The Long Night Part One: Embers in the Dusk: A Planetary Governor Quest (43k) Complete Sequel Up

Investigate the Sea?

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Oh dear Emperor.
It happened.
And we fucked up with paperwork and time zones.
Fitting, considering the Bureaucracy God is coming.
...
What do I do now?
Any omake prompts or inspirations? Mind's coming up blank.
 
Oh dear Emperor.
It happened.
And we fucked up with paperwork and time zones.
Fitting, considering the Bureaucracy God is coming.
...
What do I do now?
Any omake prompts or inspirations? Mind's coming up blank.
I would have a look at the discord channel under the omakes tab for prompts
I know there are multiple things on the go including my self
I am doing something about rotbarts thoughts just after it begins
 
Oh dear Emperor.
It happened.
And we fucked up with paperwork and time zones.
Fitting, considering the Bureaucracy God is coming.
...
What do I do now?
Any omake prompts or inspirations? Mind's coming up blank.
I'd suggest something about Waset, since that city is extra vulnerable due to a poorly timed construction project and could use the boost.
Maybe something with sun beetles or Sphinx's.
 
maybe Avernus suddenly has some new creatures for countering abom-forces?

like some sort of freedom-tuned creature

unlikely, but maybe someone can omake something?
 
you two do have a point.

how many turns ago was that?

maybe someone could omake something, bet durin would canon-hammer it.

I wonder if they will make a entire old-one version of the nid-species or just a particular sub-species. it would be kind of terrifying to have to deal with old-one upgraded version of the nids as a new local wild-life.
 
The Golden Legion
The Golden Legion

They were the Golden Legion. The highest slaves of Tjapa, the blessed bearers of his will, and they were falling like stalks of grain before a scythe. Blasts of primal instinctive revulsion reduce entire armies to twisting whispers of warpstuff; claws fashioned after the first beast to ever eat a thinking creature drag glorious commanders into the dark; anarchy caged and goaded for this moment bursts among their ranks. It is the first instant of the first step towards the portal, and the Golden Legion bleeds.

The World is not merely vigilant, it is prepared. They had camped too close, for too long - even the nearly Warp-blind humans who dwelt upon the Crucible had grown suspicious; the Planetmind had grown prepared. Its defenses tuned, its guardians aware and its forces already rallied. Armies of strange warpspawn dance around the ponderous legion as great constructs strike with the power of a forgotten age, but the legion is endless. Their dead cover the ground a dozen spans deep from one end of the horizon to the other, but the first gate is breached.

Five-times-five Archangyls of the Third Circle are the first through the breach into real space. They live for less than a heartbeat, with all but a handful truly slain. But the few shattered survivors do their duty. The five Archangyls of the Second Circle are prepared, they survive for five heartbeats and that is enough. Five more breaches are opened, five more threats to draw the focus of the avian defenders. The process begins anew, each portal spewing forth five-times-five Archangyls of the Third Circle. The gambit is seen, and a trio of portals are unraveled even as the hundred and fifty greater daemons die, but that leaves three more to send forth another fifteen arch-slaves of the Second Circle, who in turn open yet more portals. The defenders are furious and well prepared, but they cannot hold. By the fifth wave they can no longer burn back the horde, and the first fortress falls.

The defenders retreat, willing to life a hidden trap of flame built into the foundation of the glacial fortress, denying the enemy safety. The breaches are widened, and the Legion pours through. Once more they charge into a killing ground, once more they are cut down like chaff. The defenders have rallied, and the second line of many stands fast, for now. Their numbers are without counting, their prize valuable beyond words and their lives are utterly expenidable. They will take the frozen wastes in the name of the Starfather, even if they must drown their foes in their own ichor. There is no stratagem now. No clever ritual, no great Archangyl sallying forth. Merely countless daemons sent into the grinder by uncaring masters, sheer wasteful numbers against the guardians of the poles.

It is the opening hours of the day of Gilded Skies, daemons beyond counting have been broken back into the Warp. Light years away, upon a world where its Anathema once held sway, Tjapa looks upon the slaughter of his slaves, of countless champions and ancient storied beings dying like sheep for the glory of an uncaring master, and laughs.


@Durin getting the omake pump up and going.
many many thanks to DeusFerrae for fixing the spelling.
 
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It is the opening hours of the day of gold skies, damons beyond counter of been broken back into the warp. Light years away, upon a world where its anathema once held sway, Taja looks upon the slaughter of his slaves, of countless champions and ancient storied beings dying like sheep for the glory of an uncaring master, and laughs.
I fear you spelled Tjapa as Taja a few times.
 
Had an idea for an omake, but I am wondering if someone else has already thought of something similar. Namely the introduction of a potential new alpha level psyker, who becomes or wants to become something of the 40k version of Steve Irwin, the crocodile hunter.
 
