Confringentur 2; a Madoka Magica / Fate/Stay Night sequel

Day 27 Chapter 13
[X] Plan: OH NO MADOKA



"Hey, Spooky, ya might wanna get yer ass down here pronto." You were just about to scan your rail pass at the terminal when Kyouko's voice interrupts you. You weren't planning on going very far; just to the main station so you could collect some things from home. But when Kyouko says "Pinkie's got it, and she's looking like she's in a real bad state." You feel your heart stop, and your rail pass slips out of your hands.

Not a moment later, before you even have a chance to respond, you hear Kyouko's voice again, saying "Ya might wanna hurry, Spooky. Now there's some fucking killer weed sprouting from the grass. Get yer ass over here to the park, would ya?"

"Stay where you are."
You don't even bother picking up your rail pass, because it's quicker just to hop the terminal gate and run along the tracks yourself. "I'm on my way. Keep Madoka and Sayaka safe until I get there. Don't hesitate to call in Rider if you need backup before I can get there."

"You got it, Spooky. One burning bush, coming right the fuck up."


You take off running, completely ignoring the cries of "Hey, stop!" coming from a railway employee as you leap over the terminal gate. You're not stopping for anything, not when it's Madoka's life on the line. Even if she's not your girlfriend, you've come too far to leave her alone at a time like this. "Archer, I've got bad news," you are forced to relay. "Madoka's infected, and she and Sayaka are being attacked by… Plants, I think, in the park. Kyouko's with them, but I'm coming to reinforce her. Meet me at the park and be prepared for the worst."

"Ah, shit, here we go again,"
is Archer's reply. "You know, you girls really need to stop getting into trouble like this." You don't laugh. This is no time for Archer's wry sense of humour to rear its head. "I'll meet you at the park. If you haven't already, have Kyouko contact Rider and request backup, and have Oriko redirect Lancer to the park as well. I have a feeling that we'll need her expertise."

You don't even bother responding to Archer as you change frequencies, mentally shouting at the top of your psychic lungs "Oriko! I need Lancer in the park right away! Madoka's-"

"I'm already aware, Akemi-san,"
Oriko replies. "I had Lancer move to the park as soon as I saw signs of trouble." You need to remember to thank Oriko for all she's done at some point before this is over. "But goodness, I can't believe that Kaname-san was... I thought she'd have been safe, at the very elast. She's got so much power inside her that-"

"She's still one of Mitakihara's leylines. If Sidonia is going after the city's leylines, intentionally or otherwise, then Madoka would be at risk regardless of how powerful she is."
This isn't the first time Sidonia has tried going after Madoka, either; it's the second. No, maybe it's actually the third. "But she's the one we cannot let Sidonia take over. No matter what."

"Of course, Akemi-san. Lancer assures me that she'll be meeting with Archer any moment now."


By the time you arrive at the park, you're out of breath. Or, you would be, were you a normal human. The magic pumping through your spiritual veins keeps you going in spite of the toll running halfway across the city without stopping has taken on your body. "Madoka!" you call out as you clear the last hurdle and come within sight of your target. "Madoka!"

You don't see any of the 'killer weed' Kyouko referenced in her earlier call to you, only a burned and frozen patch of nothing where there used to be grass, along with a rather proud-of-herself-looking Lancer standing over the formerly-grassy patch in full battle attire, spear drawn, and runes of ice and fire floating at her side. You can rest easy knowing there's one fewer thing in the world to threaten Madoka; or you would, were it not for the far more dangerous thing threatening her. "Madoka… What happened to you?"

Madoka turns to face you, and- Oh good lord what happened to her? You recoil in horror as you see the smoky black veins crawling up the side of her face, cupping her cheek from behind as a single, pale golden eye on the verge of tears stares back at you. The tan jacket of her school unfirom has been removed, tossed onto the park bench beside her, and Madoka's shirt is unbuttoned about halfway down, giving you a front-row seat to the sight of those same smoky black veins creeping down her shoulder and clustering like a grasping hand just over her heart.

You are not going to focus on the cute, pink-and-cream coloured bra she's wearing. That's not what you came here to do.

"Homura-chan… I'm sorry…"

"You didn't do anything wrong, Madoka," you say. You hold your hand out, hesitating; you want to reach out to Madoka, to touch her, hold her, let her know that everything is going to be fine. But you don't know that. But you hold back, wanting to be respectful of the fact that you and she aren't currently dating, and you don't want to be presumptuous about how much affection you can afford to show her. "This isn't your fault. It's hers. She's the one poisoning this city."

Sidonia has gone after Madoka before. Her familiars have tried to approach Madoka's house twice now. Her wanton poisoning of the city's water supply through the Grief pouring out of Walpurgisnacht's Grief seed is the reason Madoka's younger brother is in the hospital. But now, Sidonia's actions have directly caused harm to Madoka.

If her actions weren't unforgiveable before, they've since crossed that point.


