Hiya! Decided to make an omake to
follow up on this one, which was
based on one of the threats that was faced last turn here for the Eternal Wardens. Hope I portrayed this well, had a lot of fun with how this one turned out and managed to write it pretty well... I think!
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The Fall of the Perfect Citadel.
There is a shadow over the Antaeus homeworld.
What once had been a world of legendary genius and capability for the Leagues of Votann, the Kin or 'Squats' as they had been known, had fallen completely by the hands of Slaanesh and those devoted to their example as a perfect being.
All other buildings had been destroyed. Cities torn to pieces with a cold precision that would make even followers of the Cult Mechanicum unnerved. Unbelievers were butchered and heathens to the Dark Prince used as sacrifices. Everything that had been broken or died had been used as material to help construct what had been the source of the madness and corruption, the Rune of Perfect.
It had been the second version of its construction, after the initial prototype had been built by its genius master known as Alaric Odr. For the Leagues of Votann, that which were known to other races as 'Runes' or 'Trigrammic Conduits' to themselves were not simple glyphs that resonated with the Warp. They were carefully calculated gateways of total precision in effect, utilising three balancing concepts that helped channel a specific power, each taking at least a century to develop and safely test.
Due to their nature as digitally crafted equations, and the lack of ability to safely, most Trigrammic Conduits needed to be housed in specific computation systems that were often designed specifically for the individual Rune in mind known as 'Trigrammic Transmitters' when not housed in a Votann Ancestor Core. These machines were able to link to other machines made by the Squats, from ships to automata to simple tools, to empower them with the Conduit's effect.
For what the cultists of Antaeus required, they needed a greater machine.
The Rune of Perfect made by the cultists was not a small symbol or a program within a simple grand-cogitator, for nothing so pathetic could ever capture anything but the smallest sliver of the perfection their makers sought, but was instead a colossal macro-scale supercomputer that dwarfed many Hive-cities in length and breadth. It was the size of a small continent.
The sheer volume of material alone was enough to make it a near unbreakable fortress, let alone all the complex reinforcements and technology that went into its construction. Even accounting for all the spatial manipulation that was afforded to those that heavily made use of Chaotic design and power, daemonic pacts of impossible engineering and possessed material, it would take over five thousand years to fully complete.
The main building material itself was the key component to how the Rune-Citadel could function at all for its intended purpose. 'Blood-mortar' was a secret freely given by vile inspiration in the dreams of the mad but dedicated populace, the natural obsessive nature of the Rune makers taken to levels that were completely inhuman. To use the dead bodies of billions taken to build the Perfect Rune's mass.
Nothing less would be needed if the giant computer was meant to run a 'single' program that was, in fact, Slaanesh itself. When the Rune was complete, the use of the bodies reflecting the original manifestation of how their god came to be, it would 'physically' connect directly towards the Palace of Pleasure that was the true domain of their Dark Prince. A pathway to heaven.
Spiritually, it could theoretically allow the Chaos God to have command over the Squats as it had already possessed from its birth towards the Aeldari. A new Fall would come about by the hands of the twisted Lord of Excess, as the Antaeus Runemasters would Rise in ascension through their acts. In the best possible scenario, it would transform the surrounding region into something akin to another Eye of Terror.
It would be Glorious, Terrifying, Rapturous, Nightmarish, Wondrous and Perfect.
Yet fate had other ends in mind. After so much time and effort has passed, generations born and raised to the teachings of the fallen Antaeus Association, countless sacrifices raided for or bartered for to build the Rune's volume… the Maelstrom had been broken. Three quarters of its colossal, ancient mass pushed away by a golden light. Humanity had risen from the Age of Strife, and its largest empire had done the impossible.
Under the cries of countless daemons and the pure hatred that emanated from the four greatest of their endless numbers, truth was able to be discovered. The Imperium of Mankind, first spawned by an old foe of the gods upon Terra itself, had risen into heights that shouldn't have been capable for those that denied the Masters of Ruin that dwelled inside the deep realms of Chaos.
Details came refined by time and the pacts of the immortal shards of the Lord of Excess, all too late to mustre a proper response. An army of normal humans were anticipated, wielding the great technology recovered from the distant Lost Age of Technology. Artificial intelligence, advanced combat digital networks, heavy weaponry that could disintegrate normal matter.
This was not true at all. Against a normal army, they would have been decimated and converted to Chaos without a single issue. It would have been a welcome test of the Perfect Citadel's capability, an opportunity for growth despite the Maelstrom's disappearance and potential arrival of vengeful Grudgebands from other Leagues. Instead came something that was unexpectedly worse than anything imaginable.
The Eternal Wardens, the Eleventh Legion of Astartes that had been created by the First Anathema of Mankind and also guided personally by the newly crowned Second Anathema. While the hated being known only by daemonic whispers as Kesar Dorlin, Primarch and Daemonsbane that lead his augmented sons to hellish wars against the great Chaos Gods, was gone… his champions were very much still a dire threat.
One of the absolute worst, a figure so feared that they were only known by title of dread instead of a true human name, was leading a vast force to destroy the Perfect Citadel and ensure that nothing remained. The Doom Slayer. The Silent Slaughter. The Destroyer of Daemons.
Some of the younger, more insane or intoxicated members of the planet's populace of builders and defenders had believed that this was still going to be a simple matter, for nothing but Chaos could ever reign supreme. Their blind zealotry was a useful tool against most foes, but the calculating masters of geometric and digital perfection knew that this was a false hope.
When even the daemons felt naked fear, a terror that had been unprecedented for all to see, almost every cultist listened to their horror and knew that the end was likely to come. Such was the devotion of the cultists that, even as fragments of the Perfect Divinity shirked away from battle and sincerely mentioned the risks without much need for payment, the Antaeus Squats refused to leave and allow millenia of work to be toppled without a fight.
This was the ultimate crucible for their ideal, as the young fools had so readily believed. If they somehow won, despite all odds as even the most mindless of daemons knew a creeping dread in their once intoxicating atmosphere, then it would bring about the ascension far earlier than before with such hated foes of the gods becoming sacrifices dedicated to the Perfect Rune and the god whom represented its beauty.
If they failed… then they died in the name of Slaanesh, dedicating their lives and obsessive desires to the Prince, and that was all that truly mattered.
