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it is always hard to find a balance between incredible power and the ability to relate to other people.

Clearly I don't want to do something as bad as Q from Star trek, but at the same time I don't want to do something like the main character from Campione, where the main character actively attempts to be completely normal and avoid anything odd while being all-powerful.

I also have to be careful to keep the main character consistent. It's easy to write him being sympathetic or understanding in a situation that he completely follows... But his very nature is one that thinks from a different point of view. I think a lack of understanding of other people is a core part of Adam, an effect from his origin story.

There is definitely arrogance here, built up mostly because of how difficult it is for him to even recognize permanent injury at this point. Is also hard for him to understand the difficulties that other people face, when he has so many benefits and past experiences that shape who he is.

In many cases I do not want him to be quote-unquote dense. This is especially true for emotion related issues, as a lot of literature I've read and videos I've watched have developed a tendency to actively fight against emotional advancements or sexual activity in a need for either censorship or because it's considered a type of humor that's widely accepted.

Slight side note: some of the tropes that have come over from animation I just hate with a passion now. I normally could ignore them, but then one piece made getting a bloody nose a major plot point of the story! God I can't believe that Sanji getting a bloody nose from being perverted became a major issue that require transfusion from a willing fishman donator... Grr!

Back on topic this is a major reason why I allowed the main character to actually progress when it comes to certain issues like relationships harems and so forth. I didn't go into detail obviously, but I refuse to have five or six episodes of story where the main characters don't even hold damn hands.

However this does lead to the density of the main character: I have to take the limitations of his existence and the things he's experienced over the course of the story so far when I'm trying to portray him interacting with new people.

Most recent situation as an example: To Adam, he honestly doesn't feel threatened by the ongoing fight. He's just escaped a massive conflict on a conceptual nature against something far stronger and insidious and more powerful the most opposed he's fought in recent times! The woman he speaking to his too tired to properly react as well, which is not giving him the normal signals that he uses to properly focus on what normal people think is important.

I guess what this means is that you're not going to really see Adam change too much until there are actual consequences for his condensating nature. The fact that most people fairly quickly understand that he's not doing this to be hurtful, but more from a lack of an ability to understand how difficult life can be for normal people? This may take longer for this lesson to be learned.

I suppose another issue is that he knows fundamentally that there is no consequences to him personally even if he completely is destroyed, thanks to his soul being a shard of a greater Adam, a concept that he sort of internalized in his martial spirit as his innate ability. To this child, as long as his friends are protected? Self-sacrifice isn't that big of a deal. That tends to give you a certain amount of confidence that's hard to shake.
People also need to realize, Adam started as a minuscule fragment of the soul of something Other that was bleeding existence and memory at the start of his journey and had to boot strap himself up to stability. Then he started world jumping and had to scour, refine, and polish his soul/existence to survive the Blind Eternities in a process that sounded so painful that physical harm seems irrelevant by comparison. Along the way he developed Research and his bizarre approach to the scientific method that gave him data and knowledge to survive, grow, relate to and help people. Literally anything that didn't kill him made him stronger and more knowledgeable.

Then, after a couple world jumps and ability refinements and conceptual reinforcements and reaffirmations, Adam became a benevolent leader/dictator/incidental policy maker and pseudo-divinity when converting Shards and Entities and effectively conquering Earth Bet through the new faith system.

After all that he sent a splinter of his soul out to the cultivation multiverses to continue his personal growth and became Adam the Burning Sage. He is a being with a rock solid sense of self and an outside context perspective on the existence of Cultivators and some knowledge of wuxia/xanxia meta tropes. Part of his whole "absentminded genius" bit is genuinely his intellect and experience and the rest is a refusal to conform to the nonsense of cultivator norms on a subconscious level combined with the power/ability/soul strength to back that up.

