In the Mind of a Green Sun Prince (Exalted/Nasuverse)

Time dilation may be possible. Time in Creation vs. time in Malfeas isn't exactly matched up. (also I remember reading that the Yozis can undo events in Malfeas to a point, though they tend to fuck with you if you ask for this since they determine how the events are undone, but I don't know if that's considered canon by most people or not)
If I understand correctly, causality violations are not allowed, but time dilation, and forward-only time travel might be possible.
 
Right now I'm trying to find the rather more sane version of VEE that @EarthScorpion and @Aleph use in their Kerisgame. The one that simply allows you to call in favors for previous acts of kindness and aide.

I think thats basically it? You don't do wishes anymore, just perfectly ordinary actions that somehow place people in debt.

In any case, it means that Kiritsugu cannot direcly enhance his kids with VEE.


Why not both? I mean, awakening essence is an obvious thing to do, but that doesn't mean not activating circuits too. Magecraft might allow for some things sorcery would have hard time replicating. At least Shirou has the potential of achieving his reality marble relatively quickly. And that's, well, that's quite big. If properly trained, well, he might become quite a powerhouse. Also, with some craft and medicine... Kiritsugu knows how to make Origin Bullets. Shirou has the Origin of "Sword". Use UBW to have Shirou forge an Origin sword out of Shirou's own rib. I am relatively sure that would result in a quite powerful artefact. I mean, that would be the closest thing to a pure platonic "sword" in nasuverse, and that might be worth a lot.

Time presumably? Without the "cheat" of an exaltation, it would take quite a bit of time to learn essence use/sorcery. It likewise takes time to learn magic. To learn both might mean you never master neither.

Also, pretty sure the origin bullets only worked because they were made of Kiritsugus ribs (he had some odd origin or somesuch that made it possible?). Also, Shirou might well grow up totally differently given that his father presumably won't drop dead from the curse, which means UBW is by no means a certainty.
 
Also, pretty sure the origin bullets only worked because they were made of Kiritsugus ribs (he had some odd origin or somesuch that made it possible?). Also, Shirou might well grow up totally differently given that his father presumably won't drop dead from the curse, which means UBW is by no means a certainty.

Anyone can make an Origin weapon. the important part is having an origin that's possible to be weaponized. Kiritsugu has a dual origin of "Binding" and "Severing", which lets him make bullets that cut apart and then glue back together his enemies magic circuits, resulting in massive magical backfires. in theory, making an Origin Sword out of parts of Shirou is possible, but also the kind of thing that only a sociopathic "anything to get what I want" mage would do. after all, you can't make much more than a fruit-knife out of a single rib, making a sword would probably require an amputation.
 
Time presumably? Without the "cheat" of an exaltation, it would take quite a bit of time to learn essence use/sorcery. It likewise takes time to learn magic. To learn both might mean you never master neither.
Awakening essence is possible via charms, I am pretty sure, so that doesn't take much time. After that I assume that the study of both methods of making reality your b*tch would at least crossover in some respects. Plus, I expect that the whole is more than the sum of its parts, ie by learning both they'd be able to attain more than by learning each path alone.

Also, pretty sure the origin bullets only worked because they were made of Kiritsugus ribs (he had some odd origin or somesuch that made it possible?).
He had a double origin of severing and binding. Wiki tells me this:
Origin Bullets (起源弾, kigendan?), which are special Conceptual Weapons that utilize his Kiritsugu's Origin to its fullest extent by actualizing it within a target. The bullets were created from his first and second ribs on both sides being cut off, extracted from his body, ground into dust, condensed with a craft to preserve his soul, and sealed within sixty-six bullets as their core.
Now, riddle me this: if Shirou does something similar, ie creates an object (a sword) that utilizes his Origin (Sword) to its fullest extent, what would happen? It would be a sword that preserves Shirou's soul (UBW). At the very least it might result in a sword that can transform into any other sword Shirou have seen. That's at minimum.
Also, Shirou might well grow up totally differently given that his father presumably won't drop dead from the curse, which means UBW is by no means a certainty.
Now UBW similar to one we see in games, yes, but I think that some form of UBW is unavoidable if Shirou works at it, as he already had Avalon implanted into him five days ago.
 
Now UBW similar to one we see in games, yes, but I think that some form of UBW is unavoidable if Shirou works at it, as he already had Avalon implanted into him five days ago.
fairly certain it took a few months for his Element/Origin (and as a result his mentality) to become Sword.

also, do you really think that Kiritsugu will be fine with deliberately turning his son into a suicidal martyr? that very much sounds like something that he'd try to counteract if he found out it was happening.

Now, Shirou's already been burned by the flames of angra-mainyu, so his getting a reality marble is guaranteed, but I don't think that Kiritsugu would help him get one that would turn him into the Shirou "I live only for the happiness of others" Emiya we know from Canon.
 