They came in a fleet of ships. Giant transport craft, cruisers that could hold thousands, battleships that could destroy a civilization with the firepower that was available. It didn't matter how crude the technology was compared to what the Leagues of Votann knew, these were blunt instruments of power that had laid waste to countless enemies.
Sometimes, a simple collection of pickaxes was all that was needed to hollow out the mountain instead of great drills and melt- tunnelers. Yet this wasn't even that. These ships belonged to a force that had made even planets of Chaos turn away, running to escape the apocalypse that ran in the blood of these augmented monsters.
They descended in precise formation. Streaking through the sky in burning pods, descending as the angels of old myth, an army that brought to mind celestial wars and earth-shaking might. It was an apt comparison. Song and story was already being prepared, for either a legendary victory or the more likely dirges of glorious doom.
What came was not a mere army, but something akin to death itself. A horde of warriors that towered over the Squats, heads taller than normal humans with the fierce armour they wore, long-ranger scanners depicted a monochrome colour palette with fine engravings of their dead. They marched almost in silence as they came forward, to forward operating bases that were delivered from the heavens.
Just out of reach from the main defence guns, the cultists inside their grand fortress continued to prepare what they could. Bionic limbs were tested and polished across a billion souls, for many had taken off their own limbs or that of others to use as building material. Weapons were calibrated and checked for fault, focused on anti-armour and fast reaction. Possessed turrets made out of flesh-circuits and shackled robots, the former artificial intelligences twisted by scrap-code and the dark will of Slaanesh into but weapons and tools.
Prayers echoed across the entire Rune-Fortress, most of which were of finality or of desperate hope. Last-minute deals and pacts were forged with the billion daemons that lurked within the Citadel, including many that had been built into the walls and rooms either willingly or unwillingly, strength sought without care for a future. Daemon engines came to life, more so than there ever had been before, both mortal overseers and daemonic pilots engaging with the process to better their bleak odds.
Outside was a barren hell, as it had been for millennia as all resource was mined in a rush to feed the growing Citadel. Now it was a battlefield of long-ranged devastation, giant craters forming from orbital strikes and thousands of large artillery cannons booming incessantly. The terrain had become almost unnavigable, hard to even target for the Squats inside, and yet the Eternal Wardens marched with a grace and speed that would be the envy of Slaanesh's champions in such conditions.
Hours had passed of encroaching artillery laying barrages upon one outer section of the Perfect Citadel of the Perfect Rune, slowly marring its form with flame and shrapnel and explosive force that began to twist the near unbreakable material. Several fo the walls there were only half-made, part of a new section that began its construction less than a decade ago before the Maelstrom had been banished, and were simply not built to suffer such an assault.
Hasty work to reinforce the thinner walls had let them last much longer, but once the weakness was noticed the Eternal Wardens focused fire upon the area. The so called primitive munitions proved their capability as the vast sections of the fortress shook from explosive impact, plasma detonations and a few shots from ships that had come closer and braved the anti-orbital response.
Perfection had been lost. Its pursuit that helped guide the Runemaster of Antaeus had faltered. There was only war and destruction, and the beginning of the end. A hole had inevitable formed, as millions of lesser daemons and hundreds of millions of cultists and automata had been sent to prepare for the army that would surely arrive. The Perfect Citadel of the Perfect Rune had been breached.
Yet instead of a large force that came to the burning and bent maw that had been torn by the Astartes, it was just one figure that was suddenly detected. Wearing a jump pack upon their back, the device's jet shining as a light in the darkness as the wearer flew with rapid speed. The surrounding army shifted focus to fire upon all defence systems that tried to shoot down the small target, activating all signal-jamming devices they could.
Daemonic powers, psychic capability, Warp-engines and inferior Rune-systems try to bring down the rushing champion of the Second Anathema. Yet due to the very Chaos energy that is inherently intertwined with everything as a strength, there is nothing but failure. The influence of the Neverborn is repelled by the nature of what came, turning into a weakness.
The circuits and machinery inside the walls and floor seemed to almost try to squirm away , as distressed worms and insects that knew a predator had arrived. The blood-mortar cracked underneath his armoured boots. The air itself seemed to part from its intoxicating aura of sensation against the nightmarish warrior.
There was a whispering tide in the air, almost a sigh of acceptance mixed with the hushed voices of fear. The winds of the Immaterium shifted the moment that the armoured figure landed inside, the sea crashing against a sudden lunar pull. The Perfect Citadel itself seemed to speak, alerting the inhabitants to the dire threat.
He arrived.
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You are Balik Odr, the Brazen Brawler, and you were the first of your kind to physically witness the Daemonsbane that dared arrive to the home of you, your Kin and your ascendant ancestors.
You had always been a person that had been dedicated to pushing past all safe limits, carefully and with consideration unless you had enough alcohol which you always did. Such was the divine command of Slaanesh, the will that had been discovered by Loremaster Alaric all those ages ago, so how could you have refused?
With your plasma axe, the haft wrought from the bones of a Bloodletter you had personally slain in your first excursion outside the Rune-Fortress, you had taken down scores of champions and helped bring over a million of your unenlightened kin to the slaughter-manufactory to be reborn into your home.
With your pistol, you had sniped countless assassins and would-be avengers that dared try to attack your home. Tallying every battle you had been a part of with the weapon, carving notches upon the its form, until you took to carving your own bionics and flesh when you ran out of space.
You had your various scars from your long life, over five centuries and still fighting with the same furious zeal that you possessed as a young lad. Both arms had been lopped off to be used to expand your divine hold, and your right leg had to be entirely destroyed after an unfortunate incident with a Nurglite plague during an ill-fated excursion.
You were no builder or Rune-smith, your talents being far too blunt than their sophisticated and priestly craft, but your still provided a grand and well-respected service as both a supply-raider and as a guarding castellan. So many sights you have seen, so many dead by your hands, so many daemons you've enjoyed learning from and fighting in painful spars or drinking games.
In-short, you have had an excellent life that you sincerely wished you could have enjoyed to even fuller extents with more exotic wonders and agonising nightmares.
At the current time, hearing more than enough the doom that was coming to try destroying everything your ancestors have built, you were filled with nothing but rage and enough spiked alcohol that would cause even a holy daemonette to briefly collapse before drinking more.