Adam here is functionally immortal. Beyond his regeneration and recursive biology and other nonsense that makes physical damage a nonissue, even if he dies Adam Prime still exists on Earth Bet and can eventually try this again. I'm not sure if he has consciously acknowledged this but it just further plays into his self sacrificing nature. He knows he can take it and his new friends and loved ones don't have that advantage. So it's not that he's "dense" or even really "arrogant", he views existence from a slightly different angle than everyone else and is better able to quantify people and their capabilities than anyone can imagine. That's why he's so relaxed while his guards are fighting, he knows their capabilities and can extrapolate from his senses the strength of everything "near" him. This lets him often cut straight to the important bits of any issue without waiting to follow the slow and confusing path of "social conventions" or "story narrative". That and his love of trolling others, himself, and even reality. He knows that what he can do is terrifying so he plays it up for laughs so that even if it disturbs and scares others he still comes across as absurdly powerful but benign with his friendly/confused/goofy persona rather than as a tyrannical monster.
 
Didn't that already kinda happen? What with that dude who was convinced that Adam was secretly a grandpa...

Then again, that idiot doesn't exactly scream Main Character to me.
He seems more like the type to go villain or accidently convince the MC about something in a passing remark.

Honestly its far more likely the world creates an MC as a counterbalance to Adams shenanigans, the insertion point may have been far and away from any regular MC's/Upheavals/Story Plotlines when OG Adam looked at it but with how aware this conceptual piece of reality is i wouldn't be surprised if his presence changes that.
That... that sounds far more possible then I thought possible. If the world is going for balance the MC would be evil or convinced Adam is..

Since he paid extra to arrive in a period between MCs, he isn't going to encounter one - not one that has a chance of being successful, anyway.
I vaguely remember someone mentioning the MC for this setting is currently in hell or something or am I miss remembering it?

Adam's going to end up as some MC's lucky encounter. Just randomly drop by, save the day and give the MC an important cheat plot item that will let them get out of their current sticky situation.

...

It would be amusing if every single time the MC has a problem, Adam is there. The Main Character keeps wondering who this guy is that always saves their ass but Adam never remembers the MC.
Don't forget Adam always gets his name wrong so he never connects there the same person. Though the vague sense of familiarity causes him to help out!
 
He's just escaped a massive conflict on a conceptual nature against something far stronger and insidious and more powerful the most opposed he's fought in recent times!

I thought you did an excellent job representing this aspect. Its like a soldier, who has seen combat tours, talking to the police during a gang shootout. "Hear those shots? Bullets make a completely different sound when they get near you, and besides at that caliber and range it would take a miracle to hit us."
 
Uh... has Adam realized yet that the reason most of the poisonous plants taste like... well poison is because their poisonous? Like poisons are meant to be detected to ward off predators. So obviously the poisonous plants would taste poisonous with the ones that taste good or tasteless being the perfect assassins tool.
 
it is always hard to find a balance between incredible power and the ability to relate to other people.

Clearly I don't want to do something as bad as Q from Star trek, but at the same time I don't want to do something like the main character from Campione, where the main character actively attempts to be completely normal and avoid anything odd while being all-powerful.

I also have to be careful to keep the main character consistent. It's easy to write him being sympathetic or understanding in a situation that he completely follows... But his very nature is one that thinks from a different point of view. I think a lack of understanding of other people is a core part of Adam, an effect from his origin story.

There is definitely arrogance here, built up mostly because of how difficult it is for him to even recognize permanent injury at this point. Is also hard for him to understand the difficulties that other people face, when he has so many benefits and past experiences that shape who he is.

In many cases I do not want him to be quote-unquote dense. This is especially true for emotion related issues, as a lot of literature I've read and videos I've watched have developed a tendency to actively fight against emotional advancements or sexual activity in a need for either censorship or because it's considered a type of humor that's widely accepted.

Slight side note: some of the tropes that have come over from animation I just hate with a passion now. I normally could ignore them, but then one piece made getting a bloody nose a major plot point of the story! God I can't believe that Sanji getting a bloody nose from being perverted became a major issue that require transfusion from a willing fishman donator... Grr!

