Status
Not open for further replies.
The next realm should be one of these 3 in my opinion:
Perosnally I wouldn't mind watching Adam hit either Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei, UQ Holder or Nanoha. I really wanna see how far Adam can push the whole "Spells as Programs" thing that each setting has going on - especially since Technomancy and Cyber Dragon are both a thing and are both utterly OP at Program Dev and all...
I thought Sekirei was specifically designed for Waifus of various dispositions?
It is best summed up as "Battle Harem Team-Tournament: The Manga". So yes, in a way, you could say it is specifically designed for Waifus of various dispositions - All of whom are beasts in combat.
 
Last edited:
Honey! I'm Home!
Flying was awesome.

Taylor dipped around a cloud tower, the storm raging below. Up here, the sunlight made the horrible weather seem so far away.

She had dreams of flight as a child. Days of wearing towels as capes and telling her mom about how SHE would one day be like Alexandria, taking names and kicking butt. Giggling with Emma as they talked about being princesses with lasers and turning into birds and things.

Diving into the rippling darkness below, she felt the freezing winds and crackling electrical discharges as she followed the storm, her sensors modeling the path and intensity of the vapor. This planet was so cold, the only reason the surface was NOT covered in ice was due to how little moisture existed in what could charitably be called an 'atmosphere'. Still, the skies felt so free...

When she got older, her dreams had lost their shine. The idea of being lost, soaring so high up that streets were impossible to recognize, the air too thin to breathe, the wind too stiff, the bugs and pollution... and then of course, the horror her life had slowly become. Dreams had faded, and thoughts of the sky seemed impossible to experience.

Bursting from the clouds, she dove through space enjoying the sunshine.

Even asleep as she was, she could feel Queen Administrator's guidance as she flew between cloud mountains, enhancing the dream to near reality.

[Actually you are currently controlling Drone 3221. Accidentally stole a few from Adam, but he was fine with it.]

Yep, a very realistic dream.

[Adam is a bit of stick in the mud though. Keeps telling me not to put up any nude statues of you in the new cities.]

WHAT!?

[I know! Just a few tasteful additions here and there, show people a bit of how awesome my human is, maybe interest a few dozen dating opportunities...]

Oh God, stop helping!

[How am I supposed to get some adorable human buds to spoil if you don't administrate some personal connections young lady?]

Nope! Dream, flying, very busy right now!

[Fine, but at least keep your eyes open for humans with good hand coordination or linguistical skills. I only want the best for my human.]

Could a drone blush? Damn it if she wasn't trying.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Adam twitched, flesh evaporating from his bones before reforming.

Yeah, he would have to head home pretty soon.

The sky was in constant conflict now, storms everywhere and floods happening full time as the air was being forced back to habitable ranges. It had forced the many automated cities and (Currently unpopulated) farms to be built on massive pillars above the rapidly flooding surface.

Then again, a mostly flooded planet seemed neat too. The drones were smoothing the surface over, filling caves and valleys and stuff while harvesting the mountain ranges. According to the calculations, once the whole thing was smooth there would be an average depth of a little less than 9000 feet, or about 2700 meters. Most of the salt would be converted to solid material though, so that water amount would drop a bit.

He WAS cheating on the connecting bridges between cities though, as they were designed as individual connected flying vehicles like the roadwork on Remnant he had designed.

Adam felt a bone limb crack, the mechanical assisting tool pulsing with a bit too much magic, before repairing. Again. Bone joints were more fragile than expected, even considering the magical nature of the material.

This... self destructive effect of being 'not-quite-here' in a too-close Realm was doing amazing stuff for his 'Recovery' ability, exposing flaws and issues for his adaptability to test and repair... but it was not comfortable.

He glanced up at the drone network, seeing even more of the devices fall under Queen Administrator's grasp. The process took longer than either expected, since each new device added so much data for Queen to organize. The equipped sensors were no joke after all, they did originate from a space faring society.