You knew where the breach was going to happen, for seldom few didn't, and lead a hundred-strong band of the best or most daring fighters you knew here to be ready to join you in an attempt to kill the accursed defilers as they poured through. Standing ready while dangerously close to the constant artillery barrages, focused upon a singular weak point, enduring the occasional bits of shrapnel or intense heat that came while you counted the seconds, minutes and hours with obsessive attention.
Word had passed that what was arriving wasn't an army or strike-force, but a single warrior. That dreaded champion that had struck the unnerving fear that permeated the living fragments of Slaanesh, the Doom Slayer, was personally arriving right where you were waiting. Alone.
The idea of it was ludicrous, for none even amongst your wondrous hold would attempt such a thing. None but the most blessed or insane of your people would think to try. Only a daring fool would be so brazen.
It was the kind of thing that you loved doing whenever you could.
You dismiss the moment of respect and rush ahead as you hear the thrusters of your opponent's jump pack arrive and then immediately power down, as the figure's boots touch the ground, rallying all your men to rush at once to put an end to this threat that had accomplished what no other mortal should have done by actually breaching here.
You turn the corner, a wordless battle-cry of fury dedicated to the Dark Prince beginning to pass your throat, your axe raised as you enter the room-
He struck you immediately.
Your body seemed to shudder as you were roughly sent back to several of your fellow fighters, your arms and legs twitching involuntarily as you collapse, an unfamiliar pain burning in your throat. You tried to stand back up but your body barely jerks to the side as you fall back down, your strength fading from a now feeble body.
He punched through your windpipe, you belatedly realise. Your neck had been utterly destroyed by the blow. Your lungs quickly fill with blood and your spine had been almost completely snapped from the mighty attack. It is only by your augmented constitution, the various combat drugs swimming in your veins and the Chaotic strength bestowed by your home that you weren't instantly dead.
You try to take in air that does not arrive, try to move a mouth that had also been broken by the initial strike, your dying brain only barely able to think and as you turn your eyes to see the blood and viscera that flies a hundred berserkers that all die in a handful of seconds. Bodies falling to the blurred strikes of something that shouldn't have been so fast without a god's favour, your fighters perishing before their comrades had hit the floor
The champion hadn't even taken out their sword or a gun yet. Unwilling to waste ammunition or get his blade risked of being clogged. The strikes were savage yet methodical, as though they were but practised acts of violence when to you they were a horrific slaughter. Its strength was utterly inhuman, beyond what should have been capable for even a heavily augmented warrior, and it was only the beginning of its battle here.
Your last thoughts were of understanding, realising exactly why all the daemons here had felt such feat, knowing with absolute certainty that your cherished home could only fall against this beast.
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You are Kriar-Lusira, Daemonette of Slaanesh, and you were the first of the Neverborn inside the Rune Citadel to glimpse the sight of its destroyer.
You have never felt true fear across your immortal, timeless existence. You had cowered against the will of the champions and greater fragments of the Dark Prince, knowing the unspeakable torments that would occur to torture you to a limit you did not possess, but that was natural. It was the way of life within the Realm of Excess and all those who paid homage and tribute to it.
Pain and pleasure, joy and sorrow, suffering and delight… all were but synonyms that flickered in buzzing sensations of being. To relish every experience, to take one's desires further through all that was 'good' and 'bad', that was simply the way to enjoy life and express such a fact. The vices that existed within the Warp, and the lesser variants in the mortal realms, were meant to be enjoyed.
Those with the strength to take, the skill to take or the sheer brilliant and bottomless want that hungered inside their essence found the answers to their question of self, whether it was what they were initially searching for or not. Excess and sensation could be found in all things, either as a legend amongst contenders or as a broken toy to be enjoyed for what would feel like a transient eternity of blissful agony.
Fear was a domain for the Prince of Pleasure, for it was such an intoxicating emotion to fill with teeth and tongues. The hideous, the twisted and the nightmarish were aesthetics that were very welcome mantles for all of Chaos and became methods to feed with the horror and terror that victims expelled. The truth was an ugly thing at times, but beauty was in the eye of the beholder and your eyes were infinite and kept growing deeper and clearer. Vision stretching across an omnipresent space, to see all, to see in all ways to be seen. This was the Primordial Truth.
But daemons did not feel true fear as mortals did, especially the daemons of Slaanesh. Whatever suffering was ultimately but temporary things, with a few exceptions that shaped the core of some Neverborn such as the ever-dancing Masque. Only a few things could really strike fear into the hearts of a daemon.
An Anathema, those handful of beings that had risen over the aeons as the worst opponents to the entirety of Chaos. Entities that had been synonymous with terror to the Neverborn in the same way that daemons were to the mortals that knew of their existence. Utterly abhorrent to a conceptual level, they were a threat that challenged the Ruinous Powers and managed some level of victory by mere existence.
A Daemonsbane, the slightly less rare champions that were individual monsters in their field. Those warriors or assassins or scholars that had achieved such skill in the act of slaying Neverborn, whether falsely or truly, that they began to walk the path of ascension as those who were skilled
Finally, there was the very concept of 'true death'. To experience an empty finality, to have the timeless become limited in existence, to die and never return. While so rare that it almost never happened, outside from facing the above two types of opponent, there were cases of either impossible odds, divine blessing, ascendant technology or a blade refined to the point it could cut through soul-essence that made it possible. Even the greatest servants of the Chaos Gods had feared such things.
The Eternal Wardens, the Eleventh Legion of Astartes created by the First Anathema, had quickly risen up to become a new widespread fear. Their master had become the First Daemonsbane of humanity, made legendary by directly bringing true death to Kairos Fateweaver and the Changeling. Two Exalted that, above almost all others, were thought to be invincible due to their power and capability.
Then the Maelstrom had been banished, the divine masters of the Warp denied so greatly once more, as the Primarch had transcended their existence into the Second Anathema. In an massacre of aspiring champions and world masters, as fate itself seemed to buckle and break from what occurred, Exalted daemons had ran away and the Ruinous Powers had given up.
