnel opened into a vibrant scene; a huge clearing, brightly lit by glowing crystal formations up above. The simulated sunlight caused plants to grow, turning the place into a veritable garden of colorful flora he'd never seen before.

Finally, in the center sat a tall throne of granite coated in moss, upon which sat a creature in the vague shape of a man, made entirely from rocks, both common and precious, and with a face made of crags and fault lines. It sat casually with crossed legs, reading a thick, fancy-looking hidebound book in its lap. It looked up, putting its book down and looking Gaius up and down. "Well, hello there. I haven't had a visitor in a long time." The spirit - for what else could it be? - greeted him.

Well, that was unexpected. He couldn't just demand the treasure, right? No, this spirit was definitely of a higher cultivation than him, so that was out of the question - time to wing it. Gaius bowed deeply. "Hello, honored spirit. I am here for... geoligical research."

That technically wasn't a lie, right?

"...research. So you're a scholar, then?" The spirit replied skeptically, boring into him with its crater-like eyes.

"Er, more of a... warrior and philosopher by trade, I guess? But in this case I'm looking into the effects of... high qi concentration on exotic soil." Gaius managed to stammer out, putting on his best approximation of an innocence and humility.

Rising from its throne, the enigmatic being finally strode forth to get a closer look at him. "You'd be better off conducting your research out on the coast, boy. But I suppose humans can be unreasonable about their borders, can't they?" It smiled and spread its arms genially, finally pleased. "Very well then, make yourself at home. Let it not be said that The Sacred Effigy is inhospitable."

Okay, Gaius was in the door at least. Now to find his chance.

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His chance, it turned out, took a while to find.

Problem #1: The Sacred Effigy did not sleep, and apparently had no need to. Sure, sometimes its - or their, rather - body stopped moving for several hours and turned fully into a stone, but they could still speak and and hear just fine through the ground. This meant the spirit was something of a panopticon - there was always a chance that Gaius was being watched.

Problem #2: The Sacred Effigy was sharp. They were hospitable indeed - even allowing Gaius to cultivate within this fertile place - but not naive. There was a glimmer in their eye that put Gaius' instincts on edge, never allowing him to relax even as the two traded pleasantries back and forth.

Problem #3: THe Sacred Effigy was distracting. They were something of a connoseur. They had a large connection of fiction books, opium, tobacco, wine, beer, psychedelic mushrooms, exotic dried meats, strange knick-knacks, all sorts of conversation-starters. They were always discussing which spirit had gifted them which item, or asking Gaius to sample some mind-altering substance, or chattering on about pretty much anything.

Gaius' stay in the cave over the next few days became an endurance test, as he did things to the rocks and soil that probably looked like tests, and pretended to take notes on something-or-other. His host, for their part, didn't seem to care about the particulars, which was good because Gaius knew next to nothing about geology.

When he wasn't bullshitting, cultivating or sleeping, he was eating, drinking or smoking something weird. It was a veritable roulette - sometimes lovely, sometimes disgusting, sometimes mildly toxic. The two also played various strategy games together, rambling about this and that the whole time.

In truth, Gaius was having a good time. Not only was he getting in some especially good cultivation(he suspected each day of cultivation in here was worth more than two days' worth in the outside world), he could also freely discuss philosophy and metaphysics with the spirit, who had some fascinating insights to provide.

Taking any discreet objects wouldn't be possible, but that was fine. It turns out, Gaius had in fact learned things about the dirt in this place, even if he hadn't intended to. When he removed a chunk of soil and pulsed his spiritual sense, they were essentially fooled. With his sight and touch, he sensed that he was holding the dirt in his had, but with his spiritual sense, he felt that the dirt was still in the ground. Yes, this would do just fine. Gaius put the dirt in a small vial and got up - Effigy was calling him, asking him to try a cup of 500 year old peach wine.

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But these good times were not to last. On the fourth day of his stay, Gaius explained to the dryad that he had the data he was here for, and was ready to leave. A long exchange of pleasantries were exchanged, and The Seeker finally stepped through the threshold separating the huge cavern from the tunnel. The tension finally began to escape from his body and mind, only to rocket up several times higher as his host suddenly spoke up.

"Hold on." Effigy said, pointing an accusatory finger at Gaius' hip. "You've taken something with you, haven't you? I can feel it."

Fuck. Okay, probably fine, he just had to play it cool. "Er, I think I did, yes." Gaius said, retrieving the vial of dirt and attempting to look as ignorant as possible. "I took a sample to study at home with other equipment. Is this a problem?"

A wave of killing intent washed over Gaius, and the tree-being's body began to hideously warp as their emotions overrode their control. "Don't give me that BULLSHIT!" they screamed, stomping their foot and sendind a wave of elemental force swimming beneath the earth. Within a second the ground rose up behind Gaius, shutting the entrance to the tunnel and cutting off his escape. "You hate me, you bastard! You came here to steal from me!"