"Thank you for keeping Madoka safe until I could get here," you nod, giving your thanks to both Kyouko and Lancer, before turning your attention to the more pressing matter of actually fixing this. "All right, now that I'm here…" You say, though what you're looking at is pretty self-evident. "Archer, Lancer, what are we thinking?"

"We should immediately begin by isolating Kaname Madoka from any possibility of further influence," Lancer says. "We have seen in the past before that Sidonia is easily able to wrest control of higher magical entitites once sufficient levels of Grief are present in their systems. We should immediately isolate Kaname Madoka from any possibility of that happening. I have a rune which can help with this."

"Good," you say to Lancer. "Do that. Archer, what's the status of Avalon? It's worked before when we used it on mom, would it work for Madoka?"

"It should," Archer says. "But it's also something that concerns me." Archer squats down on the nearby bench, tossing Madoka's uniform jacket to her so she can cover up before saying to you "This makes the third attempt Sidonia's made to nab Madoka. If we stick Avalon inside of her, it'll work, but until we do something about all this Grief – Grief that has apparently dug in so deep it's started infecting the city's leylines – we'll need to keep Avalon inside of Madoka permanently, to make sure this doesn't happen again. But then we'll have to put extra guards around her at all times, because if we're unsuccessful the fourth time Sidonia tries something, she'll end up with one of the most powerful conceptual weapons ever created in her possession. She's already got more than enough pieces to her puzzle as it is; I don't need to be handing something that powerful over to her and making things even worse for us."

"So then we don't let her get her hands on Madoka or Avalon," you say. "I'll guard her, if I have to."

Silently, Sayaka offers you a thumbs-up, while Madoka gives you all too bright of a smile for someone who felt the need to break up with you. Could your heart actually stand being Madoka's constant guard, knowing that every waking moment you'd be reminded of what you had lost?

"Let's slow down and take this one step a time, first," Archer says. "Lancer, how's that rune coming?"

Working diligently behind Madoka, Lancer nods her head. "I have applied the Nauthiz rune in three places on Kaname Madoka's body," Lancer says. "Over her heart, on the side of her shoulder, and at the back of her neck. It should hold."

"Good," Archer says. "Madoka, do you remember that lesson I gave you last week, about how to control the flow of mana within your body? Focus on doing that right now. It'll help you to stave off any possibility of Sidonia using that Grief to dig her claws into you. See if you can also use it to provide additional power to the runes Lancer placed on you."

"O... Okay." Madoka's voice wavers as she speaks. "I'll try…"

While Madoka concentrates on moving her magic around to ward off Sidonia's influence, Archer goes to work with Avalon. One quick insertion of the glittering, gold-and-blue masterpiece, and the wispy black fingers gripping Madoka's face and heart recede. Her eye returns to its usual pink, and for a moment, you can feel your heart repairing itself.

Even if it's just for a few moments longer, Madoka is safe.

But saving Madoka doesn't mean the problem has gone away. There's still the point Archer raised. As long as Mitakihara's leylines are corrupted, Madoka will continue to be at risk, and will need to have Avalon inside of her continuously to stave off a relapse of what's happened today. But without constant guard-posting and surveillance, keeping Avalon inside of Madoka just puts Avalon at risk of being taken by Sidonia.

But you've got someone working on a way to clean up the city's Grief problem, don't you?

"Matou Sakura!"

The time for propriety is gone. Your girlfriend is at risk, and you aren't happy about it. You use the master key to unlock the door to the upstairs apartment and barge in. "Matou Sakura, I need a status report on that thing you're working on!

The pink-haired Rider servant of Matou Sakura, Medusa, glares at you as you push your way into the upstairs apartment. She sets her book down, and approaches you, cutting you off from any further advance. "Get out of my way," you say. "I need to speak with your master."

"I can hear that," Medusa says, sounding unenthused. "In fact, I think there might be some lost souls in the deepest recesses of Hades' domain who could hear you." When you try to sidestep her, Medusa steps with you, blocking your path again before saying "What has you so upset, that you've discarded all notions of sacred hospitality and come barging in here unannounced?"

"I need to speak to your master," you say. "She's working on something for me, and I… I need her to be finished with it. Immediately." You try to slip past Medusa again, but she's faster than you. "Please, I need to speak with her. It's important. It's about…"You stumble over the words. "It's about Madoka…"

Medusa is motionless, and continues to stare you down until "Let her in, Rider!" you hear Tohsaka-san calling out from down the hall. "Seriously, you do not want to get in Akemi's way when it comes down to her girlfriend."

It isn't her master, but Medusa acquiesces to Tohsaka-san's request, and steps aside for you at last. "My master should be in her room," Medusa says. "I would say to be careful and not disturb her, but I believe it is too late for that. Please, proceed."

Proceed you do, heading down the hall, knocking on Matou Sakura's door, and- "I'm sorry about Rider," Matou Sakura says, welcoming you into the room as she opens the door for you. "If she was refusing to let you through, it's only… No, I'm sorry, there isn't any excuse I can give for her actions that would satisfy you."

