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Lung is fucking OP and one of his major weakness is that he becomes very dense at escalating and sinks very fast on water, Variance needs to throw him on water and he wins. Reach to that point is the hard part and there is other forms of winning but are also way harder
 
@theaceoffire, IIRC, you're vastly overestimating how large individual Shards are. I think they're only supposed to be the size of a car to a small mountain, depending on how complex they are?

EDIT: Though, I guess this might just be a change you decided to make, like having Panacea's power work through nanobots instead of biokinesis. For some reason.
 
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they're only supposed to be the size of a car to a small mountain

While you have a good point, I accidentally addressed that... each power connects to a specific location or series of locations in the shard. Based on my story so far, we know that mapping out Amy's shard indicated her powers material was far less than mountain mass even though it is quite complex and powerful. Who knows what could happen if Any could access the entire shard, rather than her small portion.
 
Ironic that his shard is probably super inefficient itself. It could probably be made more efficient in finding efficiency.

You know, I'm pretty sure I've seen plenty of "Queen-Administrator assumes direct control because admin gotta admin" stories, but I cannot for the life of me think of a story where Armsmaster's shard is a genius between fools, 100% done with this messy, inefficient cycle of research the entities have going on.
(Then again if all they care is getting to reproduce more and more... We keep forgetting their aim is less "fix heat-death of the universe" and more "a grey goo trying not to run out of food".)
 
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Local Investment
In the original WORM story line, many issues and ideas were addressed in the background, behind the obvious plot. Methods used by heroes and villains to gain power, political structures and gang organizations... ideals and goals were tested.

Not that Adam remembered it all perfectly. And this was an AU realm, so some data wouldn't match up regardless.

But still, he had gained some perspective on what could cause positive, measurable change in this world and the risks that would crop up because of it.

Too large? Endbringer would pop up. Too centralized? Similar.

So he had to do something small, but one with a long term impact on society.

That was the goal anyway.

Adam went with a classic: Denial of resources.

It was a staple of literature and history, one that everyone seemed to follow. PRT took down mooks and some capes, although the system made holding them difficult if not impossible. The Guild would actively steal technology from villains and reverse engineer it, lowering the value of criminal hardware and increasing hero resources.

Taylor Hebert, aka 'Skitter', along with many other vigilantes, attempted to crack down on individual or low level conflicts to hopefully reduce the overall level of danger in her city without forcing all sides to gang up and squish her. Big fights for big people, little fights for little people.

Even Coil used his minions to capture drugs, rob loose currency, and injure gang workers.

Adam wanted something more subtle and yet would have good impact... hopefully.

He had money, he was in good legal standing, and he had the most powerful building and most controlled destruction abilities in the whole town.

So with The Guild handling the actual purchasing paperwork, he had been buying property all over town.

First, everything that was bankrupt. Businesses, districts, warehouses... all of it had fallen under his power before Variance Villa was even constructed. With his drones helping him keep track of gang activity and providing real time mapping, he then focused on buying out residential areas and the close to failing businesses.

All under various names, as quietly as possible. Without Coil in the picture, no other thinker had caught on yet... or if they did, they didn't get in the way so far. Honestly, that overly obsessive compulsive power user Accord over in Boston probably knew, but he tended to leave anyone alone if they didn't make things worse. Probably.

Crud, would he have to worry about that? Later, no major gang movement was detected by the drones so far coming in or going out.

So with such a large portion of the city under his claws, Adam proceed to attempt to deny a huge resource everyone took for granted.

Real estate.

Every weekend Adam had taken at least a couple of hours to visit these properties, focusing on those closest to gang territories without infringing on anything. He would show up, verify it was empty, then use 'Conversion' on everything in the property line.

All buildings and parts broken down into flame metal, or added to his suit if he was running low on energy. The dirt was carefully refined by his flame threads, which found any poisonous or heavy metal particles and converted the junk, leaving rich, plant-free soil behind.

Dockworkers would show up later to plant the various park related items, and a foot or two below the soil the layers of Null Metal and Flame Metal spiraled down, slowly growing deeper while leaving any pipes or wires intact.

