Golden Lark
The First Fiction User
Okay, surprise attack mechanics, I had been searching for "from behind" in core. Duh.
That's not merely a wording revision but an extensive set of idiosyncratic changes to shape the charmset to be more in line with her tastes. A couple of the Abilities are essentially completely new charm trees. It has some interesting changes, but also some really odd ones.
Actually, as she rather dislikes non-charm dice, she's added more than a few new dice tricks.BlueWinds is pulling off a reimagining to eliminate some dice tricks, etc.;
Touching someone is a difficulty 5 gambit? That seems crazy. Grappling someone is only difficulty 2.Already posted this to the OPP forums, but since there's not an enormous amount of overlap between there and here: I've adapted the 3e Solar Charmset to briefer, hopefully less ambiguous language. Credit to @Roadie for inspiring some of the revised Charm formatting here.
Flavor text is omitted, for obvious reasons; otherwise, all descriptive Charm text is my own.
A few notes:
Some Charms are marked "Modified," where something about the original is substantially changed (which may be as simple as tagging it with a new keyword).
Other Charms are marked "Optional," for effects that I thought were not worth taking but didn't, y'know, break anything. In my game, any player who has the prerequisites for an optional Charm counts as having the optional Charm itself for the purpose of prerequisite chains; he can also purchase the Charm itself, if he wants, as normal.
Still other Charms are marked "Removed," for effects I thought were unhealthy for the game. In my game, any player who has the prerequisites for a removed Charm counts as having the optional Charm itself for the purpose of prerequisite chains; he cannot purchase the Charm as normal.
Neither Optional nor Removed Charms count for effects that say "X Charms from ____ Ability" or similar unless they're actually purchased.
General houserules note, new keywords, etc.
Solar Charm Rewrite
Lunar Homebrew, while I'm at it
Ah, my apologies! I've been mostly trying not to read that project, so as to keep 'em separate.Actually, as she rather dislikes non-charm dice, she's added more than a few new dice tricks.
Injury-Forcing Technique, Essence-Draining Touch, and Order-Affirming Blow all use the "difficulty 5 gambit" language already - I just standardized it into a keyword. Which doesn't mean it's not crazy, I suppose.Touching someone is a difficulty 5 gambit? That seems crazy. Grappling someone is only difficulty 2.
Hm. That would be my intent, that the "auto-miss effect" is removed and so the auto-hit effect can apply. I'm not sure I understand your last half-sentence, though - can you try me again?The wording of 4.3 seems odd to me. Specifying that only language in the auto-succeed effect can override the auto-fail effect seems to imply that you can't combine an "attack beyond maximum range" charm with an "automatically hit" charm, because the language that lets you attack beyond maximum range is not in the auto-hit charm. You could argue that this doesn't matter because the auto-miss effect is removed entirely before 4.3 is checked, but if that's the way it's intended to be read I don't know why you need to specify that it can be overridden at all.
Because it's the only time I can find that seems to be consistent with all published effects, and so it's my best guess for what the book thinks is actually happening. See, for instance, Double Attack Technique, which specifies that in between "compare attack successes to Defense" and "compare threshold attack successes to Defense," the target's Onslaught penalty has increased.The thing in 4.12 about onslaught penalties increasing between checking defense and rolling damage strikes me as incredibly counterintuitive. Why did you do it that way?
Ooh, that's a good point. Let me think on that. (My immediate thought is to just add another bullet for "Attacks that automatically miss do not increase the target's Onslaught penalty," but I'd want to word that so it didn't include SSE.)4.14, as written, allows you to swing a dagger at a guy 30 feet away to crank up his onslaught penalty.
No, because it clarifies that Charms that convey the ability to grapple substantially larger enemies do not also automatically convey the ability to throw them. It's an edge case, but one that matters to, say, Dragon Coil Technique/Crashing Wave Throw.Isn't 4.15 made redundant by the existing rule that you can't grapple substantially larger enemies?
Have you actually used those multiple attack rules in play? Have you had them used on you? How did you defend against them? Not resolving any initiative changes until the flurry is complete may be simpler, but it breaks flurry defenses like Unbowed Willow Meditation, which stops the flurry by crashing the attacker if she misses. I'm not even sure what it does to charms with an initiative cost, such as Heavenly Guardian Defense.
I've used them informally, but I don't think it's actually come up yet - no mid-flurry Initiative changes have triggered, that I can think of. Which is not particularly useful as data.Have you actually used those multiple attack rules in play? Have you had them used on you? How did you defend against them? Not resolving any initiative changes until the flurry is complete may be simpler, but it breaks flurry defenses like Unbowed Willow Meditation, which stops the flurry by crashing the attacker if she misses. I'm not even sure what it does to charms with an initiative cost, such as Heavenly Guardian Defense.
Good clarification - thanks!You should probably also clarify that they don't apply to charms like Swarm Culling Instinct.