"I need a progress report," you say, wasting no time to specify on what you want your report. "How far along are you?"

"Well, if you'll remember the last time we spoke, I said that I had two different possible ideas I was considering," Matou Sakura says. You nod your head, and let her continue. "After giving it some thought, I decided that the second option, though it would probably take longer for me to complete, is overall the safer bet. It's sturdier, being more resistant to becoming corrupted, and therefore less likely to hand another asset off to Sidonia."

Matou Sakura bites her lips, adding "The downside, however, is that it's taking time, and judging by what I heard you yelling to Rider, that's… Not something we have a lot of, is it?"

You shake your head. "It's Madoka," you say. "She…" You don't know how much Archer has told Matou Sakura, and you can't remember if she knows. She's become vulnerable. We're doing the best we can, but…" You implore Matou Sakura, "Please, hurry."

"I'm doing the best I can as well, Akemi-san."

[ ] Wat do? (write-in)
 
I think in light of this, the second method would be my choice. It has it's faults, but it's less likely to get clogged like a toilet and start making a beeline for our heads. Honestly I don't know the precise mechanics here, but I figure that inert grief is... probably not toxic?
Thanks, that was the last piece I needed. Though, if I'd seen your post 24 minutes ago when you made it, maybe I could have finished this up faster.

Well, unfortunately I didn't get to actually show off Lancer's fight against the mean green mothers from outer space, because Homura, not being there, wouldn't have seen it, and I couldn't think of a good way to segue from what was happening to her, to the fight, and back to Homura again. But maybe they'll be back. I hope they'll be back. Sidonia's mötley crüe of familiars has run the gamut from reptiles, birds, mammals, arthropods, and even fish (she did send a few aquatic familiars after us before, if you'll recall) so plants and fungi and shit like that are the only things she's missing, barring single-cell organisms, viruses, and the like, which I don't think would be fair to let her have.

With Plague casting his vote for the safer of the two options, now it's just a matter of figuring out, how long would it take for Sakura to cook something to that effect up? The idea was first brought up on Day 25, so four days ago, but we don't know how much of that time was spent figuring out which idea was safer, and how much time was spent doing actual work. Your thoughts, gents?
 
I... don't know where to take this vote, sorry. It's just that things haven't changed enough for us to have changed our game plan.

With Plague casting his vote for the safer of the two options, now it's just a matter of figuring out, how long would it take for Sakura to cook something to that effect up? The idea was first brought up on Day 25, so four days ago, but we don't know how much of that time was spent figuring out which idea was safer, and how much time was spent doing actual work. Your thoughts, gents?
Maybe it would've taken a day to have decided the course she would've taken, since if she's thinking the way I am, it might not have taken that long. So that gives her about 3 days to have worked on it? Progress-wise, I figure that putting together a spell might take as long as putting together a computer. The main thing for large-scale spells in Fate is materials more than anything, which Sakura probably bypassed given that her Imaginary Elements affinity is even stronger than Shirou's affinity for Swords on top of massive mana capacity, and Shirou doesn't need a lot to make NP-grade spells work. The main problem here might just be getting it hooked up to leylines so it sustains itself, and measuring the parameters of how much the spirits need to do, how they affect the grief, and where they need to go. If not done today, it might be done tomorrow.

"I can hear that," Medusa says, sounding unenthused. "In fact, I think there might be some lost souls in the deepest recesses of Hades' domain who could hear you." When you try to sidestep her, Medusa steps with you, blocking your path again before saying "What has you so upset, that you've discarded all notions of sacred hospitality and come barging in here unannounced?"
Damn ancient Greeks and their hospitality.
 
I... don't know where to take this vote, sorry. It's just that things haven't changed enough for us to have changed our game plan.
That's okay; I don't either. I just wanted to get this out there for right now. If neither you or @NMS come up with something, I'll try approaching it again either later today or tomorrow to see if I can come up with something that'll either push this forward, or give us something else to do, but for right now I'm spent.
The main problem here might just be getting it hooked up to leylines so it sustains itself, and measuring the parameters of how much the spirits need to do, how they affect the grief, and where they need to go. If not done today, it might be done tomorrow.
That might be my ticket, right there. If you could, what would it require for Sakura to hook her spell up to Mitakihara's leylines? An "Open sesame" and a slap on Madoka's behind, I imagine, isn't going to cut it, so what are we looking at, and how involved or how dangerous is it to do? Both in general, and for a mage of Sakura's calibre?
Damn ancient Greeks and their hospitality.
Well, you don't piss on hospitality. Medusa won't allow it. I mean, just look at what happened to the last guy.
 
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That might be my ticket, right there. If you could, what would it require for Sakura to hook her spell up to Mitakihara's leylines? An "Open sesame" and a slap on Madoka's behind, I imagine, isn't going to cut it, so what are we looking at, and how involved or how dangerous is it to do? Both in general, and for a mage of Sakura's calibre?
Basically, she'd just have to find multiple points where the flow of mana is strong and slap some magic circles on them. Not that hard, it's just a lot of ground to cover and a lot of really precise writing on some walls or floors, with extra insurance to make sure nobody tampers with it, like placing down a few guardian spirits or something. However, I imagine that those places might also be places Sidonia would plant familiars, so that'd be a primary danger of doing so. Also;

An "Open sesame" and a slap on Madoka's behind
What a good way to be frozen to death by Homura! At the very least, it might be important to hook up Madoka in the process too.
 
