The Eldritch One (Celestial Forge)

I forget where in the tech tree you get computers, but if she does get them I gotta rule that they're specialized for industrial uses, and locked down pretty tight by corporate DRM. Not insurmountable, but she'll have to invest some time into jailbreaking them, especially without any applicable knowledge motes.
Librarian and Plentiful Mouths seems applicable. Them and both of her productivity multipliers. Possibly also the Glove Of The East.

Edit: also these things were made by the company? I'm honestly not even sure that they'd come with software installed at all much less protected software.
 
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I don't understand how casual faultline is being there. She took money to break the unwritten rules. not only is she and her team fair game to be killed, if its publicized plenty of people will start going after them. Heck, the PRT isn't going to be ok with faultline kidnapping parahumans in their civilian IDs in brockton bay.

This whole thing reads like the super careful mercenary has no idea whats going on.

and this isn't civilians ordering hits - we found out the mccormicks have multiple parahumans, and faultline isn't a "civilian" no matter what - her participation is against unwritten rules no matter who orders it.
Her team is maimed too. Faultline doesn't have an in with the empire for Othala's healing so that leaves them down two members if Spitfire who is lying in the hallway isn't also looking at lengthy recovery time. Which she would know after checking them into the hospital. All this when they have a public location and reason to suspect they're about to be in a death match with the Undersiders. That said reading it over again if these were original characters I think it'd be okay and Faultline would take fuck you money to do fucked up stuff and is arrogant to go poking after Cauldron and she was worried. I'd have to look back at her appearances but she seemed to be having trouble switching gears after the low-ball estimate and ez 1hko before hand.
 
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Librarian and Plentiful Mouths seems applicable. Them and both of her productivity multipliers. Possibly also the Glove Of The East.

Edit: also these things were made by the company? I'm honestly not even sure that they'd come with software installed at all much less protected software.

The tech tree I'm referring to being the one provided by the corporation that dumps your ass on the Satisfactory world. The point being she'd have to reprogram those computers from scratch for custom jobs
 
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The tech tree I'm referring to being the one provided by the corporation that dumps your ass on the Satisfactory world. The point being she'd have to reprogram the computers from scratch for custom jobs
Yeah FICSIT Incorporated; I could see them coming up with some software for the components that The Pioneer is meant to put them into, they provide the blueprints them as well after all, but other then that I can't imagine that they wouldn't just leave them blank.

Taylor might need to find or make a compatible OS if the hardware is overly fiddly, though given stuff like Collapse OS existing IRL I don't think that that would be too hard, but I doubt that they would go out of their way to make it incompatible with other software; there just doesn't seem to be much of a reason for them to. Like do you think that there's demand for their computers on the Black Market or something? Nah Taylor should be fine with, at worst, Linux.

As an aside there's also Alternate Recipes to take into account; I don't think that it would be possible to implement them in-game if the company software was particularly inflexible.



She might need to get herself a decent Graphics Card if she wanted to use it for gaming or something; that seems like something that industrial-use computers might lack or at least only have enough of for diagnostics. I'm not sure what else it might lack. *Looks up computer components* I now have some idea of what it might lack.

Regardless though in Satisfactory you make circuits before you make computers anyway so Taylor should be able to make whatever a FICSIT-brand computer is lacking.



That all aside for a moment did you notice that the Perk says that the Habitat And Utility Base comes with a drone? Originally it seems intended to deliver materials back to base (no idea how that's meant to work since you then use the Space Elevator for that later but whatever) buuut~ there's really nothing stopping a person from reprogramming it to fly to other places like a massive remote-controlled drone~

Edit: after a brief review it appears that the delivery drone that attaches to the Habitat And Utility Base is only attached to it after several Milestones through Tier Zero which implies that it is not necessary for Tier progression and that Taylor should be capable of progressing through the Tiers without access to FICSIT Incorporated infrastructure.
Her team is maimed too. Faultline doesn't have an in with the empire for Othala's healing so that leaves them down two members if Spitfire who is lying in the hallway isn't also looking at lengthy recovery time. Which she would know after checking them into the hospital. All this when they have a public location and reason to suspect they're about to be in a death match with the Undersiders. That said reading it over again if these were original characters I think it'd be okay and Faultline would take fuck you money to do fucked up stuff and is arrogant to go poking after Cauldron and she was worried. I'd have to look back at her appearances but she seemed to be having trouble switching gears after the low-ball estimate and ez 1hko before hand.
She could probably bribe Amy by getting Gregor to make some medical-grade substances in return for her help; even if she doesn't want to work for money she should be willing to work for someone elses work. It's like donation by...Not even by proxy now that I think about it; it's just straight-up donation; she trades the labor she was going to donate for other labor and then donates that labor.
 
