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I just have bad memories of votes getting horrendously convoluted
Hm... I know what you mean.
In my opinion, the important thing is to keep a balance between long and short; do not take in anything you do not need for a good reason, but do not leave out anything that might be important for the character.
In fact, I think I need to clean up my first version a bit... it is a little convoluted as is, but most of the points are important.
Edit: Although the lines about chatting with Morgan are mostly for Rukia to work with instead of having to come up with everything by themselves.
So, here is Vote v.2:
[X] Just take the name; Infinity Edge is as good as any
[X] Chat with Morgan and unwind some more from that workout-session; use the time to ask a few questions, too
-[X] How long has she been with the Clocktower?
-[X] How does she usually spend her free time?
[X] Now that you think about it, you take up a lot of her time recently; ask Morgan if that is really okay
-[X] If she does not mind, invite her along for what you want to do next
[X] You want to find out your Affinities... and maybe talk to Karen a little more
-[X] See if Karen is free
--[X] If yes, go talk to her and thank her for the effort she is making for you
---[X] Chat a little bit; you are curious how she manages to look this young... even though the answer will probably be "Magic" or "It's a secret~"
---[X] Bring up your Affinities and that Morgan mentioned she could tell you
--[X] If no, find this James person and introduce yourself
---[X] Chat a bit, but keep it short if he seems overly busy; if he has some time, ask what his work is about and if he has any cool stuff he can show you
---[X] Then bring up your Affinities and that Morgan mentioned he could tell you.
[X] If Morgan is still with you, have her decide how to spend the rest of the day
-[X] Ask Una, too; you just kept pulling those two around
The only real changes I put in are in that big block of interaction; cleaned up a bit to reduce it by a few lines. I can not make it any shorter because these are two branches and each needs those two lines... but...
I could change it around so that we go talk to James either way to introduce ourselves, but only bring up the Affinities if Karen had no time for us? Any thoughts on that matter?
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[x] Find out your Affinities
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[X] Just take the name; Infinity Edge is as good as any
[X] Chat with Morgan and unwind some more from that workout-session; use the time to ask a few questions, too
-[X] How long has she been with the Clocktower?
-[X] How does she usually spend her free time?
[X] Now that you think about it, you take up a lot of her time recently; ask Morgan if that is really okay
-[X] If she does not mind, invite her along for what you want to do next
[X] You want to find out your Affinities... and maybe talk to Karen a little more
-[X] See if Karen is free
--[X] If yes, go talk to her and thank her for the effort she is making for you
---[X] Chat a little bit; you are curious how she manages to look this young... even though the answer will probably be "Magic" or "It's a secret~"
---[X] Bring up your Affinities and that Morgan mentioned she could tell you
--[X] If no, find this James person and introduce yourself
---[X] Chat a bit, but keep it short if he seems overly busy; if he has some time, ask what his work is about and if he has any cool stuff he can show you
---[X] Then bring up your Affinities and that Morgan mentioned he could tell you.
[X] If Morgan is still with you, have her decide how to spend the rest of the day
-[X] Ask Una, too; you just kept pulling those two around
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[X] Just take the name; Infinity Edge is as good as any
-[X] Make a joke about naming it after Una
[X] Chat with Morgan and unwind some more from that workout-session; use the time to ask a few questions, too
-[X] How long has she been with the Clocktower?
-[X] How does she usually spend her free time?
[X] Now that you think about it, you take up a lot of her time recently; ask Morgan if that is really okay
-[X] If she does not mind, invite her along for what you want to do next
[X] You want to find out your Affinities.
[X] If Morgan is still with you, have her decide how to spend the rest of the day
-[X] Ask Una, too; you just kept pulling those two around
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[x] Find out your Affinities
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[X] Just take the name; Infinity Edge is as good as any
[X] Chat with Morgan and unwind some more from that workout-session; use the time to ask a few questions, too
-[X] How long has she been with the Clocktower?
-[X] How does she usually spend her free time?
[X] Now that you think about it, you take up a lot of her time recently; ask Morgan if that is really okay
-[X] If she does not mind, invite her along for what you want to do next
[X] You want to find out your Affinities... and maybe talk to Karen a little more
-[X] See if Karen is free
--[X] If yes, go talk to her and thank her for the effort she is making for you
---[X] Chat a little bit; you are curious how she manages to look this young... even though the answer will probably be "Magic" or "It's a secret~"
---[X] Bring up your Affinities and that Morgan mentioned she could tell you
--[X] If no, find this James person and introduce yourself
---[X] Chat a bit, but keep it short if he seems overly busy; if he has some time, ask what his work is about and if he has any cool stuff he can show you
---[X] Then bring up your Affinities and that Morgan mentioned he could tell you.
[X] If Morgan is still with you, have her decide how to spend the rest of the day
-[X] Ask Una, too; you just kept pulling those two around
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[X] Just take the name; Infinity Edge is as good as any
-[X] Make a joke about naming it after Una
[X] Chat with Morgan and unwind some more from that workout-session; use the time to ask a few questions, too
-[X] How long has she been with the Clocktower?
-[X] How does she usually spend her free time?
[X] Now that you think about it, you take up a lot of her time recently; ask Morgan if that is really okay
-[X] If she does not mind, invite her along for what you want to do next
[X] You want to find out your Affinities.
[X] If Morgan is still with you, have her decide how to spend the rest of the day
-[X] Ask Una, too; you just kept pulling those two around
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Adhoc vote count started by Naron on Aug 27, 2017 at 11:27 AM, finished with 2362 posts and 14 votes.
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[X] Just take the name; Infinity Edge is as good as any
[X] Chat with Morgan and unwind some more from that workout-session; use the time to ask a few questions, too
-[X] How long has she been with the Clocktower?
-[X] How does she usually spend her free time?
[X] Now that you think about it, you take up a lot of her time recently; ask Morgan if that is really okay
-[X] If she does not mind, invite her along for what you want to do next
[X] You want to find out your Affinities... and maybe talk to Karen a little more
-[X] See if Karen is free
--[X] If yes, go talk to her and thank her for the effort she is making for you
---[X] Chat a little bit; you are curious how she manages to look this young... even though the answer will probably be "Magic" or "It's a secret~"
---[X] Bring up your Affinities and that Morgan mentioned she could tell you
--[X] If no, find this James person and introduce yourself
---[X] Chat a bit, but keep it short if he seems overly busy; if he has some time, ask what his work is about and if he has any cool stuff he can show you
---[X] Then bring up your Affinities and that Morgan mentioned he could tell you.
[X] If Morgan is still with you, have her decide how to spend the rest of the day
-[X] Ask Una, too; you just kept pulling those two around
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[x] Find out your Affinities
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[X] Just take the name; Infinity Edge is as good as any
-[X] Make a joke about naming it after Una
[X] Chat with Morgan and unwind some more from that workout-session; use the time to ask a few questions, too
-[X] How long has she been with the Clocktower?
-[X] How does she usually spend her free time?
[X] Now that you think about it, you take up a lot of her time recently; ask Morgan if that is really okay
-[X] If she does not mind, invite her along for what you want to do next
[X] You want to find out your Affinities.
[X] If Morgan is still with you, have her decide how to spend the rest of the day
-[X] Ask Una, too; you just kept pulling those two around
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