What a good way to be frozen to death by Homura!
Not if Homura's the one to do it.

All jokes aside, now I wish this had come up earlier, because
Basically, she'd just have to find multiple points where the flow of mana is strong and slap some magic circles on them. Not that hard, it's just a lot of ground to cover and a lot of really precise writing on some walls or floors, with extra insurance to make sure nobody tampers with it, like placing down a few guardian spirits or something. However, I imagine that those places might also be places Sidonia would plant familiars, so that'd be a primary danger of doing so.
With Sakura's guidance, this would have been a great way for the Saints to spend their time today. Well, I guess that's something they can do tomorrow. And hey, the combination of Sakura and Kazumi isn't one I've gotten to explore yet. I wonder how Scáthach will like interacting with someone who knows Cu in the present day and who knows that he's alive?
Maybe it time we finally introduce Madoka to the Saints and get some opinions from them on the situation?
I seem to recall you saying something about teddy bears... What was it? Oh, yeah,
Madoka wrapped up in a suit of teddy bears covered in protective wards: "Um, why am I wearing this?"

Mirai: "Because you technically count as one of the city's leylines. Now hold still!"
You might have thought you were joking, but it was I, Dio! maybe it's time we start taking you seriously.
 
An almost whisper-silent hissing sound came on the wind, causing both Sayaka and Kyouko to turn their attention in the direction of the sound. They didn't have to look very far. Tracing the path of Madoka's footsteps, before her attempted exodus had been interrupted by Sayaka, the pair could see that the grass had turned black where Madoka had stood. The grass bubbled, and a single, stout vine poked up from under the surface. The grass bubbled again, and several more vines joined the first, writhing and hissing in the non-existent breeze. The buds of their flowers opened, revealing mouths of jagged, razer-sharp teeth, and their mouths with eyeless faces turned their headless forms towards the trio.

So, we've got Madoka sick with the Grief, and we're being attacked by the very corrupted grass and soil of Mitakihara itself. Which restless spirit of Slavic folklore these Audrey 2 wannabees are supposed to be, I haven't yet decided. maybe they're Rusalka (unlikely, since even though Rusalka can appear in other places, like grassy fields, they're most commonly associated with water), maybe they're Polevik (possibly; Polevik are field spirits, so it wouldn't be out of place) or maybe they're just signs that the Grief is too damn high and it's actively corrupting whatever it touches at these levels.

Well this sounds like hound thorns/wooden dogs, a type of mythical wild rose/cynosbatus that shows up in some Ancient Greek Myths and trough contact with Byzantium in some South Slavic myths. They don't usually have mouths, nor are they as hostile as shown here.

Like these are a mythic nuisance that sometimes show up in myths/stories to nick travelers with their thorns and were responsible for a founding of another Locris west of Mount Parnasus in one myth by Locrus King of Locris after he had left his throne to his son Opus II because of a fight between the two. On the advice of an Oracle Locrus went looking for a place where he would be bitten by a hound thorn/wooden dog and got himself nicked by/stepped onto a briar.

Whether these are simple wild roses some mythical travelers ran into because they weren't paying attention at some story/legend important point or are actually some sort of mythic being depends on the teller of the story.

Edit: nor not not.
 
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OK. Caught up to now.

"Stay where you are." You don't even bother picking up your rail pass, because it's quicker just to hop the terminal gate and run along the tracks yourself. "I'm on my way. Keep Madoka and Sayaka safe until I get there. Don't hesitate to call in Rider if you need backup before I can get there."

You take off running, completely ignoring the cries of "Hey, stop!" coming from a railway employee as you leap over the terminal gate. You're not stopping for anything, not when it's Madoka's life on the line. Even if she's not your girlfriend, you've come too far to leave her alone at a time like this. "Archer, I've got bad news," you are forced to relay. "Madoka's infected, and she and Sayaka are being attacked by… Plants, I think, in the park. Kyouko's with them, but I'm coming to reinforce her. Meet me at the park and be prepared for the worst."

We need to go smooth this out as soon as possible, so probably tomorrow at the soonest so the police isn't looking for Homura now.

Damn ancient Greeks and their hospitality.

Well, you don't piss on hospitality. Medusa won't allow it. I mean, just look at what happened to the last guy.

Actually once you reconstruct the greater scope of Myths from Ancient/Mycenaean Greece it turns out there was like a civil war at the time which the side representing Xenia, the concept of Ancient Greek Hospitality, kind of won or at least lost the least.