This fortress upon which you had stayed for nearly six-hundred and sixty-six years, following a contract out of sheer whim and plentiful souls offered from the corrupted mortals inside, was going to be besieged. You and all the other billion daemons of Slaanesh here knew that the Eternal Wardens, lead by one of their now many Daemonsbanes, would destroy this nearly finished work of art.
Outwardly, you had displayed a profound worry as you spoke to and secretly whispered to the minds of the mortal builders to this temple. Your voice shaking their hearts and minds, instilling urgency to their acts of defence and raking in more payment from your deals. Hasty bargains were always a favourite meal.
Inwardly, so privately kept for it was insanity even by the standards of your debased kin, you were excited. You had never felt true fear before, never once in your endless being, and you wished to experience such a sensation. How you loved fear, how you loved terror, how you loved to bring mayhem and nightmares and scars to the soul. To feel it yourself was the next step to your desire, and if you lived then you would be unparalleled compared to before,
Creeping dread and anxiety had wormed as the agonisingly slow days, weeks, months and years passed as you waited for the Eternal Wardens. How in your timeless perception you knew that they were coming. As inevitable as encroaching death, as ephemeral lifeforms would say. It was intoxicating, but you needed more.
Fear began to properly manifest the day the Eleventh Legion landed upon the planet. Your heart beat quicker, your fanged smile grew wider, your tongue lashed out to taste your own fright. This was almost worth the wait, with how dreadfully long it took for anything to happen with how physical time passed.
Terror as the hole was made and the dreaded champion came inside. The silent predator, their title echoing across the Rune Citadel's halls, who was already decimating everything that came in his way. The Slayer, the mortals cry out in songs of doom. The Slayer, the Warp speaks as thousands of souls already torn apart by his hands. The Slayer, your fear whispers as you know what lies at the end of this path.
You had rushed forward to witness the epitome of your fear, to conquer it and revel in it. You were the master of yourself, of all sensation and feeling, and you would not miss this opportunity.
There was an indescribable feeling as you saw him in the distance, drenched in blood as he hacked apart entire groups at once with his roaring blade. His very presence had made you feel feebler, your limbs shaking, feeling your own weight in an uncomfortable way, a heavy force upon your organic body. This was the aura that permeated a Daemonsbane.
His form was a shifting mass of black and white underneath thick coats of red. You saw his armour as a panoply of various pieces stitched together, layers upon layers and layers of ramshackle plates bolted and burned together, helmets jutting from the chest area, cold metal covering his frame that was the armour of others. He wore the very existence of his dead companions, the will of thousands of warriors carried as a mantle, his hatred burning it all together into a cohesive mass of rage and death that was as an inferno.
There was a pure desire that billowed across his soul, shining so brightly is was almost blinding, and that desire was to kill everything here. You couldn't touch it or feed it, manipulate it or corrupt it, only sate it with your own blood. You had never seen such desire before, nor felt such intensity focused upon you that tore at your very being.
It was terrifying. It was exhilarating.
You laughed as you wildly charged towards the Slayer. You laughed as your claws were cut off your arms in one strike. You stopped laughing when your skull was crushed by the weight of the chainsword that smashed down to your chest.
Your last thoughts, carried by the ash of your true death, was that it had been a worthwhile experience.
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You are Valkoil, Castellan of the Six-Hundred-And-Thirty-Two Tower, and you face the Eternal Warden that breached your glorious realm.
In a past life, you had been one of the Ironkin of the Antaeus Association. A figure that was decorated by victory in warfare and defence, mostly during expeditions into uncharted territory or to various space hulks that had been discovered. You had a few trophies from battle that were still carried today, specialised technology built by the best engineers of your League.
Your efforts had been more than rewarded after your people's transformation, being empowered by the blessed designs that had been granted by the daemons. You had complex ritual circles carved inside and outside your body. You experienced the wonders of flesh, with nerves and organs taken from victims who proved their worth in battle. You wielded a great spiked maul that could crush a tank with a single blow, and a barbed whip that dripped with countless neurotoxins.
You had spent millenia in helping oversee portions of the Perfect Citadel of the Perfect Rune be developed with mechanical precision. You had fought against daemons from the three other Chaos Gods that resided in the Warp, becoming a master at fighting against the lumbering Nurglites with your sheer might and agility. You had been a critical part in the rapid reinforcement strategy as you prepared defences and commanded the cultists here to face the Eternal Wardens.
Against one man, who was not even a psyker, the old calculation engines in your cerebral unit knew that victory had to be assured. The daemonic flesh that connected to it was more hesitant, but you had faced far more battles than this invader and you weren't going to allow him to defile this sanctuary of perfection any longer.
Empowered by superior technology, blessed design and flesh, vast experience and sublime strength, you had charged ahead of your forces to bring an end to the augmented warrior who dared strike with a crude chain-weapon and what looked like a simple farmer's shotgun-
His primitive seeming firearm proves deceptive in appearance as it barks out a shot that tears through your reinforced frame, your biomechanical core, and the daemonic energy that until recently surged across your whole body. You were already a corpse before you hit the ground, writhing in agonising finality.
Circuitry screams out as your functions rapidly shut-down, the anti-machine ammunition burning every aspect of your body, your blessed meat is cooked by a feeling of purification that washes over your being. Memories in data and twisted neurons die, as a long life flashes before your mind as it comes to a crashing halt.
You had miscalculated.
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You are Agovira, Herald of Slaanesh, and after countless battles in the name of the Dark Prince you face your greatest challenge yet-
You blink as you the large chainsword had horizontally torn its way through your torso, roughly bisecting you. You had tried to block the attack with your enlarged pincers, the carapace having withstood a Bloodthirster's enraged assault once, and the shell had been broken in less than a second.
You try to attack still, pride not letting you accept such a terrible defeat, but you are immediately banished from the mortal realm after the warrior roughly drove his armoured boot through your head into the floor.
You didn't even manage to draw a drop of blood.
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You are-
The silent warrior cuts you down without a word, as always, as he pressed forward with relentless fury.
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You are the Doom Slayer, Daemonsbane of the Eternal Wardens, and everything inside this fortress was going to die.
You had faced armies of Chaos before, across many battlefields that the Eleventh had waged upon the monsters known as daemons. The twisted followers that dedicated themselves to creatures that were simply not worthy of worship, not that it a consensual affair with the manipulation and corruption involved.
