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i dont give a fiddle-fuck if im late chatyot, i am wishing this man a lucky year because by jove he earned it
 
I'm sort-of reminded of the God-Emperor of Man on his throne. Praise the Omnissiah!
Seriously though, I'm glad to hear you seem to be over the worst hurdle.
 
Gratz on being more well, always a good thing to approach that goal in some fashion or another.

Given that the pump has an intake, it must likewise have an output. And given that the pump is in an artificial device within a biological system, by definition the medical device falls well within the category of 'cybernetic jetpack'.

I wouldn't guess it works well at all, but you have to start somewhere. Baby steps.
 
I wonder if Adam is going to take the bad Benefactor to the equivalent of Benefactors court of law, i mean sara is considered a Benefactor child and if that's enough Benefactors they whould of set up a law/rules system
 
And not a new one. It's been speculated, several times, before whence the subject matter were introduced. {edit} Ace has been mum as to the answer thus far.
 
Just saying, I'm getting serious Cthulhu vibes from Squishy. Anyone else feel the same? Or am I just missing something entirely?
 
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ya bro iv been hearing crickets chirping in here for ages man btw has your infection cleared up and healed cause from the way you described it was vary nasty
 
Bruh im pretty late, but i iust got a account, good story i hope you get better. Dont die, this is one of my favorite storys, therefore you have to finish it ok? Ok!
 
It's highly unlikely that Ace is in danger of death. However, like many an author before and since him. Whenever he is not engaged by the audience, or otherwise has a vested interest in his own work; he gets bored and wonders off to do... whatever. He's done it with his HP story on fanfiction, and the gamer one. And it appears that its finally happened here. The biggest reason I've not raised a stink about it myself, is that he is also one of the exceedingly few authors that doesn't try to pass off their disinterest in continuing their work as "issues IRL." So at least he's an honest bloke, that just has a habit of writing till he's bored and then wonders off.

I... honestly don't have anything else I can think of to encourage another stab at the story like I've done in posts past. Without it being completely obvious that I was trying to entice another chapter, or more, from him. And to pass on advice that I've received from mods both here and on SB... don't beg, it's apparently intrusive to other members lives to beg for new chapters, no matter how long it's been since an update. Weirdly though, I've been the only member I can recall getting an infraction for it in the five years I've been a member.
 
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It's highly unlikely that Ace is in danger of death. However, like many an author before and since him, whenever he is not engaged by the audience, or otherwise has a vested interest in his own work; he gets bored and wonders off to do... whatever.
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I can't be the only one who read this and immediately made a connection to the very contents of this thread's story.
 
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