Normally now I would point out that as the concept of Xenia is associated among Ancient Greek Gods with Zeus and Athene and Medusa is in all myths the enemy of the Xenia faction, but in the specific myth Fate uses the Rider version is supposed to be the version of Medusa before she became a monster and more importantly the version of Medusa whose power is associated with avenging/punishing the violations of Xenia so this is ironically and accidentally on point.
 
Day 27 Chapter 14
"I need a progress report," you say, wasting no time to specify on what you want your report. "How far along are you?"

"Well, if you'll remember the last time we spoke, I said that I had two different possible ideas I was considering," Matou Sakura says. You nod your head, and let her continue. "After giving it some thought, I decided that the second option, though it would probably take longer for me to complete, is overall the safer bet. It's sturdier, being more resistant to becoming corrupted, and therefore less likely to hand another asset off to Sidonia."

Matou Sakura bites her lips, adding "The downside, however, is that it's taking time, and judging by what I heard you yelling to Rider, that's… Not something we have a lot of, is it?"

You shake your head. "It's Madoka," you say. "She…" You don't know how much Archer has told Matou Sakura, and you can't remember if she knows. "She's become vulnerable. We're doing the best we can, but…" You implore Matou Sakura, "Please, hurry."

"I'm doing the best I can as well, Akemi-san," Matou Sakura says. "Once I figured out which of the two methods would be safer, it took me almost an entire day just to blueprint it so I'd be sure the mechanisms were all going to work properly. I'm almost done putting it together, but I still need a bit more time."

Matou Sakura, after taking a seat herself at the desk, offers you a seat on the bed, which you accept. She folds her hands together in her lap, and looks at you, as a faint smile forms on her lips. "I know how hard you're all working to deal with the problems this city is facing, Akemi-san, and I assure you, I'm working just as hard. If I'm not finished by tonight, then I'll have it ready for you tomorrow, I promise. So please, just be patient for one more day, maybe not even that."

"You're right, I… I'm sorry," you say. "It's just… Madoka means so much to me, and now she's… "

Matou Sakura reaches a hand out, gently placing on your shoulder. "I know," she says. "You'd do anything to help her. Just like I'd do anything to help senpai. That's why I came here, after all; because senpai asked for my help." Matou Sakura's gaze grows distant, and she says, more to herself than to you, "Even if I have to let someone else have him."

You won't accept that. You can't accept that. You can't accept letting go of Madoka and letting her be with someone else. So you won't. You'll keep pushing forward, until the day comes when you can be with her again. A day which should be coming very soon.

Assuming your survive what's yet to come, first.


"You've mentioned settling on the second method," you say. "Could you refresh my memory? What did that entail, and what made you think it would be better than the first method?"

"The first method I considered was creating a mechanism that would consume the Grief in the soil directly, and then turn the Grief into energy to self-perpetuate. The second involves turning the negative emotions in the Grief into a spirit, before consuming that spirit, rendering the Grief inert." You know you've remarked on this before, but when Matou Sakura adopts that pose, you know she's Tohsaka-san's sister. Then again, you've seen Archer adopt that exact same pose before. Maybe it's just a Fuyuki thing?

You wonder what your aunt Illyasviel would look like in that pose.
You've never met her before, and only have the images in Archer's dreams to reference what she looks like. Snow white hair, vibrant, cherry-coloured eyes, and a smile that would melt the snow from the peak of Mount Everest. You wonder, does she know you exist? Would she be excited to meet you?

"Anyway," Matou Sakura isn't done speaking, so you have to quickly cut your imagining short as she continues. "The first method would have been a lot simpler to construct, but it would need a lot of magical buffering to prevent it from becoming corrupted by all the Grief it was consuming. That, plus the fact that it could power itself by consuming Grief, meant that if Sidonia got her hands on it, she'd have something terrible on her hands; and since she has access to that massive Grief Seed, it would effectively have a limitless supply of energy at its disposal. So that's no good."

For added emphasis, Matou Sakura shakes her head. You have to agree with her assertion. "The second method, though it would be more complicated to produce, would ultimately be better-insulated against becoming corrupted. That means if anything goes wrong we're not gifting Sidonia a new toy to play with. The downside, however, is that it's only consuming the negative emotions contained within the Grief, while leaving the inert goop behind."

You don't know how safe that actually sounds, now that you're hearing it for the second time. "Ultimately, I decided it would be safer to pick the option that doesn't give Sidonia a new toy. We can address the inert Grief goop after we've dealt with Sidonia, but for now, this should work to clear up the corruption Mitakihara is swimming in."

You still don't know how good it sounds to leave behind a massive amount of inert Grief goop, but Matou Sakura makes a good point. If something goes wrong, you don't want to be giving Sidonia a thing that virtually doesn't stop, and it'll be easier to address the problems of the inert goop when the city isn't being poisoned by active, corrupting Grief. "Is there anything you'll need to do to set this up, once you're finished?" you ask. "I don't imagine this would be a simple process to get started."

An "Open sesame" and a slap on Madoka's behind aren't going to cut it. No matter how much you're sure Kirika would encourage you to try; the pervert.

