... That's wrong canonically. Like, Murphy went to Valhalla in canon. And in this quest Thousand Hells get regular new denizens.We know the white god shut down all the other afterlives which is why we'd need to ask for special permission in the first place.
As to why; when dealing with safety critical system you can't just assume things will go well if you don't spend time and money making them do so. I don't think it's a reasonable assumption that they'll go back, but more than that I don't think it's reasonable to assume anything with lethal consequences will end well by default in any context.
Actually the gods aren't even disallowed access to earth just making change if they're not risking themselves.We don't actually know that, and there's really nothing in Dresden Files to support that claim. The gods aren't actually completely disallowed on earth. They just aren't allowed to be there and be immortal. Odin himself is still gathering people to his afterlife. Hades might still be gathering people in to his afterlifes. We just don't know. We do know people are still passively ending up in the 1000 and regular hells though.
Not to mention the white God is essentially in charge of 2 of the largest afterlife destination. The celestial bureaucracy and the Silver City. While possibly operating the largest reincarnation engine as Brahma.
Never mind that it'd be really hypocritical. Given the near myopic Focus on free will they have to not let people choose their own afterlifes.
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I'm pretty sure they are also still can grant boons and blessings. They just can't do it with magical strings attached - though they are welcome to go down and do it themselves if they are again willing to risk it.Actually the gods aren't even disallowed access to earth just making change if they're not risking themselves.
We are also told that belief and fame gives access to reality in some capacity.
We don't actually know that, and there's really nothing in Dresden Files to support that claim. The gods aren't actually completely disallowed on earth. They just aren't allowed to be there and be immortal. Odin himself is still gathering people to his afterlife. Hades might still be gathering people in to his afterlifes. We just don't know. We do know people are still passively ending up in the 1000 and regular hells though.
Not to mention the white God is essentially in charge of 2 of the largest afterlife destination. The celestial bureaucracy and the Silver City. While possibly operating the largest reincarnation engine as Brahma.
Never mind that it'd be really hypocritical. Given the near myopic Focus on free will they have to not let people choose their own afterlifes.
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... That's wrong canonically. Like, Murphy went to Valhalla in canon. And in this quest Thousand Hells get regular new denizens.
You have nothing substantiating that claim. There's also fact that's not what shutdown means. You said the white gods shut down the other afterlives but they are still functioning and people can still make their way to them, which means they are still active.If you want to get into an off brand afterlife you've got to get in a God's face about it. The Hades doesn't get new residents no matter how hard you pray to him. You've got to make your own way to his realm.
No idea I don't think we've seen them do so but maybe they can. Also unsure how easily they can have scions.I'm pretty sure they are also still can grant boons and blessings. They just can't do it with magical strings attached - though they are welcome to go down and do it themselves if they are again willing to risk it.
As with outsiders they can't come into reality at all without invitation. While here their powers are crippled and they just can't act in the same capacity anymore. The Greek gods couldn't stop the conversion of their people despite their fame after the fact because they cannot use their powers that way anymore.Actually the gods aren't even disallowed access to earth just making change if they're not risking themselves.
We are also told that belief and fame gives access to reality in some capacity.
At one point the afterlives of the gods accepted worshippers under various large scale schemes. Now they cannot because the white god changed the rules. Personal intervention at the moment of death in the mortal world, dying in their domains, or nothing.You have nothing substantiating that claim. There's also fact that's not what shutdown means. You said the white gods shut down the other afterlives but they are still functioning and people can still make their way to them, which means they are still active.
We've seen a grand total of two Gods that Historically have operated afterlives in Dresden files and both of them still have functioning afterlives with one of them still getting active participants in the form of Einjhar and valkyries. Which seems to be the exact opposite of what you said. If all you have to do to go to your god's place of rest is to turn away an angel and walk there.Then that place is still open for business.It just means it's not convenient to go there anymore.
We see the opposite of that quite frequently every single ghost.That is a true spirit is an example of that. Never mind murphy, being able to Go to valhalla.Everything we see pretty clearly shows that you don't get to say no to the white God's soul collectors. The white god puts you on a train and you go where he tells you.
When Nicodemus sacrificed he daughter she was the first new soul in Hades since they got sidelined, old holdouts and neo-pagans weren't getting in.
