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He did not properly venerate the dice and give praise/sacrifice in their name.

This was punishment for blasphemy against the dice gods!
 
@Swordomatic How many of the First Five Hundred are left? Certainly less than fifty. Three dozen? Uther's death is a tragedy.
There's like... nine of the Captains, plus Lysander and Matthias, Sanguinary Priest Ravana, Martellus, Tarael, all the Sanguinary Guards, all the Veteran Sergeants, a few of the Veterans...

Around 40 remaining out of the original 500, yeah. Excluding Dreadnoughts. With them, its closer to 50.

Speaking of, if anyone remembers the twenty names I put up in one of the early updates for your captain candidates, anyone who didn't become a Captain, Chaplain, Techmarine or Sanguinary Priest is now in the Sanguinary Guard. Minus Uther. He died.

Those people are good for write-in too. :V
 
Wasn't there also an Uther killed on Baal? I seem to remember him succumbing to the Rage and charging the Sword
 
There's like... nine of the Captains, plus Lysander and Matthias, Sanguinary Priest Ravana, Martellus, Tarael, all the Sanguinary Guards, all the Veteran Sergeants, a few of the Veterans...

Around 40 remaining out of the original 500, yeah. Excluding Dreadnoughts. With them, its closer to 50.

Speaking of, if anyone remembers the twenty names I put up in one of the early updates for your captain candidates, anyone who didn't become a Captain, Chaplain, Techmarine or Sanguinary Priest is now in the Sanguinary Guard. Minus Uther. He died.

Those people are good for write-in too. :V

I found them after a bit of searching from the old thread. Others have died or serve at other posts.
  1. Brother Titus Menthril, however, fought differently, using a large blade. Though to your eyes his swordplay is clumsy and unrefined, it is sufficient to deflect the majority of blows. He does not shy from battle, diving straight into the fray. It is he who first drew blood from you, a mere scratch on the shoulder that seals up instantly. His will is like steel, and is possessed of a natural talent for weapons. He might be worthwhile. [+Willpower, Weapon Prodigy]
  2. Roark Sentonis used a short axe and a shield, using his greater constitution to great effect. He engaged, using his defense to maximum effect and forcing you and Vergil to wear him down slowly. At least, that is the intent. The reality is that you swept his legs out from under him and beat him silly. Still, his attempt at tactics impressed you, and his constitution and talent with a shield will ensure he can carry it out. With training, of course. [+Toughness, Stone Wall]
  3. Karel Xanthos, he who never gave up. Despite suffering crippling blows from the beginning, in the head and in the hands, he never let go of his shield and sword and he fought to the bitter end. Though not possessed of skill or intellect like many of his brothers have, his show of tenacity is unsurpassed. He is truly a paragon of unbreakability. [+Willpower, Unbreakable]
 
Would it be ok to assign the 3 of them roles Swordo? As in would the roles be assigned to them retroactively?
 
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Hoping for more legendary skills for the Chapter. ;)
The Crimson Crusaders origin is now steeped deep in the Chapter's legend. From the original 500 brothers a score or so rose higher than the rest. Some of them became captains, while others took responsibility of different special offices of the Chapter, still others found other tasks among the Crimson Crusaders.

One of them. A youth. A man who could barely be called an Astartes faced of against the one who brothers from the Crimson Crusaders call the Sword-Saint. He drew blood and was the first one to do that against the Chapter Master.

Accomplishment that earned that man a position in the retinue of Aurelius Asterion. A charge that he has carried ever since. He fought through Stonehaven, Sortiarius and Baal. Never wavering, never doubting, never surrendering.

He was one of the first to be nominated into the Sanguinary Guard. One who duelled Tarael, the Eternal Exemplar, for the honour of leading the Sanguinary Guard. Of the three bouts, he won one against Tarael.

Once he was called a weapon prodigy by the Sword-Saint, the Lord in Crimson Clad. Promise of potential that has become flesh and blood – as is the way amongst the Great Angel's gene-sons. His is the way of bravery and skill, so that champions and grunts perish before him.

He is Titus Menthril. Crimson Crusader, One of the 500.