Anyone can make an Origin weapon. the important part is having an origin that's possible to be weaponized. Kiritsugu has a dual origin of "Binding" and "Severing", which lets him make bullets that cut apart and then glue back together his enemies magic circuits, resulting in massive magical backfires. in theory, making an Origin Sword out of parts of Shirou is possible, but also the kind of thing that only a sociopathic "anything to get what I want" mage would do. after all, you can't make much more than a fruit-knife out of a single rib, making a sword would probably require an amputation.
Regeneration. Or you call a Neomah and add demons flesh to the mix, infusing the Sword Origin with Vitriol and other niceties. Really, everything in Malfeas is an ingredient, and practically every Yozi has at least one sub-soul who is a smith. Not Ligier because you don't bother him with such a minor project (and really, that's a waste of his time).
 
Awakening essence is possible via charms, I am pretty sure, so that doesn't take much time. After that I assume that the study of both methods of making reality your b*tch would at least crossover in some respects. Plus, I expect that the whole is more than the sum of its parts, ie by learning both they'd be able to attain more than by learning each path alone.

As an exalt, Kiritsugu can awaken the essence in others basically instantly. However learning sorcery and martial arts and so on takes a lot of time. Whether theres any commonality between magic and essence use is up to the GM I guess.

Now, riddle me this: if Shirou does something similar, ie creates an object (a sword) that utilizes his Origin (Sword) to its fullest extent, what would happen? It would be a sword that preserves Shirou's soul (UBW). At the very least it might result in a sword that can transform into any other sword Shirou have seen. That's at minimum.

Right, you meant creating a weapon based on Shirous own origin. I guess that would result in a super-sword of somekind then.

Now UBW similar to one we see in games, yes, but I think that some form of UBW is unavoidable if Shirou works at it, as he already had Avalon implanted into him five days ago.

Maybe? What exactly allows one to create a reality marble?


Oh, and when it comes to time manipulation, there is a solar charm that basically kicks a region into Elsewhere where time flows to it in a different rate. A quick search also revealed a SWLIHN charm that dilates time when an exalt is doing crafting, so that construction,surgery,etc happens (essence) times faster than it should.


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after all, you can't make much more than a fruit-knife out of a single rib, making a sword would probably require an amputation.

A) As an Exalt, by the time the grail war arrives in 10 years, Kiritsugu can be much better than the greatest human craftsman that ever lived (and thats in every possible field).

B) As an exalt, Kiritsugu can easily regrow the amputated limb. Then amputate it again for dual wielding. And then regrow it once more.
 
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after all, you can't make much more than a fruit-knife out of a single rib, making a sword would probably require an amputation.
Eh, arguable. Barring regeneration... What is the volume of two ribs (Kiritsugu removed two of his own without having trouble later, as I understand it)? Reshaping those into a sword, or at least a blade, might result in a viable volume.
Regeneration. Or you call a Neomah and add demons flesh to the mix, infusing the Sword Origin with Vitriol and other niceties. Really, everything in Malfeas is an ingredient, and practically every Yozi has at least one sub-soul who is a smith. Not Ligier because you don't bother him with such a minor project (and really, that's a waste of his time).
That (adding demons) might result in a less "pure" result. The quality of the resulting artefact might suffer. Eh, something to research later. Also, depending on how good Shirou turns out to be, and if he's interested in swordmaking (something to take his mind off being a hero), we might even apprentice him to one of those smiths.
fairly certain it took a few months for his Element/Origin (and as a result his mentality) to become Sword.
You might well be right, I am not knowledgeable enough about nasuverse to argue here.
also, do you really think that Kiritsugu will be fine with deliberately turning his son into a suicidal martyr? that very much sounds like something that he'd try to counteract if he found out it was happening.
Of course he'll try to prevent it. Hopefully, at least.
Now, Shirou's already been burned by the flames of angra-mainyu, so his getting a reality marble is guaranteed, but I don't think that Kiritsugu would help him get one that would turn him into the Shirou "I live only for the happiness of others" Emiya we know from Canon.
As I said, some version of UBW, Ie a reality marble centered around sword making, is likely in the works.
a distorted mentality deferent from the human norm. specifically, you need to be so messed up that you run on a different logic than soul of the world itself, like a Marauder oWoD Mage.
I thought that everyone had a reality marble, they just were the same as the real world, normally, and hence couldn't be realized?
 