We know that's not true in Skin Game. He's still getting an influx of souls. A lot of them are from people who try to break into his vault admittedly, but he is still getting souls coming to his afterlife. In skin game, they say he's getting less than the amount he had before, but still an influx of souls. Which can only be neo pagans and holdouts.At one point the afterlives of the gods accepted worshippers under various large scale schemes. Now they cannot because the white god changed the rules. Personal intervention at the moment of death in the mortal world, dying in their domains, or nothing.
A vast majority of ghosts aren't actually souls in the Dresden Files. You get sent directly to the afterlife. Murphy got direct special attention under the new rules. Hades and Odin didn't need to do this shit to collect mortals back in the day.We see the opposite of that quite frequently every single ghost.That is a true spirit is an example of that. Never mind murphy, being able to Go to valhalla.
Based on what? The white god shut the other gods down. That was the entire point of what he did. Their faiths are dead because he evicted their pantheons from reality unless they'd agree to live as something other than classical divinities.We know that's not true in Skin Game. He's still getting an influx of souls. A lot of them are from people who try to break into his vault admittedly, but he is still getting souls coming to his afterlife. In skin game, they say he's kidding less than the amount he had before, but still an influx of souls. Which can only be neo pagans and holdouts
None of this is true, however? Like, your argument is that Hades doesn't get people. Faith in Greek pantheon is very low, and faith that involves genuine involvement of said greek gods is even less. I am fairly sure (though not certain) that we don't have a statemnent directly saying "no one goes to alternative afterlives". Our people are deeply religious and have personal connection to us. If Murphy gets to go to Odin, then our people get to go to us.I addressed that though. If you want to get into an off brand afterlife you've got to get in a God's face about it. The Hades doesn't get new residents no matter how hard you pray to him. You've got to make your own way to his realm. All of Odin's modern chosen have be personally brought to his realm at some unnamed cost to the guy himself.
In the quest Yama Kings have to jump through hoops and take people who either make deals or die in very specific ways at very specific places.
There is no general allowance for people to go to the lands of their gods anymore just as the gods aren't allowed to personally intercede in the mortal world as they used to. Keeping a hand in requires significant new limits imposed by the white god.
We know the white god has other names, but not which big ones are the same guy. Remember that real world beliefs are only as relevant as they were known by and engaging to Butcher. Which is why Anansi the Spider is locked up in Mab's trophy garden for annoying her. Instead of that going as well as Elmer Fudd vs Bugs Bunny with realistic gore enabled.
Call him a hypocrite if you want, but it shouldn't be surprising that someone who appointed himself the final judge of everybody and nerfed everyone else out of the industry is enforcing his policies on people.
Forgot this one from last time. Should be a question mark.Are you still yourself, he thought looking down at the young warden trapped in stone or is it already eating at your insides.
Should have an "and" before Tiffany.The others' footsteps soon vanish down a side tunnel while you, Carlos, Tiffany escort McCoy with a single War Weaver bringing up the rear,
Need period at the end.though from the way he's holding it it's clear he means to club them over the head with the pommel more than skewer them
I believe this was intended to be "so".you elaborate, though not going to far as to explain you 'ate' them.
Thankfully the Warden Baracks isn't taken over, though it is almost empty since Warden Captain Luccio had send a good portion of those on duty into the city right before the attack.
These tunnels all connect right? You could send out a general message in the clear to draw back to the Warden Baraks and confirming there are traitors using glamors.
This should say 2 essence. 10 remaining is correct you just hadn't changed the number from 3 to 2.
Also missing a comma after "titanic scale".that that lead into a sort of domed antechamber like a cross between a classical temple and a really snazzy hank only instead of tellers the sides are manned by young wizards, too young, and the statues, wrought in the elegant shape of temple dogs built to titanic scale are alive and crowling at you
More than a head shorter than you and leading on her staff for more than affection, dresses in beautifully styled silk robes Ancient Mai, for who else could it be, looks up at the arriving company through rheumy eyes.
she motions for all of you to follow, though her gaze does linger for on Thunder's Silent Arrow for a moment as she does so.