Now Titus Menthril is a troubled man. His Chapter Master lies broken, suffering from wounds that will in a short while turn fatal, and they are trapped inside of a Chaos fortress. Titus isn't worried about his task, for the duty of an Astartes is ever clear before his eyes.

He worries of becoming orphaned.

Aurelius Asterion is like a father to the Crimson Crusaders and especially for the original 500. He taught them how to use bolter and blade. He taught them how to think and act. He taught them how to be an Adeptus Astartes of the Emperor of Mankind. But he did not only teach them, for Aurelius Asterion also showed them by his own example how to follow in the footsteps of Sanguinius. "Follow my example as I follow the Primarch's." He showed them the heart of an Astartes Sanguii. But Aurelius did not only show them, for the Sword-Saint also truly created them. They were like clay before the Chapter Master and he moulded them into a shining legacy of loyalty, sacrifice and mettle. Aurelius Asterion made them Crimson Crusaders.

And Titus Menthril would be damned, if he didn't do all in his power to protect his broken Master.

"Contact! 35 meters to the front. Traitor Astartes and cultists." Roark Sentonis shouts, also one of the 500.

"Affirmative. Titus, Roark engage. The rest continue the advance. For Aurelius!" Tarael commands the Sanguinary Guard, while Damien takes care of the wounded Chapter Master.

Two heart beats later two Glaive Encarmines strike the rushing mass of Chaos troops. Titus cleaves a Black Legion sergeant in half and continues to strike their squad's standard bearer down. He then dodges a shot from a meltagun, creating an opening for Roark to send its wielder to greet whatever dark gods the chaotic scums worship. The two Sanguinary Guards dispatch the squad of traitors and accompanying cultists in two minutes and then quickly join the evacuation process of Aurelius Asterion. In their wake they leave only dismembered bodies and bloodied walls. They leave death and march in glory.

The Sword-Saint might be laid low, but his legacy will stand forever. Of that Titus Menthril is sure of... for he will pass on the legacy of Aurelius Asterion as will of the Crimson Crusaders. He is Titus Menthril, a Crimson Crusader, one of the Sanguinary Guard, the Promised Blade, One of the 500.
 
Hoping for more legendary skills for the Chapter. ;)
The Crimson Crusaders origin is now steeped deep in the Chapter's legend. From the original 500 brothers a score or so rose higher than the rest. Some of them became captains, while others took responsibility of different special offices of the Chapter, still others found other tasks among the Crimson Crusaders.

One of them. A youth. A man who could barely be called an Astartes faced of against the one who brothers from the Crimson Crusaders call the Sword-Saint. He drew blood and was the first one to do that against the Chapter Master.

Accomplishment that earned that man a position in the retinue of Aurelius Asterion. A charge that he has carried ever since. He fought through Stonehaven, Sortiarius and Baal. Never wavering, never doubting, never surrendering.

He was one of the first to be nominated into the Sanguinary Guard. One who duelled Tarael, the Eternal Exemplar, for the honour of leading the Sanguinary Guard. Of the three bouts, he won one against Tarael.

Once he was called a weapon prodigy by the Sword-Saint, the Lord in Crimson Clad. Promise of potential that has become flesh and blood – as is the way amongst the Great Angel's gene-sons. His is the way of bravery and skill, so that champions and grunts perish before him.

He is Titus Menthril. Crimson Crusader, One of the 500.

Now Titus Menthril is a troubled man. His Chapter Master lies broken, suffering from wounds that will in a short while turn fatal, and they are trapped inside of a Chaos fortress. Titus isn't worried about his task, for the duty of an Astartes is ever clear before his eyes.

He worries of becoming orphaned.

Aurelius Asterion is like a father to the Crimson Crusaders and especially for the original 500. He taught them how to use bolter and blade. He taught them how to think and act. He taught them how to be an Adeptus Astartes of the Emperor of Mankind. But he did not only teach them, for Aurelius Asterion also showed them by his own example how to follow in the footsteps of Sanguinius. "Follow my example as I follow the Primarch's." He showed them the heart of an Astartes Sanguii. But Aurelius did not only show them, for the Sword-Saint also truly created them. They were like clay before the Chapter Master and he moulded them into a shining legacy of loyalty, sacrifice and mettle. Aurelius Asterion made them Crimson Crusaders.