Well, if language in a charm can remove the auto-miss effect, why do you need to explicitly state that language in the auto-hit charm can remove the auto-miss effect?Hm. That would be my intent, that the "auto-miss effect" is removed and so the auto-hit effect can apply. I'm not sure I understand your last half-sentence, though - can you try me again?
Even so, ask 10 players how Ferocious Jab works, and I guarantee you not one of them will say it's like this. I think it would be better to make the general rule "after the attack but before counterattacks" and then rewrite Double Attack Technique to include an explicit exception. Anything else will just confuse the hell out of everyone.Because it's the only time I can find that seems to be consistent with all published effects, and so it's my best guess for what the book thinks is actually happening. See, for instance, Double Attack Technique, which specifies that in between "compare attack successes to Defense" and "compare threshold attack successes to Defense," the target's Onslaught penalty has increased.
The penalty can't increase before the attack, or you'd have at least a -1 Onslaught penalty on every Defense. It could increase after the attack is completely resolved, but if that's the case, if I counterattack and pop a Charm that adds my current Onslaught to damage, I don't get a bonus even though I've already been attacked. "Immediately after checking Defense" seemed like the only time that made sense.
How about "the attack automatically misses, inflicts no onslaught penalty, and any effects that would trigger on a missed attack likewise fail. Any effect that negates this automatic miss also causes onslaught an missed-attack-triggers to work normally."?Ooh, that's a good point. Let me think on that. (My immediate thought is to just add another bullet for "Attacks that automatically miss do not increase the target's Onslaught penalty," but I'd want to word that so it didn't include SSE.)
Ah, I see. I suppose I just want it to be clear - my fear is that, without that call-out, people might read:Well, if language in a charm can remove the auto-miss effect, why do you need to explicitly state that language in the auto-hit charm can remove the auto-miss effect?
How so? I'd assume that FJ does, by default, add at least one damage for the one point of Onslaught it creates in the target. Would you say no, if this is the first attack on that target, FJ doesn't add any damage?Even so, ask 10 players how Ferocious Jab works, and I guarantee you not one of them will say it's like this.
Heh. Which is also a point in the turn sequence that has to be invented, since there is no default...I think it would be better to make the general rule "after the attack but before counterattacks"
At first blush, that sounds good - thanks!How about "the attack automatically misses, inflicts no onslaught penalty, and any effects that would trigger on a missed attack likewise fail. Any effect that negates this automatic miss also causes onslaught an missed-attack-triggers to work normally."?
I suppose you could say "unless some effect explicitly overrides the automatic-miss effect in question" without specifying what effect does it.Ah, I see. I suppose I just want it to be clear - my fear is that, without that call-out, people might read:
-The rules on range say you auto-miss.
-The rules on this Charm say you can hit beyond that range, so you don't auto-miss
-But "auto-miss" trumps "don't auto-miss," so you still miss!
... which would obviously be undesirable. Perhaps it's redundant.
Well, yeah, I figure the damage added is equal to the onslaught suffered on the attack roll, so zero on the first attack, one on the second, etc. I suppose your reading doesn't actually contradict anything either, but suffering two different onslaught penalties at two different points in the resolution of the same attack just feels way too hairy to contemplate, especially in a set of houserules intended to clean things up.How so? I'd assume that FJ does, by default, add at least one damage for the one point of Onslaught it creates in the target. Would you say no, if this is the first attack on that target, FJ doesn't add any damage?
You say that like "3e's default turn sequence" is a thing that exists.Heh. Which is also a point in the turn sequence that has to be invented, since there is no default...
While we're on crunch and stuff that @Irked has done, I was looking through the Let's Read over on the OPP forums and saw the notes in said thread about how a Sidereal with a full Excellency outdoes a Solar with a full Excellency. It got me thinking that, given the past Sidereal Charmsets and how they've been both small and closed, maybe the Sid Excellency is picking up some of the slack that Solar "Double Xs" and "Reroll Xs" Charms are carrying right now. Thoughts?
Hey can someone (or the man himself) link me to or summarize the crunch of Chung's "Handful of mortals with sledgehammers can wreck a (young) Solar" exploit? I've been trying to find the details and google is failing me, and I can't find all the pieces in 2E core (I don't even feel bad about this because of how scattered all the crunch shit is in sidebars and boxes).
I haven't played with Martial Arts at all to speak of, so it's harder to ballpark that. I have kind of an initial gut-level aversion to the whole "Spend 19 XP just to get back to 5 dots again, hooray!" thing - even if it's needed for balance, it's distasteful.ALso, @Irked, do you plan on making any changes to the way Martial Arts is set up? I see you got rid of the billion separate Craft subabilities, would you do the same with MA? I've seen it proposed (can't remember where) that you could then gate each separate MA with an individual Merit.