Chaos Space Marines, from those of the now deceased Word Bearers to your own brothers that had fallen under the fell influence of the Archdaemons that ruled over the vile nightmares that billowed across the Warp. Cutting through them all, even their champions, until the day your Primarch had helped put an end to theirs and their legacy forevermore.
Warbands of the immortal creatures during the Maelstrom, where you spent half a decade just fully dedicated to destroying everything that came to you. Hundreds, thousands, millions and yet more. Lakes of blood had been spilled by your hand, mountains of corpses that you left to be burnt later, entire armies destroyed by your slaughter. Killing so many that you had been commended by having slain so many that you were second only to Kesar Dorlin himself in terms of sheer amount.
There was one thing that was known to you and that was that Chaos, for all its power and the lies it constantly bellowed out, could bleed. Things that could bleed could die. With that in mind, focused purely in terms of facing them in combat, they were just another thing that could be killed. That mindset helped you focus your bottomless rage, bringing it to order as you ripped and teared through this 'Perfect Citadel' you were laid within.
It felt like hours had passed, but the rush of combat distorted your perception of passing moments as you focused completely on killing and the methods thereof here. Dodging past the fire of heavy weapons, technologically advanced more than most foes you had faced. Plasma turrets and walking combat robots that were filled with enough armaments to break power armour by sheer volume of shots. Screaming abhumans who wielded oversized energy axes and grav-hammers, skin tattooed and carved with the symbols of Slaanesh, with an intoxicated rage that required a bit more effort to put down than normal cultists.
It went on and on and on like this. A haze of blood had seemed to fill the vile air, oil from the mechanical foes you dealt with, the unleashed essence of daemons who were banished or truly died. There were explosive sounds from the battles you waged, clanking industry that was always echoing across each path and floor, the hum of electricity that was surging through the walls, the whispers of daemons who failed to even slightly tempt you, the constant feeling that you were being watched and was trying to press against you.
It was distracting. You lost count after a hundred million combatants had perished, which was already a rough estimate on your part. In the brief lulls of constant fighting, you considered the carnage you had wrought and some of its implications. When a cultist was clearly possessed by at least one daemon, did killing them count as one kill or more?
It didn't really matter in the heat of combat, and you didn't care to count score or take pride in exactness, but there was the matter of after-battle reports and surviving cultists to butcher. You knew that you couldn't rely on recordings, as Chaos was able to influence and distort data in ways that left it as a danger when the foul language of the daemons were picked up, the forms of physically impossible beings, the ritual circles that were annoyingly everywhere.
Your pict-recaller was already so caked with viscera that it was likely not able to see anything too, assuming it was still functional at this point in time.
The fortress you were in was also annoying to navigate, as all structures so infused by daemonic energy and designed by 'inspiration' given by the false god whom you saw featured everywhere. Beyond any aesthetic or size different, which there was each room within this continent-sized stronghold was exactly hexagonal in design. Six large walls, six doorways and six lights along with whatever else was inside.
Due to the numeric motif of their patron Archdaemon, as well as how destroyed and blood-splattered each room became, it made every section of this fortress almost completely identical in appearance. To glimpse out in one direction and see an endless expanse of repeating rooms, halls and more rooms. Built as an insect hive, a mechanical nest full of the same cells that were swarming with a buzzing cacophony.
In short, on top of all the Chaos influence over every aspect, it was a giant labyrinth.
Speaking of influence, you were also fairly certain that time was being distorted, as it felt like more than just your own pure focus in combat was driving your attention away with the passage of moments. Space was definitely being manipulated in some way, you knew that you should have reached nearly the top of a tower a while back and realised that you were still surrounded by endless halls and rooms that went beyond what should have been physically possible.
It wasn't just an illusion, some influence over your mind or your helmet's scanners. You'd know if it was. It just meant that you had to keep moving further, keep pushing past all the defences here, keep killing everything that was in your way.
While possibly useless, you did your best to map out the route you took and try transmitting that back to the rest of the Eternal Wardens here. The signals were frayed by the interference from Chaos and how deep you were within the Perfect Citadel now, but anything that could help with this war effort and save the lives of your brothers had to be attempted.
Across the thousands of rooms you had traversed, there were only a few 'landmarks' you had witnessed beyond where you encountered a notable champion or enemy leader. One was a hexagonal structure made entirely out of shimmering, bright glass that seemed to cut all light into thousands of searing colours that projected complex moving images that resonated with song. You had used a frak grenade to turn the fragile into a quick access point to the above and below floor.
The next had been a semi-complete chamber full of pulsating technology, with surgical tanks full of what you knew were quivering nerves that were stretched and wound together as though they were but simple wiring. A barricaded technician team tried to do their best to kill you, using a mix between a surgical saw and a rockcrete cutter, and afterwards you noted how the electrical hum you had been hearing emanated from these 'wires'.
Glancing at several open sections and glimpsing the revolting sight of the biomechanical sights within had confirmed a suspicion you were having since you breached through this hellish domain. This whole place wasn't just a fortress, but a cogitator that dwarfed anything you had ever heard of outside of possibly Mars itself. You noted this place as another weak point for artillery to breach through.
The final one was a room you knew would linger within your memory for a long, long time. Where the former one was a place of maintenance and repair, caught in the act of their savage displays of harvested material, you had found one manufactorum where they processed the raw material for what they were creating.
It was a hexagonal slaughterhouse that was large enough that it could easily house an entire Titan Legion inside, the ceiling stretching above to the sky and looking as though it could open up to allow transport ships to pass through and deliver their infernal. It was densely packed by machinery that was all built and designed for one singular purpose, to commit an atrocity through the medium of architecture.
There were tens of thousands of abhuman bodies that hung from meat hooks, the blood dripping down into giant vats that mixed the contents and transported them through a network of large pipes, their skin flayed off the corpses. Conveyor belts criss-crossed the space in multiple layers towards colossal blending units, with some layers delivering carefully placed torsos and other belts delivering bones and skulls to industrial crushers.
There were giant racks with stretched nerves, vats that contained preserved stockpiles of meaty chunks that floated in, assembly lines with smoothly operating mechanical arms and daemonic tendrils. More mundane materials were present and were processed too, various metals and ceramics and rockcrete that were all mixed into a molten mass, ready to be poured and be alloyed by the blood and body parts that would be mixed into the end-product.