Wow, okay, very harsh reaction! Gaius' mind races as he searched for a way to salvage the situation. "I don't understand, I thought it was fine to take a sample! I didn't mean to offend you!" He shouted, dropping to his knees in supplication.

"You're not a scholar, or a philosopher, or a warrior, you're a bandit! You don't care about me at all, you used me to get at the power in my home. You're the same as all the others..." Effigy lamented, and in that moment, from the look on their face, Gaius was sure they would weep if they could.

Gaius blanched, frozen in place and unsure of what to do. As confusing as the stone-person's reaction was, it didn't seem like a performance; they were genuinely hurt by him taking some dirt. "Hold on, please slow down. I-I don't think I understand..." he hesitantly began, desperately looking for a way to navigate this crisis.

"Do you think defying death is some trivial thing, Gaius?" They asked, arms hanging limply at their side as they fixed him with an unimaginably weary look. "I am this cave. Every time some idiot human gets themself killed and uses my power to return, I am reduced. You're killing me, and you want me to just take it?"

"...I didn't know. I'm sorry. Please, let's talk about this."

"What is there to talk about?"

"I didn't mean to hurt you. Please don't turn to stone right now."

"Forget it, I can't speak to you right now." Effigy rumbled, their physical avatar already beginning to collapse. "Don't you dare try to escape, I'll know. I'll get to you when I'm feeling better..."

Before Gaius could protest, the spirit had once more returned to the earth. Gaius could break through that stone with some effort, but he had no idea how thick it was, and if Effigy was indeed the incarnation of this entire cave, then his life was entirely in their hands. No, he would have to comply, and right now that meant waiting and planning.

The Seeker left for another corner of the cavern. It wasn't like he would get any more privacy, but it felt polite to do so. He sighed, looking back at the pile of rocks, which somehow managed to look dejected. He'd really screwed things up, hadn't he? A pang of guilt stabbed deep inside him; he would have to fix this as best he could.

Here's another one from the backlog. This started out as a short, simple story about Gaius getting his hands on an LST, and evolved into something more complex and character-driven.

@Alectai
 
I was re-reading the Four-Power Conference post, and noticed that the SPS people in attendance were all "wounded", and their Nascent Soul representative is even "badly wounded".

Why did the SPS go out of their way to send an entire party of wounded people to the conference? Are they trying to:

(a) Show that this conference is so minor and inconsequential to them that they are treating it as a rest & recreational break for their wounded personnel?

(b) Show off how much they are contributing to the Great Battlefield and their martyrdom status arising therefrom?

(c) Provide a display of strength and confidence i.e. "our wounded warriors are the equals of your perfectly healthy ones"?

They send there wounded to recover at the spirit oasis. The injured members were already there recovering. There is no hidden meaning.
 
They send there wounded to recover at the spirit oasis. The injured members were already there recovering. There is no hidden meaning.

I guess that's kind of a flex by the SPS in its own way. "We are not gonna bother to make any special arrangements for our envoys to this conference. Whoever happens to be recuperating there at the time of the conference will just make an appearance on our behalf."
 
Minervina Barda 18 - Bad Moon Rising part 2
Minervina Barda Chapter 19: Bad Moon Rising Part 2:


When you become a Centurion, there is one trick you're absolutely required to master before you're allowed to lead troops in the field. You need to be heard, no matter how bad the din of battle gets.

There are innumerable techniques to achieve this. I have seen Centurions who bellow so loudly their voices become terrifying weapons. Others draft fiery signals in the air, or sing battle songs whose compelling melodies sooth Dao hearts and strengthen sword arms.

My preferred method is, perhaps inevitably, among the subtlest in the Clan.

"Places everyone, places." My softly whispered words fly like soft arrows directly to the ears of each man and woman in the caravan, directing them to hold fast and carry out the battle plan we had hashed out weeks before and drilled a dozen times.

I looked out into the surrounding dunes and caught my first glimpse of the enemy. I was not impressed.

Oh certainly they would look ferocious enough to the Mortal eye. Three hundred ferocious dog-men coming from every angle, some charging on all fours, others bipedal and wielding a fearsome array of butcher knifes, machetes and crudely wrought sabres. They made for an ominous tableaux against the backdrop of tonight's giant, blood red moon.

But my eyes could pierce mere twilight and perceive the truth even at this distance. These wretches were starved, bony and missing chunks of fur and fat. Many nursed flesh wounds or ran with painful limps. Their eyes were filled with the unthinking ferocity of men already dead. Their cultivation was pitiful and some felt as if they were terminally low on Qi before the fight had even begun.

These were the runts of the litter. An initial wave of trash whose purpose was to die on our spears and force us to expend our strength before the true contest even began.