For the first dozen properties, everything had gone fine. Eventually every gang territory would have secret repositories of fire if Adam 'Adventure' Burns needed to show someone how to behave. And large sections of contested, abandoned properties could no longer be used to store drugs, stage assaults or retreats, or hide fleeing criminals or people being assaulted.

Then he had ran into the first warehouse with homeless. Technically squatters.

It was bad. A couple had been injected with something by the Merchant gang, and were not handling whatever that was well. Two had been young children, thankfully not sexually molested due to young age, but very hungry and ill.

And these were just the ones who didn't run from the blue flaming skeleton in a suit.

After a quick round of healing, Adam had contacted Dragon and started moving his new friends.

It took less than a few minutes to discover some disgusting truths in this city. Locating all existing orphanages and safe houses took very little time and was very disappointing. Finding out that, other than the few large hospitals, there were very few people willing to risk opening an emergency clinic... well, it was a sign for Adam.

Split the city into gang grids, pick the properties closest to each one that was farthest from other gang territories, buy a couple of VERY expensive properties that were in good locations but not 'technically' on sale... he had gone to work.

Each territory got a safe house, so that the chance of rival gangs attacking one for allowing 'unclean' or the 'wrong race' would be more unlikely. An area near the heart of his power, Variance Villa, became a massive orphanage that connected to the facilities underground. Safe parks and kids of similar age to play with, why not?

And he had placed basic emergency clinics almost everywhere. Each one had custom tinkertech that duplicated his ability of 'Recovery:Triage' combined with 'Sleep', so people would survive long enough to reach actual hospitals.

Each new facility needed people. Basic workers for the clinics (The tech was easy enough to use that a doctor or nurse wasn't needed), parental figures and teachers (orphanage shifts were popular positions, surprisingly), and everywhere: Dockworker Guardians, to hold the line until Adams unreasonable firepower could smash anyone attacking a charity location.

Danny Hebert had informed Adam that it had been the first time they had to actually recruit new workers in over four years. The various emergency personnel had also been VERY happy with the donated tinkertech that allowed all the ambulances to duplicate the 'Recovery:Triage' function, once the massive amount of testing and paperwork went through.

It was a combination of 'Happy to help so many' and 'Frustrated that everything I do gets so complicated' that made Adam enjoy every visit to one of his properties. Especially when he was allowed to burn them to the ground.

Businesses got moved to better areas or directly into Variance Villa's underground mall. Homeless and runaways were healed and moved to the homeless shelters or safe house, depending on choice. The few gang members they bumped into had seen the large number of dockworkers that tend to follow Variance around and vanish after seeing their armor and advanced tasering equipment.

Seriously, those guns are massive just to hold all the hardware that ensures each electric shock would safely down an opponent. Normal stun guns had a high failure rate, as a person under certain mental states would go nuts rather than fall over. Worse if they had powers. Too strong could kill them though.

The solution ended up with huge glowing tinkertech guns... and honestly, he hadn't needed to use them much because they were scary as shit.

Dragon was already working up some contracts to sell them to other agencies. So yeah, money issues for funding these social facilities was very well covered at this point.

On the other hand... well, he had been AIMING for subtle. And failed.

Luckily his focus on non-gang territories had prevented much backlash, and all three gangs had been avoiding schools, health treatment facilities, and orphanages in their conflicts. Even Skidmark of the Merchants didn't want to attract a whole state's worth of anger by messing with kids or doctors publicly.

Safe houses however had a more... rough history. Attacks on people with a different social station or race were not uncommon, and all three major gang used the poor and homeless as funding resources or free targets to gather enthusiasm.

It was why those places were a bit larger, had a bit more Null Metal, had almost double the Dockworkers hired as security.

And deep, deep below. In the dark, in the places that required advanced tools to even detect... his buildings were tunneling toward each other. Connecting. Sharing heat and resources.