"I would need to locate multiple points throughout the city where the flow of mana is strong, and prepare them with magic circles. It's not difficult to set up at all, normally, but the scope of something like this becomes its own problem when we're talking about covering an entire city. On top of that, we'd want to make sure there's some additional reinforcement on the circles, like a couple of familiars, or perhaps I could throw together a few guardian spirits."

Matou Sakura's fingers drum against the desk, and she muses "Though, I'm sure a witch of Sidonia's calibre is already well aware of the possibility of something like this happening, and since we're so close to the first of November I'm sure she'll be on guard for anything that could majorly disturb her plans. So whatever spots would be the best for this, those are the places where she's probably already set up something of her own."

Of course. Of course the possibility exists that Sidonia would have something in place if you tried to tamper with the corruption she's been seeding Mitakihara with. It's such an of course you don't even bother vocalising it. "I wish I had known the setup for this would require placing magic circles around the city," you say. "I've got the Pleiades Saints setting up defensive arrays along the city's leylines. Our two Lancer servants were helping out, until Kyouko called me and I had to pull our Lancer away to help deal with Madoka…"

Your voice trails off as you try to put Madoka's health out of your mind. Matou Sakura is working on a solution, you remind yourself. Worrying about her isn't going to help her get better. It's only going to distract you. "Anyway, if I had known, I could have contacted you and asked where you think they should be set up so that we'd be killing two birds with one stone."

"Oh, that's not a problem at all," Matou Sakura says. "If you'd like, I can point out where they need to go, and have sister go with you to help set them up while I finish up here. It shouldn't be too much trouble for her to help you, if you wanted."

It would save your team some time, especially if the Saints are already out and about doing similar work, but there's something at the back of your head making you question the decision. "Are you sure?" you ask. "I don't know that much about what you've got planned-" Your team has their own method for dealing with Grief, but unfortunately the scope of the problem is far bigger than what your method can handle. "-but, wouldn't you need to have your method finished first, before sending us out to set up points to anchor it?"

"It might seem counter-intuitive to you, Akemi-san, but it's fine," Matou Sakura says. "Since I already know what the blueprint for my spell looks like, there's no problem in giving someone else directions on how to set up a circle that will anchor it. It won't come out any differently from how I've blueprinted it, it's just that the spell I'm working on is complicated, and needs time for all the various components to be put together." Matou Sakura stops herself, pausing for a moment before saying "I hope what I'm saying is easy enough to understand. I'm having a hard time keeping something as… In the weeds, as spell creation, at a level where a non-mage can understand me."

"Is it difficult?"

"More like, incredibly technical, if I had to say," Matou Sakura says. "It's akin to putting together a puzzle; or a computer, if you're more technologically-inclined than sister is. It's all about selecting the right components and setting the right parameters to achieve the desired result. It's a very technically demanding art, but once you get the hang of it, that's all there is to it."

Matou Sakura smiles for you, and she asks again, "Now, would you like me to ask sister to help your teammates start setting up the anchor points for this spell?"

How do you respond?
[ ] Yes, you'll get started on setting up the anchor points for Matou Sakura's spell
-[ ] Tell Kazumi's team to stop what they're doing and work on this instead (you can join Kazumi's team if you want)
-[ ] Assign a second group to work alongside Kazumi's team, just working on this
--[ ] Write-in your second team composition (you can include yourself if you want)
[ ] No, you'll hold off on setting up the anchor points until Matou Sakura is finished
-[ ] Because you want Kazumi's team to finish what they're doing first
-[ ] Because you still aren't convinced by Matou Sakura's explanation and would feel more secure if it were finished first

What about Madoka?
[ ] Assign someone else to work on setting up anchor points; you'll watch over Madoka
-[ ] Just watch over Madoka; nothing more, nothing less
-[ ] Talk to Madoka about the breakup; let her know how you're feeling, but don't try to press her into taking you back
-[ ] Try to use Madoka's vulnerability to get back together with her
[ ] Assign someone else to watch over Madoka; you'll be on the team setting up anchor points
-[ ] Madoka's parents
-[ ] Archer and/or Tohsaka-san
-[ ] Ship Madoka over to Shirome and have Minako watch her
-[ ] Nurse Ortensia; she's got some Church magecraft that could help suppress the Grief in Madoka's system, right?
-[ ] Other (write-in)
 
Credit to @PlaguePaladin for giving me enough of an idea to keep this moving forward. Hopefully I managed to go over the necessary points without getting too much wrong. Anyway, we've got three choices as to how we can proceed from here.
- We can have Kazumi's team finish up what they're doing today, and forget about setting up the anchor points to Sakura's spell until tomorrow when the spell is guaranteed to be finished;
- We can have Kazumi's team pivot, and have Rin join up with them to work on this instead, since they're already doing more or less this already;
- Or we can try to get both done at once, but spread our forces out and make ourselves more vulnerable to being attacked while we work.