Back on topic this is a major reason why I allowed the main character to actually progress when it comes to certain issues like relationships harems and so forth. I didn't go into detail obviously, but I refuse to have five or six episodes of story where the main characters don't even hold damn hands.

However this does lead to the density of the main character: I have to take the limitations of his existence and the things he's experienced over the course of the story so far when I'm trying to portray him interacting with new people.

Most recent situation as an example: To Adam, he honestly doesn't feel threatened by the ongoing fight. He's just escaped a massive conflict on a conceptual nature against something far stronger and insidious and more powerful the most opposed he's fought in recent times! The woman he speaking to his too tired to properly react as well, which is not giving him the normal signals that he uses to properly focus on what normal people think is important.

I guess what this means is that you're not going to really see Adam change too much until there are actual consequences for his condensating nature. The fact that most people fairly quickly understand that he's not doing this to be hurtful, but more from a lack of an ability to understand how difficult life can be for normal people? This may take longer for this lesson to be learned.

I suppose another issue is that he knows fundamentally that there is no consequences to him personally even if he completely is destroyed, thanks to his soul being a shard of a greater Adam, a concept that he sort of internalized in his martial spirit as his innate ability. To this child, as long as his friends are protected? Self-sacrifice isn't that big of a deal. That tends to give you a certain amount of confidence that's hard to shake.

I feel like you might be exaggerating it though. The incident with Tianshi almost dying to drinking the wrong thing seems like it would be an important reminder that others are way more fragile then him. Surprised the tea tasting doesn't remind him of it.
 
I feel like you might be exaggerating it though. The incident with Tianshi almost dying to drinking the wrong thing seems like it would be an important reminder that others are way more fragile then him. Surprised the tea tasting doesn't remind him of it.
That made made him less trustful of the elders, not doubt his own abilities. If you notice, since then he has ensured that Rockette has been keeping a closer eye on all the people he cares for. To them it just seems like she's being helpful and just happens to be listening at the right time to lend a hand... But she's also been keeping an eye on things.

Before the testing magical alcohol incident, Adam had trusted the much more powerful elder involved in the experiment with the safety of Tianshi. He knows better now.
 
No, wait... there is a sour after taste.

Sour after taste is good actually.

If you are ever in a country where cashews grow, I would recommend you eat the cashew fruit.
(The fruit spoils quickly, so will not be transported out.)

Cashew fruit, from what I remember, tastes kinda like apple, but with a sour after taste. Kinda lemony but less sour. And it happens after you finish.

Small kids sometimes like eating a piece of lemon or something else sour. Especially when they are first introduced to it.
Its so cute. The sour face, but still wanting more.
 
The woman he speaking to his too tired to properly react as well, which is not giving him the normal signals that he uses to properly focus on what normal people think is important.
This part strikes me as critical. Adam's companions have been treating him with extra care, including those signals that keep him oriented in the conversation and forgiving him when he goes off the rails. Part of that is because he has given them each countless personalized & valuable gifts.

By contrast, this woman is still in fight-or-flight mode, and had resigned herself to death. She hasn't internalized the magnitude of help represented by Adam's presence. She's still freaking out.

I think that Adam's cavalier attitude in this chapter comes across (to me) as thoughtless and unkind. He's kind of on autopilot and will come back to earth if/when he notices that the woman is still in distress. He is oblivious, not heartless.
 
I just finished "Play nice!" and I have to ask: does it gets better? Because right now it's... boring.
I don't mind overpowered protagonists. Hell some of them are even very captivating to read, like plenty of PA SI's, but this here became a chore.
The last couple of pages of reader mode (I'm on page 12) can be summarised as "spam replicator, make someone else build shit, acquire/fuck bitches, or talk about acquiring/fucking them".
 
