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Aww, thanks. I often feel like I struggle to write good dialogue and bring out a character's personality, so I'm happy to hear people liked it.
I love all the Swordmasters and their characterisations (though I must admit to an internal squee of 'That's my girl!' whenever Liandra appears). :lol:

[X] You want to earn redemption.

I prefer this over 'making up for your crimes' because it uses the verb 'earn' and it feels like a broader, more philosophical approach. She's not universally focusing on her own crimes, she's focusing on herself and how she conducts herself more broadly in this new phase of her life. That feels like it's the most in character to me for her current mindset and also a direction I'd like her to explore (and since it's not a permanent choice, just a reflection of where her mind is now, who knows what the destination will be?).
 
"This wine is awful," you hear Elena's voice through the door, just when you are about to step forward.
"So we all have to suffer for her guilt complex?" Elena asks, raising her voice.
"No, I'm not going to let it go," Elena says. "She got hundreds of elves killed, she's the reason we're here. The least she could do is not have us squat in some… mud hut."
Elena seems to be the one who dislikes us (own at least our group's actual situation) the most. This is probably in some part due to her own guilt that she's projecting on us. She will requires careful handling and we should keep an eye on her.
Also fuck you Elena, there's no need to be so snobbish.

"You need money to make money," Eöl's voice adds. "She spent the entire reward money from the Cult of Dazh on this."
"And we chose to follow her," Eöl responds with a bit of heat in his voice. "The Loremaster, out of all of us, is the only one who did not have a choice in coming here."
"The Loremaster wouldn't have done something like that for no reason," Eöl argues. "Vaelon, you've known her the longest, say something!"
Thankfully Ëol is there to keep things straight. As his dad, I'm very proud of him :D

I love all the Swordmasters and their characterisations (though I must admit to an internal squee of 'That's my girl!' whenever Liandra appears). :lol:
Same for me with Ëol.
 
Elena seems to be the one who dislikes us (own at least our group's actual situation) the most. This is probably in some part due to her own guilt that she's projecting on us. She will requires careful handling and we should keep an eye on her.
Also fuck you Elena, there's no need to be so snobbish.




Thankfully Ëol is there to keep things straight. As his dad, I'm very proud of him :D


Same for me with Ëol.
The way I would see it, out of the Swordmasters Eöl has the most personal loyalty to Fanriel, considering she gave him a purpose in life and saved him from the path of becoming a Pleasure Cultist. A lot of the others are there because they like or respect her as a person, but Eöl probably feels like he owes her his life.

And they're Asur, they're all snobbish, Elena is just the most willing to voice it. In fact most of the Swordmasters are Asur nobility, which is like snobbishness squared.
 
Do you mind explaning the difference please?
Earning redemption puts the emphasis on Fanriel herself, while making up for your crimes puts the emphasis on what she did.

Redemption means becoming a better person than the one who got 745 elves killed, while making up means finding a way to balance the scales your actions tipped over, in the direct or abstract sense.

As an extreme example, if Fanriel converted to Chaos and used a daemonic ritual to resurrect all of the people who died, well, that would mean making up for her actions, but you can't really call that redeemed, can you? Or Fanriel could master her Curse, became a paragon of virtue and prove that she's a changed elf, but still never manage to materially make up for the damage she caused.
 
[X] You want to earn redemption.

I figure if the best way to do this just so happens to end with us standing on a small mountain of chaos worshipper corpses all the better.
Edit: I completely forgot to add
[X] You want to kill as many servants of Chaos as you can.
 
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I will add
[X] You want to earn redemption.
[X] You want to make a new start.
too.

Although if the fleet admiral rolls a natural 100, he may masterfully manipulate Norscan and Druchii fleets putting them in our path, while sending an assassin of his personal secret society, that every once in a while eliminates inconvenient Asur "for the greater good"
 
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I will add
[X] You want to make a new start.
too.

Although if the fleet admiral rolls a natural 100, he may masterfully manipulate Norscan and Druchii fleets putting them in our path, while sending an assassin of his personal secret society, that every once in a while eliminates inconvenient Asur "for the greater good"
Just letting you know, that vote overrides your previous vote.

So if you want to vote for both Redemption and Fresh Start, you need to include them in the same post.
 
[X] You want to be pardoned and return to Ulthuan.

[X] You want to kill as many servants of Chaos as you can.
 
As an example to further illustrate the difference, if you happen to have played the DLCs to the original Dishonored (Knife of Dunwall and Brigmore Witches, to be specific), Daud makes up for his crimes by saving the daughter of the woman he murdered from being possessed, but he redeems himself only if you do a Low Chaos run, showing that he's become a better man and put his assassin's ways behind him by going for nonlethal takedowns and acting selflessly rather than as a coldblooded killer.
 
Oh, with that explained, 'make up for your crimes' sounds like an awful option. Would much rather become a better person and never be pardoned, rather than not change at all and end up being pardoned. Well, I doubt 'make up for your crimes' would result in a pardoning, but it's still pretty bad... Fanriel doesn't change at all, she just performs an act that makes up for her previous act of killing 500+ elves. Yeah... no.
 
Oh, with that explained, 'make up for your crimes' sounds like an awful option. Would much rather become a better person and never be pardoned, rather than not change at all and end up being pardoned. Well, I doubt 'make up for your crimes' would result in a pardoning, but it's still pretty bad... Fanriel doesn't change at all, she just performs an act that makes up for her previous act of killing 500+ elves. Yeah... no.

I mean, 'make up for your crimes' doesn't preclude redemption, it's just a matter of which she considers more important: becoming a better person or making up for what she did. I feel like, with either of those options, she's aiming for both it's just a matter of which she prioritizes over the other.

Which is probably still an argument for redemption, mind you, but I don't think picking another option means we're giving up on redemption any more than another option picked over 'kill Chaos' means we're not gonna kill Chaos stuff...it's still on the list, just not the top of the list.
 
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Oh, with that explained, 'make up for your crimes' sounds like an awful option. Would much rather become a better person and never be pardoned, rather than not change at all and end up being pardoned. Well, I doubt 'make up for your crimes' would result in a pardoning, but it's still pretty bad... Fanriel doesn't change at all, she just performs an act that makes up for her previous act of killing 500+ elves. Yeah... no.
Don't think of it as a binary choice, like in Blackout's last example you can do both and ultimately I think both is what she should strive for, to somehow make things right to what she did and a become a better person that can control her curse.
 
Don't think of it as a binary choice, like in Blackout's last example you can do both and ultimately I think both is what she should strive for, to somehow make things right to what she did and a become a better person that can control her curse.

I'd still rather focus on becoming a better person first and foremost rather than simply making up for our crimes.
 
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