In the end, the number of needed drones had indeed needed to be increased. Even more so as a few hundred were being 'borrowed' by Taylor's partner over time.

He glanced down at the pouting nude Angel, Simmy being fairly unhappy at being grounded.

But if you don't want to be in trouble, don't run off and eat planets of sentient crystal. Especially sentient crystals that are metaphorically siblings.

The newly arrived Simurgh on the other hand was a treat to be around... although she had seemed overly eager to be bound via 'Grid of Confinement'.

Which he was 99% sure was due to how she could predict stuff... Because the black tentacle bondage exhibition had caught ADAM off guard, if no one else.

She seemed FAR too happy to be 'caught' and bound to his soul, and had ended up confined in Simmy's old cell. Like roommates, or whatever.

Point was, conversion of 'Simurgh 2: Electric Boogaloo' was underway. Though peeking during the modification process showed the new body (Because of COURSE she would also become a nude angel, must be a family thing) was not blue.

She was orange.

Eye gouging, near-glowing levels of bright neon orange.

The note from Simmy implied this was due to orange being a complimentary color with her own blue, but Adam was pretty sure she was going for a day/night thing, with orange similar to the sun and blue similar to blue moons.

Or they were going the Baku-Ranger route and trying to get one Simmy of every color.

Point was, Simmy was grounded for being a bad girl.

And she was now being ignored as best as Adam could, because she decided that being grounded required bondage gear and a paper dunce cap. Which she made more sensual than her standard nudity ensemble, somehow.

Ignoring her pout, he (again) gave her an oversized cloak and turned to watch the ongoing storms, his left arm slightly compressing into gore before recovering.

After another day or so, this planet should be stable enough for him to head home and set up some quests for people to show up here and plant the gardens and bring animals for the farms. A dimensionally secured food source would be both profitable AND a good long term investment... almost all living things needed to eat, after all.

He paused, the blood from his exploded eye cleared as his body recovered. He HAD remembered to tell Taylor that she and Queen were the Administrators for all Quests in their home Realm, right?

Because that seemed semi-important.

He blinked as Taylor jerked awake in her chair, tossing the quilt wildly to the side. "Ugh! Leave me alone, you perverted crystal menace! And no more porn injected into my brain, it is hard enough adjusting to my new body without you throwing my hormones in every direction!"

Adam lightly coughed, causing Taylor to freeze. "All that aside, I need to tell you a couple of things and have you make a quick decision Taylor."

She turned and stared at him. "You... didn't hear anything right?"

He lied solemnly. "Of course not." Standing, he ignored his leg dissolving into a bloody mist and reforming. "Back on point, I've been rebuilding this planet Queen Administrator owns as a home base for you and your new position as System Administrator for this Realm."

Ignoring her confusion, he turned to Simmy. "And you need to unsummon, hopefully that will stabilize me enough that I can get us both back home with no issues."

Taylor blinked as the Angel vanished. "Was she wearing a ball gag?"

He nodded. "Yeah, it felt a bit odd considering she almost never speaks anyway, but whatever makes her happy. Happy wife is happy life, and all that."

Taylor's stunned expression was irrelevant. "Now, I am mentally decaying from being in this Realm a bit too long without stopping by my home reality. This normally happens at a very slow rate, but your Realm is stupid close to my home and thus the damage is much greater."

She blinked as he somehow shifted both of them into a massive city, the area they had been relaxing in no longer protected and almost instantly flooded from the held back fresh water ocean. "So I will set up a 'Transfer Node' and bring you home to see your mom, two dads, and younger sister. Also, I kidnapped your dad and sent him to my home reality first. Pretty sure I mentioned that earlier. You coming with me is your choice, by the way."

He did what!?

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Little Taylor looked up at her mom. And dad. And older dad.

To be fair, the three adults seemed off balance as well.

She nodded. "So I got two dads like Shelly does, but I ALSO got a mommy and dad, and now a mommy/dad/dad combo?"

