The Eldritch One (Celestial Forge)

Please ignore all the critics and write this how you want. I like it, other people like it, and there is nothing you can do that will change the minds of people with fixed ideas about this that won't kill your story in the process. This is a unique, original premise for a story with awesome execution. Even if your main character were a TINO (and I'm not sure I agree she is), there are lots of people who don't give a hoot about that, or even like it because we'd prefer to see somebody smarter or more self-aware than original-recipe Taylor. A lot of popular fics have way more TINO-isms than yours, and yours reminds me in a good way of Gravitas and Scientia, among others.

In short: you're doing great, keep going!
 
Chapter 3: Chase
It's Friday now and I've made some unexpected progress. I admit I haven't quite stuck to the plan. I get a little nervous about going to fight Sophia every day. Just a little bit. I end up procrastinating by swinging over by those stoners I 'met' on Tuesday. They're surprisingly decent people? I asked about drugs once and they were weirdly adamant about only smoking weed. Like that made it any less illegal. I even saw Sparky stop by once and smoke some weed. I can't really say I'm surprised about that. They're worried I'm trying to be a narc too, until I point out what they let happen to me in the locker. Fuck them teachers.

I also bought a list of what cameras work and don't work, and their usual field of view from one of the gangers. In a fake timeline of course. All the ones in the cafeteria, outside, and by the offices work. Most of the other ones inside do not. This actually makes some sense in regards to where everybody's favorite ambush spots for me are. It also eliminated some of my potential targets for framing for the unmasking. Good to know.

There's also the fact that, despite my best efforts, my don't give a fuck attitude is bleeding into actual reality. This is both good and bad for me. Good because people are now slightly more cautious around me for some reason. Even Sophia has physically held Emma back once or twice before she could go for me. Bad because all this has really done is make them gang up on me more. Eh. Kind of neutral really. I mean it's slightly easier to dodge big groups, but I can't always manage it. Some other bystanders have also approached me too, but I know how this song and dance goes. I try and befriend somebody and one or two weeks in it all turns out to be an elaborate plot to humiliate me, steal my shit, or beat me up. No thanks.

In fitness news I've started working my way up to my goals. Slow going so far, it hasn't even been a week. Though I did manage to find out that I was missing a piece of the fitness puzzle. Flexibility. Gotta limber up in order to not pull any muscles. Thankfully the gym teacher was able to show me a comprehensive stretching routine. I'm not going to be joining any gymnastics teams anytime soon, but I don't plan on slacking off either.

Unfortunately I'm checking in right now because Emma managed to corner me in the stairwell just after school. Probably managed it because she was alone. I've gotten used to only thinking of groups of people as threats. How silly of me.

"What are you trying to pull, loser?" I raise my brow. None of my illicit activities have made any kind of impact in any real timelines.

"I literally have no idea what you're talking about. Would you care to elaborate?"

"That! That right there! You're not afraid of me anymore! I'm gonna be fixing that right now."

"My God. You're actually mad I'm not afraid of you." She reaches into her pocket and starts inching towards me. Looks like this is getting dicey. "Emma, do everybody a favor right now. Run that back in your head and tell me exactly how sane it sounds." She continues inching forward.

"Ha! As if! You just- Holy shit your face!"

"Haha. Very original." But just to be safe I reach up to check. She did just take three steps back after all. And let's just say thank god I had plenty of practice keeping a straight face this past week. I felt a massive moist gash with teeth all along my left cheek, and I saw a goddamn zipper mouth in my forearm as I brought my hand up. No, no. Stop this bullshit right now and get away from me! And holy shit they closed right on up, thank Jeebus!

"You're a cape aren't you! No no no, it all makes sense!" She turns around and runs down the stairs.

"Emma!" A couple classmates finally see fit to enter the stairwell. I ignore them. "Emma what the fuck are you talking about!!" I yell on after her. No response. Well shit!