I just finished "Play nice!" and I have to ask: does it gets better? Because right now it's... boring.
I don't mind overpowered protagonists. Hell some of them are even very captivating to read, like plenty of PA SI's, but this here became a chore.
The last couple of pages of reader mode (I'm on page 12) can be summarised as "spam replicator, make someone else build shit, acquire/fuck bitches, or talk about acquiring/fucking them".
The RWBY arc is the last place like that for a while.

Book 2 also involves a significant reduction in his industrial capacity, so the story is inherently focused elsewhere by that time. Significantly less solving his problems with INFRASTRUCTURE at that point.

Edit: and aside from Betty, the rest of the RWBY Arc doesn't really mention any of that, though there is an extensive build portion.
 
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Arc 2: A bit of trade.
Xe Dian felt her body shift... and woke fully.

Blinking wearily, she felt a blanket fall off as she moved on a... chair?

A distant 'BANG' made her focus. "THE FIGHT!"

An absent voice answered her concerns. "Not really much of a fight."

She blinked... Right, the strange boy and his mystery guards. She felt her body relax slightly as she looked down at the blanket. "Is this yours?"

He nodded. "Sister Quan saw that your stress from battle and the shock from all that Soul Water trying to heal you was making you go into something like a healing trance. Drinking more of the..."

The blue hair child paused. "Point is, your body badly needed sleep. She's the one who gave you the blanket."

...And she HADN'T woken up when a stranger got that close? She clearly HAD been out of it. "Well, I'm still grateful. How goes the battle?"

Brother Adam pointed towards the distance. "The wolves are dead, and your Sect brothers and sisters are receiving lessons from my people on how to dismantle the bodies. Well, the ones mostly intact. As for the Vine Lion, that's still going on over that way."

...The black armored fighters had clearly drawn the fight much further away from the defensive caravan, and even from this distance she could see shapes dodging and random bright lights. "How... How long was I asleep?"

The boy shrugged. "An hour or two? Honestly, the fight would be over already if my people were allowed to fight without restrictions." He glared at... was he STILL drinking tea!?

...He took another sip. "Bluhgh. Anyway, that lion is one of the first Spirit Beasts I've seen in a long time that is part plant. My guards are trying to either subdue it for examination, or kill it with as little damage as possible... Meh, whatever keeps them busy."

She watched him flinch after another sip... and pour out the drink into a nearby hole. One presumably formed from the past samples. Huh.

She stood up. "Right. Rest or no, I need to get my people organized."

The boy nodded, even as he began to make another cup of test tea. "Take your time, there are no other Spirit Beasts for several miles and that test subject won't cause you problems."

Larger Sects sure looked at the world differently, huh?

Over the next two hours, she got things sorted. Thankfully her younger Brother and Sister Sect members were distracted by the nice, high level guest Cultivators teaching them how to harvest the Beast Cores, edible flesh, and craftable components from the (MANY) wolf carcasses... not having these wide-eyed, fresh face younglings underfoot was a massive relief, honestly.

The merchant clients were all VERY happy to not be consumed and lost to the wilderness, but it took time to dismantle the defences, recover what merchandise could be salvaged from the frantic defense building, and try to settle the beasts of burden.

Yeah, the Serpent Horses were NOT happy... getting them to calm down enough to hook back up to the carriages took hours alone!

By the time the caravan was prepared to move, she found her young Sect fellows had finished their impromptu class and was being led through some meditation exercises by a young looking lady. "Hey, thanks for taking care of my people. I'm Xe Dian."

She smiled and shook her hand. "Sister Xiao Quan. It's lovely to meet you. I'm sure Brother Adam mentioned me."

Right, blanket lady. From her spiritual senses, she wasn't even at the Xiantian Realm yet... possibly a younger member on a quest like her own ducklings were. "A pleasure. I can't thank you or your people enough for helping our people out of a dire situation."

Sister Quan chuckled. "If you want to settle the score easily enough, could you introduce me to your clients? Our team has been traveling in the wilderness for a while, and we need ALL KINDS of supplies and some such." Gesturing at one of the piles of wolf pelts, she grinned. "Hopefully they may wish to buy some of these materials as well."

