CVN-78. Equipped with the most advanced naval technology. We are the sci fi future, and after PSA (or overhaul 1), with directed energy weapons, electric armor and advanced systems that are beyond current technologies. Our ship is pretty much a star destroyer.

@ckk185 our yard literally has been doing this since 18xx, the founder built the town and schools for his yard.
 
I never said I wasn't going to bring carriers out (or if I did, that wasn't what I meant to imply.) Carriers are a crucial part of naval warfare. They might not have the same prominence as they did in real life, but they're still Capital Ships. The fact that all the main characters of this fic are surface warships means that the carriers jobs might happen mostly off-screen, but it doesn't mean I'm just gonna leave the CV's hanging.
:D
They did a better job than just about anyone else, and American ships tended to have stupidly large AA suites, especially when compared to their Japanese counterparts.
Those are both true.
Jersey: You misspelled "FREEDOM!"
And what is this boat of which you speak?
Why Jersey! Don't tell me you don't recognizeyour own sister now do you?
At least I'm assuming that's what/who Ryand-Smith's talking about.

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CVN-78. Equipped with the most advanced naval technology. We are the sci fi future, and after PSA (or overhaul 1), with directed energy weapons, electric armor and advanced systems that are beyond current technologies. Our ship is pretty much a star destroyer.

@ckk185 our yard literally has been doing this since 18xx, the founder built the town and schools for his yard.
or he could be a crewmember on the USN's latest aircraft carrier that still has issues with its systems. One system fails, everything it's connected to goes *pppbbt*, right? Still awesome though, don't get me wrong.
 
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Written really freaking late because I had an idea that wouldn't die. We'll see if this hits the tone I was looking for...
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The grizzled old man settled back into his chair, his weatherbeaten features cracking into a craggy smile as the television droned on. Ever since New Jersey's return, every news station in the country had been running non-stop commentary on her actions in the Sound.

Anchors and reporters lept over each other to sing the praises of the monstrous battleship now reborn as a beautiful young woman. The old man'd even seen the battleship's outfit talked about on one of the shows his daughter watched. A ship returning to fight in the form of a girl… even after more than a year, the media went crazy every time it happens.

They treated it like it was something new… but the old man'd been young once. He'd served on a destroyer during the War. He knew ships were always ladies… now they were just showing it a bit more.

He smiled as the screen cut from yammering newscasters to the helicopter footage. As old and supposedly outdated as they were, a battleship's awesome wrath couldn't be denied.

Of course, as much as seeing the Big J throwing her weight around once again warmed his heart, there was another ship he longed to see once more. His ship. USS Hoel. The tin-can who sent a battleship running. She was magnificent… he just hoped he lived long enough to see-

The old man blinked, his eyes flicking towards the door. His hearing might be going with age, but he swore he heard the doorbell ring.

ding dong

There it was again! He carefully pulled himself to his feet. His steps were slow and careful, but there wasn't a hint of shakiness or hesitation in his aged stride. He was a destroyerman after all, it was the kind of job that took nerves of steel in the face of danger.

ding dong

"I'm coming, I'm…" the old man trailed off as he reached the entryway. Perched on the front window sill as a tiny creature wearing naval dress blues. The figure, it couldn't be more than three or four inches tall, wordlessly stared up at him. Its minute face was dominated by its enormous eyes and ruddy cheeks, and its tiny hands rested by its sides.

"Hey little guy," said the old man, carefully lowering himself to address the lilliputian figure. Or be addressed. Something told him the tiny little figure outranked him.

The figure—the faerie, it had to be—let out a tiny sound of welcome, then waved to something on the front porch.

The old man leaned towards the open window, peering down at whatever the faerie was waving at. He let out a raspy laugh when he saw it.

A teeny Navy staff car was parked on his front porch, a faerie enlisted man standing enthusiastically at attention by the front wheel. Another two fae ratings were manhandling—faeriehandling?—a giant envelope off the top of the car.

Well, it was giant to them to him, it was a hair smaller than an ordinary letter. "Here," he reached out, offering his hand to the two winded ratings.

They glanced at one another, then the officer on the windowsill. After a nod of confirmation, the two ratings stepped back and let the old man open the envelope.

Inside was a single piece of paper. A letter addressed to him written in childish earnest. the letters flowed together with graceless, breathless energy. Every so often, a word or two was simply crossed out instead of being erased. He'd recognize that messy scrawl anywhere, even though he'd never seen it before. It might as well have been written on his heart.

To Master Chief Aaron Davis,

I need you, chief I know it's asking alot a lot But I need you back I'm coming back to the fight but I can't fight without my crew my faeres are trying they're their best but your you're so much better they need a real destroyerman to whip them into shape

please come back.
Love,
USS Hoel.
 