So what was it exactly that distorted Shirous mentality? Was it the fire (in which case he will get one), or was it the specific life he led, his father dying and so on (in which case its very uncertain).

a combination of all of the above.

the fire had Anti-Soul properties, which burned out Shirou's original personality traits, along with his element and origin.

from there, being implanted with a legendary artifact that possesses the traits of "sword" and "savior" gave him the basis of his new mentality, and his first moments where he sees Kiritsugu smiling and comes to the conclusion of "only those who save others can be truly happy" put the final nail in the coffin.

of course, if we get Avalon out of him quick enough, or make sure to reinforce the idea that he doesn't need to martyr himself to be happy, we might be able to change things.
 
of course, if we get Avalon out of him quick enough, or make sure to reinforce the idea that he doesn't need to martyr himself to be happy, we might be able to change things.

Convincing Kiritsugu to recover Avalon may be difficult though. And we don't have any IC knowledge that having it stuck inside can mess with Shirou
personality.
 
of course, if we get Avalon out of him quick enough, or make sure to reinforce the idea that he doesn't need to martyr himself to be happy, we might be able to change things.
Of course this might result in him getting an origin of something like "infernal" or "yozi". Which isn't a good thing at all.
 
That (adding demons) might result in a less "pure" result. The quality of the resulting artefact might suffer. Eh, something to research later. Also, depending on how good Shirou turns out to be, and if he's interested in swordmaking (something to take his mind off being a hero), we might even apprentice him to one of those smiths.
I am almost certain there are demons who are swords. There is a demon for everything and everything is a sword after all. Just ask Gervesin.

That said, it doesn't come out often but Malfeas is poisonous to mortals who aren't Exalted. Without protection, you die in seven days. Canon solutions include only an expansive antidote who carry the risk of addiction and a demonic moth that slaps itself over your mouth and nose and process through itself air and food to remove the poison. If the GM doesn't offer better options, it is better to leave Shirou and Illya out of Malfeas.

Which is a pity, because being around demons would help Shirou forming a Reality Marble immensely.
 
Convincing Kiritsugu to recover Avalon may be difficult though. And we don't have any IC knowledge that having it stuck inside can mess with Shirou
personality.


that's why if you check the last line of my vote, I have him using Insignificant Embers Intuition to check Shirou's circuits. this might work to have him see that Avalon is doing something screwy to Shirou that it shouldn't be.

That said, it doesn't come out often but Malfeas is poisonous to mortals who aren't Exalted. Without protection, you die in seven days. Canon solutions include only an expansive antidote who carry the risk of addiction and a demonic moth that slaps itself over your mouth and nose and process through itself air and food to remove the poison. If the GM doesn't offer better options, it is better to leave Shirou and Illya out of Malfeas.

ES actually wrote some homebrew on this subject, called "The men of Malfeas" because he thought the standard "if you go here, you get super-cancer and die in 7 days" thing was stupid.
 
I am almost certain there are demons who are swords. There is a demon for everything and everything is a sword after all. Just ask Gervesin.

That said, it doesn't come out often but Malfeas is poisonous to mortals who aren't Exalted. Without protection, you die in seven days. Canon solutions include only an expansive antidote who carry the risk of addiction and a demonic moth that slaps itself over your mouth and nose and process through itself air and food to remove the poison. If the GM doesn't offer better options, it is better to leave Shirou and Illya out of Malfeas.

Which is a pity, because being around demons would help Shirou forming a Reality Marble immensely.
Couldn't we summon demons out of Malfeas though? Also aren't nasu demons (ones that would be helpful for developing RM) like radically different from exalted demons?

Also... Didn't "record swords in UBW" thing worked even before he obtained UBW itself? I wonder how this would react with demons who are swords.
that's why if you check the last line of my vote, I have him using Insignificant Embers Intuition to check Shirou's circuits. this might work to have him see that Avalon is doing something screwy to Shirou that it shouldn't be.
It's very arguable if Avalon's influence is a negative thing. It did give Shirou a very big, if specialized, potential, what with aligned origin and element.
 
It's very arguable if Avalon's influence is a negative thing. It did give Shirou a very big, if specialized, potential, what with aligned origin and element.

yes, but the idea is to have him notice that something is changing Shirou's Element and Origin, and from their think about what this could mean for his son.

Also... Didn't "record swords in UBW" thing worked even before he obtained UBW itself? I wonder how this would react with demons who are swords.


he's had UBW (or at least the potential for it) since about 6 months after he was adopted, he just had no idea he had it or how to use it. so, yes, if we let him develop that way, he might be able to do freaky things with demon swords...
 
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Couldn't we summon demons out of Malfeas though? Also aren't nasu demons (ones that would be helpful for developing RM) like radically different from exalted demons?

Yep. With sorcery. And we can bind them and order them to do what we want. Heck, would probably be smart to summon a couple of sesselja and order them to stay inside both Shirou and Ilya at all times.

Also, I believe the whole "demon" thing is political in exalted? The Yozi lost, so their 1st circles stopped being deva and started being demons (but did not actually change in reality at all).

Oh, and infernals have a few charms that make you a "native of malfeas". Would that help with the poison thing?
 