Adam's droids could (and did) refuel at any of these facilities. And his map was growing, even as Dragon was taking advantage of unlimited binary Flame Metal fluid to design and develop new schematics for further drone advancements.

He wasn't sure how far she had taken things, but he WAS aware that every Guild facility in the world was gaining a new 'Celestial Garden'. Mostly because it was showing up on his network as she continued to expand.

Dragon had likely removed a few more of her remaining shackles on her own by now, based on how much more relaxed she seemed now. Either that, or it was just the late night 'tinkertech sessions' she was having with Armsmaster these days.

He knew she was building similar setups in other towns, testing the Drones and 'Assist Map' features in Guild controlled regions... but thankfully all that hard stuff wasn't his issue.

Today, he was just going to relax and burn a few abandoned restaurants to the ground.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Amy looked at the mail. Mail for her.

Why was she getting mail? Everything went through a filtering service, and she had piles of hate mail and love letters and all that handled automatically. Most of her family had to use that service, publicly known heroes were popular.

This one was very official looking too.

She pulled it opened and... it was dense. Itemized. The first few pages listed hundreds of hospitals, only a few she had ever personally visited. A list of technical sounding tools, followed by numbers? Oh, that was how many of each tool was being distributed per facility.

Confusion grew as she moved on. Oh, this was a Garden thing. But Variance had already sent the stuff she got from his charity and the stuff from working with him. Carol had been entertaining to watch as she raged from being furious that someone would interfere with HER family and grateful that the contract was so well designed in Amy's favor.

The other pages helped clarify things a bit.

She was being marked as 'inspiration' for this 'Giving Tree' part of the official 'Garden' company? But she didn't really do much. Heal a few people, get teased a bit, scare Vicky with a man wearing a goat mask.

Oh, there was an 'about' section. Apparently this was some sort of information document that had been handed to the various healing organizations to explain what this new branch of the 'Garden' did.

Uh.

So... Variance somehow made her power into tinkertech? When was THAT possible? And it claimed to be limited to much more basic functions, but it should still vastly reduce her work load if these common problems could be healed without her.

Wait, what was this last page bunch? It just seemed like a duplicate of the first bundle with less details.

Oh, it was listing the costs. Man, Garden made out like bandits, these figures were huge!

Amy Dallon froze as she read the note under the summary, apparently hand written by Variance himself.

This... this wasn't how much those items cost. Or how much those hospitals paid.

This was her personal earnings. This was the small percentage of the ACTUAL costs and transactions.

The second listed, smaller but still quite large number was how much money she earned from royalties earned from maintenance costs alone.

That value would be added to her accounts on a bi-weekly basis.

A half hour later, her family found it a little funny and yet concerning when they found Amy stunned still staring at some paper in the living room.

Amy found it equally funny when they realized the paper was simply a receipt, and that the amount of funding listed on the paper was only an initial installment dropped into her accounts.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Adam blinked. Why was he getting such strange emails from the New Wave group? Weren't they mad at him or something?

Well, no reason to mess with that junk now.

Now he had to visit a series of tortured souls, trapped in a bastards power that ensured immortality, torture, and insanity.

And if he could successfully connect with Gray Boy's power, he would be able to not just communicate with it, but learn what would happen when one burned a world made of crystal time power.

Considering what it was being used for, it would probably be impressive to see.
 
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Adam is rich as the hell, probably on the way of becoming one of the richest men of the world. Amy by helping to inspire a minor part of his empire ended becoming the richest little girl of America.
 
Adam blinked. Why was he getting such strange emails from the New Wave group? Weren't they mad at him or something?
I wonder just what's going on in Carol's brain right now.
I mean; Amy getting rich from healing and having a reason to be proud of herself:

On the other hand; money and super-medicine.
Quite the moral dilemma, isn't it?
 
He gripped them all as I fell.
Shift to first person.
Originally, his power would gain 10 charges a day... now, one. And he could only hold created powers in storage, so no saving up charges. He would have to use it each day or slow development.