Had an idea for an omake, but I am wondering if someone else has already thought of something similar. Namely the introduction of a potential new alpha level psyker, who becomes or wants to become something of the 40k version of Steve Irwin, the crocodile hunter.
All of our Alphas have names already. Only the trainees don't have names and most of those die anyways during the trials. And during an incursion most of our high level Psyker trainees die or are killed to keep them from falling.
 
Had an idea for an omake, but I am wondering if someone else has already thought of something similar. Namely the introduction of a potential new alpha level psyker, who becomes or wants to become something of the 40k version of Steve Irwin, the crocodile hunter.
Also Alphas are way too valuable for such things.
 
All of our Alphas have names already. Only the trainees don't have names and most of those die anyways during the trials. And during an incursion most of our high level Psyker trainees die or are killed to keep them from falling.
They do? Is there a list for current alpha levels, or alpha levels that have no description? Wasn't Ophelia given a name before we new she would live?
Not trying to be a dick, just curious.
Perhaps Beta then, just had a mental image of a guy with high powered biomancy and telepathy watching, studying, and loving all the different wildlife of Averneus. Backstory of both parents being bush men, and learning from them about the wildlife of different regions.
 
They do? Is there a list for current alpha levels, or alpha levels that have no description? Wasn't Ophelia given a name before we new she would live?
In the last one we evaccuated those we could to warded ships in orbit, may not be an option this time.

Given that study of wildlife often requires psyker assistance I can see it working.

There is a list of current graduated alpha levels, but all non graduates are currently blank for lack of better terminology.
 
In the last one we evaccuated those we could to warded ships in orbit, may not be an option this time.

Given that study of wildlife often requires psyker assistance I can see it working.

There is a list of current graduated alpha levels, but all non graduates are currently blank for lack of better terminology.
Neat there we go, a blank slate for a potential new unit, and the possibility to help one pass maybe.
 
@Durin would it be possible for Lin to get a shot at Transcendence for surviving this? I mean surviving a demonic incursion whose only objective is to murder you seems impressive enough to give anyone a shot for it...
very unlikely. you are underestimating just how hard Transcendence is. Think about what Ridcully had to go though for his chance
 
The Ancient One’s Landing
The Ancient One's Landing
"Ready it." The Ancient One needed not shout to have his voice carrying through the temple of Caxuatu, the Sinks scattering to their tasks as he stood ready, scenting the air as he gazed out over the great city of Itza, watching with no small amount of pride as the Skinks and Saurus moved to defend it.

The peace brought by the human...it was frail. It would certainly not last, but this...this could be the furnace in which it was forged. His two peoples, brought together again. Would this battle transmute their peace from something of paper and wet ink, into a thing of true iron? Or would it shatter it like spun glass?

But, his place was not here. Across the ocean, where the Golden Tyrant readied itself to strike down the last remnant of its progenitor. So he ran towards them, his feet carrying him easily over the jungle pathways towards the ocean.

He sensed the approaching daemons before anyone else did.

Leaping into the air, he watched as the shocked Archangyel desperately tried to halt its advance, before it impaled itself upon his weapon, as he turned upon its corpse driving his blade into the second's black heart.

By the time he fell back the ground he was surrounded by the corpses of five Greater Daemons, the first of the forces likely sent to distract and delay him. To keep him from interfering with their greater quarry.

Before that had succeeded.

Eight of the most powerful of the Blood Fiend's champions, that had slowed him down long enough that he had been unable to stop Skarbrand.

This time it was different. His people were unified in their defence of the temple cities. He knew without a doubt where the target of this incursion was located and most of all, it was not far away.

Landing heavily on the beech he was unsurprised as a copy of his student burst from the water, glowering at the skies above, motioning for him to ready himself as she teleported behind him.

With a jolt he was flying through the air, his innate resistance to the warp preventing more typical methods of teleportation, or flight, forcing her instead to resort to brute force, accelerating him to incredible speeds. If he wasn't used to this experience then there might have been problems. As it stood it just gave him greater penetration as he flew amongst the hoards of angels, cutting them down left and right until he was soaring over the new continent, dodging the distorted gravity of the human super weapon.

His flight towards the human city of Dis as impromptu as it was, let him gauge the situation rapidly as beyond the walls and shields was a golden storm, trillions of angyls flew in perfect formation, readying themselves for the attack, when their still absent leader commanded it, while the defenders attacked relentlessly trying to thin their numbers, his student creating some kind of ward to beat them away.

He had not time for petty distractions and so he simply impacted the golden sphere of angels, the creatures surprised at his sudden appearance unable to respond in time as he carved his path through them, creating a road of warp flesh and viscera until at last he had butchered his way to the city, stepping onto the walls, the human defenders white faced and terrified as they gazed upon his visage.

"Inform your commander of my presence."

@Durin

A certainly non canon little snippit.
 