It does not show itself openly, only to the Sight and it it dreadful beyond what the eyes of the children can bear.
but if all they wanted to to was show the horror of their being to ones who could not endure it...
Carlos whispers from beside yo, not from any fear that you might be overheard by enemies, but because he does not want Mai to hear.
Ahead of you in the Warden Baracks had been a diabolist, a desperate one at that, past tense because they had tried to summon something powerful and in succeeding too well become the sacrifice to their own final spell.
Also should be a question mark at the end.Did did guess? Or is this just a particularly greedy demon, let loose from Hell's chains by a foolish summoner, trying to strike the best bargain it can.
Missing period at the end."You dare!" it roars with all the affront of a lord, a would-be-master betrayed
Should be "there".He needs another and the demon's claw is already descending to ruin the first circle.
It never gets here, instead it stops mid air as though the air had suddenly become a shackle and it's only then, finally taking your eyes off the thing that you realize what McCoy had done:
Question mark.
Missing "it" in between hold and if.He's bluffing, you realize, not about being willing to die in the line of duty, but about the notion that he can hold if he dies. No wizard knows until the last how long their will will last in the face of death.
Seems like there should be a comma after "kill".Then and there, knowing you might not be fast enough to kill it before the backlash from the broken binding can kill fear freezes to spite in the depths of your soul, a curse upon the demon's eyes, its will and its courage snuffed out in its own shadow.
Ancient May says as another tremor hits, hard enough to unbalance a few of the younger wizards.
The first period should be a question mark.How likely is that."
"Before today I would have said imposibile," Ancient May says.
When the False Dragon had tries to open tear the city asunder by the power of his broken stewardship,
Basaltic*About thirty feet in front of them the floor fell away into a jagged pit whose far edge was a of ancient stone and black bazaltic foundations.
"Warden Morgan, are any wizards burried in the Halls themselves?"
What's that got to do with what I said I was just disabusing the statement they can't come to earth. Also they don't need invitation they can come and go freely and while it's not defined fame and belief just gives some level of ease of access to reality. They can't do much of any importance but they can freely come and go.As with outsiders they can't come into reality at all without invitation. While here their powers are crippled and they just can't act in the same capacity anymore. The Greek gods couldn't stop the conversion of their people despite their fame after the fact because they cannot use their powers that way anymore.
When Nicodemus sacrificed he daughter she was the first new soul in Hades since they got sidelined, old holdouts and neo-pagans weren't getting in.
There is a power level hierarchy here and the gods of earth were not peer powers to the entity behind the white god.
At one point the afterlives of the gods accepted worshippers under various large scale schemes. Now they cannot because the white god changed the rules. Personal intervention at the moment of death in the mortal world, dying in their domains, or nothing.
Everything we see pretty clearly shows that you don't get to say no to the white God's soul collectors. The white god puts you on a train and you go where he tells you.
I wouldn't call a few holdout loopholes staying in operation by any stretch of the term. It's the difference between going to KFC and showing up for dinner at Colonel Sanders house.
the whole point of the changes the white god made was to shut down every other operation on an institutional level and make the gods choose between leaving or not really getting to stay divine in the same way they used to be.
Seriously, guys???"Thorned Namshiel is down here, trawling troubled waters. The traitors let him in."
(Mechanically it's a dodge using his Arete thanks to changes he's made to his body)
There. Even more ability he didn't display in canon. Inhuman reaction time.twisting his body in ways the human body had never been meant to move, and he was fast, oh so fast. No mortal man could match him.
There. Even more ability he didn't display in canon. Inhuman reaction time.
Should be 'her'
No apostrophe, just 'Fates'
Insert comma: 'with her fire,'the skull leered back at her, its eyes filled with silver fire, with her fire[,] and Lydia saw herself
Should be 'eyes'
Should be 'he', referring to Peabody
Comma before 'then': should be 'at the last moment, then as'in the ribs at the last moment then, as he was trying to catch his breath
Capital w, should be 'Whole'
Capital 'm', should be 'Hollow Man'
Should be 'was'
Confusing phrasing
Should be 'there'
Should be 'Seeress' until that's her name, Insert 'a' in front of 'governess'the old Seeres said the words in the tone of [a] governess chiding a unruly ward,