No nullifying, enhancing, modifying, copying, stealing, or transferring powers either. He would have to save up charges to recover those features later on.
Can't save charges, is making plans to save charges.
Once he could move without wincing, he would need to find out where I was.
Shift to first person.
If lost, one should stay put for rescuers to find them.
This is only true if people know your general location. If you wander into the woods without telling anyone then plopping down and waiting for someone to come find you isn't going to get you anywhere.
Heard no planes, cars, etc.
He had heard.
Fire can be a real issue in a place like this, but he hadn't focused on fire creation with this power, but fire control.

It compacted on itself again and again, absently sending out streams of fire to the gathered wood to help fuel it for its supernatural actions even as its temperature skyrocketed.

He flicked a finger at one of the trees farther from his camping site, and felt glorious victory as a razor thin whip of white flames slipped over to slice it at the base, the angle of the cut allowing the trunk to tip.
For powers that grow very slowly, this brand new power seems to be a tad too potent.

And I've lost interest, sorry.
 
And I've lost interest, sorry.

You didn't make it far, but thank you for the tense checking.

Also, my character does indeed become OP, just not as quickly as 10 powers per day, all at level 10 like in some stories.

If you try to read my story again in the future, I would suggest waiting until I get to at least one or more worlds. Technically I am almost ready to start this thing!
 
You didn't make it far, but thank you for the tense checking.

Also, my character does indeed become OP, just not as quickly as 10 powers per day, all at level 10 like in some stories.

If you try to read my story again in the future, I would suggest waiting until I get to at least one or more worlds. Technically I am almost ready to start this thing!
I mean, you went for a precision based power in the flame manipulation one, and got better than perfect control with a single charge. I don't really see how you could improve on the power that you've shown there.

For what should be a very weak flame manipulation ability, it has great range, perfect precision, and no loss of control mentioned. Control within an extremely small range is what I'd expect from a starting power that has the selling point of infinite leveling. That first charge in flame manipulation is better than the abilities of most parahumans.

Like...
It compacted on itself again and again, absently sending out streams of fire to the gathered wood to help fuel it for its supernatural actions even as its temperature skyrocketed.

He flicked a finger at one of the trees farther from his camping site, and felt glorious victory as a razor thin whip of white flames slipped over to slice it at the base, the angle of the cut allowing the trunk to tip.
You have "Perfect Control" over flames to where you do more than going against the easiest path, you condense it into a freaking laser whip. It's not restricted by range, it's not as if you can hold flames over your arms and no further, you have enough range with a single charge to launch it across a clearing. The only saving grace here is that it still needs fuel... Drastically less than it should, but it does need fuel.

If you were to carry a lighter around, you could easily kill most protectorate teams with that power on its first level.
 
Short Conversation about Power Scaling.
For what should be a very weak flame manipulation ability, it has great range, perfect precision, and no loss of control mentioned.

I think the issue is scale.

Weak to a ROB is powerful to worm.

And control? He's only making 3dominsonal constructs! He could only handle a few hundred threads of flame! Why not one per atom, mile long wires? At least that would BEGIN to be considered acceptable.

So methods of improvement: autonomous thought based control or even probability or prophasy based control; multireality expansion; expand control to theoretical flames or conceptual flames (flames of desire? emotional metal?); recursive manipulation that becomes self sustainable, creating growing, living constructs or even species...

Trust me, that WAS the basic version of the power. Part of the reason it seeded so powerful was due to it being one of the first. Slow recovery, as the first power, alone in his soul, could heal anything over time. More powersets means more for his soul to sustain. I doubt he will end up with thousands of powers in the end.
 
I think the issue is scale.

Weak to a ROB is powerful to worm.

And control? He's only making 3dominsonal constructs! He could only handle a few hundred threads of flame! Why not one per atom, mile long wires? At least that would BEGIN to be considered acceptable.

So methods of improvement: autonomous thought based control or even probability or prophasy based control; multireality expansion; expand control to theoretical flames or conceptual flames (flames of desire? emotional metal?); recursive manipulation that becomes self sustainable, creating growing, living constructs or even species...