That said, it doesn't come out often but Malfeas is poisonous to mortals who aren't Exalted. Without protection, you die in seven days. Canon solutions include only an expansive antidote who carry the risk of addiction and a demonic moth that slaps itself over your mouth and nose and process through itself air and food to remove the poison. If the GM doesn't offer better options, it is better to leave Shirou and Illya out of Malfeas.
The danger of Malfeas is not the air they breath. A mortal will not sicken and die after seven days in Malfeas. The danger is in the environment. Those who would love to take such valuable property, only stopped by fear of a Green Sun Princes wrath.

So yes, you can tell Shirou and Illya 'we're going on a road trip!' and travel across the Endless Desert in a dune buggy.

But just like taking them to Disney land, you'll want to keep good track of both of them, else they might be in danger.
 
The danger of Malfeas is not the air they breath. A mortal will not sicken and die after seven days in Malfeas. The danger is in the environment. Those who would love to take such valuable property, only stopped by fear of a Green Sun Princes wrath.

So yes, you can tell Shirou and Illya 'we're going on a road trip!' and travel across the Endless Desert in a dune buggy.

But just like taking them to Disney land, you'll want to keep good track of both of them, else they might be in danger.

I think its mentioned in one of the books that such poison in the air does exist.

However if its against fun, I see no reason not to pretend it does not exist.

PS. Shirou should walk. Then they can all ponder together the mystery of how the heck he reached Malfeas in exactly the same time as the dune buggy did.
 
yes, but the idea is to have him notice that something is changing Shirou's Element and Origin, and from their think about what this could mean for his son.
Question: what would a person be without origin? From what I understand they would be utterly aimless and without any motivation. Having Avalon, a "pure" artifact, if ever there was one, shape Shirou's origin would be a good thing, especially when other influences are likely to be much more malicious. Also, my original idea for Shirou's "sword" (because I didn't come up with it on the spot):
The sword (Ex) – the ultimate creation of Emiya Shirou, this is an artifact which existence transcends that of any other inanimate object. Made using the notes that his adoptive father Emiya Kiritsugu left behind on the creation of his own conceptual weapon - origin bullets, it is by far superior to any other artifact crafted by modern magi and is, in fact, infinitely close to the level of mystery that is true magic, despite being crafted by the man that, at the time, could be rightfully considered a total failure in the arcane arts.

Using Shirou's rib as a base material, The Sword was forged using the everlasting flames of the infinite manufactory that is his soul, called Unlimited Blade Works. There, the part of his body holding the origin of "the sword" and flooded to the brim with the reinforcing magic bearing the elemental nature of "the sword", was cleansed of all imperfections and unnecessary additions polluting the cleanness of the conceptual existence that became and forever was The Sword.

The Sword is the distilled and concentrated concept realized through the application of forbidden magic that is a reality marble and anchored to the world using the body of it's creator. Because it is the pure idea of "the sword" materialized into existence that has no other additions, it possesses several properties that are miraculous and unobtainable by any science or magecraft accessible to the modern day magi. By itself and without any external forces, it is a sword that does not know the concept of breaking, shattering or dulling. It is a supreme blade able to cut through anything that can potentially be cut. This is, however, just the most basic and unimpressive of it's properties.

Since all objects that has ever bore and that will ever bear the name of "sword" inevitably contain The Sword as the basis of their existence and all of them are encompassed by the concept of "sword", there exists a connection between them and The Sword. In some way it can potentially be said that The Sword is, in fact, all swords to have ever existed and all the swords that could ever exist. This, in turn, means that The Sword contains all of their properties and history and that the bearer of The Sword could potentially access all those powers, abilities and that knowledge, if he or she studied The Sword intently enough. In most basic form this allows the replication of properties of any blade ever seen by the wielder of The Sword by the transformation of the Sword into the perfect replica of the blade in question.

The other miracle of The sword is by far more personal. Since it's creator Emiya Shirou is himself, a Sword in both element and origin, The Sword's existence encompasses his life. Thus, as long as The Sword exists, the being known as Shirou Emiya will exist in this world. This grants Shirou existence unlike any other, and, coupled with the creation of the artifact that cannot be considered anything else but a true miracle with the connection to the legends of all swords in existence, elevates him to the level where he can be called a Heroic Spirit.

If heroic Spirit Emiya Shirou was to be summoned into the Grail War, he would inevitably be summoned as a Saber class servant. In fact, it could be questioned, who exactly would be summoned – a human by the name of Shirou famous for the creation and use of The Sword, or The Sword itself, containing within itself the human Emiya Shirou.
No sane GM would ever allow this thing to be created, but it is still an idea Shirou could benefit from, I feel. And, as a good father, Kiritsugu would probably want Shirou to excel and have the best things.

Also, a thing o do potentially: find Saber's resting place, and wake her up.
 
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