Sister Dian snorted. "Well, hope away. The whole time I was trying to wrangle the group together I kept getting requests to talk to your people... if for no other reason, than to buy the fresh meat. We've been eating dried rations and travel bread for weeks now."

Sister Quan got... an odd look in her eye. "Interesting... tell me, would you say they were willing to be taste testers for some fresh but odd food Adam's been growing?"

She blinked. "What?" Hang on. "This isn't like the tea thing, is it? I won't have my people or those under my guard be experimented on."

Yes, that was a shifty look. "No? Only Adam eats the poisoned stuff. No, we have a whole lot of odd fruit, strange herbs, and unusual vegetables... a LOT. Other than the high spiritual energy levels, they are completely safe to consume."

Her eyes narrowed. "Then what is the catch?"

Sister Quan slumped. "The taste. Ranges from bland, to super spicy, to sour, to... anything. I've been using our guards to help us study and categorize stuff, but... but there is just so much to check! Most of it isn't enjoyable to eat, no matter HOW good for cultivation it may be."

Hmm. "No odd side effects?"

The other woman snorts. "LOTS of odd side effects, but those are easy to detect and we have Brother Adam eat those. He also eats the poisoned ones and the more strange stuff, like the fruits made of fire or water."

What?

Seeing her expression, Sister Quan pulled an... apple? Or an odd mango? It looked like blue glass. "This is one of our more valuable discoveries when we examined our produce. No official name yet, although Adam's disciple calls them 'Wapples' since they are water apples. Feels like gelatine or jelly, turns into liquid water when warmed up in the mouth."

She looked at the thing. "Adam had to eat it first, because we have a similar fruit that looks almost the same and is made of some sort of acid." She frowned. "He still eats the acid ones. Says they are 'tingly'." An eye roll. "Boys."

Sister Dian blinked. "May I?"

Accepting the Apple, she examined it. Slightly cool, an almost rubbery texture when squeezed... no 'leaking' to the touch. A cautious bite... almost instantly her mouth was full of crisp, clean water... with maybe a hint of fresh apple taste to it. Very lovely!

Her mind raced.

A plant (bush, tree, or otherwise) that could produce these? A harvest of potable portable preservable water? SHE wouldn't mind having a few on hand, and the caravan would surely see the benefit.

Moreover, something was off about it.

She nibbled near her last bite mark... and her mouth filled with water again.

This water was... sort of compressed. Not physically, it almost stored itself in a twisted way inside itself... one bite was MORE than one mouth full of water. "This is amazing!"

The other woman nodded happily. "It may be one of the more normal results of Adam's gardening, but I think it has the most potential for trade!" The woman glanced to the side and whispered. "So, willing to help me meet a few people?"

Storing the rest of this... 'Wapple' in her own storage ring, she nodded. "Alright. And... you say the other types of food are less... interesting?" A nod. "Then I am willing to have a minor amount of taste testing. But only if they volunteer. And I must observe it all."

The fact that she herself knew some techniques to determine if food was safe to eat? Well, no reason to tell anybody. Trust but verify, after all... the safety of her people was paramount.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Adam was trying to be patient.

Sure, he and Rockette MIGHT have redirected an attack or two, and MAYBE used some Momentum Redirection through his Domain to alter a few vine attack trajectories... but he mostly stayed out of the fight.

Sitting here.

Wasting damn time and poisoning himself.

Yes, he could just rip the lion's head off. Or drain it of energy, causing its body to die from shock. Or move at high speed and crush the damn thing.

But his guards had asked to help out, and so he would just... nudge things a bit.

After all, even though his guards were very powerful, normal Spirit Beasts battles had consequences. Deaths were near zero probability here, they WERE professionals after all, but with a beast this strong? Major injuries were expected.

Not that Adam would tolerate it.

Another 'nudge' gave one of the guards time to dodge, her form a near shadow as she carefully retaliated. Capture or 'clean kill' were both far harder than just wiping a monster from existence, after all.

