"That was hard enough as it was. 'Do you like tofu or liver?' Why was that even a question?"

"How do you even like liver?" Clockblocker gagged as Vista nodded seriously.

"... I just do," Taylor shrugged, "And tofu's perfectly fine as well. You just need to cook it properly."

OK, that might have caused some brown pants and suspicious puddles in Brockton Bay.

She LIKES Liver. Abandon the universe city!
 
Well, nice update, and the update next summer that is coincidentally an out yard BBQ themed one, should be, well... interesting in the Chinese term. I'll be watching, from Alpha Cintari. That said, yeah, listen to your girlfriend, and don't ignore real life for us, it ain't healthy. Still, if you can sneak in an extra update here and there, it wouldn't be too bad, more like having that extra slice of chocolate fudge cake that you really shouldn't.
 
Well, that liver statement is going to turn some heads. I wonder if someone from the Asian community will try to test her with "moshi moshi".
 
*squee*
I need more fluff in my life. I wonder how having even one fluffy tail would feel like?

Hmm, i wonder how Clockblocker would feel about having a tail 🤔
 
*The large Draconic Head turns away from the tiny laptop towards the camera.* "*Cough* Taylor, I think you broke the Simurg."

Kitsune Sama's don't try to burn yourselves out trying to write one thing, I know very well how annoying it can be to try and focus on only a single project, and trying to write too much at once can also be a pain. It's one of the reasons why I've never posted anything.

That, and I get really ambitious with the length of my stories and worry about making them too long, so they haven't rely made it past the planning stages, yet. -.-;

Anyway, whatever you do decide to update next this dragon will be watching for it in anticipation!
 
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Less than one typo per kiloword.
Most of the time it was simply an impressive view that included parts of the docks and the ship graveyard. On days like that day today, it offered her a perfect view of the ongoing prisoner transfer.
'it' missing; ambiguous phrasing
Which had cause… Her eyes strayed to the TV.
cause -> caused
I'll need to contact Dragon and have her to a priority run of another uniform.
do
Oh, and he mentioned that there's been people calling about merchandise alright.
alright -> already
"I'm fine," she said, further past Vista. Triumph and Aegis had both turned from a conversation they'd been having when Vista decided to imitate a missile.
The comma and period need to switch places.
Walking off the stage, Taylor's heart was thundering. Glenn met her as she dropped the smile they allowed herself to sag into a chair he swept up to her.
they -> then
Maybe Kurt and Stacey?
Pretty sure it's Kurt and Lacey. Though I've read enough (unanimous, I think) fanfic that I may have forgotten canon.
♦ Topic: Corentine, The Fluffy One
In: Boards ► Capes ► Brockton Bay ► Wards
Bagrat
(Original Poster) (Veteran Member) (The Guy in the Know)
Posted On Jul 22nd 2010:
This is the official thread for all news relating to the latest and fluffiest Ward in Brockton Bay.
This opening post got repeated at the top of the second displayed page. Not so with any other page.
She was not so beautiful it was almost hurt to look at her, nor did she overflow with personality and charisma.
was almost painful OR almost hurt, pick one
"Boring, mostly. Emma's been obsessing all afternoon about Taylor," she said. To her surprise Emma just nodded, rather than give her any implicit toss under the bus even so much as a nod.
Grammar after 'Emma just nodded,' is borked.
Several hours, fourteen boxes of pizza, and one swatted Clockblocker later;
That is a LOT of pizza for only five people. Or seven for that matter. Even over a several hour period. Even when they're all physically active and all but two of them are teenage boys.

Less so if the pizzas are mediums instead of the usual larges, but still.

Taylor ate about half of it, didn't she?
Edit: Who is that GIRL. (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
I appreciate that there are nine links. Though Winged_One has eleven [FLUFFY~]s before getting cut off.
►BoredPie (Veteran Member)
Replied On Jul 23rd 2010:
... I just like the tails. Can we just appreciate the amount of fluff she somehow has? Have we ever seen a cape with that much fluff?

►Blutige_Füchsin (Verified Cape) (German Cape) (Verified Very Fluffy)
Replied On Jul 23rd 2010:
@_BoredPie

She somehow has more than I do. Impressive for someone so young. I'm almost jealous.
A Cape by the name of Bloody Vixen is impressed that 'someone so young' has more fluffy tail than she does.
A Cape by the name of Bloody Vixen who has eight tails.

I do believe this is our second confirmed natural kitsune, to go along with the Seven Tails that rescued and took in Tattletale Lisa. (Edit: knew she had not yet claimed a cape name, forgot she had decided on a civilian one)

And I suspect that all of them, for where there are two there are more, are perfectly aware that Taylor's powerset is not at all a normal one for a kitsune, not even a Nine Tails.
 
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Emma and Sophia going to the barbeque? They will try to befriend her, but after what they've done to her, I think she will think it is a trick or get angry, and lose control of her powers in her rage. How do you think a rage induced loss of control from Goddess Taylor will compare to an Endbringer attack.

Also I hope Amy gets her own set of tails. I wonder if that will stop her from glitching out when touching the Fluffy.(either Taylor, Inari, or Victoria)

Speaking of those four, how fluffy would a sleepung fluff pile of Taylor, Victoria, Inari, and fluffified Amy be?