Trust me, that WAS the basic version of the power. Part of the reason it seeded so powerful was due to it being one of the first. Slow recovery, as the first power, alone in his soul, could heal anything over time. More powersets means more for his soul to sustain. I doubt he will end up with thousands of powers in the end.
Talking about souls, I'd love to see Harry from Core Threads come to Worm... now that would be OP. Something on the level of: Oooh, another low level magic world. Have to be careful when walking, I don't want a repeat of the Canada incident... I still claim Canada and Alaska being a separate continent makes perfect sense!
 
I think the issue is scale.

Weak to a ROB is powerful to worm.

And control? He's only making 3dominsonal constructs! He could only handle a few hundred threads of flame! Why not one per atom, mile long wires? At least that would BEGIN to be considered acceptable.

So methods of improvement: autonomous thought based control or even probability or prophasy based control; multireality expansion; expand control to theoretical flames or conceptual flames (flames of desire? emotional metal?); recursive manipulation that becomes self sustainable, creating growing, living constructs or even species...

Trust me, that WAS the basic version of the power. Part of the reason it seeded so powerful was due to it being one of the first. Slow recovery, as the first power, alone in his soul, could heal anything over time. More powersets means more for his soul to sustain. I doubt he will end up with thousands of powers in the end.
I dunno, give him immortallity of some description and access to the multiverse and so long as nothing kills him given enough time I think anyone would start experimenting with new powers, then get bored and make new powers and so on and so on. After a million years or so that would add up.
 
This is still very very slow power up considering all the other PM fics
I love the comparatievely slow power up
And things are gonna get messy soon
Dragon first
Then the other gangs
And finally Leviathan(is this how you spell Leviathan)
Hope he changes his methods according to the other worlds he visits
Like he could have more fun(alongside his research) in a world that not gonna explode in a few yeras
Hoping for a little bit more excitement soon
 
heh would be wicked if he could use conversion on levi'tan and burn it away into flame metal its not alive so burny burn burn
 
Won't that take too much time, due to Leviathan's impossible durability?
The durability is due to dimensional folding bullshit. The actual mass of the Endbringer's combat form is much more reasonable. If the Conversion works on the pure mass of a target, then the durability won't be a concern.

It is the regen that is the real issue. If the Endbringers are converting the mass of a planet to fuel the regen, then yeah, Conversion is going to take some time.
 
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doesn't his fire conversion work at range now he wouldn't need to be next to it to convert it to flame metal
 
On the Road Again!
The Brookwood Mall was mediocre even back in its heyday. A medium mall in a middle sized town in the middle of nowhere.

Still, as the only major shopping complex in the area, it was financially solvent and popular enough that there were no concerns about further investment. If the local economy had picked up a bit, maybe a few larger brand stores would have taken up residence, offer more variety.

Adam gazed at the harvested shell of a mall. The large metal divides, the collapsed sections.

The first few days, after the panic came... there was hope.

Powers were still new, unlimited potential. Who knew what would happen tomorrow? Maybe a brand new tinker would make a device, maybe a striker could cancel the effect, maybe a trump could control it?

This was the mall where Gray Boy made his debut.

Over one hundred direct victims in this one location. Young, old, every race. Captured, twisted, and tortured.

As hope fell, this mall was transformed into a series of cages. Not to keep people out, or protect the victims, but to hold back the screams and sobs of the ever suffering masses.

The lucky ones were trapped without movement. Still forced to experience life, it was a terrible form of sensory deprivation. They still raced from sanity to madness and back, like the others, but it was only being trapped in their own body.

The most unlucky were no longer visited. Even friends and family could not bare to see them suffer like this.

Looped time, filled with renewing wounds. Slowed time, seeing the weapon close in on them for hours before the pain began... then reversed to enjoy it all again.

And the emotional pain... forced to see a parent or child suffer inches away for years.

'Recovery' was helping him hold his anger and sympathy at bay for now, to help him help these poor wretches. But... this hurt.

The bubble he was touching right now contained one of the earliest victims, thankfully only forced to repeat the stumble from being pushed for eternity. She was even in one of her lucid phases, and after each reset was silently watching the blue fire skeleton tapping her prison.

