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The Taste of Peaches (Worm AU)

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jwolfe_beta said:
As for people being in awe of Taylor/ her showing loads of charisma that just grab attention etc etc; I imagine it's just an overall 'divine aura' (though the domain no doubt helps). Basically she's becoming just plain more than a mortal.

Oh it isn't at the 'fall to your knees and worship me' level (well maybe for Amy :ogles: ) yet but when she puts her game face on like at the interview, everybody can agree that she has an impressive 'presence' as it were.
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I'm certain that Amy and Flechette are both ready to start a fan club(reads as seraglio?) for her. Sketchy comments aside, it would be amusing if her fertility aspect was geared towards prosperity of foxes. Habitat, food source and population. Inari is likely to be all to willing to serve as governor over the new greater den of Brockton Bay...
 
FaerieKnight79 said:
I once got failing grade for a class on Greek Mythology because I was aware of more versions of the myths then appear in the text book we were assigned. Which I could back up via bringing in copies of them for the teacher to read. The teacher believed there is only one version of every myth, so I got an F on every assignment due to showing myself to be more knowledgable then the teacher.
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That type of things is disapointing. I had exactly the opposite experience. In Latin civilization course, I always interrupted the teacher whenever she was telling a myth by telling her there was at least one or two alternate versions (and telling the alternates, from memory). After less than a month, whenever she was talking about a myth, she always asked me if I wanted to tell the class and alternate version.

I was 12 at the time.

I consider that teacher great at getting or keeping kids interested in her topics. (also unlucky in her students that year, beside me for myth and roman history, another students was as knowledgeable when it came to roman architecture and laws/customs. Between the 2 of us, we basically knew the whole course better than the teacher. And being 12, we had no idea what tact was.)
 
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kairuf said:
So I thought you were saying the PRT would not Say "heroes get powers when they try to push through human limits while doing heroic things."
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No. I said they wouldn't use "classic" definition of word "heroic", because they did everything to exhort people to believe that "hero" = "good person", and using so called classic definition would throw a big wrench in their efforts.
Sorry for returning to this, but it would be rude to not answer, I think.
 
I love this story it is so amazing and fluffy.
I will state that I agree with @Gekkou_Yoko and you should take time for yourself. A nice benefit is that a better quality in life will make for a better quality in your writing. Don't force the writing and let it flow when it wants to. Will your reader's be sad to not get as much fluffiness as possible, yes. Would we rather have better quality chapter and a non-burned out author over faster update, most definitely yes. So take care and I will look forward to a summer-time BBQ XD
 
Sandy River DL said:
That fic is actually why I said healthy. Apocrypha!Taylor chose to date Dennis to spite Khepri and was one of the reasons I dropped it.
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You needn't have bothered. Their relationship barely exists and the two of them are almost never in thr same place at the same time, or even talk to each other, after her birthday party and thus is easily ignored.
 
Crazael said:
That is the first time theyve been shown to be in the same place at the same time, or even in communication since her birthday party when he kissed her.
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and it looks like you are ignoring the fact than it shows them ready to marry each other; which would mean than they had been dating for the 2 years and they truly love each other.

now stand corrected!

by the way, Xenahort is being annoying again, any idea for a good prank?
 
hakunoX said:
and it looks like you are ignoring the fact than it shows them ready to marry each other; which would mean than they had been dating for the 2 years and they truly love each other.

now stand corrected!

by the way, Xenahort is being annoying again, any idea for a good prank?
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I'm talking about what is seen on screen. The two are barely shown to interact. We're just told that they do. And then in the Christmas special, Danny gives Taylor her mother's ring and her and Dennis both say they want to wait a few more years before getting married.
 
Crazael said:
I'm talking about what is seen on screen. The two are barely shown to interact. We're just told that they do. And then in the Christmas special, Danny gives Taylor her mother's ring and her and Dennis both say they want to wait a few more years before getting married.
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okay, let's be logical:

in what way Dennis and Taylor dates and relationship advance the Plot? (and no the "PLOT").

An Essence of Silver and Steel is on their last arcs and they have to start fixing the threats in order to have a clearer way to kill Scion, and after that, we got the fight with the Golden Idiot, so we can't get all the "mushy mushy ñarm ñarm" because it would be useless for the Plot.
 
hakunoX said:
okay, let's be logical:

in what way Dennis and Taylor dates and relationship advance the Plot? (and no the "PLOT").