He himself was trying to focus on the tea thing.

It had developed into a little hobby at this point, the taste testing and such. Something that didn't require thinking about, and was achievable while flying backwards during travel. Not like he could do much experimentation or tinkering... but only minor wind redirection was needed to ensure safe tea drinking conditions while moving away from scary swamp land.

Right now though? He was using the tea drinking to help distract himself.

For some reason, just letting other people fight? NOT jumping in, slapping stuff around? Way harder than he expected.

Adam forced himself to move slowly as he measured more dried leaves.

Had he always been one to just... leap at everything?

...Yeah, probably.

He sensed a younger man from the merchant group move close. "Young Master?"

Blink. Right, he did sort of show up and save everyone. Respect still caught him off guard though. "Yes?"

The young man was older than Adam and Sister Quan... but his attitude made it difficult to consider the guy as an adult. "I overheard your female companion mention that you were interested in trading for odd plants." He moved a wooden box onto the tea table.

As the case opened, he saw a grid of small wooden dividers... and a number of oddly shaped seeds. Cubes, spirals, and more... with colors of all types!

The man grinned. "I may have a bit of a personal collection. Told my wife they'd be useful some day."

Adam grinned as he placed the smoking cup to the side. "Tell me more."

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Adam over paid.

Adam over paid by a LOT.

He knew it. The merchant knew it. The guards and little Tianshi inside Rockette knew it. Sister Quan didn't know it yet, but she would find out at some point and Adam KNEW he would get some rants.

It didn't matter.

NONE of that mattered.

Rockette had over a hundred new seed samples, and they were genetically AMAZING.

Because the man wasn't a farmer. He sold advanced, very expensive ovens. Custom designed with rare materials to ensure better results. Bulky, annoying to move, yet powerful and well built.

Adam bought ten of those too. And yes, he knew he would get a rant about that at some point, even if Rockette had already installed them in the Crystal Caverns.

Anyway, back to the point: This man did not buy and sell plants or seeds or saplings.

It really, truly was his personal collection. One his wife nagged him about, one that he treasured, one that he spent far too much money constructing and way too long searching for new items to include.

A labor of love, to the point where even with the extreme prices being offered... the man refused to sell the entire case. It had taken convincing, money, and offering a few rare seeds produced by the Soil Grid Gardens... and in the end, Adam only got one of each seed.

But for Adam? One seed was enough.

Adam had gone to one of the wagons, paid to be a passenger, then zoned out as he meditated. To the point where Rockette had to handle moving people in and out of the Caverns, and ensuring Sister Quan could access the funds and deposit whatever she was buying.

Adam however, was focusing within.

Rare plants are sometimes considered the lifeblood of Sects, a reproducing treasure that requires far less work than rearing Spirit Beasts, and far safer to boot. Some of the more rare trees or bushes were protected so tightly outsiders weren't sure if they even existed.

Seeds in general however, are cheap. Dirt cheap.

The reason why? Near impossible to grow.

Every plant needs certain things to flourish. Specific temperature ranges, humidity levels, soil moisture content, mineral content, shade patterns... even one being off could kill the more delicate greenery.

But conceptual plants? A billion times more complicated.

Sometimes this plant would need to be grown near a particular metal. Or be burned to ash at a specific moment in the growth cycle. Or eaten an unknown number of times.

Worse, what if a seed needs to be planted in a place full of hate? Or in the corpse of some other, older plant? This was a conceptual plane after all, it was entirely possible that the length of the planter's name might affect the result somehow.

It was why this man's seed collection had so many samples of each one, and why he was (reluctantly) willing to sell ANY of them: a cultivator needed dozens of each seed sample to ensure at least a few may grow to some extent.

And if it was a rare plant? Hundreds, maybe thousands of seeds... still might not be enough.