You know what, no I'm not worrying about that. A new fake timeline just opened up. Those are kinda rare in the afternoon, so I'm taking full advantage. Probably not going to last more than five minutes, but that was never a guarantee from any of these timelines. First I leave school and start walking downtown. I managed to find one of the few remaining internet cafes in town. Cash only so it's probably a money laundering scheme for one of the gangs, but beggars can't be choosers here. I do stop in a public bathroom to change into a brand new hoodie nobody has ever seen me in, make sure to hide my hair, and take off my glasses. I sign in as Emma again to stay consistent for the records. I suppress the fluttering in my belly as I spread Shadow Stalker's identity all over the internet again. This is only the second time I've done this. Hopefully it ends better than last time.

I have to walk home today because of all this. Takes me more than an hour, but I still get home before Dad. I lock myself in my room with the computer to monitor the situation. And there's not really a whole lot I can do to track the progress other than knowing I haven't been arrested quite yet. Still I head on over to CapeWatch and PHO to see if they've got anything going on. Hmmm, Stormtiger blew out an apartment about a mile and three quarters away from here. Witnesses said a black family lived there. Writing down the address to investigate later. Not much else I can do right now.

Back in the real timeline I'm currently stripped down examining the mouths all over my body. What in the actual fuck is this? The most prominent one starts at my forehead, goes down between my eyes, and ends at my chin after going across my left cheek. There's one on my belly, on my arm, two on my back, and all over my limbs. Makes me want to fucking scream. But weirdly not as much as I feel it should? It doesn't feel wrong exactly. Just the frustration of trying to learn how to write with my left hand about twenty times over. And they're all functional too. I can eat with them and it fills me up, and vocalize with them. They each have a different set of teeth and voice though. And I still can't actually talk with any of them, just make noises. You know what, fuck this. I'm putting them all away. This is just way too weird for me.

Back in the false timeline, it's lasting a surprisingly long time. It's ten o'clock now, and I'm asleep in the real one. If I could, I'd keep a dream journal like this. Makes my nightmares seem so silly in comparison to real life. I'm interrupted in my musing by a shadow creeping through the window. I left both the window and my door open for just this eventuality.

"Why hello there Sophia. What brings you here?"

"So you admit it. You outed me." As she levels her crossbow at me. I get up and start my stretching routine. Inching myself towards the door all the while.

"I have no idea what you're talking about. Everybody knows I'm a useless nerd with no social life. I found out on PHO. Same as everyone else."

"Cut the shit. My brother is dead because of you. You outed me because Emma outed you, then framed her for it, didn't you?" I pause my stretching.

"That's very good to know." I return to my stretches. I'm not all that concerned about Emma. She only knows about those stupid mouths. Probably going to go scare mongering with her little network. I have an in now. Just call her sanity into question. If that doesn't work, well shit I don't know. I'll cross that bridge when I come to it. "Hey remember when you made fun of me for having a dead mom?" Her grip tightens on her crossbow.

"If you think that means-"

"I think that means I don't give a fuck!!" She looses her bolt in either anger or surprise. Her aim was slightly off. It hits me in the shoulder. Oh goody. A new type of excruciating to catalogue. I bolt towards the door and close it behind me. Yeah, I'm not gonna be using that arm today. Good thing it was my left. I squeeze myself into the corner.

She bursts through the door in her shadow form not a second later. I manage to surprise her and shove her into the wall. Another thing there. I shouldn't have been able to pull that off. She must have either terrible or no eyesight in her shadow form. Another weakness to exploit. I run back into my room and slam the door while she's dazed. Won't last long so I have to act quick. I slide and jump out of my window. Not having to fear consequences makes this easier I think. I would normally hesitate at such a drop. Bit hard on the ankles though, even in the grass.

Wasting no time I push through the pain to run straight back into the house, making sure to jump past the broken step. Might not make much sense to go right back into a house with a psycho killer in it, but she'll have to jump down after me to see where I went.

*THUNK*

"Fuck!" Ah, one of the few advantages of having such a demotivated father. I rip through the house in order to get to the front door, making sure to leave plenty of tripping hazards. Once there I sprint across the street to my neighbor's yard.