An Essence of Silver and Steel is on their last arcs and they have to start fixing the threats in order to have a clearer way to kill Scion, and after that, we got the fight with the Golden Idiot, so we can't get all the "mushy mushy ñarm ñarm" because it would be useless for the Plot.
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All of fhat is irrelevant to my point. Which is that the relationship between Taylor and Dennis in that fic barely exists as far as the story is concerned and that it is a poor example of Taylor being in a straight relationship. Now, im not objecting to them being in a relationship. I just think it could have been handled better by giving them more scenes together.
 
Crazael said:
All of fhat is irrelevant to my point. Which is that the relationship between Taylor and Dennis in that fic barely exists as far as the story is concerned and that it is a poor example of Taylor being in a straight relationship. Now, im not objecting to them being in a relationship. I just think it could have been handled better by giving them more scenes together.
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okay, yo win this point.

anyway, even with all that i fell than this story should not have a Straigh!Taylor.

considering all of her new "assets" (divinity assests not her sexy ones) i believe than this would be better like "queen of the blood"... with an HAREM ENDING! in relationships, in fact i wonder who be the first wife.

anyway people let's make a "vote"

the one's in favor give a reation with the symbol, who do you want as first lover of the fluffly goddess of BB?!:


Taylor/Vicky: goddess of fluffly forever! like.
Taylor/Panacea: let's give the Martir her reward with a blessing goddess love! hugs.
Taylor/Lily: team kill Scion forever! informative
Taylor/Emma: a redemtion in process, will this broken girl have her chance? Insightfull (not)
Taylor/Lisa: let's be clear, we only want them together in order to make Lisa less smug. Funny.
 
Alternatively, because Taylor is a Goddess, her aging is probably slowed down to the point that we won't see any romance in this fic, just like in Scaling Up.
 
hakunoX said:
@jmcdavid

please, shup up.
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Do not tell people to shut up because you don't agree with their theories.
i think we all would love Yuri goodness.

and i feel than the more people who talk of this the more possible this to happen
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And until the author tells you to drop it you're welcome to discuss it as much as you want, what you aren't is welcome to tell other people to shut up about alternate theories.
 
TheUnicorn said:
Do not tell people to shut up because you don't agree with their theories.
And until the author tells you to drop it you're welcome to discuss it as much as you want, what you aren't is welcome to tell other people to shut up about alternate theories.
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SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY,SORRY!

i just wanted to talk of yuri, sorry!

please don't tell Xenahort of this, he is already cranky with the glitter incident, i don't wanna be grounded until february!
 
Grounders10 said:
... You know I didn't set out to write this as a Yuri-shipfest.

I think something happened along the way.
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Well, the only person Taylor has been attracted to so far is Aegis. That at least half the population is attracted to her is only expected, and most of the interesting people in Worm, especially within Taylor's age group, are female.

And I just remembered: Taylor has not yet learned (or used) any of the Wards' civilian names on screen. Ditto their faces.
Flenser said:
Children and to a lesser extent pretty much anyone else would feel the safety and comfort of the matron.
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Grounders10 said:
The air shivered with her next words.

"I am the storm that guards." In the silence that followed she felt a powerful blush form on her cheeks. It was so cheesy, but the words had just flowed naturally from her mouth and even now, as she realized just how childish it sounded in the air, they felt too right to deny.

"So it shall be," Inari whispered beside her, the fox's voice travelling no further than her ear. Taylor glanced her way and raised an eyebrow questioningly as Inari bowed.
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That is all.
 
ForestGardener said:
Well, the only person Taylor has been attracted to so far is Aegis. That at least half the population is attracted to her is only expected, and most of the interesting people in Worm, especially within Taylor's age group, are female.

And I just remembered: Taylor has not yet learned (or used) any of the Wards' civilian names on screen. Ditto their faces.


That is all.
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Right I completely overlooked that.
 
Knowledgeispower said:
Ah then we'll have to get the science division work on giving you the ability to make shadow clones.
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A group known as Speluncacanem displayed a technology that could help here.
It is called Patterning and is used by some of the greatest minds of their age.
Successful use would allow you to exponentially increase your productivity.
 
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