@Durin I know we can use one major favor to get Eldar help, but I think we are missing a few details
1 How long we have to ask for help to the Eldar so that they are relevant?
2 How powerful will be the forces assigned to the Task (I am not asking about the composition of forces, I want something about how powerful will it be)?
3 How long would it take the Eldar to Arrive at Avernus once we ask for help?
4 Will the Eldar provide us with a Rough Estimation of what they can deploy before deciding if we use the favor or not?
 
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Strength
Strength

She was losing. Exactly as she had feared she would.

The burning sword of the Archangyle clashed with her axe as she stood her ground, the impact shaking her body to the core, pushing her back through the ferrocrete streets of Dis, as she fought the creature alone.

Her mentor was in front of her, battling the entire Archangyl's retinue after it had unleashed them all upon him after he had successfully wounded it for the dozenth time, his blade cutting it to its very core.

At the same time Jacob, Jane and Lulana fought for their lives against their own trio of second circle of Archangyls, their incredible skill enough to stand against monsters that could destroy entire planets single handedly, but not defeat them in short enough order to come to her aid.

Every time she clashed she could feel herself growing ever weaker. The sheer power of the Archangyle had stopped her normal go to techniques, because it could match her skill by making up for it with pure power, but while she could match it there, she was loosing the far more important physical battle.

She was going to die at this rate. She could think of nearly one hundred escape routes she could use, but if she did so Lin would certainly perish, her mentor could not butcher the second circle angels fast enough, not with this many pressing him and Rotbart even with the blade would be cast aside like so much chaff.

She needed more. And so she made her choice. It was risky, but at this stage what did she have left to lose?

Stepping backwards she threw a small package inscribed with the true rune of fire, the same bomb that she had given Ridcully before he had ventured into Nurgle's mansion. Within the warp the overloaded bomb would have been enough to harm a chaos god, upon Avernus during an incursion there was still more than enough power in the air to increase the bomb's strength considerably.

The Archangyl fell backwards howling as it tried desperately to quench the soul consuming flames that fed upon its essence, growing stronger as it poured power to try and quench them.

In a normal circumstance she would have believed it over, but the creature's damned god was watching over it. It demanded Lin's death and would give the Daemon all the strength it needed to see that task completed.

So she needed more strength. Even if it cost her dearly.

Closing her eyes she threw forth her consciousness, finding the monster that had so nearly devoured her once before and offered it a deal.

It would be given her body in order to fight. To defeat the Archangyl. To prove its superiority as the Alpha.

And then it would return it to her, unharmed and still her.

The creature gleefully accepted, but it told her frankly, that it made no promises about whether she would survive. All the better for it in fact if she did not.

Lin watched in slow horror as the Archangyl gathered itself and swung down through the flames eating away at it, the light of the abomination pressing down upon the True flame, smothering it, towards Areatha's seemingly unguarded head.

Yet just as the burning blade would touch her, she had grabbed it bare handed, the impact sending out an explosion of air like a bomb.

He looked as she raised her head upwards, her face splitting in a smile that could not physically fit upon her face, before she reached up dropping her axe to grab the bewildered daemon and slammed her head into its own over and over again.

Her grace and intellect seemed gone, replaced by a brutal, beastial joy as she began to physically overwhelm the Archangly, shrugging off its blasts of power until at last she took an enormous bite out of its neck, spitting the daemonic flesh and blood to the side and letting forth a baying laugh.

"YOU ARE NOT THE WITCH! IDENTIFY YOURSELF!"

It helped that the Archangyle seemed as confused as he was in this instance, as it held a hand to its throat desperately trying to staunch the gaping would.

"Who am I? Your master really is new on the block if you don't know who I am!"

The voice that issued forth from Areatha's lips was like listening to a chorus of a trillion howling beasts.

"I am every monster that lurks upon this world. I am the shadow of the Spider. The flight of the Dragon. The terror of the deeps."

It stepped forwards, every step buckling the ground as it did so until it had lowered itself to all fours upon the ground, muscles tensed to pounce.

"I am that which the little fool lacks. I am the ultimate power of the World."

The reality split and time froze as the creature pounced, the Spine itself quivering as it came.

"I. AM. STRENGTH!"

@Durin
Another small non canon idea.
 
They do? Is there a list for current alpha levels, or alpha levels that have no description? Wasn't Ophelia given a name before we new she would live?
Not trying to be a dick, just curious.
Perhaps Beta then, just had a mental image of a guy with high powered biomancy and telepathy watching, studying, and loving all the different wildlife of Averneus. Backstory of both parents being bush men, and learning from them about the wildlife of different regions.

Ophelia had a name and backstory because she was our very first and for a long time only Alpha. We also dumped everything into her training and raising to make sure she would survive. We stacked the odds to the greatest extent possible.

2 How powerful will be the forces assigned to the Task?
This one has been answered several times already it is whatever they can send us. Could be wraiths, Phoenix Avatar, Seer Councils, Kroks, or anything else the can scrape together on short notice.
 
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