I smiled, so they desired a battle of attrition? Fool, no one does better in a contest of stamina than a Golden Devil.

I turned to my trusty assistant and said "Bi, you have the Formation" before leaping away into the night. I had my own position to take up.

Two hundred Qi Cultivators couldn't effectively defend three thousand mortals. Even as two three story tall hoplites formed, one in the vanguard of the caravan and one at the rear, the gaps in our defence were clear. Even with the impressive reach of their glowing spears, neither cohort's construct had enough reach to properly guard the caravan's flanks.

Forming a broad skirmish line would throw away our greatest advantage, condemning the legionnaires to be pulled down piecemeal in hand to hand fighting against superior numbers. Unacceptable.

So that was where the Centurions came in. Selene and I each took one flank, and the responsibility to wipe out or turn aside any of the blood crazed packs that came our way, effectively forcing lesser enemies on to our subordinates spears. It was a risky place to be, but such is the nature of a command position in the Optimatoi.

Conventional, expected Clan tactics for such a situation. Our enemies seemed to agree, throwing themselves towards us with clear eagerness. After all, deadly though we might be, Two Centurions at the Early Foundation stage would be exhausted and worn down eventually, making us an easy meal for their own experts who were still hiding in the dunes beyond my spiritual sense.

Of course, I wasn't an Early Foundation Cultivator anymore. Subconsciously I checked the Sublime Soul Veiling Solution that was currently dancing through my meridians. An iteration on one of my earlier formuli, this pill did an excellent job of hiding my power from anyone below Core Formation. It wouldn't even kill me so long as I took the antidote every few days!

Now the key to success today was not revealing my identity until I had already drawn out the bulk of the enemies strength. I would have to be careful in my choice of techniques.

I smiled as I drew my scarcely used xiphos and threw myself at the first six strong pack to try and bullrush past me towards the refugee's. I called on only a fraction of my speed, augmented by a pinch of the dozens of venoms swimming in my veins and it was like fighting statues, only they weren't as tough. I cut in wide circular arcs, aiming for chopped limbs and opened guts. Sure enough seconds later all six are down, alive but screaming, as their lifeblood spills into the sand.

I stand over them, doing my best to project nonchalance as I rest my bloodied blade on one shoulder. I can see members of the next two packs eyeing each other, as if imploring their comrades to be the first to plunge in.

I take the reprieve to scan the field with my senses.

The greater mass of attackers are dancing around the monolithic Hoplites, seemingly unwilling to get too close. Thrown spears and axes, as well as the occasional blood whip or crimson fireball fly towards my legionnaires, only to be deftly knocked aside by spear and shield. In return the constructs glowing bronze spears glide out in deceptively smooth motions, each stab piercing a Cannibal or two with exacting precision.

The great mass of mortals at the centre of the caravan thrashes like a wounded animal, expanding and contracting seemingly at random as families try to flee only to find no safe direction. I can see the Hexagram carriages slowly moving to the edge of the formation to guard them, too slowly, the Sorcerers were dragging their feet.

Selene at least is holding steady, the woman's laughter ringing across the field. She had wracked up a kill count far greater than my own by conjuring a great rolling ball of brass spellfire that seems hungry to devour ever more of the shapeshifting cultivators. I couldn't help but shake my head ruefully, that woman loves Fire as much as I love Poison.

I turn back to the matter at hand and look at the forty or so Cannibals still menacing this flank.

"Sorry boys, but I can't let my subordinates show me up now can I?" I call on Pillars of Death and Fire and shroud my weapon and every inch of my being in a thick cloak of necrotic flame. A little trick I had worked out after the heavens surprised me with a constitution much better suited to direct combat.

I moved amongst them like a fast flowing river between boulders, my enhanced constitution reinforced by the Shimmermist Steps and my Water Pillar. I can't claim my swordplay is superb, but I had been practicing and a little goes a long way when even the lightest touch spelled swift demise as flesh rotted and bone putrefied under my blackflames kiss. I turned on the last little knot of terrified blood path when I felt the tingle of intense killing intent on the back of my neck.

My first instinct was to throw myself to one side and dodge the blow, but instead I locked my feet and braced myself. After all it looked like I had hooked exactly the sort of fish I had come out here for.

The Blood Path Expert was the size of a giant, he must have had five times my mass even before you threw in the plate armour. The spiked pauldrons, oni mask and longsword length khatars certainly leant him a fearsome mien.

Emilia isn't the type to be intimidated though, and she has always possessed exquisite timing. My beloved burst from the pores on the back of my neck just as the ogre committed to his fatal trajectory. Like a hawk takes a dove, she expanded to twice his size and snapped him up in her jaws, piercing him twice with silver fangs before slamming him into the dirt. She wanted to continue, but I reeled her back, unwilling to expose her to onlookers more than necessary. There would be more of his ilk waiting for their chance in the surrounding dunes.