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Written really freaking late because I had an idea that wouldn't die. We'll see if this hits the tone I was looking for...
*settles in*
The grizzled old man settled back into his chair, his weatherbeaten features cracking into a craggy smile as the television droned on. Ever since New Jersey's return, every news station in the country had been running non-stop commentary on her actions in the Sound.
So this is that veteran idea mentioned awhile back getting written. FEELZ incoming!
They treated it like it was something new… but the old man'd been young once. He'd served on a destroyer during the War. He knew ships were always ladies… now they were just showing it a bit more.
So not Jersey, which leaves...
Of course, as much as seeing the Big J throwing her weight around once again warmed his heart, there was another ship he longed to see once more. His ship. USS Hoel. The tin-can who sent a battleship running. She was magnificent… he just hoped he lived long enough to see-
A Taffy Girl. I wonder how many other Taffy-3 veterans are still around in BB.
There it was again! He carefully pulled himself to his feet. His steps were slow and careful, but there wasn't a hint of shakiness or hesitation in his aged stride. He was a destroyerman after all, it was the kind of job that took nerves of steel in the face of danger.

ding dong

"I'm coming, I'm…" the old man trailed off as he reached the entryway. Perched on the front window sill as a tiny creature wearing naval dress blues. The figure, it couldn't be more than three or four inches tall, wordlessly stared up at him. Its minute face was dominated by its enormous eyes and ruddy cheeks, and its tiny hands rested by its sides.

"Hey little guy," said the old man, carefully lowering himself to address the lilliputian figure. Or be addressed. Something told him the tiny little figure outranked him.
Now that's just adorable.
To Master Chief Aaron Davis,

I need you, chief I know it's asking alot a lot But I need you back I'm coming back to the fight but I can't fight without my crew my faeres are trying they're their best but your you're so much better they need a real destroyerman to whip them into shape

please come back.
Love,
USS Hoel.
I can say yes, yes you hit all the right notes. I know this because I am legit crying right now. You have provoked an emotional reaction, this is now art. Magnificent work.
 
Kinda surprised it wasn't the planned Montana-class, really. Weren't the Montana's supposed to be Super Battleships roughly equivalent to the intended role of the Yamato-class?
 
*reverse googles* A fictional Fast Battleship based on the planned Lexington-class Battlecruiser? Wow, you get around the internet Kiyone4ever.

Yes and slightly less fictional than some might think! That's The Taylor Design D... Rejected by the Naval Board as too powerful and radical in favor of the ship that evolved into the Lexington class Battlecruiser. 55,000 tons in a 1920 design. Basically the unholy crossing of Lexington and the 1921 South Dakota.
 
Weren't the Montana's supposed to be Super Battleships roughly equivalent to the intended role of the Yamato-class?
If by that you mean having superior armor and firepower to the Iowa class at the expense of speed and the ability to use the Panama canal? Then no. The Montana was intended to counter the Yamato. Her armor was designed to withstand her own 16"/50 guns' 'super heavy' Mark 8 APC shell, the ones that are almost identical in performance to the Yamato's 18.1".
 
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Wot... The USS United States was supposed to be the first super carrier, but was canceled by the leMay types (and then Korea shut up some people, with Polaris and Vietnam shutting them up for good), or something.


Also man if BB is modern era my god that man would be in his 80s (which is scary to think that the last WW2 vets besides the super livers may start dying off by 2020)
 
Flagship of her destroyer division while serving the USN, and flagship of the Kure Guard Force in the IJN? Man Stewart's got a lot of leadership credentials to put on her resume. :p
You know what though? Looking at it, we could have a pretty decently balanced patrol group for Arizona here. Albacore as the sub would help guard them, you have Stewart as ASW while Kidd and Van Valkenburgh handle AA leaving Arizona to kick major ass.
 
And another Jane and Arizona omake:
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Hearing the door to her room open, Jane looked up to see an exhausted and frazzled looking Arizona. The battleship stumbled over to Jane's bed and collapsed into it face first. For several moments, Jane just stared at her before she got up and walked over. "Arizona?" Poking her, all she got was a groan in return. "Arizona?"

Once more, Jane poked her but only got a muffled mumble. A nervous chuckle caused Jane to turn to see an embarrassed Mutsu. "Hey, maybe we went a bit too far...~"

Her cheeks puffing out, Jane set her hands on her hips. "What did you do?"

Even though she found the image cute, Mutsu only scratched her cheek. "We went out shopping and it looks like we went a bit far..." Getting a snort from the facedown battleship, Mutsu coughed. "I'll... Go downstairs..."

Still frowning, Jane watched as Mutsu left and closed the door behind her. Turning around, Jane got up onto her bed and attempted to flip the grunting Arizona. Eventually she managed and then straddled Arizona's stomach, the battleship just staring at her as the only sign she was alive was her breathing. "What happened?"

