The Long Night Part One: Embers in the Dusk: A Planetary Governor Quest (43k) Complete Sequel Up

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Old Dog, New Tricks.
Well, this is unlikely to be canon, given what cracked up earlier. Still. The Fell-Handed is fell indeed.

My music while writing this.

Old Dog, New Tricks.

Abbadon the Despoiler stood in his fortress, ancient armor cracked, chipped, and half-way sundered, blood flowing from a half-dozen wounds even as the True Gods' beneficent gifts melded with the bio-skill of the False Emperor.

It was a ruin. The gates and walls had come down, rent apart by ancient strength. The fields were soaked in gore that wept and pulsed as it moved, so corrupted had been the flesh it was wrung from over and over.

The ground?

Corpses, and nothing else. Lords and legends, ancient soldiers that remembered the visage of the Emperor and spat at the memory, lain out besides neophytes seeking glory and finding death, all of them sundered, shattered, and hacked apart with an efficiency the Arch-Traitor had last seen when Horus had taken the field.

Daemon Engines lay in smoking ruins, even an Abominatus Titan cored out and burnt into a hulk by throwing a Greater Daemon into the reactor, and the hulking metal masses had split apart like rotting fruit, despite the blessings heaped upon the God-Machine turned to the True Gods.

Some amongst the survivors asked "How?" at the sheer slaughter, even though they had burned Sectors with glee.

Abbadon knew better.

Some amongst his followers, the more Khornate in particular, thought of the Crimson King as a weakling, for he bore sorcerous powers as his main weapon, a hideous force that the Despoiler had seen personally wielded, and one of the few things he feared.

Yet the shattered, mangled hulk in the center of the slaughter, brimstone-scented from the panicked summonings of his underlings and their butchery, limbs bleeding hydraulic fluid, armor with meters-deep rents in it, paint and heraldry long corroded off by Nurglite toxins and tides, weapons broken and blunted from cutting through Hellplate over and over after the power fields had failed, and reservoirs of ammunition drained via uncounted bodies?

Well, this kind of carnage was to be expected of one able to duel the Cyclops Lord and hold his ground.

But Bjorn's chassis of blessed adamant was not able to stand up to The End of Empires. Even with that, the fight had been the closest the Despoiler had come to death in a long, long, long time.

He had not his usual advantage in age-forged skill, for the Fell-Handed hailed from his own time, when the Primarchs walked and the Great Crusade boiled through the stars.

His own equipment, drenched in the effluvia of his uncounted victories? The Old Wolf had matched it.

It had not been his hardest fight, no. That honor belonged to the copy of the First Warmaster Fabius Bile had made, and he himself had felled, alone.

But this had been a close second. And one far costlier, for the destruction wrought there had been to others, not his own cowed underlings.

Still, there was a benefit, he mused, walking over to the wreck of the Dreadnought.

A Daemon Engine made from one like this... A very useful tool indeed.

Two slashes with Drach'nyen left the amniotic chamber open, and his gauntleted fist reached in to grab the corpse of the challenger, Warp energy coruscating around his form as he forced the Blessings of the Gods into his hand, to take hold of this old warrior and make him his own.

But before that... Oh my. A hideous grin stretched the Warmaster's face. He was still alive?

The hissing hand grasped the skull of the old Marine, and Abbadon's grin widened, as he spoke into the Old Wolf's mind.

"Hello there, failure. How does it feel to know I will take control of this broken form of yours, simply because you could not fight well enough?"

getout

"So that is what you sound like in truth, old corpse? You followed a corpse, and soon, you will be a corpse, puppeted by my will, slaughtering the Vylka Fenryka for daring to stand against me."

getout

"You cannot deny me. Chaos cannot be denied. You gave those who followed you hope. Now you will break it, and I will break-"


His thoughts were interrupted by one of the sundered claws grabbing him from behind.

A gurgle broke through the amniotic fluid. "nnoot YET."

Then it flung him down to the ground, and all his reflexes and skill barely kept him from being stomped into the ground as somehow the rotting hulk moved.