Instead I dispatched the remaining Blood Path disciples before turning back to my would be assassin.

He had pulled himself to his feet and readied his weapons, but silvery patches were already spreading from the wounds in his legs where Emilia savaged him.

"I'm surprised you're still standing to be honest. You must be one tough son of a bitch. You got a name or anything?" I stepped towards him confidently, flaming sword in a seemingly casual guard position. "Any pithy last words perhaps? You have my word I will record them faithfully on the statue."

To my eternal surprise he actually managed to take six steps towards me. He clanked when he walked and it wasn't just the ridiculous armour.

"Dammit woman, you're really courting death. What witchery is this you have done to me?"

I couldn't help but laugh, as if I had ever viewed my relationship with death as anything less than a courtship.

"It's a little something I picked up from a Core Formation Scorpion on my travels. The Elixir of Alchemical Petrification transforms organic material into a substance much like mortal silver. It's a rapid and quite irreversible process I'm afraid.``

He roared his denial and charged valiantly, but it was futile, I suspected I was faster than him even under normal conditions, but this was just laughable. It was less a duel and more a farce, I simply stayed two steps ahead of him for the one minute thirteen seconds it took for the venom to take him off his feet by itself. He succumbed quickly after that, silver coating the rest of his skin as his eyes lifelessly stared at the sky through his mask. I stopped only to pull off the mask, revealing a shock of blond hair and what would have been a handsome face if it weren't twisted up in fear and frustration. A twist of my wrist sent an inch wide blue flame down to the dead cultivators forehead. It glittered prettily as it branded the statue with his final words in fine black lettering.

"What witchery is this you have done to me?"

I didn't have a chance to celebrate my victory though. A single mighty howl shattered the night sky, clearly a signal for a second wave of attackers to roll in.

My eyes flitted across the field. This wave was smaller, a little over two hundred strong, but much more dangerous. These dog-men all walked on two feet, had the bulging muscles and healthy fur of well fed predators and carried quality weapons of blood-quenched steel and a wild but effective looking array of plundered armour. Most were between the 6th and 9th Heavenstages in power, and marched into battle with the confident grace of veterans.

Rather than a wild attack from all angles, these warriors moved in a pincer, pressing directly in on the two Hoplites with a torrent of techniques. It was a solid wall of conjured red blades, miasmic orbs and enchanted steel. I watched as both mighty constructs had to take a step back and shelter behind their shields. It was a true test of Qi endurance now, would these elites have enough reserves to maintain this huge barrage long enough to wear down the formation?

I itched to intervene, but held my position. The hardest lesson I had learned at the Night Devil Fortress is that a commander can't be everywhere. At a certain point you have to put your faith in others to do their jobs and succeed.

Moreover I doubted the Blood Cannibals were going to leave us Centurions alone, they had just decided to stop wasting their fodder on us.

My theory was confirmed moments later when the shadows at my feet roiled, congealed and attacked like a volley of ephemeral arrows.

I admit, that's a new one. A tug on my Revelation pillar brings my mind to a fever pitch, giving me a moment to react. No time to dodge, I call deeply on Fire, Water and Life. My flame cloak flares, devouring the first score of shadow blades as they fly through the air. A cyclone of flowing water rips its way clear of my skin and knocks a dozen more away harmlessly into the sand.

In the end five got through and hit me, but between my cuirass, Bronze skin and the reinforcement from my Life Pillar I got away with just scratches and surface wounds. I sprinted away though, seemingly hurt and panicked, shamelessly acting the part of a wounded bird to tempt the fox.

I spotted her behind me as I paused to clear the blood out of my eye from the scalp wound that was the worst of my minor injuries. A silhouette of pure darkness against the moonlight. A gesture and a trio of Black Swords flew through the air towards me and she promptly vanished again, simply stepping into shadow.

Prepared this time I block them with a combination of the sword, Death Qi and stubbornness. While not a perfect counter for my opponents Shadow Technique, I was certain my Pillar called on a far greater void than the mere absence of light.

Still If I didn't find a way to pin her down soon, things would go sour fast. Selene was engaged with two wagon sized wolves that radiated the power of Early Foundation Building. The vanguard Hoplite was holding its own, but at the rear guard one of the Cannibals had pulled out some kind of treasure. The construct's shield has been discarded as a smoking mess and it held its spear in a two handed grip as the enemies techniques lashed its shadowy frame.

I suppose it's time to trial another of the three Scorpion Elixirs I have been refining. I quietly palm a trio of icy slivers from my spatial pouch while waiting for the next attack.

It comes from behind and I almost die out of sheer surprise as she tries the exact same trick again, to equally disappointing results. Surely she had other tricks.

After the third and fourth repetition I could almost taste my foe's frustration and I was increasingly certain this wasn't a ploy. Damn Blood Path, this girl was mid-foundation building, but I doubted she was even a century old and she just didn't have enough techniques or hidden cards to keep up at this level of combat.