And Titus Menthril would be damned, if he didn't do all in his power to protect his broken Master.

"Contact! 35 meters to the front. Traitor Astartes and cultists." Roark Sentonis shouts, also one of the 500.

"Affirmative. Titus, Roark engage. The rest continue the advance. For Aurelius!" Tarael commands the Sanguinary Guard, while Damien takes care of the wounded Chapter Master.

Two heart beats later two Glaive Encarmines strike the rushing mass of Chaos troops. Titus cleaves a Black Legion sergeant in half and continues to strike their squad's standard bearer down. He then dodges a shot from a meltagun, creating an opening for Roark to send its wielder to greet whatever dark gods the chaotic scums worship. The two Sanguinary Guards dispatch the squad of traitors and accompanying cultists in two minutes and then quickly join the evacuation process of Aurelius Asterion. In their wake they leave only dismembered bodies and bloodied walls. They leave death and march in glory.

The Sword-Saint might be laid low, but his legacy will stand forever. Of that Titus Menthril is sure of... for he will pass on the legacy of Aurelius Asterion as will of the Crimson Crusaders. He is Titus Menthril, a Crimson Crusader, one of the Sanguinary Guard, the Promised Blade, One of the 500.
Note to self, start threadmarking these omakes If Titus survives, he will get T-1 for Crimson Blade of Victory.

If someone gets an omake for Cybereon, he might get his own T-2 as well! He didn't do much, flamers don't do much against Terminator Armor unless its like a plasma torch or a flamestorm cannon (note to self rectify this too, maybe also give flame weapons x1.5 degree modifiers) but he did tank plenty of stuff. And due to the write-in, he did manage to limit the amount of battle Reflex attacks Karog got. Which might actually just upgrade Intelligence, hm.
 
Tbh I made this to unwind from my recent law exam, so it's not the best.

Also I've got another written up for Karel being a Chaplain but I need help to finish/polish/euthenize it

When one is led, taught and nurtured even by, a Sword-Saint and Gun-Saint it is near impossible to not be an exmplar with Blade and Bolt.

What most people neglect to mention are the many, many, many injuries one must endure in the sparing matches and training regimens in order to reach their bare minimum standard.

His name is Roark Sentonis and he was aware of the lessons imparted upon him by every scar on his body. From training and training accidents with his brothers to wounds earned for holding the enemy in place for them to be smashed by the chapter's fury. Stonehaven, Baal and all the fields in between, there was no battle he returned from unwounded. It had become such a frequent occurane that rumour has it, he had his own Coffin in the Apothecarion reserved.

It was not out of recklessness as those not of the Crusaders may claim, he took the blows meant for his brothers because he knew that he could survive what others might not. And it was for that reason he had been selected to join the Sanguinary Guard, to protect He who had taught and sacrificed so much for them.

Looking at his Chapter Master in this shape drove a spike of shame through him. They were the Guard and yet they had failed their one duty.

He knew the others of his squad felt the same shame, but they all coped differently. Some were like Tarael and Titus, exterminating the traitors so they would never again be able to harm anyone, others whispered vows to train themselves; to be faster, stronger, better. He had been praised by Lord Rios, long ago, for his ability to hold the enemy in place. But when he was needed, he was too slow to take the blow for his Lord, he was too late to help Lord Cybereon be the Anvil. Doubts plauged his mind, scenarios where they had arrived sooner before snapping back to the present. The time for doubts was over, a new wave was rushing down the hall to where the Angel of Fire was attempting to stabalize their Lord. They were looking to finish what their damned Champion had begun. This was where his penitence would begin he decided, as he steadied himself in front of the Captain, they will try to get past him and he would throw them back again and again. He gripped his Glaive Encarmine, an idle thought of how he missed the familarity of axe and shield swept away by pure furious focus. While he drew breath, none shall pass
 
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Damien Cybereon, the Burning Angel, is not having a good day. One rarely does when faced with a monster of Karog's ilk. But still, this is ridiculous.

As his Chapter Master draws the attention of the Kinslayer, he effects a shield charge. With the Soul of Fire held forward and the Crimson Flame dragged back to stab and punch through armour, he resembles nothing more than one of the old Romani Battle-kings of Old Terra.