Annette seemed to be considering something. "Maybe. The boss DID go through the trouble of bringing me an extra Danny and enhancing his body back to prime condition."

Her dad groaned while her new OLD dad seemed to feel awkward. "God, this reminds me of her 'experiments' back in college."

Old dad blinked. "You mean with Janet and her sisters? Or that time she wanted to 'check out the Lustrum hotties'?"

Danny sighed. "No, the 'harem' incident. With our old band?"

Mom blushed. "Right! Story time over, bed time Taylor! Boss Variance says your older Sister will be visiting fairly soon and you don't want to miss that!"

She frowned. "But we just had lunch..."

Annette nodded. "Right, that's practically nightfall, off you trot. You two hunks stay here, we'll talk after."

She sighed and allowed herself to pushed towards her bedroom. Adults were weird.

On the positive side, she was pretty sure this meant more presents during her birthdays. And having an older sister could be cool, Emma's was pretty awesome.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

In the secured receiving facility 'Guild Hall' constructed by Narwhal and Dragon, the alter with a plush Baku glowed with a massive blue Aura... which formed into an enormous glowing blue skull, mouth slowly opening.

Adam collapsed from its jaws, a refined woman with curling brown hair gently stepping out from the same maw.

His body twitched HARD, then seemed to snap back together. "Ow."

Taylor blinked, turning back to watch a flaming blue Skull fade away into mist. "That was creepy as hell."

A digital voice popped in. "Good afternoon Variance, Hero Queen Administrator." The body on the floor groaned as Dragon's hologram formed. "Would you mind waiting for us to ensure Adam is fully recovered before visiting your family? If something goes wrong, he would be best to handle it."

Taylor sighed, her identity not exactly secret if one of the most powerful beings she had ever heard of had already gathered her dad and dropped him off here. "Sure, and I guess you can call me Taylor. Are you also married to the skeleton dude?"

She shook her head. "My sister is, I am happy enough with my boyfriend. Would you like to rest and have some refreshments while we wait?"

As the two were led to another room, Narwhal had already gathered Adam and pulled him to a couch. "Oh baby, you didn't tell me the damage was this bad..."

Adam weakly waved a hand, half skeletal. "I'm not actually hurt, it just feels like... I am off balance. Like the flat ground is a swinging tightrope." He carefully patted her shoulder, his hand off target and mind already starting to fall asleep. "I'll be find, gind. Fine. Simmy was keeping an eye on me. Oh, but you guys have to keep her grounded, she ate some Endbringers and was a bad girl."

Narwhal blinked. "What?"

He felt... so tired. "And her new twin is orange and I don't know why." Just... a bit more sleep. "Tell Taylor she needs to use her power some more to gain control of her new body. Or else she will bite through her silverware and stuff. And that she should breathe more often to look normal. And not to breathe water, even if she could now, cause it freaks people out."

Her hand brushed his hair. "Shh, we will handle it all when you wake up."

He felt the darkness swell up. "Yeah... yeah. And I think Taylor may be an immortal gestalt consciousness now with a magical rock partner? I... I think I told her. I... I may have done some stupid things."

A soft kiss on his forehead. "We girls can handle it."

His protests fell off as he relaxed into Narwhal's warm embrace, the soft allure of sleep calling his weary mind.

Sometimes heaven is just coming home.
 
Last edited:
One of the things I like about this story is that adam always comes back to his 'home world' after an arc is done. It's nice because unlile many multicross stories most of the cool charecters and charecter interactions are preserved. So you can keep coming back and doing the same routines but it doesn't get stale because there's a bunch of cool adventures in between.
 
An ocean planet where there's always a storm... with cities on columns?
Adam, did you just make Kamino?

And of course the happy reunion between Annette, Danny and Danny ended up lewd.
Because of course.

Can't wait for the Queens meeting!
 
Last edited:
Her dad groaned while her new OLD dad seemed to feel awkward. "God, this reminds me of her 'experiments' back in college."