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I mean, neither are capes, really. Seeing as they're basically Lisa's own headcanon, not actual canon. :p
I feel like people need to give more credence to Thinker's explanation of the unspoken understanding that "if you push too hard on a Cape, don't be surprised if they push back Harder". Its even true, look at the rule breaking cited earlier in thread. Purity was leveling the city, burning an entire city block with each shot
The average American city block is 217,800^2'' or 5 acres just for the record
 
Had to binge read before I reply.

So, Newt, who looks like a bipedal newt, which is a lizard, approaches Taylor, in a trenchcoat.

Ya, that checks out as a nice easter egg/refrence.

As to the unwritten rules...canonically, it only really protected those who were part of an organization that could push back against anyone violating them. In other words, it only really protected capes that were part of estabilished power blocs, not 'parahumans' in general. It's why, canonically, the Elite and the PRT use civilian ID's to strong arm and pressgang rogue/independant capes and non-cape parahumans into joining.

Did Faultline break the unwritten rules? Well...yes and no. She broke the letter of the rules, but not the spirit. When Tattletale informed Faultline that Taylor was part of her crew, Faultline mentally replied 'shit' and that's because she didn't know. One more piece of information that was withheld from her. That and Taylor never had a public debut with the Undersiders didn't help. So Taylor the unaffiliated suspected (not confirmed) parahuman isn't protected by the Unwritten Rules, but Taylor the member of the Undersiders is. The latter which is the reality but wasn't known to Faultline at the time.

Oh, yes, there is that. Taylor is, publicly, an UNCOMFIRMED parahuman. You see that with Lisa informing her that the PRT informed the school that she was a suspected trigger event, not a confirmed one. Which is why I think Tattletale is giving Faultline a way out, a 'I know you didn't know, but you fucked up, and you -will- pay, later, my price, non-negotiable' way out.
 
This story... i just finished binging it and the first thought in my mind was "what the hell did I just read?".
It's kind of a mess. There's a good story underneath but it's a mess. Interesting premise, got me hooked in the beginning, even if it didn't go like i expected it to from the synopsis.
But the farther it went the more flailing about there is, plot is flailing around, characters are flailing around, author is flailing around.
Taylor sometimes acts with less thought than goldfish, "she's a teenager" and "she has zero fucks" or "her mentality getting farther from human norm is a plot point" can excuse a lot, but you kinda went way past it, and at lightspeed at that.
Also for the amount of plot we have there's like about 5 chapters worth of content that's missing. Explanations, reactions (both from Taylor to everything around her and from others at her actions), resolutions to the situations, things like that. Sure sometimes glossing over the cleanup and fallout can be done for the pacing reasons, but here you skip ... everything, the story feels more like an outline in places.
As it is it's feeling slapdash, which is frustrating to read, because as I said, there's definitely a glimpse of a good story this could be.
 
Chapter 22: Execution
I get the sneaking suspicion that Brian doesn't want to kill these people. It started with his apparently lackluster arguments against it when we voted on it, and has extended to his attitude all throughout our trip to the McCormick's place. He's being sulky.

To be fair to him I don't want to kill these people. Killing the dude at the party isn't something I'd care to repeat, and these are grieving parents. That said pretty much the worst case scenario is that they start sending teams of capes to murder me or worse, and that's already happening. I don't see any way to stop them from doing that given their connections. Kinda like the Nazis I killed. You don't let those kinds of people have any kind of power over you. Just ask the Jews.

Anyways it looks like Grue here is trying to talk us out of this one last time. "Guys, are you sure we wanna do this? Once we go lethal there's no going back. The PRT will come after us. They'll run news stories about us."

"I'm sure." I say. "Just as long as we don't have to kill any kids... Hey, these guys don't have any kids do they?" I look to Tattletale.

"They, uhh, had a kid." I give her a blank stare.

"Anyways, yeah I'm sure. The plan one more time?"

Grue sighs. "We're going with shock and awe. First we smash into the wall with Bitch's dogs into the gate house and see what Tattletale can do to the security system from there. If that fails you're going to climb over the wall and open up the gate however you can.

After that we go in with all our powers on full blast and tie up anybody you see. Bitch is on straggler duty. You all gather up the McCormicks in a central location. I'm not going to be in the room when you execute them. We all good with that?" A chorus of assents and yesses answer him.