*THWIP*

As I see a crossbow bolt stuck in the fence. Can't forget to dodge those now. I hop the fence real quick making sure to make plenty of noise doing so. For you see I know something Sophia doesn't.

"BARK!! BARK!! BARK!! BARK!!" That is that old man Jenkins here owns a very angry pitbull. And I only need to be slower than her to dodge him. I manage to jump the fence and dodge the dog to leave Sophia with about ninety pounds of pissed off problem. Judging by her screams and yelling it seems it is a slight hindrance to her.

"Yelp!" Or maybe not. Well I've got a good ten seconds head start. All I need to do now is find a nice and cozy hiding spot. Settle in with my aching ankles and bleeding shoulder. This is going to suck isn't it.



The timeline ended about an hour after that. It did indeed suck. Bled into my nightmares too. Well I do have one thing to look forward to today. I managed to convince Dad to sign me up for weekend self defense classes.



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Plentiful Mouths (Haroun and the Sea of Stories) (300CP)
A Plentimaw Fish is called such due to it having dozens of maws [i.e., mouths] all over its body. You now have the same trait, with several dozen mouths scattered across your body. They can be retracted and concealed from the view of others if you like. When exposed, you can control the many mouths individually or in unison, such that they can speak in many different voices or all as one. As a result, you could say multiple statements, songs, or spells (voice-activated ones) simultaneously. But the greatest strength of having so many mouths is the ability to mix different things together. By absorbing different things in each mouth, whether it is normal food or various stories, they will all meet in your singular stomach and blend together into something new, which combines the best qualities of each ingredient into something special. For instance, two different power-ups would merge as one, and three stories would link into a single narrative. You can also regurgitate the combined mixture.
 
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There's also the fact that, despite my best efforts, my don't give a fuck attitude is bleeding into actual reality. This is both good and bad for me. Good because people are now slightly more cautious around me for some reason. Even Sophia has physically held Emma back once or twice before she could go for me. Bad because all this has really done is make them gang up on me more. Eh. Kind of neutral really. I mean it's slightly easier to dodge big groups, but I can't always manage it.
Got'a love how Taylor's reaction to larger groups coming after her is "oh good that makes them more noticeable".

I'm going to take this opportunity to remind everybody that while Taylor learned a lot of her tactics and behaviors from the people she fought, learning to make clones of herself from one fight, silk bindings from another, and how to see through her swarm from some third, she never had to actually learn her terror tactics.
"Haha. Very original." But just to be safe I reach up to check. She did just take three steps back after all. And let's just say thank god I had plenty of practice keeping a straight face this past week. I felt a massive moist gash with teeth all along my left cheek, and I saw a goddamn zipper mouth in my forearm as I brought my hand up. No, no. Stop this bullshit right now and get away from me! And holy shit they closed right on up, thank Jeebus!
At first I thought that she was just wildly grinning without realizing or recognizing it but then I recognized that Perk. That caught me way the fuck off guard let me tell you; the stylistic choice to have Perk Rolls just show up unannounced like that is a pretty great one.

Also that's going to be a fantastic Perk for Taylor to have; bare minimum she's going to be able to get some really good nutrition out of it. That and she can hide things in those mouths even if she doesn't swallow them; they're basically moist pockets.

Oh, yeah, also this is a really disruptive Perk Roll; really putting the cat among the pigeons with it.
Back in the real timeline I'm currently stripped down examining the mouths all over my body. What in the actual fuck is this? The most prominent one starts at my forehead, goes down between my eyes, and ends at my chin after going across my left cheek. There's one on my belly, on my arm, two on my back, and all over my limbs. Makes me want to fucking scream. But weirdly not as much as I feel it should? It doesn't feel wrong exactly. Just the frustration of trying to learn how to write with my left hand about twenty times over. And they're all functional too. I can eat with them and it fills me up, and vocalize with them. They each have a different set of teeth and voice though. And I still can't actually talk with any of them, just make noises. You know what, fuck this. I'm putting them all away. This is just way too weird for me.
Right across her face? That's kind of unfortunate...Maybe if she uses Toggle on it she can reroll their positions?