Old dad blinked. "You mean with Janet and her sisters? Or that time she wanted to 'check out the Lustrum hotties'?"

Danny sighed. "No, the 'harem' incident. With our old band?"

Mom blushed. "Right! Story time over, bed time Taylor! Boss Variance says your older Sister will be visiting fairly soon and you don't want to miss that!"

She frowned. "But we just had lunch..."
Awkward Parent History 101. :lol:
 
I got nothing to say to this, my wisdom can only go so far,this is ridicules, o boi here I go again tho I wonder how I can spin my next epic prophesy
 
Girl Talk.
Narwhal noted Twilight's attendance and brought the group to order. "Right, now that we are all here, we need to touch base a bit."

Nightmare Moon sighed, her mostly human body shifting in her comfortable chair. "The new developer interfaces that Adam designed are amazing alone, and have simplified administration of the System, but I've been hearing a number of issues with the new 'Dungeon' feature regardless. My fans have been sending me messages and even actual prayers about issues, which I have been forwarding to the research department."

Twilight was already distracted on her side of the table, having also adopted human form over the last few months for their greatest achievement: Hands.

Sonia Lagarde had two aids bringing her needed paperwork even during this meeting, and was attending through holographic projection. "Adam's businesses are doing well enough, but the negotiated 'Quest Request Fee' has been a surprise income boost for this quarter, taxation for it will be a bit annoying but I've got my people on it."

She leaned forward. "That said, there is a large subsection similar to a trade network being set up interdimensionally now thanks to the Dungeon options. We've named it the 'Item Shop' and 'Auction House' for historical and cultural reasons. Or to be honest, some of my girls are geeks and thought it was an awesome idea."

Narwhal accepted the hard-light hologram documentation as Sonia continued. "There is an additional delivery fee to other Realms than ours, but it is negligible. I do want Adam to open up his Dungeon system to Remnant though, the RWBY Realm has a massive untapped market and Adam's 'Desert Garden Zoo' resort is the perfect place to set up as a Quest hub and commerce center."

Narwhal hummed. "And it would give our guild members training in combat, as I'm sure no one would mind our people killing Grimm over there. Especially since Adam took out some of the most dangerous and large ones."

CD tapped the table. "Sonia has asked Dragon and me if we could offer more products for Adam's business to manufacture. And we've had mixed results."

Dragon nodded. "We've been following the technological advancements being submitted from Remnant, since the upgrades to System allow messaging without having to bother Adam all the time. Robo and Boro. as well as the AI under them, have been talking about it a bit... but none of them have been able to duplicate Dust on their own yet despite the available schematics."

CD pulled up some reference charts. "Not too surprising for Robo's team or Shirley Temple's platforms, as the Star Wars Realm has MORE than enough high level energies already, but hopefully Boro's people will make some advancements now that Adam has helped Taylor convert her power into Dust."

Narwhal winced. "Just as a heads up, I don't want to send our people physically to the Star Wars Realm until we can protect them from the influence of the Force better." Not to mention any kids from there born in THIS Realm may infect this reality with the Force as well. "Right, Dragon, you've been helping Taylor adjust. How is she doing?"

The cyborg hologram sighed. "Not well. A lot of friends and coworkers died over the years and the poor thing had never really had down time to fully accept that. It doesn't help that many of them still exist in this reality, although apparently her local versions of her family have been VERY accepting of the situation."

She hummed. "So at least she will have some emotional support from them?"

Dragon chuckled. "Assuming that Annette leaves her extra-dimensional husband alone long enough. Little Taylor has been exchanging System messages with Taylor for hours now at least, and seems MORE than excited. The interactions seemed to help."

Narwhal paused. "Wait, how can Taylor be in the System? Wouldn't that convert Queen Administrator automatically?"

Twilight looked up from her work. "Ah, we were concerned too, but it turned out that Taylor has NOT joined the System." She went back to modifying the report she was reviewing. "Queen Administrator decided to join instead."