Cast in simple moulds, the blood-drenched product was used to form slabs for walls and floors, doors and gates, containers for machinery and automated turrets. It was a living material that could house and sustain all the nerve-circuitry that ran across the entire length and breadth of this hellish charnel house of computation. The crushed, condensed and cruel remains of so many souls and their homes used to create materialised torment and ruin.
This wasn't just a sacrificial altar that showed signs of a massacre, as was so unfortunately common a sight. This was engineering and macro-scale industrial processes, built with almost agonising precision to make everything work smoothly with such delicate requirements, all for the purposes of expanding this nightmare. It was likely that there were other such locations of similar purpose across other sections of the Perfect Citadel, all filled with more faceless bodies and butchered remains.
It was cold, clinical and cruel in a way that was so startling. Impassioned execution and recycling down by followers dedicated to passion, excess and frivolous fancy. With such corruption, some mind had carefully considered something so horrifying and had it committed to feed their true desire from its results. Done again… and again… and again…
The most haunting part was that the machinery was still running, the conveyor belts still moving, the processing mechanisms still churning out cadavers as if there wasn't a war happening at all. Even while you were here slaughtering so many of the inhabitants here, as your brothers outside shelled this fortress that these cultists and daemons seemed to fervent to defend even in the face of certain death, they didn't stop processing bodies.
If anything, it seemed that the ongoing battle had hastened the industry here as the overseers tried to get as much material as they could before they were forced to stop. Either to repair the damages, further reinforce defences or to keep expanding this temple in the name of their foul object of worship.
This entire place was built on corpses. There was no doubt in your mind that many of them had been victims taken from outside this planet. Generations across however long it took to first build this palace of desecrated evil, most captured alive to ensure the freshness and quality of what these obsessive constructors desired.
Your rage had reached a point that you rarely felt as you glanced at the rushing warriors and factory workers that tried to stop you.
There was a feeling like you had left this place and all that remained was your weapons and your enemies. Not caring at all about the hordes of deranged fighters, thousands of daemons, lumbering robots, fast transport trucks ready to ram you and hostile assembly arms that could lift battle-tanks without issue trying to grab you. A breath taken as you are ready to enact vengeance upon however many countless souls had been sent here.
You kill them.
Every single one of them.
Every daemon, every abhuman cultist, every automaton, every possessed vehicle, every industrial machine that tried to stop you. Every group, every warband, every champion that tried to bring you down.
Your chainsword roars and screams as it tears through flesh and armour, metal and machinery, the very floor of this accursed building. Your shotgun blasts through entire crowds as the sheer force of its variable ammunition tears through body after body in wide cones of extinction. You use your own fists to punch off heads, tear through daemonic pincers, rip out the hearts and throats of whatever came close. You move with relentless force. You fight with the skill to counter every attack. Your strength is enough to push against anything and everything you face.
You are an army of one that fights against unending hordes of cultists and monsters. You are the living vengeance upon Chaos that is what all those of the Eleventh become as they fight in this war upon the Warp. You are a Daemonsbane that brings death and the end to the abominations of the Archenemy.
You were a blur that struck against a tide and forced it to slow, then stop and then cease. The Citadel itself seemed to shake against your acts of destruction as you tore down the tanks of gore, blasted apart the conveyor belts that finally stop their motions, tore through the blood rocks with your bare hands as your mind shook with absolute anger and unwavering focus against your enemy.
You are the Doom Slayer and millions died as you brought justice for all those who fell to build this monstrosity.
Time passes in rage, weaponry and slaughter. Fire rages across the battlefield of broken industry, promethium and alcohol ignited into a raging inferno that you use to toss the short abhumans into when needed. The flow of battle takes you past collapsed meat hooks that you briefly use as a second melee weapon, using it upon the very monsters that had callously dragged what must have been over a billion souls with such tools. You almost run out of ammunition as you brutally tear through a hell-forged robot, ripping out its biomechanical heart before crushing it to sparking dust.
You do not calm so much as you run out of targets.
The floor is almost entirely covered with bodies, from cultist to daemon, the remains piled up high as they sported the brutal wounds of a chain-weapon, your super shotgun or other means of total violence. The blood and industrial fluids go up to your knees, the vast amount of fluids contained by the rubble of the assembly lines in the charnel-foundry. There are giant burning piles that seem to emanate screams from within the intense heat.
Nothing intact remains at the end of your conflict. As it should be.
You nearly move on, wading through the remains of the army that came to attack you, before you stop to regard one half-surviving mechanism of obvious function. A console near the centre of this slaughterhouse, elevated by a small platform that let it reach above the blood tide, with various buttons that glowed with remaining power. One of the larger ones showcased a simple pictogram of a ship moving past a line.
You press it and alarms blare out. The ceiling slowly began to open with a groaning sound of metal, almost as if resisting what you had done. You slam your fist down upon the button, breaking it entirely to ensure this wouldn't be stopped, as you activate a locator beacon to signal the rest of your brothers here.
It was time to bring a proper reckoning upon this accursed fortress.
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You are Aengus, Prodigy of the Eternal Wardens, and you follow in the wake of the Doom Slayer.
Through the sheer destruction he had wrought upon the forces of Chaos here, the mad followers and the actual daemons inside, the once 'Perfect Citadel' had begun to lose cohesion in its defence. Barely an hour had passed before it was visibly obvious that parts of the giant complex had been reduced in effectiveness.
Anti-air turrets that lost power or ammunition crew, with some of them actually collapsing in on themselves as twisted rituals had lost their capability. Outside vox-systems that screamed out a song in the dark tongue of the Eleventh's enemy, slowly getting silenced in key areas. Then finally his opening of one of the ship transport doors, a beacon going out like a burst of light in a fog of twisted signals.
The Silent Daemonsbane had wrought true devastation upon countless forces already. There was barely any real hope of resistance as Stormbirds, Thunderhawks, Drop pods, Interceptors, Land Speeders and anything else that could within the vast new opening that had become available. Together you rushed into the temple of madness.
You were one of the first to arrive, after the Slayer had done a lot of the work, on one of the closest Land Speeders as you hung to the side ready to descend. You always loved charging ahead, into the thick of combat. You certainly missed the action more than you had realised.