Half a tonne of ceramite wreathed in flame barrels down on Karog Kinslayer. The beast stops Cybereon's charge with but a flick of the wrist.

Cybereon's left hand goes numb. Emperor, give me strength! His shield-arm is forced out of position by the sheer force of the blow, and it is all he can do to lock his blade to the haft of that Emperor-forsaken axe. Another second, and he is forced to disengage. He cannot match the beast's strength.

As he dances back beyond the range of the daemon weapon, Damien's mind goes through possible methods of attack. Passages of the Codex Astartes, the teachings of Rios and Asterion, even the Tactica Imperalis are rifled through for any nugget of wisdom. There is little to be found, save what he is already doing. If only he was more like Jantorus-

But it is no matter. He is the Anvil. He is the Lord of Sacrifice. He has seen the swordplay of the Kinslayer before-from pict-captures at the Seraphim Vault to this current exchange- and he knows the beast relies on reflex attacks to cripple opponents. It is clear, then, what he must do. Damien will be as Sanguinius at the Eternity Gate and occupy Karog's attention while Aurelius ends this charade.

He charges once more into the fray. Once again, he is stopped cold. But he manages to get his blade around Karog's guard, only for it to bounce ineffectually off of his war-plate. The beast laughs and aims a blow at the Lord in Crimson Clad.

Too slow, he tells himself. You are too slow. He can only watch as Aurelius screams and screams and screams. But the Crimson Lord endures, and his blade carves out the side of Karog Kinslayer in a dazzling side-arm blow.

"GLORY OR DEATH!" Aurelius cries, as his Guard close around him. It shames him, that he has failed his Chapter Master.

As Tarael asks for tactics, he only sets his head grimly and reiterates his earlier words. It is the only way.

"Hammer and anvil, brother. He will destroy us otherwise."

As Karog charges, Tarael goes to meet him and Damien follows behind. Only to find that he is unneeded.

Emperor damn it!

He immolates the Daemon axe with the Crimson Flame, but his actions are mechanical. He kicks the Kinslayer's corpse. He is angry with himself.

The Burning Angel gazes upon the Crimson Lord's form and he swears an oath very similar to the one Aurelius swore some time ago.

"This will be the last time I fail my Chapter Master. I swear it."
 
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Turn 34 (231-235.M42): Chasing Hatred Pt. 4.5
"What use is fury without the Emperor's guidance?" -Chaplain Geros, Black Templars 4th Crusade Fleet

----

In orbit, they fight on.

"Glory, glory! We will not bend!"

Despite the loss of almost half their Company to accursed champions. Despite the loss of their Captain. They fight on despite it.

They will not die in glory. But they will certainly find it.

Task Force Angel - Advance!
Rolled 70 vs 60, 1 Degree of Success!
Casualty DC 60


Hardly shattered, Task Force Angel was invigorated by the loss of their Captain and almost half their number. What were these losses compared to what came before? What did it matter, when they could reinforce themselves? What else can they do but fulfill their duty and honor the ones that died before?

So they charged. So they pushed. And so they carved a bloody swath through the next five rings of the orbiting station, assaulting at such a pace even the Crimson Crusaders swarming over the exterior of the station were pressed to keep up. And it is said that Captain Hale Cicero, Commander of the 8th Company, was so impressed by this display of renewed power that he committed another squad to support the Lamenters, and form the alloyed force that will tear these heretics from limb to limb.

Until they arrived at the last ring.

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There was one point of access inside the fortress, a single corridor heavily fortified with enough heavy weapons to crack a Chapter in half. There was no cover inside the corridor, no alternate points of entry. There was only forward into death. For mortal forces, this would be suicide. For the Space Marines… This was also suicide.

If not for the wondrous tech-arcana of the Mag-Boot.

"This is Cicero. Assault!"

Task Force Angel - Casualties
Lamenters: Rolled 19 vs 60, 4 Degrees of Failure
40 Casualties, 1 Notable Injury - Chaplain Haldix
Crimson Crusaders: 41 vs 60, 1 Degree of Failure
10 Casualties, No Notable Injuries


What would transpire was not a tale of heroism, or victory despite the odds, or of a great hero seizing upon opportunity to become legend. It was simply war, gritty and simple. Space Marines attacked the chokepoint from all angles. The 8th Company cut their way through with chainswords and power blades. The Lamenters kept the enemy suppressed with heavy weaponry. And when the time was right, they surged as one.