Narwhal felt her cyber twin body developing a twitch. What. The. Hell.

She sighed. "Moving on, Simmy, can you get Betty out of..."

The bright orange angel looked innocent. The bright blue angel looked smug.

Narwhal glared. "I can't call you both Simmy, and I won't put up with months of shenanigans where you two play up the confusion. Pick a name or I will make up silly ones for you."

Two slips of paper, one blue, one orange, fell to the table.

She picked them up. "Right, so Simurgh 'Simmy' Burns and Simurgh 'Sammy' Burns. Cause Simmy and Sammy won't get confusing." She sighed, the two nude beauties far too self satisfied. "EITHER of you, how do we get Betty out of Adam's Grid of Confinement without bothering the man or hurting her? He is far too tired to wake up for this, but we need to get the poor girl some supplies."

Simmy nodded, Sammy grinning in the background, and both held their arms out... and 'Transfer' pulsed as a blue skull faded into view. From the illusion of an open maw a confused cow Faunus stumbled into the room. "What!?"

Narwhal jumped from her seat and wrapped the unstable woman in a tight hug. "Betty! I'm so glad you are alright after that rough journey. How was your trip?"

Brown eyes blinked. "Narwhal?" She hesitantly returned the hug. "I... it was very confusing. For a while, I was in some field with grass everywhere, and... I mean, it felt dream like. I didn't get tired or hungry or thirsty... in a way it was soothing I guess."

Noticing the crowd over Narwhal's shoulder, she paused. "Uh. Hello everyone!"

Nightmare snorted. "At least Adam has good taste in women, I was not impressed by that Sienna Khan gal."

CD gently gave the Alicorn/Currently Human seductress a side hug. "Don't be like that, the poor girl had been in a leadership position during a massive crisis. I'm sure she had other sides to her personality than sexual aggression."

Betty giggled. "Not really, it's why she made a female harem to begin with. Not that we complained too much, mind you, but there is a reason why my former Boss hadn't passed the reins yet to the next generation."

Twilight was mentally out of it, but she absently tried to contribute anyway. "I don't really approve of reins because of how tricky they can be to use safely, there are better sexual aids honestly."

Narwhal held back a giggle. "Quite so." Leading Betty to a chair, she began introductions. "You've been roughly introduced from our messaging while you were back in your home realm, but just in case..."

It only took a few minutes to introduce each woman to the Faunus, although she did pause on one. "Sonia Lagarde you did not meet due to her own very busy schedule, but she is Adam's business woman and the boss of his financial, soon to be multidimensional empire."

Sonia's smile was wide. "I've been told you have contacts with the livestock market on Remnant? Because Adam very recently acquired a number of untenanted farms that also need quite a few animals and multiple types of plant life. Interested in getting some stable income and a bit of a political base in THIS reality as well?"

From Betty's wide grin, the two would get along swimmingly.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Taylor felt Queen Administrator analyzing the many creatures and electronics as she relaxed in her temporary guest quarters. Not commanding them at the moment, just learning from scratch how to 'Administrate' without the overwhelming support of an Entity incursion dimensional fracture web installation. The bugs came easily enough, she had the memories to help Queen cheat when doing the tests, but rats and so forth took much longer, especially because the provided facilities were surprisingly clean for a vary large radius.

Though connecting her mind to the router had been a hell of a drug trip. It took Queen hours to take the random screaming data and format it into something Taylor's mind could treat like using a computer, instead of seeing binary and tasting wireless interference.

So thanks to some messed up meta-shard clusters cobbled together by Queen, Taylor was now mentally browsing the local version of ParaHumans Online and the rest of the horrors the internet had to share. Dozens of Taylors, each mind exploring the vast expanse of the digital age. Which turned out to be mostly porn, but that seemed normal for any unregulated communication service.

ANOTHER message came in, through System. From little-girl-Taylor. And for the record, Taylor didn't remember being that adorable at ALL. Seriously, her little self had big anime eyes and everything.