Adam watched a new cavern inside his Martial Spirit form, filled with a duplicate Soil Grid. His energy levels plummeted, then Rockette's excess stores began to fall... as he substituted power to ensure speed of completion.

Because this whole cavern, so large in scope and so distant in scale?

This was JUST for experimenting with one. Single. Seed.

His body slowly grinned a demonic smile as he forced more and more Soil Grids into new caves, uncaring about the enormous energy expenditure as he required the Soil samples to duplicate far faster than the default rate.

It wasn't a waste. After 'Research' finishes the various tests, these growth chambers can be sterilized and used again. Before, he was allowing Rockette to use a single garden for the various tests mostly because the test materials were generic stuff from the Sect or the wild.

Nothing neat. Nothing cool.

As he made a few dedicated caves to continue to grow the many successful food combinations already discovered by his people, Adam winced. Right, maybe that was TOO much of an energy expenditure.

He would have to make do with only seven Soil Grid Growth Caves.

For now.

Eyes sparkling, Adam ignored the world as seven massive fields of potential began to be planted with duplicated seed samples.

Seeds from a personal collection.

Seeds so rare, so impossible to grow, that Sects didn't bother to sell them or search them out... but belonging to plants so amazing, these worthless products cost a fortune to gather.

No wonder that dude's wife was pissed at him. It was like spending your retirement funds to buy moon rocks or paint chips from famous houses. A niche item collected by a strange fanatic.

Adam watched those so called 'worthless' seeds be duplicated and planted into soil types ranging from the mundane to the impossible. ONE of them would work. Probably.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Tianshi was watching her Master move the Soil Grid Garden... then make six more. "Huh."

Mr. Whiskers suddenly focused on one of the screens Rockette had set up. She blinked. "That one? Uh... Rockette?"

Ding!

Huh. It was a spiritual herb seed called the 'Elven Forest'. Rockette of course recorded all the details that the gushing merchant had mentioned over each sample, but this was an odd one.

It would theoretically grow deep underground, unseen by anyone... then in one night, become a dense tropical forest. All the roots were just part of this one plant, and the deeper an intruder would investigate the more valuable the materials within would be.

And the more dangerous.

The thing basically devoured plants in the area for samples, and produced a massive habitat for nearby animals and people. Their waste and byproducts from hunts or whatever would become nutrients for the forest itself. Due to the nature of the forest, and how it promoted harmony through subtle chemical means through pollination, most people considered it a harmless wonder.

Until someone tried to attack it.

Cut down a few trees? Nothing happened. The unused lumber would vanish into the forest as an additional food source.

Try to catch it on fire? The forest becomes a death trap. Safe water becomes deadly just before being drunk or gathered. Massive branches would fall on targets with unusual accuracy. Unseen pits would open. Footing became hazardous.

Wandering people would vanish.

It created the myth of secret elves hiding away from society, defending their home from any who didn't respect the trees... though if that was true or not, it was impossible to say.

Tianshi watched the 'Elven Forest' seeds being planted... and glanced concerned at the ones sinking into the more scary looking Soil Squares. "That... isn't going to make a haunted woods, is it?"

...There was no 'Ding'. Which was slightly concerning.

Another seed in a different cavern was suddenly being planted, drawing the concerned girl away from her thoughts. "Ooh! That seed is glowing! What does THAT one do?"

Ding!

...It grew a perfectly normal tree.

Upside down.

Roots up in the air, leaves under the dirt. The roots absorbed wind and air and stuff, the leaves acted like compost. Normally farmers would plant near the thing because the soil was healthier nearby.

...That was a bit boring. It didn't even have a fun name... just the 'Compost Tree'.

Lame.

Ooh! That seed has tiny wiggly bits on it! Neat!

AWW! Why did Rockette change the display screen? Go back to the wiggly plant!
 
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If looking for more plant ideas, I would suggest checking out the Xanth series.
Shoe trees, pie trees, root beer trees, tangle trees, cherry bomb trees, reverse-wood trees, and many more.
 