Also if she's got "several dozen", three-dozen but could easily be between five-dozen and seven-dozen, then I'd expect at least a half-dozen on each limb and the rest spread among her torso and head.

Also also human bite-force is kind of insane when you properly look into it so I hope that we end up seeing this Taylor incorporating a lot of biting into her fights and at least holding things with her mouths in some scenes.

Edit: Taylor's probably going to have a hard time figuring out that she can use those Mouths for making new objects.
"Cut the shit. My brother is dead because of you. You outed me because Emma outed you, then framed her for it, didn't you?" I pause my stretching.
Wait a second-
Still I head on over to CapeWatch and PHO to see if they've got anything going on. Hmmm, Stormtiger blew out an apartment about a mile and three quarters away from here. Witnesses said a black family lived there. Writing down the address to investigate later. Not much else I can do right now.
Was that her house?...Neat.
I'm not all that concerned about Emma. She only knows about those stupid mouths. Probably going to go scare mongering with her little network. I have an in now. Just call her sanity into question. If that doesn't work, well shit I don't know. I'll cross that bridge when I come to it.
Well her earlier behaviors weren't OOC but this one seems to be; I'd have expected Taylor to be anxious about not knowing the consequences of that and how she could respond to it.
"Hey remember when you made fun of me for having a dead mom?" Her grip tightens on her crossbow.

"If you think that means-"

"I think that means I don't give a fuck!!" She looses her bolt in either anger or surprise. Her aim was slightly off. It hits me in the shoulder. Oh goody. A new type of excruciating to catalogue. I bolt towards the door and close it behind me. Yeah, I'm not gonna be using that arm today. Good thing it was my left. I squeeze myself into the corner.

She bursts through the door in her shadow form not a second later. I manage to surprise her and shove her into the wall. Another thing there. I shouldn't have been able to pull that off. She must have either terrible or no eyesight in her shadow form. Another weakness to exploit. I run back into my room and slam the door while she's dazed. Won't last long so I have to act quick. I slide and jump out of my window. Not having to fear consequences makes this easier I think. I would normally hesitate at such a drop. Bit hard on the ankles though, even in the grass.

Wasting no time I push through the pain to run straight back into the house, making sure to jump past the broken step. Might not make much sense to go right back into a house with a psycho killer in it, but she'll have to jump down after me to see where I went.

*THUNK*

"Fuck!" Ah, one of the few advantages of having such a demotivated father. I rip through the house in order to get to the front door, making sure to leave plenty of tripping hazards. Once there I sprint across the street to my neighbor's yard.

*THWIP*

As I see a crossbow bolt stuck in the fence. Can't forget to dodge those now. I hop the fence real quick making sure to make plenty of noise doing so. For you see I know something Sophia doesn't.

"BARK!! BARK!! BARK!! BARK!!" That is that old man Jenkins here owns a very angry pitbull. And I only need to be slower than her to dodge him. I manage to jump the fence and dodge the dog to leave Sophia with about ninety pounds of pissed off problem. Judging by her screams and yelling it seems it is a slight hindrance to her.

"Yelp!" Or maybe not. Well I've got a good ten seconds head start. All I need to do now is find a nice and cozy hiding spot. Settle in with my aching ankles and bleeding shoulder. This is going to suck isn't it.



The timeline ended about an hour after that. It did indeed suck. Bled into my nightmares too. Well I do have one thing to look forward to today. I managed to convince Dad to sign me up for weekend self defense classes.
Well that was a fruitful experience; she learned that if she intends to out Sophia she needs to prepare a person-trap to kill her when she does.

