mothematics
How wide is the concept of "you"?
- Location
- the bottom of a coffee cup
- Pronouns
- She/Her
mad frank ladThe forests must die. The hills must die. The old kingdoms must die.
mad frank ladThe forests must die. The hills must die. The old kingdoms must die.
The forests must die. The hills must die. The old kingdoms must die.
The forests must die. The hills must die. The old kingdoms must die.
They will make good barley-fields. They hold precious iron untouched since the days of the curse. Their songs have grown dull with age.
Friend visit the hills, but do not touch the shadows of the forest , for they are old and watchfull, instead let me share some snake blood with you.The forests must die. The hills must die. The old kingdoms must die.
Help help help.
First: the paper wasps
Wasps made from a book, with each book being a comprehensive guide in a certain subject. Read, it can act as a tutor.... or it can transform into a wasp that stings you. The poison injects you with knowledge, and as it courses through you, you gain the knowledge. It's poison, so it's kinda dangerous and gives you a penalty.... but it's fast. As the poison wears out, so does the knowledge. And then you're back to square one.
Fullankar, the textbook wasps.
Demon of the First Circle
Progeny of the Obsessive Scholar
The Obsessive Scholar is a patron of the arts and of knowledge, with a grand wish to spread understanding and enlightenment throughout Malfeas, the Underworld, Creation, and Heaven itself. Each beggar a poet. Each street urchin a weapons grandmaster. Each street sweeper an artist. Sadly, in these fallen times, most do not have the time nor the inclination to study his books, no matter how well-written or how comprehensive. Why read about the vagaries of the stars, when one is wondering where to find his next meal? Why read about the Treatises of Ahnschlus, when one is trying to till the field for the next harvest? And so, the Obsessive Scholar, with some hesitation, made the decision for them. He made the Fullankar.
The Fullankar, in their dormant form, appear as any form of information recording, and acts as a comprehensive guide and work on a single subject, whether it is melee, war, or medicine. Whether in first-age crystal tablet, paperback book, or silken scroll. In this form, they are near-indistinguishable from other, more mundane books. Using the Fullankar in this form allows one to train themselves up as if they were studying under a tutor, and reduce training times to a third. The knowledge and words themselves slotting themselves into a reader's mind, the pictures, inscriptions, and diagrams, seemingly coming alive on the page itself, the reader's body subconsciously twitching as the book describes how one swings a sword or how to carry out a surgical procedure.
In the other form, the book itself unfurls. Transforming into a Fullankar's full form. It is the size of a dog. A stinger, composed out of punctuation. Wings, made from pictures. Feet, made from adjectives. A shell composed out of nouns. Flickering in and out of existence with compound eyes made from verbs, the Fullankar has a stinger composed out of prepositions, dripping with venom. It is the venom that is key to its abilities. When the Fullankar stings, there is no pain. And then, enlightenment.
The venom of the Fullankar is composed out of liquified and materialized knowledge, an exact copy of the knowledge composed in its other form. It is not harsh. Not much worse than a bee sting. As the poison courses through one's veins, the information within can be accessed by the mind of the victim, allowing it to act as if it had been trained in it all his or her life. A peasant farmer can become a melee fighter that surpasses all but the greatest of mortals, specializing in the use of hoes. An untrained beggar can become the greatest mortal surgeon in the entire region. An newbie brat can become a general that wins against all but the greatest of forces arrayed against him***.
This comes with a price, though. It being poison, and the Obsessive Scholar not realizing the complications caused due to himself being a second circle demon, the poison itself hinders the victim, or beneficiary, of the Fullankar. A swordsman will find his tongue numb, his speech slurred. A surgeon would find that, although his fingers are now nimble and precise, his feet have become sluggish, forcing him to use a cane. A great general's skin now produces a horrible smell, forcing all but the bravest of courtesans to flee from him. *
And it being poison, the Fullankar's toxin does damage to the body, costing one lethal health level per week. After several weeks**, the poison runs its course, and is purged by the mortal's native defenses, and disappears. And with it, goes the knowledge and puissance it grants.****
*Never will the penalty of using the poison of a Fullankar ever negate the gifts of its venom.
** A month
*** Increased dots, plus specialty. War 5 with a specialty against being outnumbered is a hell of a thing
**** I think I should put a limit on how many times one can get stung by a Fullankar before they collapse into a puddle of nouns.
Fullankar, the textbook wasps.