The surviving Chaos Lords charged, eager to earn the favor of the Warmaster, and perhaps to slip in a knife whence the battle was done if he looked weakened enough.

Thirteen of them remained.

The first died with a lightning-fast kick, of all things, turning darkened plate into a shotgun barrage that shredded the one just a step behind him, about to vault over and plunge into the open scar upon the old Dreadnought.

"ssshhhh a saying about THIS" The Old Wolf said, before hacking up a visible gobbet of blood, demolishing the next by simply squeezing and chucking the corpse at the Warmaster, who hacked it in half, The End Of Empires uncaring of what it cut, only that it cut.

By the time he re-reached the Fell-Handed, the remaining Lords were dead. Hearts punctured by punches thrown with hideous speed, skulls slammed into one another hard enough even the Blessing of Nurgle could not have saved them, or their weapons snapped like toothpicks and jammed into their forms.

Thirteen of the most powerful Chaos Lords the galaxy had to offer.

Dead, in an instant.

One of those killing arms swung towards the Despoiler, and he swung Drach'nyen with the confidence of one who had never seen it stopped.

It was not. But the bulk of the Dreadnought was still enough, even after the battle damage, he was the one slammed back, and Bjorn quite literally dropped himself on top of the Archfiend, shattering all four limbs as the hole cut by the First Daemon rent Abbadon's limbs like some insane cookie cutter.

"thy sy old dogz doont learn new TRICKS" sputtered out the voice, eyes only kept staring by raw willpower meeting ones filled with fear for the first time in millennia.

"Hrs on. PLAY DEAD."

Abbadon clenched his jaw and activated his teleporter, ripping through the Warp even as the Fell-Handed punched himself up for a bodyslam that would've finished the Warmaster of Chaos.

"My lord! What-"

Drach'nyen cut as his bridge sealed his wounds, the Mark of Chaos Undivided drinking in the foul currents.

"Kill. That. Planet." Abbadon snarled out, before marching off towards the crew quarters of the ship, blade and gun ready to kill quite literally everything onboard if his wroth did not falter.
 
Flight and Fight of Valkyries
Omake - Flight and Fight of Valkyries

In the Imperial Trust Navy there are no greater female Commode than Syr Rotbart of Avernus and Commodore Sigrun Mikaelson of Vanahiem. Two titanic figures competing whose rivalvry has not only been legendary but also symbolic to the question of what the Imperial Trust will be like in the future. Syr is a masterful student of war with tutoring from not only the Avernus Officers Academy, her Father, her mentors, but also even Admiral Freyr himself while Siggurd is a self-taught genius. While most know of Syr and her beginnings few know of Sigrun Mikaelson.

An so it is with her we start.

First is that while Sigrun is a member of the Mikaelson family it is only because of adoption. Her actual mother Anna was a Captain in the Trust Navy who was a concubine and mistress to Bertil Mikaelson. The relationship is in itself not of dishonor and is actually quite common in Vanahiem for men of power and station to seek out multiple wives. For her early life and to her Sigrun was a connoisseur of model Naval ships and frequently attended lectures at her school about Naval matters. In her teens, Sigrun joined a local chapter of Sword Maidens and excelled as a swordswoman earning several citations and decorated swords from her mentors and the nickname of 'Blade Dancer' for her ability to quickly puncture even the tightest of defenses.

But while Sigrun enjoyed a great deal of success as a Sword Maiden she would also receive news that her mother had been corrupted and joined a secret cult with intentions of turning the Vanahiem navy just like in Avernus. The news hit Sigrun horribly in that not only had she lost her mother but that she would have to live with the memory that her mother betrayed the Emperor. Which is a deep cut into all Vanir as they find loyalty to the Emperor and Humanity a big deal especially in the Military. Following the incident, her husband divorced her citing his lack of 'amusement' with her as his wife and found that having a wife whose mother was part of a plot against Vanahiem to be too distasteful for him which only added to Sigrun's misery.

