You feel a nervous, giddy energy that compels you to pace
Durand probably has a reputation as restless and energetic; a person who cannot keep still.
the crumbling environs of the old manor
What do rich/powerful hobgoblins build for themselves?
High doors for the elven gentry who owned the place
Never underestimate elves. They ruled much of the world for a reason after all, and they are still a very dangerous and formidable enemy.
not that elven art is especially your area of expertise
"To defeat an enemy, you must know them. Not simply their battle tactics, but their history. Philosophy. Art."
An enemy commander who is likely to face Durand in battle reading a book about hobgoblin history and culture, and studying what may or may not be artwork made by a hobgoblin.
A decaying wyvern's head on the wall...when such beasts still had free rein of Arne
Photomajig, thanks for writing it as a wyvern instead of a dragon. In my opinion, in any and all fantasy settings, just the mere word 'dragon' should cause fear and disquiet.
The appearance of a single dragon should cause two fighting armies to panic and to flee. (yes, I consider the 'dragons' in A Song of Ice and Fire to be wyverns. You cannot tame a true dragon)
For me, the best dragons are the ones in Forgotten Realms.
A group of adventurers burst into a manor belonging to a dragon (in FR, dragons can shapeshift and wield magic) and when they declare that they are here to 'slay the dragon and take its treasure', the outraged dragon yells at them to get out of his house and calls the city guard who promptly arrest and throw the adventuring party into a holding cell. The dragon is a law-abiding and tax-paying
citizen, and if the guard-captain hears one more time of them harassing any of his people again, he will have them driven out of the city.
If a dragon shows up in this story, I say Durand should abandon everything and order her army to cut and run. Or stop and listen to what the dragon has to say...assuming the dragon would bother to waste words with 'lesser beings'.
Fire a cannonball at a dragon and it'd just be mildly annoyed by it.
Caught and killed by their faithful hobs
Durand's got racial pride. Nothing wrong with that, I say. It's if she starts speaking ill of other races that it'd become a problem. Though I wouldn't mind if Durand is written to have at least some level of prejudice. Still, she of course would have to set all that aside to prevent it from impeding her in her military career.
The Beriev A-50.
Attacking one of those is like attacking the commander/player themselves in an RTS game.
In the setting of this story, it is cavalry who are the eyes and ears of any army. Train your cavalry units well, and be careful of who you pick to be their commander. Durand is an artillery specialist, not one in cavalry.
She has never felt so alive
People who choose to become pilots. I also thought of Lyanna Stark, who was never happier than when she was on horseback (I do not like Rhaegar Targaryen by the way. I see him as just like his father, only he was much better at hiding what he was, from others and from himself)
just another wandering beggar with a title
A hedge knight?
If Durand is watching this fiasco from the manor
She has pride and an ego, and does not wish to make herself look bad in front of her superior.
elven sight is not so easily deterred
Durand may use the excellent eyesight of elves against them, to deceive them into seeing something that she wants them to.
Do not be afraid to make mistakes; this is a tutorial and the start of your career
Napoleon lost at least one battle in his campaign in Northern Italy. He still won in the end. He also won most of the battles in Russia in 1812, but by the end of that campaign...