Demon of the First Circle
Progeny of the Obsessive Scholar
The Obsessive Scholar is a patron of the arts and of knowledge, with a grand wish to spread understanding and enlightenment throughout Malfeas, the Underworld, Creation, and Heaven itself. Each beggar a poet. Each street urchin a weapons grandmaster. Each street sweeper an artist. Sadly, in these fallen times, most do not have the time nor the inclination to study his books, no matter how well-written or how comprehensive. Why read about the vagaries of the stars, when one is wondering where to find his next meal? Why read about the Treatises of Ahnschlus, when one is trying to till the field for the next harvest? And so, the Obsessive Scholar, with some hesitation, made the decision for them. He made the Fullankar.
The Fullankar, in their dormant form, appear as any form of information recording, and acts as a comprehensive guide and work on a single subject, whether it is melee, war, or medicine. Whether in first-age crystal tablet, paperback book, or silken scroll. In this form, they are near-indistinguishable from other, more mundane books. Using the Fullankar in this form allows one to train themselves up as if they were studying under a tutor, and reduce training times to a third. The knowledge and words themselves slotting themselves into a reader's mind, the pictures, inscriptions, and diagrams, seemingly coming alive on the page itself, the reader's body subconsciously twitching as the book describes how one swings a sword or how to carry out a surgical procedure.
In the other form, the book itself unfurls. Transforming into a Fullankar's full form. It is the size of a dog. A stinger, composed out of punctuation. Wings, made from pictures. Feet, made from adjectives. A shell composed out of nouns. Flickering in and out of existence with compound eyes made from verbs, the Fullankar has a stinger composed out of prepositions, dripping with venom. It is the venom that is key to its abilities. When the Fullankar stings, there is no pain. And then, enlightenment.
The venom of the Fullankar is composed out of liquified and materialized knowledge, an exact copy of the knowledge composed in its other form. It is not harsh. Not much worse than a bee sting. As the poison courses through one's veins, the information within can be accessed by the mind of the victim, allowing it to act as if it had been trained in it all his or her life. A peasant farmer can become a melee fighter that surpasses all but the greatest of mortals, specializing in the use of hoes. An untrained beggar can become the greatest mortal surgeon in the entire region. An newbie brat can become a general that wins against all but the greatest of forces arrayed against him***.
This comes with a price, though. It being poison, and the Obsessive Scholar not realizing the complications caused due to himself being a second circle demon, the poison itself hinders the victim, or beneficiary, of the Fullankar. A swordsman will find his tongue numb, his speech slurred. A surgeon would find that, although his fingers are now nimble and precise, his feet have become sluggish, forcing him to use a cane. A great general's skin now produces a horrible smell, forcing all but the bravest of courtesans to flee from him. *
And it being poison, the Fullankar's toxin does damage to the body, costing one lethal health level per week. After several weeks**, the poison runs its course, and is purged by the mortal's native defenses, and disappears. And with it, goes the knowledge and puissance it grants.****
*Never will the penalty of using the poison of a Fullankar ever negate the gifts of its venom.
** A month
*** Increased dots, plus specialty. War 5 with a specialty against being outnumbered is a hell of a thing
**** I think I should put a limit on how many times one can get stung by a Fullankar before they collapse into a puddle of nouns.
I'd actually go with the idea that they're triggered by seeing someone fail at a task, not just by their existence. After all, the already-competent deserve to be left to their own devices.
- They should be more dangerous to mortals. I suggest making them violently attack everyone they see (perhaps they gain limit if they see someone and don't attack them?) In the minds of their creator this is a feature not a flaw as it means they are constantly spreading knowledge
Also, I discussed this with someone else, and this is definitely a milestone for you. The idea is sound, the execution is mostly legible, and there's actual detail work and notes here rather than a verbal pencil sketch. I'd be more than happy to help edit this, maybe with @rogthnor helping with the mechanical end. PM me/us if you'd like to give that a try.
.... milestone?Also, I discussed this with someone else, and this is definitely a milestone for you. The idea is sound, the execution is mostly legible, and there's actual detail work and notes here rather than a verbal pencil sketch. I'd be more than happy to help edit this, maybe with @rogthnor helping with the mechanical end. PM me/us if you'd like to give that a try.
Started up a PM.Also, I discussed this with someone else, and this is definitely a milestone for you. The idea is sound, the execution is mostly legible, and there's actual detail work and notes here rather than a verbal pencil sketch. I'd be more than happy to help edit this, maybe with @rogthnor helping with the mechanical end. PM me/us if you'd like to give that a try.
Gotcha, I'll chime in once I awaken from my impending sleep-dep coma.
Help help.
"It's a noticeable improvement over your earlier work."
...... oh.