We also have an identity for Sidonia's plant familiars, courtesy of @Dmol8.
Well this sounds like hound thorns/wooden dogs, a type of mythical wild rose/cynosbatus that shows up in some Ancient Greek Myths and trough contact with Byzantium in some South Slavic myths. They don't usually have mouths, nor are they as hostile as shown here.
Obviously, these are going to be more hostile and mouth-y than their mythological counterparts, because Sidonia is a crazy woman with an horrible and twisted design aesthetic who wants to wipe out muggle-kind.

So, where do we go from here? Hopefully this is enough to get us moving again.
 
[x] Plan Prep and Purifying
-[x] Yes, you'll get started on setting up the anchor points for Matou Sakura's spell
--[x] Assign a second group to work alongside Kazumi's team, just working on this
---[x] Homura, Rin Tohsaka, Mami, and Caster
-[x] Assign someone else to watch over Madoka; you'll be on the team setting up anchor points
--[x] Archer
--[x] Nurse Ortensia; she's got some Church magecraft that could help suppress the Grief in Madoka's system, right?

This seem good to everyone?
 
---[x] Homura, Rin Tohsaka, Mami, and Caster
Homura and Rin are obvious, but why Mami and Caster? Do you really want to pull that old "You'll have to bring Caster as your date to ice skatign if you don't find a boyfriend before winter break?" thing? Do you want to give them some screentime since they've been lacking? Or do you see a reason to pick them over someone else, like additional firepower if we run into trouble?

Oh, and, wait, crap, I completely missed this
We need to go smooth this out as soon as possible, so probably tomorrow at the soonest so the police isn't looking for Homura now.
@NMS @PlaguePaladin, should we send anyone over to the train station to deal with Homura hopping the terminal gate? Archer? Should we call Minako and say we've been a bad girl? Should we ignore it and tell the police and transit workers to stuff it?
 
Homura and Rin are obvious, but why Mami and Caster? Do you really want to pull that old "You'll have to bring Caster as your date to ice skatign if you don't find a boyfriend before winter break?" thing? Do you want to give them some screentime since they've been lacking? Or do you see a reason to pick them over someone else, like additional firepower if we run into trouble?

Screentime and since we're doing magic things might as well bring our team's magic man.

Oh, and, wait, crap, I completely missed this
@NMS @PlaguePaladin, should we send anyone over to the train station to deal with Homura hopping the terminal gate? Archer? Should we call Minako and say we've been a bad girl? Should we ignore it and tell the police and transit workers to stuff it?

... I honestly have no idea what to do about this.
 
@NMS @PlaguePaladin, should we send anyone over to the train station to deal with Homura hopping the terminal gate? Archer? Should we call Minako and say we've been a bad girl? Should we ignore it and tell the police and transit workers to stuff it?
1. Theoretically, crossing train tracks does not count as jaywalking.

2. Homura didn't die despite staying on the tracks a very long time and was likely running considerably fast, considering you and I both agree that she has B-rank agility on a magical girl scale. So while there's evidence, the evidence sounds really absurd.

3. Despite the fact that you can be fined 50,000 yen and spend three months in jail for it... I hear less harmful cases of jaywalking mostly just involve you getting chewed out by the police for a while.

Wouldn't worry too terribly much about it, though they may get some questions by the police. In which case, we can just send them back with altered memories and have them go 'yeah, she doesn't seem like the type to do that'. On an unrelated note, found out that Japanese schools actually hire foreigners quite often, so all those self-insert or crossover fics where the MC becomes a teacher at a Japanese school might have an inkling of truth to them.
 
1. Theoretically, crossing train tracks does not count as jaywalking.

2. Homura didn't die despite staying on the tracks a very long time and was likely running considerably fast, considering you and I both agree that she has B-rank agility on a magical girl scale. So while there's evidence, the evidence sounds really absurd.

3. Despite the fact that you can be fined 50,000 yen and spend three months in jail for it... I hear less harmful cases of jaywalking mostly just involve you getting chewed out by the police for a while.

Wouldn't worry too terribly much about it, though they may get some questions by the police. In which case, we can just send them back with altered memories and have them go 'yeah, she doesn't seem like the type to do that'.
While all of these are on point (mostly, but I'll get to that in a second) I don't think it's a jaywalking charge we should be concerned with, so much as, I guess theft? She hopped the terminal gate without paying for a ticket, but she never actually got on the train, so I don't know if that would count as theft or not, or even if theft is the right charge we'd be looking at. It's either a petty larceny charge, or a trespassing charge, but I'm not sure which one is applicable for this scenario specifically. That said, Homura did leave her transit pass at the scene of the crime, and a transit employee did see her hop the terminal gate, and there's probably footage from a security camera, too. So it's not like there isn't evidence at all that she did it.
 