But they bled for every inch. Even taking them by surprise, even turning the battlefield into a three dimensional void-filled cacophony of death… They bled. A full forty Lamenters were sent into the throes of the Sus-An Membrane by the assault. Ten Crimson Crusaders were savaged by the battle. Even Chaplain Haldix of the Lamenters, who held his Company together in the absence of his Captain, nearly died when a glancing Lascannon blast nearly boiled his hearts. It is another lesson that the young Lamenters must learn; even in success, fate demands you bleed. And it is a duty you must bear, for the Imperium is watered with the blood of heroes.

But today, at least, for this battle… There will be no dead heroes. They will all live.

And the survivors surged into the last ring, surrounding the command centre, to decapitate traitor void command and finally secure orbital supremacy. The Lamenters 2nd and the Crimson 8th overran the meager resistance that remained, while Captain Cicero and his handpicked elite made for the command center itself.

It will end here, blood or not blood. For the Emperor demands it.

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They arrive, the lights flickering red hazard warnings. Cicero and Fury-Five, joined by fifteen Lamenters, step into the circular hub. It is clearly designed with fortification in mind, a central podium protected by barriers and a singular point of entry. Had they not meltagunned all resistance before this, the fight might even be a challenge.

And there he is. The Lord himself. Cloaked in shadow and wielding a boltgun, ever twisting, ever shifting. Bearing a craftsmanship Forgemaster Osiron drilled into their heads through decades of study and painful rote, both of its heresy and its danger. The smiths of Kai always were masters of wargear of every kind.

"So you come now…" The Lord hisses. He takes one step after another, measured movements, carefully covered by his barriers. "The weapon told me you would come… YOU SLAVES!"

The Lamenters reel from the Lord's sudden bark, but Cicero is not cowed. He has faced the Kinslayer. This is nothing to that monster. "Duty empowers us, heretic. You will not live past this day."

"HAH! They taunt us, boltgun!" The Lord pauses, sniggering all the while. "Yes… YES! We shall! Their folly will season their demise!"

"Get ready," Cicero says in Baali, and at once his retinue fan out.

Chaos Champion Identified!

"KNOW ME BY MY BEST NAME, SLAVES! FOR I AM!"

ISVARN, THE THUNDER LO―

The walls, ceiling, and floors suddenly explode into chaff and debris, and black-red space marines flood out from every angle. Cicero sees one of them, his weapon impossible to mistake. Astorath, Redeemer of the Lost.

"HoooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORUUSSSSSSSS!"

The Death Company comes!

Initiative!
Isvarn: Rolled 34
Astorath the Grim: Rolled 60 +30, 90
Lemartes: Rolled 90

Astorath
Attack Held - 2 Counterattacks!


"Lemartes!" The old Angel shouts, the Executioner's Axe crossed against his chest. Lemartes howls. The blood rage unleashed, he has no words. Only death.

The Guardian of the Lost charges ahead upon burning wings. His Jump Pack is tearing itself apart from the stress. The air bursts and shudders against their armor but they do not avert their eyes.

He swings.

Lemartes
Rolled 12 64 vs 50, Hit!
The Blood Crozius: 5 88 vs 20, 6 Degrees of Success: Instant Death!


And the Traitor Warlord falls to his knees and then his chest. His head joins it in pitter-patters not long after. Nothing remains of Isvarn but a cooling body and a liquefied skull.

Lemartes controls himself with gritted teeth, his battle over. He steps aside. A changing Astorath walks over, and shatters the Kai Gun with the butt of his axe.

"Apologies, my brothers," Astorath the Grim says with uncharacteristic levity. "I shall promise you the next foul champion we find."

Cicero looks at Welkis, and then at the Lamenters around him. "Point to you, Chaplain Lemartes," he says flatly.

The Doomed Chaplain nods curtly and walks away.

Orbit Secure!

Crimson Crusaders 8th Company, Lamenters 2nd Company and Death Company Available for Deep Strike!
 
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Wow.

ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME ALWAYS ANGRY ALL THE TIME...

What rage is a hell of an anaesthetic.
 
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