With a deep sigh and an eager giggle from Queen, she opened it.

And could barely understand the message. Again.

[Ooh! I've never used that method of prioritizing lists of actions based on human limits of patience, resource availability, and threat rating! I mean, sure it is 0.312% less effective than my current policies, but then again I never took emotional turmoil into my calculations before. Your Little Human is so adorable!]

Sibling, they are called siblings. And I think dimensional versions of self are like step-siblings or something. Probably not cousins.

[Right, Type this to her, and maybe include some of my theories on how to allocate resources based on theoretical needs verses reported issues.]

Groaning, Taylor was half way into typing the letters into the System interface illusion showed by Queen when she paused. "Wait, YOU'RE the one directly connected to the System, why aren't YOU typing it!?"

Suspicious silence.

VERY suspicious.

With a growl, Taylor reached with her soul Avatar to shake Queen Administrator's shoulders in frustration... when she slipped slightly on the crystal surface of the planet.

And pulled.

Taylor was completely squished as Queen Administrator's Purity Dust Crystal Avatar form appeared over her own body, falling without style while squeaking in surprise.

Queen was confused.

[What the... How did you... Wait. Your real body is in my soul while this is your Avatar!? No, they are both real and I am both real and... No, neither of us is real any more. Or not. What did you DO!?]

Taylor was confused.

Taylor blinked, a surprisingly warm and attractive nude crystal representation of her powers holding her down. "I... I'm not sure?"

Gently pushing her partner off, the crystal angel vanished back into her soul.

Taylor nodded. "I am completely not sure."

But no matter what, she WAS sure that she wasn't going to be typing multiple page conversations to miniature versions of herself anymore. Especially if she could pull Queen Administrator out of her soul 'inventory' like a sandwich. Seriously, Taylor had nearly gone spar having to type up those very complicated AND very boring conversations.

[ACK! There was two of me in here and now we are one of me and I think I ate myself!]

Whatever, less typing for Taylor.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Ghira blinked at the message on his Scroll. "Why the hell does Betty want to buy so many animals?"

Kali shrugged, cuddling with little Blake who seemed distracted by nothing. "Probably another farm Adam is building. The guy got stuck in a loop after a while, we have more produce being grown in our various new cities than we can physically harvest at this point. Without his systems to keep the things from rotting I'm sure the nation would smell very funky by now."

Her husband grumbled. "Well, at least he came up with a fix for THAT issue. He has a bunch of people that are willing to travel here to accomplish various 'Quests' that we can submit. According to the email, the cost for transportation and the majority of the rewards will be handled by Adam for us, even if the other Kingdoms will have to include a bit of a fee."

She hummed, booping Blake's adorable nose. "He has been more than just a good friend to us and our people. Did Betty mention how she's settling in?"

Ghira sighed and forwarded the attached messages to the various people in Betty's circle. Apparently the communication method between wherever the heck Adam went and here made direct messaging a complicated affair. Well, whatever works.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Adam floated in sleep, the ever long arms of Squishy cradling his form as he recovered.

It would take time.

Her own small, pudgy Avatar was floating through the Crystal Castle, visiting the deepest region and the spark within.

Thankfully, it had begun to stabilize.

Best not to risk visiting a Realm so similar for a long while though, because towards the end Squishy had to begin allocating vital resources to suppressing the damage caused by the trip. It hadn't gotten too risky... but it had been approaching dangerous levels of concern.

Her motions paused as she carefully moved to the second concern, the Grid of Confinement.

Simmy and Sammy could enter and leave as desired, their cell unlocked by Adam back when Simmy was an only child, but once again Squishy carefully examined each prisoner.

Simmy had allocated the harvested Endbringer Crystal Clusters to each of the three, enhancing Behemoth and Leviathan to higher levels and raising their intelligence to something like animal level. It couldn't compare to the massive amounts hoarded for her and her sister of course, but just in case Squishy checked each cell to ensure that any soul instability caused by the recent events would not risk confinement compromise. Or in other words, unwanted escapes.