While all of these are on point (mostly, but I'll get to that in a second) I don't think it's a jaywalking charge we should be concerned with, so much as, I guess theft? She hopped the terminal gate without paying for a ticket, but she never actually got on the train, so I don't know if that would count as theft or not, or even if theft is the right charge we'd be looking at. It's either a petty larceny charge, or a trespassing charge, but I'm not sure which one is applicable for this scenario specifically. That said, Homura did leave her transit pass at the scene of the crime, and a transit employee did see her hop the terminal gate, and there's probably footage from a security camera, too. So it's not like there isn't evidence at all that she did it.
The crime for such a scenario would be fare evasion I believe, even if she didn't actually board a train. Technically that's a form of fraud AFAIK, and in Japan, fraud charges can get up to 10 years of imprisonment, or a fine of the equivalent of 5000$. Though in this case, as you said, she didn't board the train and ran on the tracks. Matter of fact, if they have evidence of her running on the tracks, they might instead elect to admit her to a mental hospital, as a normal person would definitely see that as either attempted suicide or hysterical actions.
 
in Japan, fraud charges can get up to 10 years of imprisonment, or a fine of the equivalent of 5000$.
One of these things is not equivalent to the other.
if they have evidence of her running on the tracks, they might instead elect to admit her to a mental hospital, as a normal person would definitely see that as either attempted suicide or hysterical actions.
While that would definitely impede our ability to save the world, maybe Homura could use some psychiatric help in the long term. But still, we should do something about that to make sure she doesn't get slapped with fines or carted off on the whims of the Japanese court system.
 
One of these things is not equivalent to the other.
I know it's an absurd difference in punishment, but that's what I read. I'd probably fact check that, but I don't doubt it; Japan's legal system is mega-fucked, as most of us probably know.

While that would definitely impede our ability to save the world, maybe Homura could use some psychiatric help in the long term. But still, we should do something about that to make sure she doesn't get slapped with fines or carted off on the whims of the Japanese court system.
That'll probably be for a later vote, but as of now, I think I'll stick to using hypnosis as necessary. If officials come to investigate, we can use that to have them go 'nothing wrong here'. If officials come already preloaded with the intent of hauling us off, that means they have a warrant or some sort of official go-ahead, meaning that things are probably a lot larger than we could affect in the moment. In that case, we could go with the 'mania' excuse a bit longer and hypnotize them into believing that Homura ran away after breaking up with her girlfriend, and deal with that mess when the Sidonia situation blows over. Also;

maybe Homura could use some psychiatric help in the long term
Homura needed psychiatric evaluation since Timeline 2 began. It's probably bloody time. Shame; if Hans hadn't ended up a traitor, his Human Observation would've been great for helping her. Nightingale probably knows the basics of dealing with hysterical people, but a full psychiatric course is probably outside her area of expertise. We definitely at least need a skilled therapist who can know about Homura's time jumping. Maybe we can use hypnosis to convince a therapist to both trust Homura and keep quiet about what they know.
 
I know it's an absurd difference in punishment, but that's what I read. I'd probably fact check that, but I don't doubt it; Japan's legal system is mega-fucked, as most of us probably know.
I mean, shit, only 5000$? I have more than that stashed under my bed as I'm typing this. It costs less than that to drive a tank, even if you factor in the cost of firing the cannon.
Homura needed psychiatric evaluation since Timeline 2 began. It's probably bloody time. Shame; if Hans hadn't ended up a traitor, his Human Observation would've been great for helping her. Nightingale probably knows the basics of dealing with hysterical people, but a full psychiatric course is probably outside her area of expertise. We definitely at least need a skilled therapist who can know about Homura's time jumping. Maybe we can use hypnosis to convince a therapist to both trust Homura and keep quiet about what they know.
Well, in the future I decided that Kirika would become a therapist. Granted, she'll be specialising in relationship counseling, but I'm sure she'd be willing to help her sis out. Granted, her "help" would probably be along the line of "You need to get laid" given her previous track record towards giving advice to Homura.
Huh, So Homura getting arrested is the in-universe reason we aren't getting the threequel?
I'm only going to say that the 3quel not happening is likely, but not a guarantee. After I'm done here, I plan to take some time off, either from writing entirely, or to write something different - I've got a few different ideas for things I'd like to do, but most of them probably wouldn't be of interest to a crowd that's following a Madoka/Fate crossover - and either after that, or concurrent with that, I'd like to freshen up both the OG Confringentur as well as the sequel, and see if I can drum up an audience for the 3quel after I've turned them into coherent stories that aren't reliant on the quest formula.
 
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Why do you know how much it costs to drive a tank?
How else do you think I know that? Because I've driven a tank before, that's how. The Wednesday I took off at the end of June, I took a three hour drive down to my local tank museum, paid the good folks 1500$, and got to drive around in an M4 Sherman. It was fucking awesome. There's another place I've sadly forgotten the name of, where 3000$ buys you a package deal where you can both drive and shoot the cannon of a Leopard 1. I'd love to do that too, if I had the time. Fuck, I could do both, and even after travel expenses I'd still be paying less than if I got fined in Japan.

... Somehow, this originated as me laughing at how small an amount 5000$ is to be fined, and it turned into me saying that it costs less to drive a tank, completely negating the original point I was trying to make. Weird how that happens.
 
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