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The Lost Primarch Quest

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  • Spirit of Fire

    Votes: 21 47.7%

  • Vigilance

    Votes: 23 52.3%
  • Total voters
    44
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It should be noted some of the invisitext can be taken as my own commentary taunting myself with how I chose to open up the tech tree for Cultist and not spread the primer to help out the entire Imperium, and it might be a while before we do the research so we can aid the Imperium in handling them.
 
Daemon Hunter said:
You know this is surprisingly familiar. One of the planets I had made for initial character creation had this problem. It was mostly untouched by the Age of Strife and was incredibly liberal in terms of freedom. I was wondering how that would turn out.
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Well hot damn, was not expecting that. Like one bit.... So... um. Totally didn't read your notes. How'd you enjoy the invistext here, since this stuff was Baldur's thoughts primarily.

Edit: Main reason why I stopped where I did is because I've a graduation party to attend tomorrow, gotta leave at like 8 for it though and it's like 2 am.
 
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SleepMode said:
If I'm correct, Space!Buddhist and his Legion has killed more daemons than the rest of the Primarchs combined.
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This was mostly because we went after Chaos enemies more often. I think Mortarion or Magnus might be similarly effective in such scenarios. Although we are probably the most corruption-resistant at the moment. It feels like we're mostly a generalist Primarch right now, dabbling in a bit of everything.
 
Altered said:
Well hot damn, was not expecting that. Like one bit.... So... um. Totally didn't read your notes. How'd you enjoy the invistext here, since this stuff was Baldur's thoughts primarily.
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I like the invisitext, it works well with the story. The line "remember the Planet and it's Citizens as they were, not how they are" was a big standout to me. Fits the Warden's beliefs well. I also really like the comments on how this could have been prevented if things had gone differently. It fits with the somber mentality the Wardens seem to be developing in my mind.
 
Daemon Hunter said:
I like the invisitext, it works well with the story. The line "remember the Planet and it's Citizens as they were, not how they are" was a big standout to me. Fits the Warden's beliefs well. I also really like the comments on how this could have been prevented if things had gone differently. It fits with the somber mentality the Wardens seem to be developing in my mind.
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You're flavor text for the Omake Rewards had me tossing that line in there... Also, yeah I figured since we're going to be headed at Daemon worlds and such, we're going to have that somber mentality, because we'll be seeing people who have fallen. Out of fear, out of greed, out of desire, out of anything, and those who were forced to fall by others. Our Marines will be seeing some shit.

As you know our people have taken to carving the names of our fallen into their armor, well Baldur will do that. But the title points out a step beyond that, alongside that Invisitext. Baldur will be recording what happens, and such, but also promoting the "remember them as they were, not how they are bit". The Chronicles are written by him during spare time, and such. The invisible text are his actual thoughts, rather then records which the Chronicles will be.
 
Altered said:
You're flavor text for the Omake Rewards had me tossing that line in there... Also, yeah I figured since we're going to be headed at Daemon worlds and such, we're going to have that somber mentality, because we'll be seeing people who have fallen. Out of fear, out of greed, out of desire, out of anything, and those who were forced to fall by others. Our Marines will be seeing some shit.

As you know our people have taken to carving the names of our fallen into their armor, well Baldur will do that. But the title points out a step beyond that, alongside that Invisitext. Baldur will be recording what happens, and such, but also promoting the "remember them as they were, not how they are bit". The Chronicles are written by him during spare time, and such. The invisible text are his actual thoughts, rather then records which the Chronicles will be.
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Huh, that's a rather interesting spin on it. I look forward to it. Meanwhile, I'm going to hold off on your rewards for the Omake until I finish the scene I'm working on for the next update.
 
Nicholas Brooks said:
This was mostly because we went after Chaos enemies more often. I think Mortarion or Magnus might be similarly effective in such scenarios. Although we are probably the most corruption-resistant at the moment. It feels like we're mostly a generalist Primarch right now, dabbling in a bit of everything.
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Welp, we better specialize in Anti-Daemon now; cause Big E just gave us a job shittier than digging holes; purging Daemon Worlds.
 
Daemon Hunter said:
Huh, that's a rather interesting spin on it. I look forward to it. Meanwhile, I'm going to hold off on your rewards for the Omake until I finish the scene I'm working on for the next update.
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I'm glad you look forward to it, I can only hope I do it justice.

Lol, I was going to make a joke that I was o be the first of many to not be given Omake Rewards. Naah, but for real I figured you'd hold off until I posted the rest of it. Glad you'll reward me for this though, increases the feeling of appreciation.
 
SleepMode said:
Welp, we better specialize in Anti-Daemon now; cause Big E just gave us a job shittier than digging holes; purging Daemon Worlds.
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I did at least ensure we have some help in recognizing Cultists and identifying Corruption. The Cultist bit being that Tech Tree. I believe this should decently aid us, obviously we need to put more effort into specializing as anti-daemon/warp. But this plus the resistance should aid us for now.

Edit: There's also the entire last stand stuff, and all the Contingecy plans for if we or others in our Legion fall. Plus the No loss of moral when facing corrupted Astartes.
 
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Chief18753 said:
Yeah, because all the planets he conquered and brought to Compliance were totally off limits for him to actually build the things he whines about wanting to create.

