The Long Night Part One: Embers in the Dusk: A Planetary Governor Quest (43k) Complete Sequel Up

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I need help for an omake about Syr meeting a Prince from Midgard where they fall in love after bumping into each other. Can someone beta read for me please? I can pay you in hugs :)
 
I need help for an omake about Syr meeting a Prince from Midgard where they fall in love after bumping into each other. Can someone beta read for me please? I can pay you in hugs :)
I'm shit at romance, but if I were to suggest something it'd be for her to bump into Valarian Mengsk :D.

Yeah he's canon in this quest.
 
So I can ship who ever do want you don't know me!!!

But in all seriousness I want those stats for both Syr and Jacob to mingle. The CK2 player in me wants some murdering badass grandchildren.
Ehhhh sure?

I guess...though whether or not Durin does it that way I dunno.

There's also potentials off world as well, an asgardian gives a chance for us to get the Blood of the Vanir, Blood of the Aesire and Questoris Familia traits in addition to the blood of Rotbart traits.
 
Char: (fondly nicknamed Muspelhiem's little brother)
The main problem with that omake is that all new colonies are Ork worlds (that's the main reason we are colonizing so many planets at once, it's the only way short of Exterminatus to keep Orks from rebuilding) but Char is hostile enough that even Orks wouldn't been able to establish significant presence, no matter how resilient Ork spores are lava makes short work of them.

One explanation could be that Char is not the only colonized planet in the system, the former Ork world (and the new colony) is actually much more conventional planet further from the sun, however it's very metal poor, so rather than rely on imports the Low council decided to establish resource/mining colony on Char (with only one city Char is bit small by colony standards anyway), which while costly in short term would pay off heavily in long term.
 
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The main problem with that omake is that all new colonies are Ork worlds (that's the main reason we are colonizing so many planets at once, it's the only way short of Exterminatus to keep Orks from rebuilding) but Char is hostile enough that even Orks wouldn't been able to establish significant presence.
One explanation could be that Char is not the main colony of the system, the former Ork world (and the new colony) is actually much more conventional planet further from the sun, however it's very metal poor, so rather than rely on imports the Low council decided to establish resource/mining colony on Char (with only one city Char is bit small by colony standards anyway), which while costly in short term would pay off heavily in long term.
My reasoning at the time was the orks were primarily based in a large number of orbital platforms and ship yards which were destroyed by the Trust.

As time was precious (and it was more defensible and possible) building on the surface was taken instead.

Edited in my logic.
 
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My reasoning at the time was the orks were primarily based in a large number of orbital platforms and ship yards which were destroyed by the Trust.

As time was precious (and it was more defensible and possible) building on the surface was taken instead.
But again in this case colonization would not be needed since no ork spores would have survived destruction of the orbitals. If you want focus to be on Char you could just state that the former Ork world has little strategical or economical value due to low amounts of mineable minerals and orkforming, polution and harsh climate making farming unfeasible thus making Char the more important of the two colonized planet in the system. It would also be cool to have colony with two planets as well.
 
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But again in this case colonization would not be needed since no ork spores would have survived destruction of the orbitals. If you want focus to be on Char you could just state that the former Ork world has little strategical or economical value due to low amounts of mineable minerals and orkforming, polution and harsh climate making farming unfeasible thus making Char the more important of the two colonized planet in the system. It would also be cool to have colony with two planets as well.
Not unless there were orks on the planet itself, which there were, then they'd be able to keep propagating, just not in as large numbers as they would on a normal world.

Still I see your logic.
 
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With a Midgarian Prince we get diplo points with the Trust's Capital. Just saying...
 
With a Midgarian Prince we get diplo points with the Trust's Capital. Just saying...

Add in the fact she's a Vanir with major Naval ranks is also a boost with Vanahiem for the future.
 
With a Midgarian Prince we get diplo points with the Trust's Capital. Just saying...
Repeat? same answer

Add in the fact she's a Vanir with major Naval ranks is also a boost with Vanahiem for the future.
Yep, she's also not too affected by the reputation of her father.

Though again, I'm for an Aesir, as if I've got my numbers and traits right
Blood of the Vanir (+1M, +1D, +1C) – Syr has inherited from her mother and is unmistakably one of the Vanir.
Blood of the Aesir ( +1M, +2C) – Sigurd is a Lord of the Aesir, one of the oldest of the Knight Houses, whose history stretches back into the beginning of the Dark Age of Technology.
Questoris Familia (+1M, +1D, +1C, can potentially pilot Knight Titans) – Sigurd is a member of the Questoris Famila, the nobles, and as such has the potential to pilot Knight-Titans and is a member of one of the greatest and most powerful noble groups in the Imperium.
Einherjer (+1M, +1C, can pilot Knight Titans) – Sigurd is a Einherjer, as the Aesir name those men who can pilot Knight Titans.
Of the Line of Rotbart (+3M, +1A, +1C)- Syr seems to have inherited some part of your natural talent in war. She is already beating all of her yearmates in games of strategy and many older children.
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marrying an aesire could potentially net a child with
7M
2D
1A
6C
As standard... if I added that up right.
 
Guys we need to get Syr a husband who can survive on Avernus. So considering that most people will die we need somebody with a very high combat skill.
 
Midgardian General? I was thinking of a special forces type guy who enjoys using infiltration tactics, ambushes, and surprise attacks to form holes in an enemies line in order to letter exploit for a bigger unit to smash through.

I imagine Midgardian Princes are given who join the military automatically have higher than average combat scores due to constant learning from a young age.
 
Midgardian General? I was thinking of a special forces type guy who enjoys using infiltration tactics, ambushes, and surprise attacks to form holes in an enemies line in order to letter exploit for a bigger unit to smash through.

I imagine Midgardian Princes are given who join the military automatically have higher than average combat scores due to constant learning from a young age.
The Governor General of Midgard has a combat score of 33 after living 6 centuri s with 5 of those in combat. Regular humans just do not have what it takes to survive on Avernus. But it will al depend on what Durin wants to do.

Also Syr will marry when Durin says a candidate appears. So when he creates one.

@Alex pears i think you are giving the rest of the Trust too much create. Avernus is bullshit tear OP characters. Avernites are so high in combat that space marines are the only ones better than them and than we still have people like Jane who can kill anything.
 
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The Governor General of Midgard has a combat score of 33 after living 6 centuri s with 5 of those in combat. Regular humans just do not have what it takes to survive on Avernus. But it will al depend on what Durin wants to do.

Also Syr will marry when Durin says a candidate appears. So when he creates one.

Or when I can find a good Omake/Story where she meets one! Like I said I have ideas and I want to put finger to keyboard but i'm afraid of going too far or not far enough to explain something like that. I'm not a romantacist but I do know Romantic comedy. Plus I know an amazing song about love.
 
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