Also that she can probably just out her directly to the Empire if she does in order to prevent herself from being suspected of being the one that did it just in case doing it online doesn't do that...Actually that reminds me of something: I think that her tormentors being officially punished was a big part of Taylor's motivations and I'm not sure how much of that was because she didn't know that Sophia was a Protectorate member. In light of that it seems a bit odd that this Taylor is so okay with retaliating manually against her.
 
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Please ignore all the critics and write this how you want. I like it, other people like it, and there is nothing you can do that will change the minds of people with fixed ideas about this that won't kill your story in the process. This is a unique, original premise for a story with awesome execution. Even if your main character were a TINO (and I'm not sure I agree she is), there are lots of people who don't give a hoot about that, or even like it because we'd prefer to see somebody smarter or more self-aware than original-recipe Taylor. A lot of popular fics have way more TINO-isms than yours, and yours reminds me in a good way of Gravitas and Scientia, among others.

In short: you're doing great, keep going!
I'm not saying he shouldn't, I just personally don't like the way the character is written.
 
Hmm a nice start to a story here! Definitely has a lot of potential! Personally, I like the more confident and proactive Taylor, reading about insecure, shy, and timid Taylor gets boring after a while, and it really only feeds into the old "being Taylor is suffering" trope.

The only thing driving me nuts is all the false timelines. I'm starting to have trouble keeping straight what is actually happening versus what isn't, not to mention that all of the actually interesting stuff that I want to read about keeps happening in the fake timeline. I want some real events with long-term consequences!

Either way, it's an amusing read and I am looking forward to more!
 
If you read in details, you can see that Taylor sees "fakeness" of timeline from start, it means that there is only ONE true timeline (main body of tree) with fake could-have-been branches.

Coil thinks that his both timelines are real, while in reality true timeline is always one and only...

Technically speaking, I think in this story he is actually making new timelines. If he was just a pre-cog being given a vision of the "fake" timeline, then Taylor shouldn't notice the effect at all. Her perk keeps her safe from timeline changes, which is activating to Coil's power, therefore he is actually messing with timelines here.
 
Technically speaking, I think in this story he is actually making new timelines. If he was just a pre-cog being given a vision of the "fake" timeline, then Taylor shouldn't notice the effect at all. Her perk keeps her safe from timeline changes, which is activating to Coil's power, therefore he is actually messing with timelines here.
Timeline creation is outside Entity abilities. They are purely materialistic beings and need to use appropriate amount of energy for everything. So Coil IS precogs with bizarre user interface.
 
Coil's power
Guys, I know how Coil's power works and I'm sorry for not clarifying earlier. I didn't think I needed to. Heck, I still might not need to. But this irks me greatly.

Coil's power works the same.

Taylor's power is taking liberties in how it defines time travel. Specifically that any sufficiently advanced simulation is indistinguishable from it. Kinda like how the Vex version worked in destiny. Don't quote me on that I never played the game.

A couple other reasons as well, but I think a very famous and handsome author put it best back in page one.

Rule of cool. Nuff said
 
How long until Taylor outs herself to Coil and he decides to check out why somemone is trying to out Shadow Stalker only in his closed timelines?

Probably won't happen but it'd be funny if he visits her in a fake timeline and tells her to stop piggybacking on his power because it causes him headaches.

Seriously though, since she's changing her actions in the fake simulation, he'll catch on eventually, especially if she makes a more newsworthy divergence, and it'll probably lead to him offering her the carrot and stick choice eventually.
 
Interlude: Coil
Monday morning is here and I've come to school armed with the knowledge on how to deal with the type of bureaucratic stonewalling that Blackwell loves. He dropped me off personally today, and then drove off to work.

Emma and her cronies, Sophia notably absent, gathered to greet me in the entry hall. Only for a fake timeline to split off, a bunch of paramilitary goons to start shooting into the air, and tell us to get on the ground. I complied because this doesn't matter to me.

And to my absolute shock and amusement they kidnapped Emma.