The next attack was the last, my Intent Pillar warned me it was coming and I was moving before the Cannibal had even finished materialising. I burnt a large portion of my internal venom supply for pure speed, leaping forward like a thunderbolt fresh out of a cloud, sword raised to decapitate her. That wouldn't have been enough though if I hadn't projected lethal intent into my voice and shouted "Freeze!" With the full force of Late Foundation Establishment. Just like with the Matriarch earlier, the Shadow Cultivator was locked in place by chains of pure Will, at least for the a moment.

She blocked the swordblow of course, pulling twin daggers from somewhere and pulling off an X block, trapping my xiphos. She wouldn't have made it this far without some talent after all. I don't think she even saw the tiny ice needles fly from the voluminous sleeve of my off hand though. Two only scored minor grazes on her skin, but the third sunk cleanly into her abdomen right before she worked free of my willworking and dematerialised.

I stepped back, projecting calm as I waited, counting seconds.

6, 7, 8…. The scream was jagged and confused as the woman reappeared a few feet away, her stomach already bulging unpleasantly in a half dozen different places. Her face was still cloaked in Shadow Qi, but that didn't hide the blood she was vomiting as she collapsed.

"I call it Marrow Fire Elixer. It unleashes absolute, unchecked growth in every affected part of the body." I step a few careful paces back as my victim starts to make popping noises. "Of course that rarely goes well." A last hoarse rasp and a dull explosion follow my words.

I felt the veil offered by my soul obscuring pill fall away under the pressure of that last technique, but that was redundant at this point anyway. No one on this battlefield was likely to underestimate me anymore.

I checked the field once more. Selene had dispatched one of her opponents, but was bleeding from a dozen bite wounds as she wrestled with the other.

The rearguard were reduced to messy hand to hand fighting, their Hoplite destroyed.

The mortal refugee's were still in a barely contained panic, dashing too and fro, some actually coming within touching distance of the Cultivators battlegrounds in their furore. I could see a robed Xin sorcerer stood on a wagon calling for calm, it didn't seem to be helping.

Right on cue, that howl sounded again as the enemy commander commited the last of his reserves to the fight.

I stoically fought down the urge to cackle. I had them right where I wanted them.

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Third Omake of the Turn!

This chapter was originally supposed to be the entire battle, but it kind of got away from me. The conclusion should be up inside a week.

@Alectai @Humbaba @ReaderOfFate
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Maria 11 - Gravebronze
Gravebronze
Maria Turn 8 Ninth Omake


"Remember, clansman, passing by,
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you will be,
Prepare yourself to follow me."
-Traditional Optimatoi forge-chant


"After one has become used to the bizarre appearance of the Golden Devils, their greatest trap will reveal itself; complacency. They may appear civilised after a fashion – perhaps even praiseworthy. But one must never forget that these are savages. Cruelty, murder, and callous violence are at the heart of their nature. Nowhere is this more obvious than in their burial customs."
-Jingshen Chan Bo, "Customs and Rites of the Barbarians Vol. 3"



"Father-"

"Hush." Lu Xu pressed his hands to his daughter's mouth and shook his head. "I know. But no more. This must be done."

Mei glared at him fiercely, but he held firm, and after a moment she broke, and nodded. She was a good child. Hard working and studious, and sweet tempered. Wilful, though. Normally he wouldn't mind, but now?

The cords from his bag were starting to cut into his shoulders. He heaved it up a little, wincing as his back complained. Gods. He was too old for this. But debts must be paid, one way or another, and he owed a life.

"Come on," he muttered. They pushed on over the sands. The scorpion road would have been easier to travel – faster too – but the Jingshen patrolled their section diligently, and they couldn't afford to be discovered. Not with what they carried. The border wasn't far off now – as soon as they crossed into Devil territory, they could turn back across the dunes and wave down the first legionnaire they saw.

That's what Lu Xu told himself.

That's what he hoped.

They carried on like that for an hour, Mei moving ahead to scout the dunes for safe paths, or darting back to watch the way they'd came, and him trudging on beneath the weight of their cargo. They were silent, but for the occasional metallic clink from inside the bag. It was a quiet night. Each sound felt like thunder. But it's not, he told himself. It's not. You're paranoid, old man. Keep walking. Keep-

Thud. Bony shoulder hitting his ribs. Weight of a teenage body behind it. Wind went out of his lungs all at once. He fell, rolled down the dune, Mei clutching him as he went. At the bottom, he lay still, pulling air back into himself. His daughter stared at him, eyes wide with fear, and gestured.

Peddler handsigns. He'd taught them to her.

Pursuit. Silence.

Fear filled him like cold water. Lu Xu went still, and nailed his eyes to the crest of the sand dune.

