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So, 2-3 decades then? maybe 4 on the outside??
So... the next century?
*blinks*:eyebrow: Itn't that a bit overly optimistic, ya think? First, unless drastic measures are taken, the US... she ain't a getting any better. Secondly, there's always a global pandemic, so yeah... and then the economy... again, drastic measures, any better. So, I'd have ta ask by what metric were you two using? Or were you working of Imperial, cause that'd explain it without needing da details.

[edit] *blinks some more* and holy crap being half asleep makes me slur my lingo... I think i'm counting three... three or four different slang accents in dere... there.
 
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So if they create memes would they eventually be considered mnemonic hazards? Sorta like a jingle you can't get out of your head.
 
Eventually, these tattoos are going to become a second System, like Adam Prime set up in Worm. I just know it. All the prime cultivation locations are going to be eternally tapped and stored in the soul-cloud. The energy will be portioned out to those who can best cultivate with it, of course. Given the "trading" feature, it may instead have Energy become a Currency, with certain cultivation levels being granted a "stipend" of energy beyond what they gather themselves, and being able to trade the energy for more material cultivation resources. Maybe even have the "cloud" convert the energy as to the holder's best type, so a person that uses Fire energy can trade to a person that uses Water energy, yet still have it be "useful" energy for each of their cultivation.
Its been a little while so im not sure if this was the reason but i feel like i remember adam mentioning that he went to this reality for the fact it is CONCEPTUAL and so would help improve his system in worm so it happening here too isn't too bad but i doubt it will work out the greatest without the smurgh.
 
Adam: I hate having to put my phone in my pocket, it's annoying.
That's why i turned this tattoo into a pocket that's also a phone with internet access and a store.

Live the dream, never leave your cultivator couch ever again, you won't even have to bump into a protagonist in the streets anymore to become needlessly violent, you can now trashtalk someone from 12 realms away!

Buy a MyFace today and join our forum discussions on who should give who more face! (This has a dedicated Forum, terms and services do apply)
 
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Almost the internet. Basically just forums and audio / videos for now.
Needs to give the burning sect a version with the option to make 'websites' and games etc. Maybe make new programs with some safeties.
Eventually, these tattoos are going to become a second System, like Adam Prime set up in Worm. I just know it. All the prime cultivation locations are going to be eternally tapped and stored in the soul-cloud. The energy will be portioned out to those who can best cultivate with it, of course. Given the "trading" feature, it may instead have Energy become a Currency, with certain cultivation levels being granted a "stipend" of energy beyond what they gather themselves, and being able to trade the energy for more material cultivation resources. Maybe even have the "cloud" convert the energy as to the holder's best type, so a person that uses Fire energy can trade to a person that uses Water energy, yet still have it be "useful" energy for each of their cultivation.

They are already a bit like a System. Just with different limits, more fluid/natural.

It is already better than the internet in certain ways. An always updating, full vr with mind reading that is always with you.
That you can use to trade stuff with.
It already has the option for 'websites'. Full video, audio, text, thought and emotions that you can view somewhere. (It might need people edit and gather information to form them, but everybody can make their own homepages etc.)

If you can think up a game, that too could be stored. (Though it might be more simple games at the start. There is a netflix movie, which is kinda like a game to give an example.)

If the marks go to children, he might have made a new 'bloodline'.

And may have made the Sister in the other sect, an accidental subsect.
She now has the power to give everyone she wants a free storage ring tattoo with extra features.

That kinda power, will increase her power in her sect.

In time, anyone who is part of her alliance will have the 'storage'. Thus increasing the power balance towards her and her allies.
(Those who distrust it, and the possible alliance will either over time, want the advantages it gets, or get left behind)
The sword sect has the better storage set, and communication with this limited set, and thus power balance there is similar.

And this came from this sect as well. So the alliance between the sects will grow stronger over time as well. (The elder sister in the smaller sect, would also be the best candidate as ambassador.)
 