Coil: One Week Ago​

Today is nothing special. Just another Monday after the new year. I've finally established one of my Parahuman patsy gangs and I'm well on my way on enacting my actual plans for Brockton Bay. Life is good. Currently I'm splitting the timeline between work and my lair. Work to log in to the PRT computers personally and my lair to copy over the information to my computers. It's generally very slow going. Not because of my typing speed, no no. It's because I didn't have all the access I needed at first. I also fell into some misinformation traps early in my tenure here. Took me quite a while to undo the damage those did to my information networks. I did the gangs the favor of revealing those to them once I found out about them. Because I was feeling nice that day.

I'm putting in my standard four hour workday today, not really doing anything much productive. I can get away with this because I'm a consultant. I'm not really doing anything because I'm not being asked to do anything. Because Director Piggot hates me. By the same token she can't really fire or transfer me due to my contract making that basically impossible. When I'm not 'working from home' I get by in the office generally playing being at loose ends and filling out the occasional spreadsheet or something for one of our overworked clerks. Makes me very well liked, and easy to trade favors in the office building. Multiple times even with my power.

At this moment I'm burning through my favors in a disposable timeline to get access to a great deal of information I shouldn't have. Most of it is totally useless, but this is actually how I've managed to blackmail my way into having as many moles as I do in other departments. It's at this time an automated alert pops up on my screen. Hmm... Shadow Stalker's identity compromised. Got into a fight in school where she used her powers. Yada yada yada. Well I can't say I'm surprised about this considering what the little psychopath did to Grue over the holidays. Damn shame I couldn't capitalize on it. Though you never really know what the deranged are going to do at any given moment. Oh well.

The next day I'm doing it all again. Not really much new information, but I make up the time wasted in my other timeline. Getting loads of petty bullshit out of the way that I have to deal with in my lair. Then I get an automated alert. Shadow Stalker's identity compromised on Winslow computers. Well no shit Sherlock, it's already been compromised. That ship has sailed, the genie is out of the bottle. No reason to get so upset over it though, it's just a machine. Better to be sure though. When my shift is over I make my way to Deputy Director Renick's office. I'm waved in.

"Hello there Thomas, to what do I owe the pleasure?"

"I'm having some confusion about the alert about Shadow Stalker." He grimaces.

"Ah yes, that. While the lack of details are concerning her case worker is investigating as we speak." Ah good, he didn't notice that I'm not actually cleared for this information. Wait, what?

"Wasn't her identity compromised already? Just yesterday she got into a fight that revealed her power." He furrows his brows for a few seconds then starts looking it up on his computer. I wait patiently.

"Are you feeling alright?" I shift uneasily. This seems suspicious.

"Yes, why?"

"Oh no reason." As he subtly reaches for the panic button. Ah hell. Troopers slam the door open behind me and hold me down by the shoulders. "Take this man to Master/Stranger quarantine."

"Oh for fuck's sake." As I'm lifted up. "I take it that Shadow Stalker didn't blow her identity yesterday?"

"Correct." I end the timeline.

The situation here is an easy fix, and it has to do with the nature of my power. You see my power has an inescapable limit to how long I can keep going with it. That limit is the butterfly effect. You see my power relies on how closely the timelines match. I also need to be in a position of power to do anything within my constraints. This creates a dilemma for me. As a person of power walking the halls of power, however local they are, every single one of my actions has a disproportionate effect on the world. For example: taking the last pot of coffee in the break room without replacing it could piss off all the paper pushers in the building. This would lead to more mistakes and less productivity for the PRT overall for a day. That could have all sorts of knock on effects that I cannot measure. I can vaguely see the sequence of events here though. Something I did at work affected the PRT agent assigned to Shadow Stalker somehow and from there things went all caddywampus in Winslow. That said, I try to only use my power for three days or less at a time. I have gone for more, but that was mostly to make plays on the stock exchange.

My solution to the situation is simple. I'm actually going to go to work and apply my power there, while anonymously tipping off the E88 to be ready to capitalize on the Ward's unmasking. Only now it's Friday and no unmasking happened. Irksome. Well back to business as usual.