Thankfully, the improvements added to ensure Betty's safe transport had enhanced the general stability of the Grid as a whole. It all seemed secure.

She patted the cell with Mister G, the rumbling purr causing Adam's soul to slightly vibrate. At least he was doing well.

With her blue eye watching Adam's soul, she went back to directing his recovery process. As many advancements as he had made so far, on the most fundamental level he was still a bit on shaky ground. Too much progress in one area could actually cause further damage in others. They would have to discuss which area of advancement for him to work on in the future, at least until the risk was lower. Maybe helping out with the new DA Guild...

Yes, with certain limitations so that she could use those recovered resources to enhance healing, it would allow her to speed up his recovery process without forcing the poor boy to sit in a hospital somewhere for a few months.

Because letting Adam get bored had proven to be a bit problematic in the past. Best head it off early on.

Sending a System message to Narwhal and the girls, Squishy went back to work using power charges being generated to further stabilize his recovering mind and soul. They could find SOMETHING for him to do that didn't require redesigning planets, invading other Realms, or saving nations from being consumed by monsters. Probably.
 
Last edited:
300k Length!
Finally, my story has reached 300k!

I am so glad to get out of the 'Short Story' word length region, but I didn't want to try and force random stuff to pad out the numbers.

Sadly, this is only my second story to hit the mark, mostly due to how annoying it is to get the notes for 'Unlimited Gamer' into a digital format, but at least it feels like a good accomplishment to me.

I guess I should mention that I won't be updating next week until after Xmas, though I do plan to have one for tomorrow.

Happy Holidays everyone!
 
Wait what? This is a 300k word story? I've read all of the chapters but it didn't feel so long or clunky like other big stories I've read.... Huh, good job author
 
Sadly, this is only my second story to hit the mark, mostly due to how annoying it is to get the notes for 'Unlimited Gamer' into a digital format, but at least it feels like a good accomplishment to me.
Any chance you could get around to posting a couple more chapters of Unlimited Gamer?, I found it a few days ago and was disapointed that it was unfinished.
 
Am I the only one who thought Adam created an afterlife when betty popped up? Actually with all the faith/worship why doesn't he? Where do his 'worshippers' go when they die?
 
[ACK! There was two of me in here and now we are one of me and I think I ate myself!]
😂 Okay, that caught me off guard... and I think I scared the dog with that laugh.
Finally, my story has reached 300k!
🎉 Congratulations! 🥳
I am so glad to get out of the 'Short Story' word length region,
:o Wait, what? :confused:
richiebilling.com said:
Average length of a short story
Short stories come in a range of lengths, usually up to around 7-8,000 words, but as many as 17,500 (though as we'll see below this strays into the realm of novelettes).
Reference: richiebilling.com

thewritelife.com said:
From thewritelife.com.

The following are average word-count ranges by genre.

General Fiction
Fiction Genres
  • Mainstream Romance: 70,000–100,000 words
  • Subgenre Romance: 40,000–100,000 words
  • Science Fiction / Fantasy: 90,000–120,000 (and sometimes 150,000) words
  • Historical Fiction: 80,000–100,000
  • Thrillers / Horror / Mysteries / Crime: 70,000–90,000 words
  • Young Adult: 50,000–80,000
Children's Books
  • Picture Books: 300–800 words
  • Early Readers: 200–3500 words
  • Chapter Books: 4000–10,000 words
  • Middle Grade: 25,000–40,000 words
Nonfiction
  • Standard Nonfiction (Business, Political Science, Psychology, History, etc.): 70,000–80,000 words
  • Memoir: 80,000–100,000 words
  • Biography: 80,000–200,000 words
  • How-to / Self-Help: 40,000–50,000 words
I think you're safely past a normal trilogy length. 😳
 
6,577 more messages…
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top