Exactly! How are we supposed to explore SPAAACE!! with this if it stops working when it gets next door?
Not sure if space even exists in this universe, because of the whole 'realms within realms' and 'realms of different sizes' thing.
That and space travel seems uncommon, so its more likely to be more about dimension traveling.
So if they create memes would they eventually be considered mnemonic hazards? Sorta like a jingle you can't get out of your head.
I mean better too strict than not strict enough when it comes to mnemonic hazards. But considering what adam can do its likely if it does block memes he will be able to fix it before he leaves.
From what I was getting it was less VR and more like memories, and seemingly non-interactive for now
I wouldn't put down 'VR' till you can do something with it thats not just viewing memories. Like meetings and games and hangouts etc.
If your talking about them seeing the memories sort of like its their own memories thats quite useful yes.
However if your talking about how you control this system with your mind, then thats not particularly useful until you can do something with the system thats not the same as messaging or stuff you can do with a remote.
All it really does for now is make it so that you can type faster, and be kinda cool.
That you can use to trade stuff with.
Something I didn't really think about but yes this is a HUGE deal.
Its too bad Adam didn't think to have their tattoos absorb all the energy in an area and send/trade the energy that the cultivator wouldn't use to other cultivators that could use it.
It already has the option for 'websites'. Full video, audio, text, thought and emotions that you can view somewhere. (It might need people edit and gather information to form them, but everybody can make their own homepages etc.)
From what I got websites aren't really able to be made yet.
Theres 3 options I can see right now.
1. Upload memories (youtube)
2. Open Forums where anyone can reply
3. Private messaging.
Which is a good start, but needs a little more till it can function like the internet does.
 
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From what I got websites aren't really able to be made yet.
Theres 3 options I can see right now.
1. Upload memories (youtube)
2. Open Forums where anyone can reply
3. Private messaging.
Which is a good start, but needs a little more till it can function like the internet does.
Add in a wiki area for the repositories
And being able to send a t-mail (tattoo mail?) with an attachment being something in your inventory. That there will make trade trips pretty much unnecessary.

I bet his sect will want all future tattoos to have the Burning Sect Tm added into the mark.

He needs to make it a subscriber system: You can only download as much from the repository as you have added, or paid for by sending goods/coin in to the central service site.
Earn more by sending new plant/animal samples to Adam_BSage@BurningSect.com !

And then there is that thought that if you can store something and send it, can you store YOURSELF and send to another member. Poof! Releportation (that was a typo btw, but it sort of works).
 
Wait till the first person makes and posts a cat picture... then it will be a dot com bubble burst all over again.

Bonus points if the cat is cute WHILE cultivating.
 
thanks fragnostic you just gave me a super cute mental image of a small cat sized cat humanoid kitty cultivating being cute as all can be the bonus is that it was imagined to be puuring while doing so
 
So... the next century?
Never. The US has, from the very beginning, existed in a state of constantly morphing chaos.
It is one of our charms.
Or just a distraction.
Maybe ask if he can make "normal" Gatorade to go with the "normal" water.
thanks fragnostic you just gave me a super cute mental image of a small cat sized cat humanoid kitty cultivating being cute as all can be the bonus is that it was imagined to be puuring while doing so
Given the nature of the world, the most likely is conceptual cute energy that can be cultivated.
 
Huh… Huh! Ah, but– Ooh… Oh my.

I think that Adam is now no more than two steps away from breaking the entire setting. Because, you know how The Internet is super amazing and all that stuff? Well. The Internet mostly runs off of centralized servers for each website. (That's a simplification, but bear with me.) That's basically the way that the Master Pocket Tattoos he gave Dian and her kids is organized. But I strongly suspect that it doesn't have to be, from a technical perspective. This is the big part: He could conceivably create a peer-to-peer (P2P) version of the Master Pocket Tattoo (MPT), that grants each user the ability to do MPT activities with anyone else with a MPT, but to also gift anyone with they meet with an MPT as well. Give it a few year for compounding effects to kick in, and you have a change of setting to a "magical" cyberpunk story. Because those discussion forums would be top tier excellent for research groups to form and communicate ideas and knowledge with extreme fidelity. And because humans are humans, even if the MPT initially starts off with hard coded filters, someone will figure out how to break them, and turn it towards erotic entertainment. The amazing boon to research that is the Forums, will actually make this a far faster thing to pull off.

Also, I do not envy Sister Dian, when all of those kids hit puberty.

The MPT kinda reminds me of Memory Orbs from the Fallout: Equestria, if it were somehow combined with a souped-up hammerspace, and the Grand Exchange from Runescape, along with the Internet, and a (storage?) Device from Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha. I was going to say that it's like an idealized conceptual version of The Internet. But it goes beyond that. Sure, you can play fantasy games with magical themes on the Internet, but the Internet can't actually store magical energy for you; not in this reality anyway. (That I know of…)

But I think that's all I have to say on the MPT.