I'm sure that elves live around there somewhere. All that takes is having pointy ears. Everything else that you could use to tell that an elf exists doesn't really matter in that sort of setting. Anyone past a certain stage can go without food, live in the woods thinking of the oneness of life and all that, and live for a very long time.

Heck, in this setting dryads exist. That plant sounds like a dryad that was breed to be a trap master. Guess, that it'd happen eventually that they'd learn to defend themselves.

Tianshi has a plant affinity. She's going to love playing with the various interesting plants. I wonder if Adam will find out about those wiggly plants and decide to leave them behind somewhere.

Sister Quan is thrilled at the idea of having new taste testers. Xe Dian doesn't want her brats to be experimental test subjects, but after finding out that it's a rather safe, yet annoying and icky task... well, she might secretly be wanting to punish them for not staying out of her way.

I can't wait to find out that Seed Merchant was part of a club of rare seed collectors. Seed Merchant's wife will be happy that his hobby was finally profitable.
 
I can't wait to find out that Seed Merchant was part of a club of rare seed collectors. Seed Merchant's wife will be happy that his hobby was finally profitable
"Woman! Did I not tell you those seeds would grow in value? Behold the reaped rewards of their sowing! " Merchant shows her a basket of fruit and a jade slip.

Sniff. "My mother was right all along! You are a fool to throw even bad money after..."

Merchant shoves a blueish wapple at her mouth. "Taste this before you say more. I have purchased distribution rights for this area to these. And this jade slip is full of 'minor' cultivation methods the sage who bought the seeds considers mere trifles." Lifts his hand to show a storage ring. "Within is our new bed that heats of itself. Woman! Who is short sighted now?"

Still slowly chewing. Pause. "Did you sell him every seed you collected?"

Merchant beams to her. "Of course not. I only had my traveling collection, not the prized ones. He will be coming to look through those in two months, perhaps sooner."

Demurely now. "Father always said mother would not see gold in the ore rock in front of her. Did you have to haggle long with him?"

Smiling now, "He was overjoyed to see them fall to his hand that he poured forth five times my highest price. Pray, do not irk the boy --the man who wears the boyish visage-- for he is most impatient and rewards speed."

"What are you waiting for, silly man? You go and buy every seedset you could not afford before while I put your specials together for his arrival. Ah, how will I know him?"

"When you hear chaos wearing flesh come to town. The winds of change are his very breath."
 
"Father always said mother would not see gold in the ore rock in front of her. "

"Ah, how will I know him?"

"When you hear chaos wearing flesh come to town. The winds of change are his very breath."

Its been a while since we have noticed them, but this so sums up not only Adam's old village, but most people on looking/meeting him for the first time :p

Edit; And also a very accurate way to describe his effects on the world, and makes me want to see him in a warhammer setting, if only because of how the 'just as planed' mollusk will take his presence.
 
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Its been a while since we have noticed them, but this so sums up not only Adam's old village, but most people on looking/meeting him for the first time :p

Edit; And also a very accurate way to describe his effects on the world, and makes me want to see him in a warhammer setting, if only because of how the 'just as planed' mollusk will take his presence.
Despite how "interesting" his Reality Travel power would find the setting, it is probably on the "NOPE" list. Both Fantasy and 40k are things you have to be on the level of a Primarch to win, even better to be on Emps level or higher. There is a REASON why 40k is an End Jump in the Jumpchain, and the other jumps of that setting don't try to have you win the setting, but merely survive a decade.
 
i have this odd feeling that adam would eat the warp with rockette not all of it just enough to freak the critters in it out big time
 
What are you guys talking about? Adam already visited Warhammer.
It's canonical even. After all, isn't one of Big E's names... Adam? ;)

I know theoretically WH doesn't specify his name, after all he was already ancient when the Roman Empire was forming... but it's fun to imagine Adam living for over 40k years and slipping up due to getting bored. After all, the Golden Age of Technology sounds like Adam's thing, no?
 
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