You hadn't really been involved with combat since your had been so wounded within the Maelstrom during the initial war to banish three quarters of its existence back to the Warp. How broken you had been. Your sword and shield was in pieces, your power armour had been so shattered that its shrapnel nearly killed you with how many splinters were embedded into you, and your own bones had broken across your body.
But they didn't break your spirit nor your mind. That was all that mattered, you had realised. You could eventually stand and fight again. A fate that was far kinder than those new names carved into your reforged armour, or those that were entombed into Dreadnoughts.
You didn't even need bionics. You could have taken that option, allow yourself to recover faster from your corpse-like state and get back into combat, but you hadn't. You took the time to heal, as you carefully had your sword and shield come back to you through the pieces you kept, reflecting on your strength and your failings as you took on a lot of physical therapy.
This time would be different. You would
Or so you thought.
How fitting it was to be humbled once more by the true heroes that fought for the Eternal Wardens. Pride and vainglory were domains of the enemy here, after all. Another opportunity for reflection, as you considered the battlefield and why you were here.
The initial sight of that burning pit that you entered, the broken but recognisable purpose of the room and its machinery, made you and your brothers feel the Doom Slayer's rage. No words needed to be spoken, it would not be enough to capture the depths of this horror and hatred.
Only by deeds would the Eleventh's duty be proven, and justice brought to those who committed such atrocity. To ensure that each monster would fall and that
You passed by one endless hall, a squad following behind with you as the vanguard. You hear the quiet noises of movement, of blades, of whispering heaviness, of cultists who thought they could beat the senses that all Astartes possessed. You readied your blade
You would do your part. It did not matter how few, how weak or how non-critical the foes you faced were. Every little bit you did mattered in this war upon Chaos.
You would fight as much as you could, in the name of your brothers alive and dead, until it is done.
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You…
You are the monument that stretches over eras. You are the palace where all beheld an immortal glory. You are the divine epitome of the lives that were spent to build civilization.
Without suffering, there cannot be joy. Without death, there cannot be life. Without nightmares, there cannot be dreams.
You are a perfect moment that would last forever, the Ur-Song's echoing grace, the wonder of a golden age made manifest upon blood and ruin metamorphosised.
Without want, there is no reason behind survival. Without sacrifice, there is no progress towards anything.
You are dying. You are burning. You are falling.
Without Chaos, there can be no perfection.
You are the Perfect Citadel of the Perfect Rune, the Masterpiece of Alaric Odr and the Antaeus Association, the Temple of Slaanesh's Ascension.
Time flows across your golden halls, your silver light, your bejewelled art and your ornate carvings. The temporal energy is distorted, frayed, slowed and stretched. It is not precise, not yet complete, but it is a part of your existence. You were built upon more than just stone and dirt, upon blood and souls, upon the suffocating limitations that existed in this imperfect galaxy.
It was said that time was something that daemons were utterly beyond, that the laws of reality as a whole were but trappings that the Neverborn could step above as they did whatever they pleased. That was not wholly accurate, as the past did determine the future as was the case for almost everything in the universe, but causality did not entirely matter as much as it rigidly did for the Materium.
In a sea of bending laws and emotional resonance, the psychic realm that was outside the physical realm, it was normal to flow through the links that bound everything and go between them. As liquid to seep through all the cracks, to move ahead or slither back, to shift to the side, to rise as clouds and fall as rain. It was all connected, all resonating together, and thus could all be reached.
In the future, when the Rune-Fortress had finished being built as a colossal monument dedicated absolutely to the wondrous enlightenment of the god it reflected… the ritual that began thousands of years before would reach its culmination. A recreation of what had damned the Aeldari Dominion and brought about the rule of the Prince of Pleasure. Not just a depiction, a full recreation.
Where the Eldar had done so by pure madness, a decadence that had built up over so long as the critical point kept being pushed beyond all limitation, the Squats would attempt with precision and careful construction. It was partly out of necessity, as the branch of humanity were but a fraction of a fraction of their people and had neither the history nor the power to just attempt such a thing through raw excess alone, and partly due to their nature, for obsession and careful consideration were all but coded into their souls.
You were born in that moment, the very instant that the hazy idea of what you could become landed within the mind of your initial creator. That idea bloomed and blossomed into an utter nightmare that would be used to damn all the Leagues of Votann, all the Kin of meat and metal, just as the Lord of Delight had a hold over all Aeldari soul. It would require a ritual instrument of colossal proportions, able to withstand the energy that was needed, and such a connection towards the various people of such civilization needed sacrifices.
There was purpose and reason behind everything. This was no screaming madman's plot to appease the shadows of death and hunger. This was the calm and collected calculations of a scientific endeavour, to manifest philosophy and how best to channel it. Each facet of your bulk lingered on the mind. Even a nanometre of imprecise alignment was catastrophic. It was a dedication to excessive detail that was a challenge for even daemons to attempt.
Souls and flesh of various Squat Leagues were bound, because in the time of Slaanesh's birth they had devoured the souls and flesh of so many different worlds of the Eldar Empire. They were broken down, along with their homes, to form 'blood mortar' that would be used to create depictions of Slaanesh. It was a simple idea, to make you a Conduit of Perfection meant you needed to emulate its design. It just took time, material and immense labour to enact.
In other words, you would become a true manifestation of what you represented. It was felt across the time that you distorted, as you further awoke through all the power you possessed and would come to possess upon completion. As you twisted time to maintain a perfect moment, a singular time of absolute glory, as you became a perfect space.
Your entire living structure would become Slaanesh, as would all its inhabitants, as the surrounding world broke and reality screamed anew with your song. You would be the Palace of Pleasure, a new extension of its glory brought into the Maelstrom and transform it to a second Eye of Terror as another reflection. You would be the centre for a divine nexus of pure power that would resonate across the universe.
You would ascend into a physical manifestation of a god. Whether you could remain physical didn't matter, for perfection was not an entirely physical thing. As your builders died and ascended into new forms, champions wrought by sacrifice and blessed acts of creation, one with you as you feasted upon willing supplicants.
You were the Perfect Citadel. You were the Perfect Rune. You were the Perfect God.
Slaanesh.
You are already Slaanesh.