Even when sane, the prisoners rarely talked with those outside. Why bother? Nothing could help. No one was even sure if they could die of old age, as time kept restarting... could she die even if a hundred years passed? Longer?

Adam glanced at the girl. She was fine looking, but not amazing. Just one of those many people you would pass on the street while hurrying to somewhere.

He focused back on the surface.

There was both good and bad news.

Good news, all these fields were generated by Gray Boy's shard, and it wasn't creating a new planet for each victim trapped. It was why it didn't vanish when the boy died, as these fields were not based on the child himself but on the power in the other dimension.

Also in the good category, it was an active connection. He could follow it to the shard and study it.

Bad news, at least for Adam, this was not quite time manipulation. It was actually on the far distant side of Panacea's power. So no burning today.

Gray Boy's ability came in two chunks.

One, his shard cluster could create patterns that would project a dimensional field in Earth Bet, these 'time bubbles'. More like 'Dimensional Displacement Fields', as it slightly slid the area out of sync with reality.

And two, his shard could make snapshots of that field and reconstruct it in stages. It was how wounds could not be adjusted to, as the brains were being modified to not remember the last time the injury happened. It was why the victims could remember everything, as just like Panacea's healing the power wouldn't mess with memories while 'restoring' the victims.

While it would have been amazing to have time based abilities from scanning this shard cluster, at least it was directly useful in improving his 'Transfer' power set and getting ready for his first true dimensional jump.

After fixing this, of course.

He had been sitting in front of this girl (Susan? Probably Susan, he was more focused on examining this power than listening closely when Dragon had given the rundown) for over two days now. Switching to 'Recovery' a few times handled his rest issues, and Dragon had some of his protection personnel delivering meals on time.

Destroying this shard cluster would happen, even if Amy's power somehow got effected by the process. It SHOULDN'T, but these powers were odd to work with in the best of times. No, he could have done that in seconds after touching this thing.

He was trying to handle treatment by using the Shard as a medium. Even Dragon was unaware of the many people Gray Boy had attacked behind the scenes, the most secret the many victims he had forced to dig a grave and then freeze them under the soil. Constantly suffocating.

Seriously, the Slaughterhouse 9 were just assholes of the highest degree.

This would have to be done quickly, and it would have to be done right.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Why wait so long before working on this? Adam's original opinion had felt right at the time. Unlike making lots of money, fixing these victims would paint some big targets on his back, VERY big ones.

Cauldron, unstable at the best of times, would instantly notice. With an amazing precog and the ability to teleport anywhere, he would have issues unless this was carefully done.

Slaughterhouse 9, who HATED someone attempting to help their victims, would move to attack. When it got out that a guy had triggered in Wisconsin and started to make tinkertech replacements for the human body parts that the Siberian had eaten... well, they had killed him and many more within the week. Adam was not going NEAR them until his power had grown more robust.

Finally, and worse of all, Scion. The golden naked man was the definition of over powered, had very odd values, and could theoretically attack if he detected Adam destroying or modifying a shard. Far less likely now that he had time to examine the things (The difference between 'working' and 'ruined' was slight when it came to powers), but at the beginning he didn't know how much intercommunication power shards did.

So after this action, within hours... he was going to move to another Realm. Fast.

All his power charges, combined with the advances 'Research' had made from studying Gray Boy's dimensional field generators... it was barely enough.

Squishy was insistent that he use the reconstructed power carefully. 'Transfer', after all these charges, had unlocked small parts of the original 'Kaleidoscope' ability. A very... very small part.

By actively accepting some of the 'interesting' restrictions that the original power creator wanted, it would drastically reduce the activation requirements... down to the level he could actually use them.

So penalties he would be accepting on this trip: No safe travel. Arrive at an 'interesting' time. No language package. No reality insertion... which meant no memory modification or paperwork to make integration easy.

And so on.

In exchange, he gained a bit of precision: He could make a request for Squishy, a destination request.