The anti social asshole is suppose to jump at beck and call to demonstrate skill that he never bothered utilizing for his own ambitions.
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I thought that was because he kept getting pushed to more compliances/sieges so he didn't have the time.

I mean, theoretically he could have spent time building masterworks on them, but that might've caused some unwanted friction with the Emperor for slowing down his compliance all of a sudden.
SleepMode said:
Welp, we better specialize in Anti-Daemon now; cause Big E just gave us a job shittier than digging holes; purging Daemon Worlds.
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Perturabo and Kesar are gonna get a-bondin' over their shitty jobs. Maybe instead of a "Heresy" all the Primarchs just go on strike for better work conditions. Regardless, yeah we Daemonbane now. Gonna be getting a lot of anti-Daemon bonuses now at least.
 
I looked at the Omake list and I saw that Alpharius and Omegon have contingencies for when a Primarch and Legion fall. I kinda want an omake with them reacting to our Contingencies for if we Fall and if important folks in our Legion fall.
 
Altered said:
I looked at the Omake list and I saw that Alpharius and Omegon have contingencies for when a Primarch and Legion fall. I kinda want an omake with them reacting to our Contingencies for if we Fall and if important folks in our Legion fall.
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Alpharius: *sniff* we're so proud of you, big brother.

Edit: Maybe we can form a program for Kesar and his friends to give each other some of their Astartes so we might both learn from each other and bond as a family.
 
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Heh... Learn from the World Eaters, Death Guard, Emperor's Children, Thousand Sons and Luna Wolves...

It's gonna be awkward after the Heresy...

EDIT: Even better - - the loyal chapters of the Traitor Legions decide to join us instead. Heh.
 
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SleepMode said:
Heh... Learn from the World Eaters, Death Guard, Emperor's Children, Thousand Sons and Luna Wolves...

It's gonna be awkward after the Heresy...
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"Brothers... why are we fighting?"

But in all honesty our actions may prevent a Heresy altogether. Kesar is a bro and very knowledgeable about Warp Corruption. Combine this with the Alpha Legion knowing about the plots of Tzeentch and we might be able to prevent this. I'm imagining if the Emperor tried to do Monarchia, Kesar would be there demanding that the Emperor and Guilliman stop
 
Nicholas Brooks said:
Kesar would be there demanding that the Emperor and Guilliman stop
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Not quite? I mean Kesar's main reason to be there and try to stop the Emperor would be Valhalla's religion which Kesar himself has shown no proclivities for. The only other reason would to be backing up Lorgar which he kinda also doesn't currently have a reason to do. I mean, being a nice guy I guess he'll condemn Guilliman and Emps actions but I expect as much involvement as Vulkan.
 
Altered said:
Assuming Heresy goes the same way... the time we spent with Magnus makes things a hell of a lot of awkwardness there...
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Nicholas Brooks said:
"Brothers... why are we fighting?"

But in all honesty our actions may prevent a Heresy altogether. Kesar is a bro and very knowledgeable about Warp Corruption. Combine this with the Alpha Legion knowing about the plots of Tzeentch and we might be able to prevent this. I'm imagining if the Emperor tried to do Monarchia, Kesar would be there demanding that the Emperor and Guilliman stop
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I will say that there is a possibility of preventing the heresy. That being said, if it does take place, it is going to be very different. You can already see 2 differences with Magnus and the Alpha Legion. There is a third major change, but that is going to be difficult for you to learn.
 
Daemon Hunter said:
I will say that there is a possibility of preventing the heresy. That being said, if it does take place, it is going to be very different. You can already see 2 differences with Magnus and the Alpha Legion. There is a third major change, but that is going to be difficult for you to learn.
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I mean third major change super obvious :V

11th Primarch Lives on and is useful. :V
 
Altered said:
Not quite? I mean Kesar's main reason to be there and try to stop the Emperor would be Valhalla's religion which Kesar himself has shown no proclivities for. The only other reason would to be backing up Lorgar which he kinda also doesn't currently have a reason to do. I mean, being a nice guy I guess he'll condemn Guilliman and Emps actions but I expect as much involvement as Vulkan.
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They were going to wipe out an entire city of innocent people. Ones that were neither chaotic nor rebellious. That shit don't fly, especially since the Emperor cited a f*cking low compliance speed as the reason. I don't recall that the Emperor did anything about Lorgar's faith when there were masses of people on Colchis calling him a God so that's a bullshit excuse clearly.
 
Daemon Hunter said:
You know, I didn't think of that. Make that 4 changes with the last being hard to find until it happens.
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I mean 4th One, we've changed up the Admech a bit by giving them quite the array of technology. Like, large amounts of DAOT tech.

5th one, Malcador has pretty well established Information Lines and Spies on our planet's setting up the infrastructures necessary for later on Inquistors and Office of Assassins.
 
Altered said:
I mean 4th One, we've changed up the Admech a bit by giving them quite the array of technology. Like, large amounts of DAOT tech.

5th one, Malcador has pretty well established Information Lines and Spies on our planet's setting up the infrastructures necessary for later on Inquistors and Office of Assassins.
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Ok, so maybe a lot more things have changed than I thought. Let me rephrase. Another major change regards which Primarchs turn traitor/loyalist and to whom they may or may not fall to.
 
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