It has occurred to me recently that Adam's 'Research' ability, is kind of like an Artificial Neural Network, or "AI" as people have recently been erroneously referring to it. (Artificial Neural Network is in contrast to a natural Neural Network, like what can be found in your own skull.) The way that Adam has been feeding all those examples of storage ring formations and Master Pockets, to 'Research', is exactly how one trains an Artificial Neural Network. Only, I think that 'Research' must be enhanced quite a bit beyond the normal abilities of an Artificial Neural Network, because it seems a lot better at understanding Context, and avoiding other problems that Artificial Neural Networks are prone to falling for. Maybe it's interconnected with Adam's brain to utilize his understanding of tricky subjects like Context, and Benefit/Harm. Hmm. I'm not really trying to go anywhere with this observation, so I'll just leave it there.

Oh! I wonder when Tianshi is going to get her own version of the MPT, and how Mr. Whiskers would react to it.
 
Arc 2: Goal Consideration.
Sister Quan carefully moved towards the Pasture Caverns... Rockette mentioned he would be here.

She heard Adam before she saw him. "You guys just wait, once I finish the really COOL modules... and maybe some sort of transportation method, I don't like all this traveling really. Shouldn't be too hard to use a space pocket with two openings to act like a hallway, even if the calculations look horrible. Yes it does, yes it does!"

She crept up... and saw Adam laying on his back the four Bull Chicken baby's playing in his blue flames while he shook one over his head. "Sure the bubbles keep popping, but eventually I can stabilize the stupid things to handle more than one connection at a time. Or maybe I can connect one of those time pockets, so that I can close off the damn things without everyone inside being frozen in place..."

She held back a giggle as Adam gently moved the Bull Chicken (Bicken? Sure, the Bicken.) off his face, the furry thing having climbed onto his head to better chew his hair. "I can sort of understand not including the modules that were unstable, or the ones that automate complicated stuff with excessive Qi being supplied rather than doing all the stuff I do when activating them... But still, I have all those workshop modules!"

The Bicken being held in the air seemed happy to lick the boy's arms, the blue flames rolling along. Adam sighed, pulling the tiny thing into a hug. "It's going to suck when you weigh two tons. Maybe I should modify you guys to just stay cute forever. Rockette knows you're dumb enough not to care either way, even if you are geniuses compared to your parents."

Sister Quan cleared her throat. "Brother Adam?"

He froze, mid cuddle. "...Can we pretend I was doing something super manly when you walked in? Like, bench pressing a boulder or something?"

Her grin answered him fast enough. He shrugged. "Well, whatever. How are the kids liking their new toys?"

She chuckled, and sat next to him to pet the babies. "They love them, of course. The lead guard said we are getting something similar?"

Adam sighed. "Yeah, but unlike THEIR stuff ours is less restricted. And because it is 'so impressive'" He grumbled. "We are going to have to stay in the next big city we hit so our guards can report in, get instructions, and send ANOTHER emergency message. Apparently our Sect has outposts in most major places in their territory with special equipment for situations like this."

He paused. "Well, not like THIS, exactly. I doubt most people can predict the stuff I get up to, really. But once Elder Cho has a Master Pocket Tattoo of her own, we can message her, send cool stuff we find, and securely send anything else later on. Should fix a lot of problems."

Sister Quan nudged his shoulder. "That's all nice, but I just want to let you know that I found it cool. That it was and is an amazing creation." She chuckled. "Even if the scope of potential terrifies me. It is a bit disturbing how you can reorganize society by trying to help children cultivate more easily."

Adam squeezed his Bicken... and both of them paused when it let out a little high pitch 'Merr'.

He grinned. "Now THAT was adorable. I should design more cute things."

Sister Quan poked him. "No. So... can I have one of these new tattoo things?"

Adam sighed. "Later. I think I am close to finishing the Workshop Modules... It projects tools, counters, some gadgets, an oven or two, sinks... all kinds of stuff!"

He grinned. "The kitchen Workshop not only has space to prepare food, but custom space pocket connections that you can connect to different sources. Like... not NOW, it isn't working right. The work around requires an interface layer that requests items and ensures nothing tries to open an already used address because... uh."

A wince. "Yeah, very dangerous. But once I get it all finished, tested, tested MORE, add some more safeties and design methods of failure that won't hurt anyone... THEN I can finish our designs. The blacksmith Workshop was WAY easier in comparison... You can even store projects away in smaller pockets and come back later!"

She blinked. "That sounds... good?"

Adam sighed. "Well, honestly everything is modular. So I could just give you what I got now with no problems, and let you change your modules around at a later time."