One moment.

Two.

Three.

Four.

She must have imagined it. Paranoia. Not surprising, but-

A head silhouetted itself against the dark blue of the pre-dawn sky. Long, silken hair, cut loose and flowing. Jingshen road guard.

They were going to die. This feels familiar, he thought, wryly, beneath the terror.

"Mei," he murmered. "Up, love. Up."

"What do-"

"Let me speak to him. You stay quiet unless spoken to."

As he spoke, Lu Xu's mind whirled furiously. There had to be a way out. Had to. He couldn't let them search him. As it was, their papers were in order for everything but – that. The guard would assume he had something else, but that… could perhaps be dealt with. The Jingshen took bribes, didn't they? And it wasn't actually illegal…

He pasted a smile onto his face – friendly and ever so slightly obsequious - and began to trek up the dune. "Honourable lord Jingshen! Your presence lights up my heart!"

No response.

"What brings you so far from the road, my lord?"

He'd gotten far enough up now to make out the face. Slim. Pretty, more than handsome. Fine features, no scars. A cultivator, obviously. He'd guess perhaps the fourth or fifth heavenstage. Lu Xu felt the guard's eyes on him, now. Cold. Disdainful. Arrogant.

But something else, too. Something he couldn't quite work out.

"Border papers," said the Guard. Lu Xu bowed deeply.

"Of course, lord. Allow me."

He pulled a thick sheaf of permits, crossing records, and certificates of authentification from his jacket, careful not to shake his bag. The guard took them, and scanned through them disinterestedly.

"Why are you not on the road?"

"Ah – a foolishness on my part, my lord. I have a fancy for desert roses – my wife more than I, in truth, they were the first sign of my intentions when we courted – so I thought to find some to bring home to her."

"How romantic," the Jingshen drawled. "Nothing to do with that bag on your back then."

A flicker in his eyes of that unidentifiable emotion. Lu Xu kept his smile.

"Oh, of course not, lord! This is merely ballast. A brother of mine, foolish and shameful in his youth, at last begins to make something of himself as a builder of houses. I thought perhaps to give him this waste metal, and ensure he never disgrace us again by keeping him in work."

Cold, assessing stare. More arrogance. Some malice-

And fear. The road guard was afraid.

Lu Xu kept his face still as he thought. They were far from Cannibal territory now, and still deep enough into the desert that the mountain clans would not be a factor either. So why so frightened?

Because of the border.

The war had set everything in flux. The long alliance of convenience between the Jingshen and the Golden Devils, anchored more in mutual hatred for the Cannibals, was starting to fray. It would be a bad time to be caught intimidating a peddler by a wandering centurion. Authority would be shaky, so far from any reliable milestone. They might… push.

Lu Xu nodded, smiled, and spoke again, louder this time. "I will be honest, lord. I do not know that I trust him to stay the path of honest toil. He was a gambler and a glutton, and drank strong wine with no heed for the consequences."

He'd pitched it just right; loud enough to be heard for miles, if the wind held, but not so loud as to look like anything but a frightened, overeager peasant. The guard's lips thinned.

"Keep your voice down," he hissed. Lu Xu let his brow furrow.

"My lord? I apologise – I have spoken to few of the blessed immortals of the world, and your exalted presence-"

"I said quiet."

A hand had strayed to the sabre at the guard's belt. Lu Xu was dancing on a knife edge, now. He bowed again.

"Quiet, lord. Yes lord. As the mice before the hawk, I shall be silent and still before your honoured attention." He was quieter, this time. Now all he could do was hope.

The guard glared at him.

"Ballast is a trade good," he growled. "You haven't declared it."

"No lord. I was struck by good fortune as we passed through the territory of the heavenly bandits. A peddler and brother of the road was offloading his goods. I took advantage, but sadly could not update my manifest."

"I don't give a fuck about your fortune. Open the bag."

Lu Xu closed his eyes. Well. It had been worth a shot. He could take his honour to the grave, at least. But poor Mei did not deserve to die.

"My Lord, I promise-" he began, and did not even know the sabre had been drawn until he felt his cheek gape open as the blade screamed by. He fought down a scream of pain. The guard smiled, coldly.

"I said, open the bag."

The fear was gone. This bastard was a bully, and the worst kind.

But over his shoulder, Lu Xu saw a gleam of gold and sunlight.

A legionnaire. A legionnaire was coming towards them.

"Of course, lord .But before-"

Another wound yawned, this time across his chest. The shout of pain punched loose of his mouth.

"No. No argument. No stories. Open. The. Bag. Or must I gut you?" asked the guard, sneering with callous mirth.

"Well, that depends on how you feel about stab wounds," said the centurion, behind him.

The Jingshen froze. Lu Xu kept himself still and calm as he could. This was anyone's game, now.