"Good. Let's do this thing." We spring into action at that. We're a couple blocks down from our destination right now in an alley, so we gotta charge down the street on Bitch's dogs. I'm on foot because I can. Grue is holding off on his smoke for now so we don't get discovered early, but there's always the chance somebody just decides to call the cops on us from the dogs barreling down the street alone.

The dogs smash into the gate house easily enough, and I speed inside to lock everybody down as quick as I can. It was just two people. Tattletale comes in behind me and gestures to bring one of them over to the computer screen. She jacks something into the computer and gets the password from looking at this guy's eye movements. Somehow. Then she works her magic on the computer.

"I've done all I can here. All right guys, we got anywhere between ten and twenty minutes before the fuzz shows up. Let's make 'em count!"

We bumrush the mansion with myself going on ahead. I have plenty of zip ties on me and I intend to use them. I'm told I gotta really string people out if I can, and failing that to tie their hands to something behind them. Removing their leverage apparently makes them less likely to escape apparently. I rounded up three grounds workers outside, smashed into the window and grabbed the cook, and found five more security personnel inside. Nobody I caught even had a chance to resist.

While I was doing all that apparently Grue, Regent, and Tattletale intercepted the McCormicks on the way to their panic room while I was systematically searching the ground and upper floors. Along with four of their staff. There are just the two of them here, so I take them both on my shoulders up to a better location.

"It's gotta be the living room." Says Regent as he's shaking a can of black spray paint. "I saw it coming in and it has just the perfect wall for this."

"What the fuck do you think you're doing you gutter trash filth. Put us down." From the dude. The lady is just thrashing, shrieking, and trying to claw at me.

"We brought duct tape, right?" I ask. Grue grunts and hands me a roll. I form a third appendage to shut them up with. I let Alec lead the way. We come to a real posh living room with a glass table, a big chandelier, and the swankiest wood carved furniture I've ever seen in real life. Alec unceremoniously shoves the central table to the side.

"Hey Grue, mind helping me with this couch before you go?" Grue shakes his head in exasperation, but does help him with the couch. Once they got it where the table was, he leaves the room.

"Finally, the plainest flat wall in the building." He starts spray painting a black 'they' onto it. Tattletale is messing around with the lady's cell phone.

"Anything good on there?"

"Unfortunately not. Anyways, let's get this over with." I set them down on the couch facing the ongoing defacing of their wall. I bring my hand up and form a couple acid 'drills' with it. They're still struggling, but they're not able to do anything against my grip strength.

"Nuh-uh, not like that." As she throws the phone to the side. "Use this." She hands me her gun.

"What? Why?" I've never even handled a gun before let alone fire one.

"You don't want the PRT to connect this to your other kills, do you?" Fine, fine. I take the gun and pull the trigger on the woman. Nothing happens. Well they start struggling harder, but nothing of consequence happens.

"Gotta turn the safety off hun." I level a stare at her. After a few seconds of fumbling with the gun-

*BANG*

Wow. That was loud. And messy. Holy shit, this couch is ruined. I turn it to the man and

*BANG*

Well then. Some blood got on me somehow. I dissolve it and start walking out of the room.

"Guys wait up, I gotta finish this." From Alec. I roll my eyes.

"If the cops show up we're leaving Regent." From Tattletale.

"Yeah, yeah, yeah." He was, in fact, able to finish before the cops showed up. Or the PRT.


Armsmaster​


"So what do you make of this Triumph?" I ask our newest team member. Fresh out of the Wards and his first crime scene is a double homicide. What strange luck.

"Well It looks like a revenge killing." Gesturing to the wall.

They know what they fucking did

All in black spray paint. It certainly looks that way, yes.

"But revenge for what is the question. The Undersiders have been acting as a professional robbery crew up until now, right? Ocean's 11 type stuff?"

"A bit more low brow than that, but yes. The main issue here is that we don't really have that much on them. They've been nobodies and ghosts up until now. Nobody's wanted to snitch on them because they've been hitting drug dens and other illegal enterprises. And they've always gotten away without a trace until recently. This is a drastic change in behavior."

*Ring Ring*

I check the caller ID. Its Dragon.

"Yes Dragon, I'm at a crime scene right now."

"I know. I tried your lab and they said you weren't there. We were supposed to be working on the Endbringer tracking system tonight." I wince. That is important. I shouldn't be wasting time here with a petty homicide. Only reason I'm here right now is because their rich family was making pitiful mewling noises at the director. Just like these guys did when... Wait a minute.