Well, my focus was primarily "Make it explicit what's happening" rather than "Make what's happening simpler." I wanted the rules to at least be clear, if they couldn't be simple; generally, I erred on the side of What Seemed To Be The Intent To Me over What Would Be Simplest.Well, yeah, I figure the damage added is equal to the onslaught suffered on the attack roll, so zero on the first attack, one on the second, etc. I suppose your reading doesn't actually contradict anything either, but suffering two different onslaught penalties at two different points in the resolution of the same attack just feels way too hairy to contemplate, especially in a set of houserules intended to clean things up.
I laugh to avoid weeping!You say that like "3e's default turn sequence" is a thing that exists.
And if your five dudes with hammers actually coordinate their attacks for the first strike, It Gets Worse.Automatic surprise attack from being attacked by multiple opponents ("five man rule"). There is no actual way to prevent this from happening without Charms, specifically Reflex Sidestep Technique. If you try to put your back to a wall and limit enemy approach angles, this amusingly only serves to reduce the number of enemies it requires to trip the automatic surprise attack instead of removing the vulnerability.
Once someone has an automatic surprise attack, he either hits you with his sledgehammer (or any other generic high-damage weapon) and causes significant damage or worse, clinches you for his four friends with sledgehammers to have fun with. Being hit with a clinch sets your DVs to 0 and you don't get to roll to take control of the clinch until your action comes around, by which time you would have been beaten to death by sledgehammers.
Or: Have Reflex Sidestep Technique, and always have it available in a combo, or die.
And if your five dudes with hammers actually coordinate their attacks for the first strike, It Gets Worse.
Out of curiosity, does this mean that if you're in a crevasse or something and only one opponent can reach you, you can't defend at all?Automatic surprise attack from being attacked by multiple opponents ("five man rule"). There is no actual way to prevent this from happening without Charms, specifically Reflex Sidestep Technique. If you try to put your back to a wall and limit enemy approach angles, this amusingly only serves to reduce the number of enemies it requires to trip the automatic surprise attack instead of removing the vulnerability.
Even so, It'll likely end up looking similar. TN manipulation is kinda the Sidereal "thing". I also can't see a Sid Charmset that is as bloated as the current Solar one, so it would make sense that they wouldn't get a ton of dice tricks beyond the base Excellency.The answer is that the Sidereal Excellency in the book exists solely for use with their quick character antagonists. They haven't started working on the Sidereal book yet so don't know what the final form of it will look like. I expect it will change.
Technically the rule is more about having room to move around in. If you're in a room and are holding them at a narrow doorway so only one can approach at a time you're fine. If you're literally in such a tight crevice that only one other person can approach you and you can't back up or anything then you're probably in a position where you can't meaningfully defend yourself.Out of curiosity, does this mean that if you're in a crevasse or something and only one opponent can reach you, you can't defend at all?
I think they were intended to be resolved immediately. This is especially obvious (and simple) in the case of Unbowed Willow Meditation and Wisdom of the Celestial Crane. Boom. You lose all initiative and are crashed, aborting the flurry as you can't make anymore decisive attacks.The major problem here is that I don't know if they're changes; I have no idea how Initiative changes mid-flurry are meant to resolve. This was less a simplification and more an attempt to give some answer. Do you think a different one is the original intent?
Probably wise.(While feedback is coming in, I may let a few changes pile up before revising.)
I definitely agree that this is the effect of those Charms, under your ruling; I'm just not sure it's the intent of 'em. They serve a very definite (and potent!) effect even without that... which doesn't mean that you're wrong, just that I'm honestly uncertain of the intent.I think they were intended to be resolved immediately. This is especially obvious (and simple) in the case of Unbowed Willow Meditation and Wisdom of the Celestial Crane. Boom. You lose all initiative and are crashed, aborting the flurry as you can't make anymore decisive attacks.
Exactly.The question is if you lose just a couple initiative, which initiative do you lose? Does it come from attacks you have yet to make, or can it also come from attacks that missed?
I haven't played with Martial Arts at all to speak of, so it's harder to ballpark that. I have kind of an initial gut-level aversion to the whole "Spend 19 XP just to get back to 5 dots again, hooray!" thing - even if it's needed for balance, it's distasteful.
Even so, It'll likely end up looking similar. TN manipulation is kinda the Sidereal "thing". I also can't see a Sid Charmset that is as bloated as the current Solar one, so it would make sense that they wouldn't get a ton of dice tricks beyond the base Excellency.
In the short term, we've been ruling that the Sidereal Excellency costs 3/7/12m for a -1/-2/-3 TN modifier. That helps quite a bit with the mote math, but it doesn't solve the XP problem - a Sidereal making Withering attacks with a light artifact weapon hilariously outpaces a Solar unless that Solar has bought several supporting Charms.I don't think it makes sense to go "well I think they're going to make the Sidereal Excellency more powerful than the Solar; I wonder what their reason will be?"