From here the young Sigrun would disappear from public life to the only man who would protect her, Bertil. It was around this time that Bertil was entering into the world of politics and while it would have been advantageous for him to cast her aside he instead took her in knowing that others would suspect him of having fallible loyalty issues. In time Sigrun would complete schooling and reach the rank of 'Matron-Captain' of her Sword Maidens chapter a position reserved only for the truly excellent of the all-female warrior society.

At the age of 35 she joined the Naval War College and after 5 years of service in the Vanahiem Navy was transferred upon personal request to the Imperial Trust Navy. Her record as a captain shows a highly aggressive and conventional commander of ships. Always isolating opponents strength and putting their ships at disadvantages shooting positions while maximizing her speed. But despite her skills, she found frequently that many distrusted her due to her mother's lineage of betrayal. She can frequently after a report be found in interrogation rooms inspected for taint. The Inquisition has been known to search her office without consent on multiple occasions which has infuriated her and has openly called the Internal Navy Department 'A basket of unstable detectives'. Still despite her families lineage and her anger due to her suspicion she has found herself the Commode of her own squadron of cruisers as well as being compared to Syr Rotbart who she finds to be a very worthy Admiral and one of the few friends she truly has despite the scenario she finds herself in.

In private they can be found discussing doctrines and philosophy of war as well working on Naval Policies for there respective fleets. An yet outside of privacy they are both looked at as the future of the Trust Navy.
 
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[X] Avernus is willing to deploy 9 out of 13 of its armies on extended campaign and 1 more on short term basis.

But we want to ask the Trust to keep in mind the Valinor crusade fleet.
Maybe we can try slowing the Waaagh until the Crusade fleet breaks then moving troops forward to face it.
 
[X] Avernus is willing to deploy 9 out of 13 of its armies on extended campaign and 1 more on short term basis.
 
[X] Avernus is willing to deploy 9 out of 13 of its armies on extended campaign and 1 more on short term basis.
 
By the way. Just wondering.
How much soft power does our dear grandmaster wield? Like, if he divines that the Imperial trust should probably do something, how do other leaders react?
 
By the way. Just wondering.
How much soft power does our dear grandmaster wield? Like, if he divines that the Imperial trust should probably do something, how do other leaders react?
I'd imagine quite a bit.

He's never really been wrong before, it's mostly Bertil that seems to doubt him due to distrust of psykers and divination, which is...kinda fair enough...just.
 
[X] Avernus is willing to deploy 11 out of 13 of its armies on extended campaign.

We only need the standard army for protection against wildlife without taking inordinate casualties, against 'random' invasions our frontline-tier militia should be plenty.

I mean, seriously, our militia is skilled and equipped to a level that is frankly absurd.
 
He's never really been wrong before, it's mostly Bertil that seems to doubt him due to distrust of psykers and divination, which is...kinda fair enough...just.
Wait does Bertil really doubt Ridculy? Remind me why we haven't had him removed yet? His incompetence really knows no bounds. He has no understanding of military matters, he underestimated the orcs even before the awakening, and to be honest his stats fucking suck. For comparison
Character/Average Stat/Highest/Lowest
Bertil/16.5/25/11
Garp/25/37/15
Aefric/22.5/27/12
Granalf/17/40/10
Sigurd/26/44/17
Zaren/17.5/25/11
Surt/34.5/58/22
Ulrik/22/28.5/14.5
Julius/33.5/47/25
Frederick/33.5/50/21

As you can see on average Bertil is the most incompetent governor by average stats, in his highest stat and just barely edges out Granalf at having the lowest stat. At least Granalf is a paragon to help make up for his shortcoming.

I honestly believe that we should be going out of our way to oust this guy. It's obvious that he has no intentions of playing ball with the progressives, he doesn't offer anything particularly useful on a personal level and he's holding us back from breaking out the Men of Stone. Who knows how much expansion we've lost out on because of him and who he represents?

Quick Side note:
The Progressives(Frederick, Surt, Ulrik) have an average stat of 30, and the Traditionalists(Bertil, Aefric, Granalf) have an average of 18.6. I think its pretty telling when one side is that much more competent.
 