"In the interest of getting this case off of you as soon as possible I've taken the liberty of looking into their finances. It seems they've made several suspicious money transfers into various Number Man accounts totaling five million dollars tonight. They've also started selling various assets off to make those millions." Number Man. Well the finances are a dead end.

"Well I've done all I can do. I have some things to take care of at the lab. Triumph, this case is yours now."

"Uh, sir?"

"Just make sure to request all the records we have on one Taylor Hebert once you get back to headquarters. She may or may not be a lead here."

"Sir I don't think I'm ready for-"

"Then have console send you over Miss Militia. She has a good head on her shoulders for protocol. You can do this Triumph, I have faith in you.

"I have work to do with Dragon at the lab now. See you later." I get on my motorcycle and head on over back to the oil rig.

Now we've gotten satellites in the air, buoys in the ocean, and radio towers on land all sending us telemetry data on their positions. And so far it seems like none of them are being purposely taken down by the Endbringers. We'll have to see if this trend holds true past the next attack. It would be disastrous if we came to rely on this only for them to start smashing all that infrastructure to bits afterwards.


Powers this chapter:

Stone-age Otaku (Earth Girls) (200CP)
It takes a lot of patience and a lot of repetition to make a good blade from a stone. You don't bore, at all, and your hands are always steady. Between different attempts at the same task, you can pick out the tiniest differences between the last attempt and the attempt before that (and the ones before that...) to work out precisely what needs to be tried the next time.
 
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Tailor will never figure out she has bordom immunity now
If she does, it's because Lisa figures it out. Also, canon Taylor had boredom immunity. She had infinite multitasking and that meant she always had exactly as much attention span as she needs, and since she's always micromanaging her swarm she always had a task to pay attention to, ergo no boredom.
 
Anyways it looks like Grue here is trying to talk us out of this one last time. "Guys, are you sure we wanna do this? Once we go lethal there's no going back. The PRT will come after us. They'll run news stories about us."
You know honestly? That might be to their benefit; that they can resort to cold-blooded murder but that they vastly prefer to avoid it.
"I'm sure." I say. "Just as long as we don't have to kill any kids... Hey, these guys don't have any kids do they?" I look to Tattletale.

"They, uhh, had a kid." I give her a blank stare.
I actually love this line~
Grue sighs. "We're going with shock and awe. First we smash into the wall with Bitch's dogs into the gate house and see what Tattletale can do to the security system from there. If that fails you're going to climb over the wall and open up the gate however you can.

After that we go in with all our powers on full blast and tie up anybody you see. Bitch is on straggler duty. You all gather up the McCormicks in a central location. I'm not going to be in the room when you execute them. We all good with that?" A chorus of assents and yesses answer him.

"Good. Let's do this thing." We spring into action at that.
I would have thought that sending Taylor ahead of them, going quiet until they went loud, would have been a decent idea. Possibly avoid going loud at all.
"You don't want the PRT to connect this to your other kills, do you?" Fine, fine. I take the gun and pull the trigger on the woman. Nothing happens. Well they start struggling harder, but nothing of consequence happens.

"Gotta turn the safety off hun." I level a stare at her. After a few seconds of fumbling with the gun-

*BANG*

Wow. That was loud. And messy. Holy shit, this couch is ruined. I turn it to the man and

*BANG*

Well then. Some blood got on me somehow. I dissolve it and start walking out of the room.
A shame that they couldn't Trigger before their deaths to make things a bit more interesting; I know that getting executed in your home is probably so ordinary that no Shard could be bothered to make powers based on it but I would have thought that maybe their kids Shard might have migrated to them or something.
"Yes Dragon, I'm at a crime scene right now."

"I know. I tried your lab and they said you weren't there. We were supposed to be working on the Endbringer tracking system tonight." I wince. That is important. I shouldn't be wasting time here with a petty homicide. Only reason I'm here right now is because their rich family was making pitiful mewling noises at the director. Just like these guys did when... Wait a minute.

"In the interest of getting this case off of you as soon as possible I've taken the liberty of looking into their finances. It seems they've made several suspicious money transfers into various Number Man accounts totaling five million dollars tonight. They've also started selling various assets off to make those millions." Number Man. Well the finances are a dead end.

"Well I've done all I can do. I have some things to take care of at the lab. Triumph, this case is yours now."

"Uh, sir?"