So it's Friday afternoon after my 'workday' and I just got finished torturing Tattletale. Not for fun mind you. Well, mostly not for fun. She's a forcibly recruited asset you see, and I have to keep her in line. Right now, in the timeline I'm going to keep, I'm instructing some of my mercenaries to dismantle her plans to escape me. Over the next few months I'm going to be periodically ruining her plans like this to instill in her a sense of learned helplessness. Hopefully that manages to get her settled in as my new underling. It would be most unfortunate if I had to burn such a useful asset. I turn to the mercenary just outside the torture room before I close the timeline.

"Did anything happen that I should be aware of while I was in there?" He checks the terminal I put here for just this purpose.

"Shadow Stalker was unmasked." My eye twitches.

"What." The man gets visibly nervous at my anger. He knows what I was doing in there. I push past him to power walk to my office. Checking the time it's 8PM right now. I start calling up every favor, spy and, threat I can to get information on this. First as Thomas, then as Coil. It takes an unacceptable amount of time to get a name here. Emma Barnes. I recognize that name, I'm absolutely certain she was part of the original incident. Phone records show that she had Shadow Stalker's identity and had already tried to unmask another cape that she possibly triggered herself. Just one more cape and she would be in the running for the Darwin awards. I end the timeline.

Come Monday I put together an operation in a disposable timeline to kidnap the girl in question. I'm going to get the answers out of her about what's setting her off, one way or another.

Three hours later​

Oh my God, she's certifiably insane. She couldn't even give me a straight answer to the most basic of her motivations when her life was literally on the line. There is just no telling what will set her off. She's far too deranged to predict!

You know what, fuck it, I just won't do anything all that important until Shadow Stalker is unmasked. Shouldn't be too long now. Just have to update my tip to the E88. 'Unmasking can happen any time within the next month.'
 
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How long until Taylor outs herself to Coil and he decides to check out why somemone is trying to out Shadow Stalker only in his closed timelines?

Probably won't happen but it'd be funny if he visits her in a fake timeline and tells her to stop piggybacking on his power because it causes him headaches.

Seriously though, since she's changing her actions in the fake simulation, he'll catch on eventually, especially if she makes a more newsworthy divergence, and it'll probably lead to him offering her the carrot and stick choice eventually.
Coil doesn't know which Timeline is the simulated one until he chooses for one to be though. In a very real way his power is to make a simulation of reality which is able to make him prefer reality to it.
Emma and her cronies, Sophia notably absent, gathered to greet me in the entry hall. Only for a fake timeline to split off, a bunch of paramilitary goons to start shooting into the air, and tell us to get on the ground. I complied because this doesn't matter to me.
Well motherfucker I guess that this is the beginning of a problem...
 
So guys, are there any lawyer bros in my audience? I'm pretty sure that unmasking Taylor would be a crime of some sort, but I'm not sure what fits. I'm planning on having the explicit unmasking laws only apply to heroes, and reckless endangerment just doesn't feel quite right.
 
Chapter 4: Emma. For Realsies This Time
"So has the bullying stopped?" I look up to Dad. We're having our Sunday breakfast. That was out of the blue. And rude. Now normally I would just dismiss him with a 'sure' or other affirmative response. But I've seen how quick people are to jump to straight up murder as a response to cover up for their own stupid actions in the past week. I think I'm going to need some other options to deal with the bullshit everybody is bringing to the table.

"Not entirely. Dad what am I supposed to do when the Principal refuses to hand me over any paperwork?" He freezes up. He carefully sets his mug down. His jaw and nose twitches.

"You escalate the issue up the chain. Normally that would go to the board of education in city hall, but I wouldn't trust those idiots to find their asses with both hands with how hard everybody involved is covering them. No, we're going straight to the cops and the hospitals. And immediately after you're refused documentation, or they try to downplay any more incidents you leave the fucking building and go straight to whichever applies. Alright?"

"But what about hospital bills?"