There was few moments before Arizona answered her. "The Admiral's gift is what happened."

Blinking, Jane tilted her head. "Daddy's gift to you?"

With a tired sigh, Arizona only nodded. "Apparently the fact he gave me a... iPod caused Mutsu and Hiei to drag me around to find the 'Perfect music' for me." Groaning, she threw one arm across her eyes. "Needless to say, the two of them had very different ideas of what music would fit me... Especially as Hiei was a fan of some group called 'The Beetles'. And the less said about the fight between her and Albacore over the Rolling Stones, the better. Mutsu was more into... And then Jintsuu just now gushing about her sister and something called 'J-Pop'."

Eyebrows furrowed, Jane crossed her arms. "So you didn't find any music at all?"

Just barely raising a hand above the bed, Arizona tilted it from side to side. "The Admiral did point me toward a singer called Frank Sinatra." Some redness rose in her cheeks as she smiled. "The Admiral did a good job of guessing there, it reminds me of music from when I was a ship."

Head tilted to the side, Jane blinked. "Oh."

Noticing the expression on Jane's face as well as how she shifted a little in place, Arizona sighed as she gave the little girl a tired smile. "Let me guess, you think that you know some music that I might like?"

A nervous smile was on Jane's face as she nodded. "Um, yes?"

While she shook her head, Arizona sighed as she made to get up. "Very well then..." Slightly surprised as Jane put a hand on her shoulder to stop her from getting up, Arizona raised an eyebrow. "Jane?"

Giggling, Jane shook her head. "I'll get my laptop."

Arizona only shifted until she was more on the bed and watched as Jane grabbed her laptop, earbuds, a pencil and notepad. Then she got back onto the bed and crawled until she was beside Arizona and cuddled up to the battleship. If anything though, Arizona became more amused as Jane plucked the shipgirl's cover off and put it on. "You done, young lady?"

With a grin, Jane handed her one of the earbuds which Arizona put in as she placed the other one in her ear. "Yup!" Bringing up YouTube onto her laptop, she frowned for a moment. "What was that band that guy at our old base liked? Um... CCR?"

Simply watching, Arizona blinked as Jane typed in the letters. 'This... Would have been a lot simpler to do.' Then she frowned a bit as she caught sight of one of the song names. "Lookin' out my back door?"

Humming, Jane nodded as she clicked on it. "Okay." Several seconds into the song, Jane held back a giggle as Arizona's foot twitched to the beat of the music. "You like it?"

After a few moments, Arizona nodded a bit. "I do..."

It was a few hours later that found Richardson looking into the room to find the two asleep, Jane cuddled up into Arizona's side. Walking in, he gently took the notepad beside Jane and looked at it. 'Hmm... Creedance Clearwater Revival... Lynard Skynyrd... Interesting choices.' Putting the notepad onto the side table, he took the now powerless laptop and put it back onto Jane's desk before he left.

Though not before he took a picture of the two sleeping for posterity's sake.
Hmm... I'm going to steal Richardson's words and say interesting pick of artists indeed. Sinatra I can see quite easily. CCR and Skynad were a bit unexpected until I fired up a few of my own. I can see Ari digging them. A bit more soothing. :)

Jintsuu would definitely be into J-Pop. It's her sister's musical bread and butter after all. Hiei and the Beatles is rather fitting choice and I cannot fathom why. Somehow it just works. But the fight with her and Abacore over the Stone? That I really want to see. I'm also wondering just what kind of music it was that Mutsu was into that made Ari pause. XD
Mutsu: My my. A girl needs her secrets~

Good girl Jane, making life a little easier for the beleaguered momboat. And I want a copy of that picture!

Nice work!
Written really freaking late because I had an idea that wouldn't die. We'll see if this hits the tone I was looking for...
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The grizzled old man settled back into his chair, his weatherbeaten features cracking into a craggy smile as the television droned on. Ever since New Jersey's return, every news station in the country had been running non-stop commentary on her actions in the Sound.

Anchors and reporters lept over each other to sing the praises of the monstrous battleship now reborn as a beautiful young woman. The old man'd even seen the battleship's outfit talked about on one of the shows his daughter watched. A ship returning to fight in the form of a girl… even after more than a year, the media went crazy every time it happens.

They treated it like it was something new… but the old man'd been young once. He'd served on a destroyer during the War. He knew ships were always ladies… now they were just showing it a bit more.

He smiled as the screen cut from yammering newscasters to the helicopter footage. As old and supposedly outdated as they were, a battleship's awesome wrath couldn't be denied.