"Just make sure to request all the records we have on one Taylor Hebert once you get back to headquarters. She may or may not be a lead here."

"Sir I don't think I'm ready for-"

"Then have console send you over Miss Militia. She has a good head on her shoulders for protocol. You can do this Triumph, I have faith in you.

"I have work to do with Dragon at the lab now. See you later." I get on my motorcycle and head on over back to the oil rig.

Now we've gotten satellites in the air, buoys in the ocean, and radio towers on land all sending us telemetry data on their positions. And so far it seems like none of them are being purposely taken down by the Endbringers. We'll have to see if this trend holds true past the next attack. It would be disastrous if we came to rely on this only for them to start smashing all that infrastructure to bits afterwards.
HA! "Right, looks like this is related to this earlier fuckery and everything else that could have pointed to something can't be followed, seems like I'm done here; this is your problem now.".

Also those last two voice-lines, from the same character, are a bit redundant; there should probably be some other lines, like some internal monologue or something, between them to break it up.

Good job on Armsmaster's internal narrative by the way; it's hard to notice but in a very high-quality liminal way; it's like the narrative equivalent of lubricant.
Powers this chapter:

Stone-age Otaku (Earth Girls) (200CP)
It takes a lot of patience and a lot of repetition to make a good blade from a stone. You don't bore, at all, and your hands are always steady. Between different attempts at the same task, you can pick out the tiniest differences between the last attempt and the attempt before that (and the ones before that...) to work out precisely what needs to be tried the next time.
Oh this seems very understated but well-worth the costs; I fully expect Taylor to suddenly become extremely skilled with supplementary skills, like hand-writing or drawing or walking (which is a skill and depends on a bunch of positioning that you never really think about) or talking or communicating body-language, I outright expect her to breath better from now on, and, less supplementary, throwing or shooting or driving and to get a lot better with her molecule manufacturing.



Speaking of that though did you know that pink diamonds don't have inclusions? Their color comes from micro-stress distortions.



Edit: punch-throwing would probably also be quickly iteratively improved. That and cooking; that probably also get better quickly. Carving, if Taylor ever got into it, would probably also improve.



I brought up those "Satisfying Workers" videos earlier, when I talked about how One-Man Industry's faster working doesn't necessarily translate into faster running but does mean that purely physical speed can probably translate into it, but now Taylor actually can do exactly that sort of bullshit.

Edit: MF's gonna write like Sonny draws.


They know what they fucking did

All in black spray paint. It certainly looks that way, yes.
Damn, Alec, why not just say that they broke the Unwritten Rules?
Putting it that way just complicates things.
Because he's a dramatic bitch of course.
 
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The feels when you have both no moral compass strong enough in the group to matter and multiple genuinely disturbed individuals pulling your group in very specific directions. XD
 
The feels when you have both no moral compass strong enough in the group to matter and multiple genuinely disturbed individuals pulling your group in very specific directions. XD
The closest thing to a Moral Compass in this Party is Rachel and she's more of a Moral Debugging Rubber Duck because she forces you to explain each individual step of your reasoning.



Speaking of Rachel, and thus her dogs and their resource requirements, though do you think that if Taylor swallowed a hose with one Plentimaw mouth, pulled it out of the same or a different one, ate some meat or soup or something with a second/third, and ran water through the hose she could produce liquid food on tap?
 
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The closest thing to a moral compass in this Party is Rachel and she's more of a Moral Debugging Rubber Duck because she forces you to explain each individual step of your reasoning.



Speaking of Rachel, and thus her dogs and their resource requirements, though do you think that if Taylor swallowed a hose with one Plentimaw mouth, pulled it out of the same or a different one, ate some meat or soup or something with a second/third, and ran water through the hose she could produce liquid food on tap?
I think you would need an input hose and an output hose but it would probably work.
 
I think you would need an input hose and an output hose but it would probably work.
I would think that both the tube and the water in it would be combined with other things is the thing? Sort of like how both the banana and the banana peel combined with the phone.

Relatedly I think that a sausage might be the best thing to combine with the water-hose.



Wait. I just realized something. Even if Plentimaw mouth fusion doesn't work even on objects only partially inside of them Taylor can probably cheese the system by swallowing a loop of hose with one mouth, and another, longer, loop of hose with a different mouth, and then swallowing some meat...I'm not entirely sure that this would work but I think that it would.
 
I just started reading the story, and I got to the end of the prologue's author's note... that Star Wars video was funny enough that instead of continuing to read the story I decided to make a comment about it. Nice.
 
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