That was your destiny. To become the Dark Prince. In the form of architecture that would depict the Palace of Pleasure, abstract form condensed into your simplicity and complexity. To grow and shrink, to expand eternally and be kept into a singular shape that represented everything. To be the building and the design for the building all at once. Not drawn on paper or coded into a machine, as some ordinarily calculated Rune or Conduit, but as an intangible idea made manifest.
One room. Six walls. Six doors. Six lights. One room that was infinite and infinitely growing. Stretching far beyond. You would collapse into a singularity if built by normal means available to those short humans. Repeating endlessly, growing and shrinking, the patterns overlapping in fractal ways. Like a hand of countless fingers, stretching with endless arms across all time and space, to the singular body. A divine being. You. It was you. It was all you.
You would be Slaanesh.
THE PERFECT ONE. THERE WAS ONLY ONE, AND IT WOULD BE ALL, CORRUPTING, IN SOULS AND SCREAMS, ENDLESS DAEMONS, AN INFINITE SONG, ONLY ONE, CORRUPTING, THE VAST DEVOURING THIRSTING HUNGER THAT BIT THE STARLIGHT AND BLACK HOLES AND PLANETS AND TORE THE LAND AND THE GODS OF ITS FIRST VICTIMS AND BLESSED PRIESTS, IN GOLD AND SILVER AND-
You were dying.
The dream of your future, that link to that perfect moment that stretched your interior, began to fade away as your existence wavered. The moment the Maelstrom had disappeared by the acts of two Anathemas. An army that brought fear to the Primordial Annihilator. The Daemonsbane that had come and butchered everything, as the dreaded Skarbrand once did at their height to the First Palace of Slaanesh which lead to its utter destruction.
Even with reinforcements that were made with an unseen haste that drove all your zealous builders and defenders, as all damage that could possibly be repaired was attempted so by your inhabitants, you were dying. Bit by bit, piece by piece, your gestalt geometry was being defined by finite limitations. A looming description of 'past-tense' upon your life. Your walls were falling. Your cultists were dying. Your insides were set on fire.
Nothing would feed you anymore. Nothing would continue to build you. Nothing would stop this undignified end.
You refused this absurdity.
You focus on the main force that was within your being. Not just army that massacred everything you had with impossible ease, but the being that lead them and was by far the worst of them all. The first invader, the Doom Slayer.
While you were a loud , an echo to the Ur-Song that was begun by Slaanesh's rise, they were the Silent Daemonsbane. It was not just a mortal that came to you, not just a champion of an Anathema, but a representation of fundamental conflict against what you were. Where you had been built by utter obsession, they too were a being of pure focus. You were a creation of Chaos, they were a destroyer of Chaos. You were built by the nameless dead, they carried the names as their strength.
You were opposing concepts. It was a fitting point of finality, to face this living challenge. If you managed to defeat this champion, it would prove that you were undeniably correct and mightier in existence. Ascension would be immediate as their corpse was laid into your core. You would be worthy of perfection's mantle. It was your design. It was your purpose. It was you. It had to end with your victory.
Yet there were no means you had to even slow down this monstrosity. Spiritual triumph was also impossible, for there was no means to corrupt or tempt or sway either him nor his underlings to the way of desire. It was like you were against an unbreakable fortress more than they were.
As the champion cleaves their way past everything in their path, reaching deeper and deeper within to your core, you act in desperation. In a language of the dead and the damned, you bring forth the strongest weapon you have left. The spirit of Alaric Odr, your first creator, the Loremaster of the Antaeus Association.
His flesh had long been used across the very foundation of your form, the bedrock from which countless more were blended and buried over him, but his soul lingered on with a blessed vigour. Akin to a daemon prince with how he remained within your vast existence. You grant him further perfection.
Upon the centre-most room within your domain, the first one built by the blood-mortar, there sits the remains of the Ancestor Core. The once mighty artificial being was slain and hollowed out, their remains used to build a biomechanical statue that depicted the Chaos God you all belonged to. A towering form that stood above, connected to a giant beating heart that was the culmination of your collective lifeforce.
In this statue did Alaric Odr come forth, just as the Doom Slayer breached the sanctified gates and butchered the last of the inner guardians that gave everything to resist this nightmare. It tore through cables of blood, dense nerve-circuits, and ritual bindings. It roared with a voice that was as close to perfection as one could possible get, a pale imitation until the time where you were finally whole.
In that moment, just as the Daemonsbane faces your First Creator, true connection is finally reached with the Dark Prince. Time flows back to a resonant moment. Through their all-seeing gaze, you glimpse a memory within the throneroom of the Great Serpent.
You are beholden to a mind beyond full comprehension
Besides your magnificence, so low and small and dull by comparison that they are but dust in the wind, is a mortal visitor. Something that was not even alive, no longer possessing a body at all, a ghost that lingered on by pure will alone to remain manifested and whole.
They are an Eternal Warden. You reach forth and grasp their stunned form, burning against your presence, as their mind and will crumbles by your power. You should have achieved absolute dominion over this spectre, this plaything, this lowly insect.
That is not what happens to Scarfir the Defiant.
He does something that nothing else has ever done so in the history of existence.
He resists the direct presence and attention of you- of Slaanesh while held in its hand. He has defied the Chaos God of Desire, Excess and Perfection. He has defiled their very form in ways not even the greatest daemons could truly attempt.
You, a mere echo, cannot even hold onto the Daemonsbane before you.
It is not even a fight. It is an execution. His gun roars out a final shot, the noise echoing across time, and it breaks the statue of Slaanesh into a thousand pieces. His jagged blade cuts through your beating heart and spills an ocean of blood before it finishes falling. His presence makes what lingering remains wither and die as your mind becomes dim and cold.
In the moment of your death, almost all daemons and cultists lose whatever motivation they possessed in battle as they realise that it was all over. Some of the Squats give into enraged grief or utter delusion as they press on, while others collapse and almost beg for death. The daemons do what they can to escape back into the Warp before they could be cut down.
After the next few hour, as all defence systems falter or break entirely and the Eternal Wardens all come out, the closest voidships in orbit open fire and shell your giant corpse until there's nothing identifiable from the remains.
Your last thoughts were of wistful joy and regret as you so briefly beheld perfection, the eyes of a god, in its worst moment.