Wait does Bertil really doubt Ridculy?
The fact that the main warning of the threat comes from the notoriously unreliable art of Divination does not help matters.
He has his concerns yes (do remember that it's not so unreasonable, seers with Ridcully's skill are so rare that they're normally demons so while accepting Ridcully as fact makes sense from our perspective Bertil comes from a society that hates psykers and he doesn't live with him is it faintly foolish at this point yes, but it hasn't back fired yet)

And he has not been removed because...well what reason do you want? He's not a bad governor in a president of America sense (decent diplo and admin under cut by being as normal shit at military matters) which isn't bad for Vanaheim seeing how their economy was apparently a bit bruised from Olaf, but at the same time he probably would have been much more useful if he came in before the expansion of the ship yards.

We also don't want to sink to the level of the Imperium where we can just remove a problem govenor, he's been picked by his people that's all there is too it. If he ****'s up and we get a progressive in power great, but removing Bertil isn't going to change Vanaheim much.

It's also mostly the Admech keeping us from the MoS BTW I don't think the Vanir care too much.

Any rate I just hope there'll be an option to use the engineers and void workers to rapidly build up the defences of Mar saara which probably should have happened anyway as it's our furthest colony.

@Durin
1. Because the question has come up now, how stable is Bertil's position?
2. Was Ridcully's scan detailed enough to give him a general idea of the aims/purposes or even names of the four factions that make up the Dark Angels?
3. Are you willing to say what the Space Wolves rolled for their thing? While obviously the stand out moment was Bjorn they seemed to just be bigger and more kill on average compared to the other chapters mentioned.
4. What does Jane gestimate the average combat of a Master psyker hunter will be at?
5. Has there been any progress on Aria (or anyone else for that matter) understanding her null zone?
 
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Wait does Bertil really doubt Ridculy? Remind me why we haven't had him removed yet? His incompetence really knows no bounds. He has no understanding of military matters, he underestimated the orcs even before the awakening, and to be honest his stats fucking suck. For comparison
Character/Average Stat/Highest/Lowest
Bertil/16.5/25/11
Garp/25/37/15
Aefric/22.5/27/12
Granalf/17/40/10
Sigurd/26/44/17
Zaren/17.5/25/11
Surt/34.5/58/22
Ulrik/22/28.5/14.5
Julius/33.5/47/25
Frederick/33.5/50/21

As you can see on average Bertil is the most incompetent governor by average stats, in his highest stat and just barely edges out Granalf at having the lowest stat. At least Granalf is a paragon to help make up for his shortcoming.

I honestly believe that we should be going out of our way to oust this guy. It's obvious that he has no intentions of playing ball with the progressives, he doesn't offer anything particularly useful on a personal level and he's holding us back from breaking out the Men of Stone. Who knows how much expansion we've lost out on because of him and who he represents?

Quick Side note:
The Progressives(Frederick, Surt, Ulrik) have an average stat of 30, and the Traditionalists(Bertil, Aefric, Granalf) have an average of 18.6. I think its pretty telling when one side is that much more competent.
...Oh god. Not this again.

No ousting governors because we disagree with them. That leads to horrific instability at best and open fuckin civil war at the worst.
 
He has his concerns yes (do remember that it's not so unreasonable, seers with Ridcully's skill are so rare that they're normally demons so while accepting Ridcully as fact makes sense from our perspective Bertil comes from a society that hates psykers and he doesn't live with him is it faintly foolish at this point yes, but it hasn't back fired yet)

And he has not been removed because...well what reason do you want? He's not a bad governor in a president of America sense (decent diplo and admin under cut by being as normal shit at military matters) which isn't bad for Vanaheim seeing how their economy was apparently a bit bruised from Olaf, but at the same time he probably would have been much more useful if he came in before the expansion of the ship yards.

We also don't want to sink to the level of the Imperium where we can just remove a problem govenor, he's been picked by his people that's all there is too it. If he ****'s up and we get a progressive in power great, but removing Bertil isn't going to change Vanaheim much.