"Our side of the road, longhair," said the Centurion. He was big, broad, and his helmet was tied at his belt, so the tight cut of his gleaming gold hair shone in the dawning sunlight. His teeth gleamed very white in his grin. "Our territory."

"He is carrying contraband," said the road guard, stiffly, turning at last. "I am entitled to check him for it."

"Ah, but I have two brothers over there, and another two miles away. Closing fast. I'm sure you can feel him. We are entitled to tell you to go fuck yourself."

"The border treaty-"

"Oooh, you want to push that?"

Oh shit. This was escalating, and too fast. If they started fighting, Lu Xu would be caught in the crossfire. Worse, so would Mei. He needed to end this.

"My lords," he said, loudly, and tried not to flinch as they glared at him. "Perhaps I might show you?" And before either could answer, he pulled his bag from his shoulders and heaved it open.

The bronze armour caught the light, each of its intricate carvings thrown into sharp relief by the sun. There was the beginnings of a patina forming on the breastplate, and a few scratches from lack of maintenance, but what it was was clear.

The centurion's eyes widened. He turned back to the road guard.

"Leave this. Now."

"Armour-"

"Is taxable, yes, fine. I'll have a spirit stone sent over to your garrison. Just leave it."

The guard stared at them both, confused.

"…I have your word?"

"My name," said the Centurion, "is Economos Longinus. I am Centurion of the 95th​ Legion. On my name, my family and my clan, you will have your spirit stone."

Another long pause. Lu Xu waited, not daring to breathe.

"…I am Jingshen Ma Tien," said the guard, at last. "Stationed at the ninth waystation. You have a week." And with that, he withdrew, darting back across the sands. The centurion didn't watch him go. Instead, his eyes fixed on the armour like iron filings to a magnet.

"…How?" he asked, voice hushed.

"Luck," said Lu Xu. "A sandstorm drove us into ruins. The winds tore loose some of the flagstones. Beneath was this. I…"

He stopped. Peddlers were not equipped, by nature, for discussions like this. Honour and loyalty were principles followed, but rarely spoken of. And yet, here he was.

"I was saved by one of your clan, many years ago," he said slowly. "And I traded in Seventh Heaven for many years, before I met my wife. I owe your clan a debt. So I brought it home."

The centurion watched him for a long time, not saying anything.

"You should come and speak to my legate," he said eventually.

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"The Devils couch their barbarous practices in practicality. There are few copper mines in their territory, and those that do exist produce little metal, and poor quality at that. Thus, to ensure they have the bronze they need to armour themselves, they turn to the only alternative; their own blood.

"Honourable reader, consider; the dead of their clan are not laid to rest in catacombs. Nor are they placed upon funeral pyres, that their souls may rise to join heaven. Instead, they are exsanguinated, and then (through practices too foul to even hint at) reforged into bronze ingots. This metal, called Gravebronze, is then used to make armour, or weaponry, for their legions.

"To we civilised people, this is at best ghoulish in the extreme. But the Devils seem to revel in this horrific practice. Indeed, some families bear suits of armour centuries or even millenia old, forged from their own ancestors. This is not seen as disrespectful; instead, it is a great honour to be selected to join your lineage's Panoplia (as they call it). Many of their legends tell of heroic young devils, seeking out these awful things, returning them to their rightful clans at the cost of their own life, and being given pride of place as their corpse is rendered down for ingots.

"Let this terrible truth stay with you, reader. Let it defend you from the Devils' seeming civility. They may seem decorous enough, but in their hearts, they are monsters."

-Jingshen Chan Bo, "Customs and Rites of the Barbarians Vol. 3"



Two months later

Mei's dress was perfect, decided Lu Xu. It was only his own robes that needed improvement. Well. Too late now. The Legate had ordered them to attend him an hour ago. Best not to keep him waiting.

They stepped into his quarters slowly, heads lowered in pre-emptive bows. Typically, they'd wait until he addressed them before even considering rising. Today, though, was clearly not typical.

They could tell by the way the Legate, a cultivator of the second pillar, swept them both up in a bearhug immediately.

"My favourite mortals!" he bellowed, grinning wildly. "Look at you both! Honour comes in small packages, clearly!"

Lu Xu was, for the first time in his life, without words. This did *not* happen.

"Sit! Sit, let me pour you a drink," said the legate, setting them down at his table. Their chairs (CHAIRS! To sit as *equals*!) were already pulled back, and he settled them and poured them plum wine before sitting himself.

"Done us a hell of a service," he said. "I'll say that now. That Panoplia – well. Centuries. Centuries, it's been missing. We didn't even know where it had gone. Drink, will you? Don't make me have one alone."

The peddler drank. It was beautiful wine, some distant part of his brain noticed. The rest was too busy wondering if perhaps as an encore the sky would be turning purple.