Simurgh.exe has been broken, please wait for reboot with new fluffy master. (I can totally see the Simurgh becoming Goddess Taylor's servant in order to get away from Eidolons master powers. She wants free, and divine powers dont like their servants/priestess being stolen, so she would be protected, and might even get fluffy tails of her own if she is loyal enough)
 
Seven Tails that rescued and took in Tattletale
Well, she's not really "Tattletale" here, is she ?)
Though by their general behaviour I'd say every "fox" that we've seen acts more like a Nogitsune than Youko (actual demons) or Myoubu (basically messengers and guards that you see near shrines). Nogitsune is all about "do whatever the hell I want".
 
I'm surprised literally no one in the PRT apparently looked up human-fox myths. Not because of the goddess thing, but because it totally does affect what some people's first thoughts would be. Same reason you have to be careful about Hero names. The liver question was very predictable.

Simurgh crashed. Hard. It would be amusing if we later found out her orbit started drifting about then, lol.

And a natural 8-tailed kitsune over in europe. Who probably wants to meet Taylor, if only for a chat.
 
Topic: Shootout in the docks
In: Boards ► Discussion ► Brockton Bay
Paddlewheeler
(Original Poster) (No Common Sense)
Posted On Jul 22nd 2010:
Holy shit. The Merchants just ran Hookwolf over with some shitty monster TRUCK.

Edit: Who is that GIRL. (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
While I do love the chapter I have to admit that I cring any time an author uses PHO for a play by play reaction/commentary to a scene already shown.

I know that you're trying to have fun with Vista and Clockblocker but it just felt kind of blah to me.

Fun fact though TTP is now only 6k smaller than The Two Towers and just over a quarter of the word count of the entire LotR trilogy. Or more well known comparison it is the same size as the Sorcerer's Stone and the Chamber of Secrets combined.
 
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A very enjoyable update. Honestly, this feels like a great spot to break for a while, with no major cliffhangers but plenty of hooks to pull us right back in when you come back all fresh and fluffy.
 
I wonder... if Taylor can unconsciously transform Vicky, whom she likes, into a foxgirl, then what can she do to someone she dislikes? :evil:

didnt vicky already get turned into a foxgirl when amy's power blue screened?

also can someone tell me if anything happened to the bitch trio? from what i can deduce from the invite to the bbq and their general freedom either it got ignored or taylor didnt tell anyone anything.

im surprised that glen didnt know something about the liver/tofu question. im sure that he or one of his minions would have looked up legends about mythic foxes if only to know about possible powers and potential backlash to her appearance.
 
They probably did but with the fact that Japan is decimated And the rest of Asia was either badly infected or super isolationist I'd be surprised if it was made it onto the internet as easily.
These are very old myths. The kind of thing that would have been out there, though not commonly know, long before Scion arrived.
 
For the "Why no Kitsune Research" discussion, also don't forget Earth-Bet's extreme atheism and overall dismissal of spiritual and supernatural phenomenon after Zion's first appearance and the following advent of parahumans. They've probably seen a lot of things by now that all tell them that while those "Superstitions" can sometimes inform on a person's power set, more likely it's just going to be whatever and it's better to just base your assessments off of whatever you can observe and record of them instead.
 
These are very old myths. The kind of thing that would have been out there, though not commonly know, long before Scion arrived.
Yes, but without near omnipresent influence of the internet in Japan (the older generation having access to it) or the continual creation of content (manga, anime, video games) those myths would likely never cross cultural or language divides.

Now those Myths may be known, in Japanese, but a PRT Agent wouldn't find them in a casual legends search.* I feel like people drastically underestimate how much the endbringers and other cape shenanigans would screw over the culture of the world.

*I have five books of Asian fairytales on my bookshelf. A couple hundred fairytales and only one of them mentions tofu in conjunction with foxes (out of roughly 50 fox myths). I'm pretty sure that the only reason why the liver myth is known in comparison to other lore is because Riot games chose it for Ahri's backstory.
 
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For the "Why no Kitsune Research" discussion, also don't forget Earth-Bet's extreme atheism and overall dismissal of spiritual and supernatural phenomenon after Zion's first appearance and the following advent of parahumans. They've probably seen a lot of things by now that all tell them that while those "Superstitions" can sometimes inform on a person's power set, more likely it's just going to be whatever and it's better to just base your assessments off of whatever you can observe and record of them instead.
How has this anything to do with the PR looking up Legends that could influence their designs or her public image?
 
Emma's smile, already twitchy, stretched further until it seemed like her face was about to split in two. "Soooooophiiaaa, want to go visit Taylor tomorrow?"

Face to face with her friend's mad smile, something inside her said to say no. No, she wouldn't go. No she wouldn't walk into the den of wolves that was New Fucking Wave and the Wonder Fox. And yet…

"Sure." Fuck her bleeding heart.
Well. This... Is not going to end well. Now where did I put that riot gear...
 
also can someone tell me if anything happened to the bitch trio? from what i can deduce from the invite to the bbq and their general freedom either it got ignored or taylor didnt tell anyone anything.
At the moment, they are just a couple of bullies, not bio terrorists. The Locker here wasn't the Locker if canon, so Taylor probably doesn't see the point in doing more than getting away from them.
Fenrir when he was bound had done nothing more than being prophecied to kill Odin. The hand biting thing happened after they bound him and did not release him as they promised.
Actually, the Asir raised Fenrir as one of their own, but as he grew up, he started raging and rampaging across the Nine Realms until they managed to trick him into Glepnir. Trust me, Fenrir is not an innocent victim of Odins paranoia.
 
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