He tried to pull the other Bicken into a hug with his current one. "But uh. I want you to see the final product, you know? Show you something impressive."

Daww. Sister Quan hugged the blushing boy. "You already HAVE done something impressive... but I understand. Feel free to wait until you feel its ready to show off, alright?"

The pair relaxed in the fire red fields, playing with the baby Bickens, and just wasting time.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

It was rare for all the guards to be having a meeting... but it was nighttime, the camp was (theoretically) being protected by the young cultivators of the Frozen Tiger Sect, and the three Burning Sword Sect members were all inside Rockette, the safest place available.

The lead guard tapped the table. "We can't suppress this information. Not fully. Too many witnesses, not allowed to end them, and if we DID somehow pull it off without being caught by Brother Adam, Rockette would know anyway."

A round of grumbling. A guard sighed. "I can't believe we already used the emergency cube... and less than a week later, needed a SECOND one. I've never HEARD of them being used before, not recently at least!"

Her neighbor chuckled. "At least this most recent headache will let us warn the Sect in the future without destroying a new cube every week."

One of the more pessimistic guards was not as happy. "Until the Blood Drinking Sect or the Demon Flame Sect begins torturing more people to get their hands on the things."

The lead guard waved that off. "The young Sage walked me through the defenses of this new tattoo... that will not be an issue." She waves at the mark on her neck. "Aside from the abilities of the mark itself, Adam's version currently being tested directly connects to Rockette, his Soul, and our Soul. If an enemy somehow gains access to the damn tattoo... well, it will be handled. And probably everything they know will be stolen, all spiritual energy drained, and their soul consumed."

Several guards cursed. "Shit. And what if he did that to US?"

The more optimistic guards chuckled. "Brother Sage could do that NOW, without the mark, and there is little we could do to stop him. That boy can just shove raw power into someone, yank it out, or just unleash that damn eye on you and wipe your mind."

Her neighbor nodded. "The child COULD, but likely would find that boring and annoying or inconvenient to do. He spends more time testing stuff and whatnot than he does cultivating... not that he isn't a prodigy in THAT as well."

The lead guard waved them to silence. "The next city is on Mount Kirin, I will personally meet with out people in the Burning Sword embassy." She glared at them. "You WILL be professional while I take care of this. You WILL guard our people, and the people that Brother Adam took under his wing while I am absent. Understood?"

Nods.

She frowned. "I. Said. Understood?"

They stood. "YES SIR!"

Good. "I don't expect any issues, which is even MORE of a reason to be cautious. Adam attracts impossible things, I do NOT want to be surprised by the next one if possible. Are you following our current policies?"

The other squad nodded. "One with a blindfold, one with earplugs, one using spiritual sensing, one watching the camp rather than outside the perimeter, the last to watch us for mental issues, domination, or Soul attacks."

She held back a proud smile. "Good. Stay sharp, we arrive at Mount Kirin in two days."

As they all relaxed slightly, the wise ass chuckled. "What do we do if the young Sage takes the mountain too?"

...He wouldn't, right? She kept her face unconcerned. "Then we make sure to blame someone else if possible and run. Now, get back on duty while the rest of us return to the Crystal Caverns."

He SHOULDN'T. Or he should tell her first.

...Damn it, she better go check.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Adam was taking a break.

Over a dozen modules were either being modified, created, or reviewed. He would do more later.

His Soil Grid gardens were producing a mountain of food now, at all levels of maturation and with crazy variety. He would oversee that at some point.

The Four Eye Flame Bull parents apparently decided NOT to wait for their four new eggs to hatch, so now there were EIGHT eggs waiting to become baby Bickens, as Sister Quan had named them. Not his problem.

He was just relaxing.

He had a goal... but his CURRENT methods were inefficient. And to be honest, some of the adventures were pretty scary. That massive corpse walker was terrifying.

But now, what did he have? What did he need?

Food? Both spiritual and mundane, he was now blessed. Some variety could still be desired, but this wasn't an issue. Though his 'Normal Water' might cause a problem at some point.

Shelter? His Martial Spirit was big enough to be a Realm of her own, and didn't seem to be ready to stop expanding. When he got tired of cultivating, who knew how big this place would be.

Energy? His Ying Yang Cycle Pond was creating MORE power as it interacted with itself and the Yin Pool and Yang Platform. Not to mention the raw energy within the Soul Water being generated, that stuff was useful all over the place.