"You leave those to me sweetie, okay?" I nod. "Oh, and we're going shopping today to get you a cell phone."

"A cell phone? But what about-"

"You're not driving, and you need a camera for this. A cell phone is a lot less noticeable than a camcorder." And that, as they say, was that. After our shopping trip I went to the library to print off an article a few dozen times. Just preparation.



Monday morning is here and I've come to school armed with the knowledge on how to deal with the type of bureaucratic stonewalling that Blackwell loves. Dad dropped me off personally today, and then drove off to work.

Emma and her cronies, Sophia notably absent, were gathered to greet me in the entry hall.

"Hey there bitch. You think you can get your life back just because you grew a few extra mouths?" Oh my God, they're just doing it. A fake timeline splits off. I ignore it. Then the shooting starts right outside the school. I jump and look behind me in both.

"What, you scared?" Only in the real timeline. "You can run away you know, the choice is up to you." The gunmen are in the school now. They're telling us to get down and I comply. In the real timeline I set down my backpack and start rifling through it. In the fake timeline one of them zip ties Emma and throws her over her shoulders with her screaming bloody murder. They all retreat.

"Pahahahahaha!!" I almost do double over in laughter.

"What the fuck is so funny bitch!" I get up and pull the articles out of my backpack.

"Oh, holy shit I needed that. Guys show of hands, who here thinks this is actually a good idea?" I walk up and start handing out articles. I managed to find one that would fit on one page with a gruesome picture. Nobody is sure what to make of my insanity here.

"Because this is what happened last time somebody unmasked somebody in a school like this." I get to Emma and she throws it to the ground. "Google it." I notice that some of the phalanx have already quietly melted away into the traffic walking around our little group.

"Get her!" Nobody still here takes a step towards me. Looking at her face it's almost purple with rage.

"Hey guys, does anybody here appreciate our dear Emma gambling with your lives with this?" Nobody moves or says anything. "What a curious response. Say Emma I'm gonna do you a solid here. I'm going to give you a chance to put your money where your mouth is." I stand up in front of her, eyes closed, and legs and arms splayed.

"Hit me." Please please for the love of God be stupid enough to fall for this. I know for a fact the cameras in here work, and I want to spend the rest of my day in a hospital/police station and not in school.

I peek past my eyelids after about a minute. Nobody's in front of me anymore. Well darn. I pick up my bag and rush into one of the bathrooms. This is what I was talking about. After the locker Emma just really isn't that threatening anymore. And unmasking me? Well a smart person would've tried blackmailing me or something. Unluckily for me Emma isn't all that smart. Now I gotta deal with the Nazis that are probably going to try and recruit me. And I have no idea how I'm gonna tell my Dad any of this. I get into a stall and sit down. FFUUUUUUUCCKKK!! I lean back to relax.

Why the flying fuck did I just melt into the toilet bowl!!



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Slime (Overlord - The Series) (200CP)
There are many types of slimes and oozes. All of them are uniformly next to impossible to hurt with physical attacks, but are incredibly vulnerable to one type of elemental damage (fire for a regular slime, ice/cold for a lava slime, etc) and also possess a slight weakness to magic in general. You possess the ability to take on a human form that will pass even close inspection, while losing none of the benefits that come with being made up of an amorphous slime-like substance, and possess physical abilities at least twenty times that of a human. Including speed, despite how odd that may seem. You can naturally fit through tight spaces, shape your body into unnatural forms, and can make as many 'feelers' or 'manipulator arms' as you like. In truth you're more like a uniformly colored Shoggoth than you are anything else, except without all the eyes and body parts. Slimes are also powerfully acidic and can inflict grievous acid damage on anything they touch; you naturally possess the ability to determine whether or not your acid will damage the things you are in contact with. All Slimes are naturally good at alchemy and can create alchemical substances and magical potions, if they possess the knowledge of their creation, directly out of their own body. Slimes, due to their nature, are ageless.



AN: I would've loved to make this chapter longer, but sometimes these endings just write themselves.
 
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