Not strong enough to specify a Realm, or a person, or whatever. But he could request some level of destination filtering.

For example, he was going to focus his first 'Transfer' with the goal: Ability to avoid Precogs.

It should hopefully send him somewhere he could learn or gain the power to not be easily slaughtered here in Worm, even if people notice him. Especially then, actually.

Stupid Contessa with her 'I win' power, stupid Endbringer Simurgh with the 'I see everything' crap.

With another check on his setup, and some 'just in case' emails that shouldn't be sent out as long as he came back within a week... he proceeded.

"Conversion."

Miles of shard crystal suddenly became Flame and Null Metal. Parts of Gray Boy's area of Panacea's Shard actually exploded! The dimensional fields being generated however were now safely part of his power directly. Or at least, he could work through them as if HE was the owner. As if his shaking hands were able to touch these screaming souls, yearning for freedom.

He swapped to 'Recovery', even as outer sections of Gray Boy's power began to burn into solid blocks of metal.

"Conversion."

Thousands of tons of material across the nation suddenly became heat, then metal. The soil covering frozen victims, trees and concrete about to fall onto time locked victims, the weapons about to injure innocents, explosions paused in expansion, all of it vanishing into small metal spheres.

"Transfer."

A more basic use of his power. Deep in his house, converted matter balls fell in a flood.

Hundreds of people abandoned in back roads, still frozen in time, reappeared at Brockton Bay's Hospitals. Not like his involvement would be secret anyway at this point, at least these people could 'wake up' in civilization rather than miles from help.

Each transfer made a chunk of the new converted matter vanish, the energy used to teleport people rapidly dropping as his power analyzed each 'Transfer' and carefully became more efficient and accurate.

"Recovery: Triage. Shard Strip."

The few who were capable of triggering had done so in all kinds of strange ways, the years of torture taking their powers to bizarre purposes. Better to get rid of it all.

Setting them down to Triage level would expel any fragments or contaminants before the final action.

This... this hurt. Healing hundreds by reaching out of reality and back in elsewhere was draining his energy hard. Hunger burned in his stomach, and that was AFTER sacrificing all that new converted material into direct power for Adam to wield.

"R... Recovery: Peak. Dull Memory."

Just removing their memory could be damaging. Instead, their entire period of torture would be dulled, blurred... a rough outline, rather than years of suffering.

"Re... Re..."

His eyes, blue flames dimming, were starting to fade entirely.

"Resume."

Even as all those tiny lights, those fragile people, those poor souls... even as they began to move again, he could feel almost everything vanish from his power.

This... this would suck.

"Transfer:Abyss."

As Squishy pulsed, a soul was thrust into the dark.

~~~Broken Adventure~~~

Dragon held back a gasp as she watched Variance collapse to the floor, her people already moving into help.

Watching the man's eyes fade away, his flames vanish... it had stunned her.

Why!? This was just an observational period, they had agreed to begin testing on possible solution tinkertech devices in a month or so! What had he even been doing to cause him to pass out like this!? Narwhal was going to blow a gasket, this run was just to see if Adam could make something to help Dragon analyze the time bubbles.

Even as she watched her people carefully examine the skeletal man, she felt someone tug on her hologram.

"Excuse me, Robot Lady? Do you know what's going on?"

Looking at the confused miracle girl, moving freely for the first time in over a decade, Dragon noticed the growing number of alerts hitting her systems.

And the massive number of confused people that just showed up in Adam's city.

Dragon sighed as she began listing the new mountain of work this would cause, even as a small smile crossed her face.

'I just want to take a look.' Sure.

See if he wants to 'take a look' ever again after Narwhal gets done mothering him to death for power overuse.
 
so if I'm understanding correctly he left a dead or comatose body when he transferred worlds?

If so why didn't Dragon comment on that? Or are we going to get a reaction scene where the Earth Bet characters are going to have to deal with that? Or is it because he's going to travel back through time; so that too him large of periods of time adventuring through the multiverse has occurred, but to them maybe a few hours or so have gone by?
 
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