Also? His Asura Eye. Adam wasn't sure HOW much power there was in that other reality where demons and angels fought for all time, but it was a lot and the tiny percentage being poured into his Poison Cave was still an astonishing volume of energy for him to use as desired.

He didn't really NEED to use his Domain to gather heaven and earth energy from nature. Still did though, free stuff was free.

But... he had a goal. To learn the inner workings of concepts, of cultivation... to improve and empower his System back home.

And this Master Pocket Tattoo was the first BIG step!

Because it didn't just allow him to gain information, nor just tempt the Sect to willingly stuff all the secret data they had into the thing for Rockette to send to 'Research'...

No, it was something more powerful and useful for Adam's long term goals.

Through this new interface, he could set missions. Reward Sect cultivators with rare resources, treasures, or even pure power shaped with the perfect ratio for the individual...

Why should ADAM wander around, stealing volcanoes and stuff? Searching hundreds of places for rumors and things... when he could pay others to do it for him?

HE could focus on the stuff only HE could do, like advance his cultivation, designing the Essential Cultivation Techniques' for Sister Quan and Tianshi, do science and stuff... While the hundreds of thousands of Sect members could find new plants, capture Spirit Beasts, turn in treasures, deliver secrets for rewards...

Because honestly, something in this Realm might be using him to solve problems.

Some concept might be why he stumbled on these rare items, valuable lizard pet, dangerous places, and so forth.

This was a time without a hero, no protagonist, no 'Main Character' for this period of history. He paid a LOT of power to ensure this was true.

So WHY was he finding places that nearly turned the world into chaos? Beasts best left unfound? Secret treasonous plots against beautiful tragic figures?

Something, be it fate, destiny, or just narrative momentum was trying to make him the tool of this Realm.

It wouldn't be as obvious to Adam if he hadn't spent so long in Rockette, his Martial Spirit separated from normal reality. If he wasn't an outsider on some level.

Would staying at home fix the issue? Maybe. Maybe not.

Hell, the urge to return to the Sect may be due to ANOTHER critical event that could only be avoided by him being present.

But something inside felt like this new method, sending minions out into the world? THIS might cut down on the sudden events, impossible coincidences, and improbable meetings.

Little Tianshi burst into his cultivation cave. "Da! The city at Mount Kirin is having a huge festival!"

...Damn it.
 
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His Marital Spirit was big enough to be a Realm of her own
I would like to know if this is the correct use of this word (Marital) or it is simply a mistake, because I have seen it in countless fanfics and novels (the translation, so I don't know if they appear in the original work).

In this chapter, Adam reminded me of that guy from the Fringe series who started with a well below average IQ, made a genius for Walter's experiments (I think they were Walter's), and used his intelligence to calculate the future, using small acts to butterfly others to the grave, and later increased his intelligence so much that the only thing he could communicate with was supercomputers (he became completely autistic).
 
I think this chapter was very much needed! I was sort of losing track of what was going on, and what the purpose was for all the testing of the things he discovered. I think this whole part of the story would have gone over better if I'd read it all at once, but that's the nature of serial releases, and I accept it lol.

Anyway, this has been a really nice story so far! The technical aspects are excellent, I've barely noticed any grammatical errors besides the stylistic choices. The plot has been engaging up until this point, and although some of the topics are beyond my understanding, it's still interesting. Thanks for writing!
 
Ahhh I see they've been named Bickens instead of cocknbulls. Well it is certainly a cute name. But just imagine how other sects and the burning sword sect would have had to put in their reports.
 
Ah, so Adam has finally become the main character of this world (at this point in time at least) and wants very little to do with it, so he's making a better internet so he can delegate most of the main character plotlines forced upon him to other people in the form of quests. They'll also definitely be taken by strong people since the rewards he'll give will be greatly sought after; 'normal water', as an example, would probably be one of the lower tier rewards until he's persuaded by the guard leader or Sister Quan to change it.
 
Well somebody knows what's on.

Festival is:
-Demon summening Ritual?
-Cultivator-Sacrifice-Trap?
-Advertising to get some in Dungeon/or other?
-Advertising to get as many Cultivators here as possible, because disaster/enemy is comming
-Festival has some morally evil part (p.e. Sacrifice to appease) he abolishes.
You forgot the comedy option, the Realm realizes he is trying to wiggle out of the task it wants to impose upon him. So the festival is a perfectly normal tourist trap to help the local economy, just to make him extra paranoid as he keeps looking for problems that don't exist. :drevil:
 
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