Of course, as much as seeing the Big J throwing her weight around once again warmed his heart, there was another ship he longed to see once more. His ship. USS Hoel. The tin-can who sent a battleship running. She was magnificent… he just hoped he lived long enough to see-

The old man blinked, his eyes flicking towards the door. His hearing might be going with age, but he swore he heard the doorbell ring.

ding dong

There it was again! He carefully pulled himself to his feet. His steps were slow and careful, but there wasn't a hint of shakiness or hesitation in his aged stride. He was a destroyerman after all, it was the kind of job that took nerves of steel in the face of danger.

ding dong

"I'm coming, I'm…" the old man trailed off as he reached the entryway. Perched on the front window sill as a tiny creature wearing naval dress blues. The figure, it couldn't be more than three or four inches tall, wordlessly stared up at him. Its minute face was dominated by its enormous eyes and ruddy cheeks, and its tiny hands rested by its sides.

"Hey little guy," said the old man, carefully lowering himself to address the lilliputian figure. Or be addressed. Something told him the tiny little figure outranked him.

The figure—the faerie, it had to be—let out a tiny sound of welcome, then waved to something on the front porch.

The old man leaned towards the open window, peering down at whatever the faerie was waving at. He let out a raspy laugh when he saw it.

A teeny Navy staff car was parked on his front porch, a faerie enlisted man standing enthusiastically at attention by the front wheel. Another two fae ratings were manhandling—faeriehandling?—a giant envelope off the top of the car.

Well, it was giant to them to him, it was a hair smaller than an ordinary letter. "Here," he reached out, offering his hand to the two winded ratings.

They glanced at one another, then the officer on the windowsill. After a nod of confirmation, the two ratings stepped back and let the old man open the envelope.

Inside was a single piece of paper. A letter addressed to him written in childish earnest. the letters flowed together with graceless, breathless energy. Every so often, a word or two was simply crossed out instead of being erased. He'd recognize that messy scrawl anywhere, even though he'd never seen it before. It might as well have been written on his heart.

To Master Chief Aaron Davis,

I need you, chief I know it's asking alot a lot But I need you back I'm coming back to the fight but I can't fight without my crew my faeres are trying they're their best but your you're so much better they need a real destroyerman to whip them into shape

please come back.
Love,
USS Hoel.
At first I thought this would be a flashback. Then I realized this is the present.

At first I thought this would just be the recollections of an old sialor. Then he saw the fairy.

Then there was the car. And the letter. That letter written in such a very Hoel way.

Then I cried with a grin.

You hit that tone, sir. You hit it hard.
I can say yes, yes you hit all the right notes. I know this because I am legit crying right now. You have provoked an emotional reaction, this is now art. Magnificent work.
You are not the only one. The BelBat universe has promped more emotional responses from me than any other work I've encountered.
You know what though? Looking at it, we could have a pretty decently balanced patrol group for Arizona here. Albacore as the sub would help guard them, you have Stewart as ASW while Kidd and Van Valkenburgh handle AA leaving Arizona to kick major ass.
Richardson: I couldn't sit for a week after all the shit I pulled to get the escorts I did.
HIei: And you're going to do the same for Ari. *nods in that imperiously Hiei fashion*
Mutsu: I'm sure she'd like to meet them regardless.
Arizona: *gives Richardson a broadside of Destroyer Eyes™*
Richardson: Fuck...
 
Can we perhaps get back to the more important issues on the table rather than debate Rule of Cool vs Reality Ensues?

Namely the fact we have a massive fleet featuring an utterly epic composition steaming to take on Hoppo and the fact Professor Crowning is going to take Battleship New Jersey on a date.

To have pie.

DATE AND PIE.

I can hear the wedding bells and they are glorious~
No fair, Ari! Destroyer Eyes are an irresistible weapon.
Mutsu: Oh, we've all hit him with it at some point. Even her~ *pokes Jintsuu's cheek playfully*
Jintsuu: *blushes*

And then Albacore learned how to Destroyer Eyes™.

She could already steal anything she needed. But now she can steal everything. Forever.
 
Apple Pie or get out.
Of course it's Apple Pie. Do you think Crowning would go into battle without?
What have you done?!
What I always do. Make something already unnerving into something terrifying.
Invented the Shipgirl version of Carmen Sandiego?
Ninja Carmen Sandiego. :drevil:
I'm Hoping on a piece on Ari's Crew Writing her or visiting.
Hmm...
 
Invented the Shipgirl version of Carmen Sandiego?
Damn you, now I have the theme song stuck in my head. Would Albacore wear the awesome hat, though...

I'm Hoping on a piece on Ari's Crew Writing her or visiting.
Unfortunately, by the time the Abyssal War would start, she has no surviving crew members left :(. The last one died in February 2015:
Last surviving crew member of USS Arizona dies at 100
 
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