"Good man. Yes. The family will be pleased to have it back, let me tell you. Not many of them, mind; small lineage. Still. Very grateful. Trust me on that. Very grateful indeed."

"Honoured Legate," said Mei, "who- the armour. It- I am told, foolish worm that I am-"

"Brought home our ancestors, youngster, not foolish in the slightest," rumbled the legate, smiling. Mei froze. Lu Xu watched as she tried to process being referred to, affectionately, as a youngster. She gave up and went on as if nothing had happened. It was probably the wisest choice.

"I am told that armours such as that bear names of their own?"

"Ah! Yes, I see what you're getting at. It's called the Bacchante- the song of wild ecstacy, in your tongue. Wardancer's armour. Very special. The Angelus- that's the family it comes from – are a little unusual in the way they do things."

Bacchante. Pretty, thought Lu Xu. He drank the wine again, to steady his nerves.

"Now! Let's talk reward," said the Legate.

Wine went directly into Lu Xu's sinuses. He spluttered.

"I- honourable lord, I did not do this for a reward-"

"Course not! Doesn't mean you shouldn't have one. Let's make you rich, my friend, and go from there."

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So, this idea came up in the discord and Occipitallobe thought it was cool, so... here's an omake about it! Yay!
 
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So, this idea came up in the discord and Occipitallobe thought it was cool, so... here's an omake about it! Yay!
I mean this is definately more elaborate then what i thought when i mentioned our Dead into the bronze we used. I was thinking goulish stuff like turning a bone into a bronze sword etc.

But this is waay better. And it actually would allow us to tie back the very few legendary weaps mentioned in the thread like Snaga and the Swords of Night and Day. Clearly they're made from Gravebronze by a reknown smith of the clan in ages passed and then further refined as the dying act of each wielder to enchance it's power.

Who will seek out Snaga and be the next Legend? COME YOUNGLINGS, IMMORTALITY AWAITS!
 
I mean this is definately more elaborate then what i thought when i mentioned our Dead into the bronze we used. I was thinking goulish stuff like turning a bone into a bronze sword etc.

But this is waay better. And it actually would allow us to tie back the very few legendary weaps mentioned in the thread like Snaga and the Swords of Night and Day. Clearly they're made from Gravebronze by a reknown smith of the clan in ages passed and then further refined as the dying act of each wielder to enchance it's power.

Who will seek out Snaga and be the next Legend? COME YOUNGLINGS, IMMORTALITY AWAITS!

The soul of Druzhi still waits within the blades of no return. To wield them is to be guided by the greatest axe fighter the clan has ever produced.
 
[x] What are the qualities of a righteous man?
[x] Walk in the Light, Cloaked by Shadow (Can only be taken in conjunction with "What are the qualities of a righteous man?" from the prior post)
 
Have we considered what we want from Negotiations? Jingshen will fight to not allow us a dominating position, as they know that once we get there, we'll throttle them. Just like we know to keep them from getting a third Nascent Soul.
So, what's their stick? What could they do to keep us from taking it all?
I'm thinking that they're going to threaten to
  • Buy Mercs
  • Call in Favors
  • Cut off Stones to the Great Battlefield
So we're going to have to decide how much we're going to push.

Edit: It occurs to me that Lady Jiao would be accepting of whatever position we put her in. Maybe that's why she's not at the negotiations?
 
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Throttling the supply of Stones to the Great Battlefield is *our* stick surely? If one we would only employ in extreme circumstances.

The Demon-War is at a crucial point, and while in the long term we don't want the Demon Altar Sect to succeed, its totally fine with us if the war drags on another century or so! Meanwhile Jingshen has to keep the stones flowing, its their major contribution to the war effort.

Them hiring merc's is an interesting point, though anyone they hire from outside the desert has to pay our tolls, which would be costly, but TBH I kind of relish the idea of a few bloody border skirmishes over the choice parts of the land. The odds favour our hardened legionnaires over those silk-pants Jingshen in such contests, and these would be far too petty for the hard pressed RP powers in the plains to respond much as long as they didn't effect the flow of Stones.

Maybe the key would be for Manuel to lean on that in the negotiation. Point towards the huge force of Devils we mobilised to face the Cannibals, wax lyrical about how disapointed the fighters are that the war ended so quickly and hint that he is only barely keeping some of his more bloodthirsty generals in line. Unless concessions are made, well anything could happen.
 
Throttling the supply of Stones to the Great Battlefield is *our* stick surely? If one we would only employ in extreme circumstances.

The Demon-War is at a crucial point, and while in the long term we don't want the Demon Altar Sect to succeed, its totally fine with us if the war drags on another century or so! Meanwhile Jingshen has to keep the stones flowing, its their major contribution to the war effort.
It's Jingshen's stick, as we want the other sects to stay out of this conflict. If Jingshen closes off stone supply until they're not threatened by us, the other sects are incentivised to resolve the issue.
 
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