It's also mostly the Admech keeping us from the MoS BTW I don't think the Vanir care too much.

Any rate I just hope there'll be an option to use the engineers and void workers to rapidly build up the defences of Mar saara which probably should have happened anyway as it's our furthest colony.

@Durin
1. Because the question has come up now, how stable is Bertil's position?
2. Was Ridcully's scan detailed enough to give him a general idea of the aims/purposes or even names of the four factions that make up the Dark Angels?
3. Are you willing to say what the Space Wolves rolled for their thing? While obviously the stand out moment was Bjorn they seemed to just be bigger and more kill on average compared to the other chapters mentioned.
4. What does Jane gestimate the average combat of a Master psyker hunter will be at?
5. Has there been any progress on Aria (or anyone else for that matter) understanding her null zone?
1. pretty stable
2. no
3. the wolves rolled very well (90+) but Bjorn rolled a 100 for the last stand
4. mid 30s
5. no
 
Wait does Bertil really doubt Ridculy? Remind me why we haven't had him removed yet? His incompetence really knows no bounds. He has no understanding of military matters, he underestimated the orcs even before the awakening, and to be honest his stats fucking suck. For comparison
Character/Average Stat/Highest/Lowest
Bertil/16.5/25/11
Garp/25/37/15
Aefric/22.5/27/12
Granalf/17/40/10
Sigurd/26/44/17
Zaren/17.5/25/11
Surt/34.5/58/22
Ulrik/22/28.5/14.5
Julius/33.5/47/25
Frederick/33.5/50/21

As you can see on average Bertil is the most incompetent governor by average stats, in his highest stat and just barely edges out Granalf at having the lowest stat. At least Granalf is a paragon to help make up for his shortcoming.

I honestly believe that we should be going out of our way to oust this guy. It's obvious that he has no intentions of playing ball with the progressives, he doesn't offer anything particularly useful on a personal level and he's holding us back from breaking out the Men of Stone. Who knows how much expansion we've lost out on because of him and who he represents?

Quick Side note:
The Progressives(Frederick, Surt, Ulrik) have an average stat of 30, and the Traditionalists(Bertil, Aefric, Granalf) have an average of 18.6. I think its pretty telling when one side is that much more competent.
Like we haven't a bad enough rep with Vanaheim and the conservatives.
 
3. the wolves rolled very well (90+) but Bjorn rolled a 100 for the last stand
Ahhh man...

I really hope they haven't all turned into pugs in their warp storm.

I'mma guess the Iron Hands and Fists didn't do quite as hot, though given the calibur of their opponents that isn't too surprising.

Good.

a civil war you would lose horribly as Midgard would side with Vanaheim in this
Also good.

I'm bookmarking this for whenever this comes up again.
+1

Here is a link to the Discord for this game. That's the place for discussing and coming up with bad ideas.
I can't tell whether it's a compliment or an insult to @Durin that we need this...bit of both I guess...
 
Ahhh man...

I really hope they haven't all turned into pugs in their warp storm.

I'mma guess the Iron Hands and Fists didn't do quite as hot, though given the calibur of their opponents that isn't too surprising.
I bet that all the Space Wolves are now Wolfen due to how their gene-seed reacts with the Warp. Can we call them the Space Furries now? The name now fits even better.
 
We have a winner so let's get on with it so we can spend the next day arguing than the next week arguing about nothing.
Adhoc vote count started by Nurgle on Nov 6, 2017 at 7:50 PM, finished with 629 posts and 37 votes.
 
As you can see on average Bertil is the most incompetent governor by average stats, in his highest stat and just barely edges out Granalf at having the lowest stat. At least Granalf is a paragon to help make up for his shortcoming.
Bertil is by no means incompetent, he's pretty good really, problem is that rest of Trust governors (Zaren aside) range from riduculuosly competant to outright superhuman, making regular humans seem like incompetant children. And Zaren was actually way less competant than Bertil originally, he just managed to bootstrap himself to being quite good by literally centuries of hard work, give Bertil a few decades and hopefully he will improve as well.
 
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