Well, I just found this and caught up. Pretty good stuff, like the best aspects of Armored Adventures crossed with some really cool Practical Superheroing. I would probably like to have a discussion with Liv about gender-definition-as-social-technology, but that's probably not on-topic for this thread.
The lenses were flat, you wore them purely for the aesthetic, and to avoid explaining to anyone that you'd suddenly developed 20/20 vision last year.
Shouldn't that be, like, 20/10 at least? Liv's got superstrength, and no real reason it shouldn't also apply to her eyemuscles. Maybe she just doesn't know it gets better than 20/20.
the one he'd left in the alpine base after boarding that faithful jet.
Think you meant fateful. Complimenting the Amerikabomber seems like the sort of typo that might bother you.
School ended, you got home, and you were just out. Done, completely drained, no energy at all. You crumpled on the couch without even making it to your room and got halfway done a cookie before just falling dead asleep.
Isn't Liv really good at chemistry, going by the silk and the material from the Darkhawk analysis? Shouldn't she be trying to make some kind of other, more specific painkiller? Topical would probably be best. I guess her later-revealed disinterest in biology also explains why she's hasn't figured out a better hormone drug, though.
*somehow I lost this part of the draft, but it was about Liv being cold despite her powers*
Super-shivering should probably help a lot with that, but maybe Liv's enhancile biology is very good at avoiding waste heat - dumping it extradimensionally, perhaps. If only she weren't so squicked out by biology, she might find an extremely powerful complement to the arc reactor.
You sailed though the streets a while, watching heads turn and phones track you as you did, running along the sides of buildings, watching the golden light of the sun fade against the buildings and the lights of the city start to glow below you as you made your way to a denser area, more room to swing, more space to play. You watched police lights chase you a block and a half before stopping, trapped in traffic as you left them behind.
By the way, how long do Liv's webs last? Given how interested the police are in finding her, one would presume someone's been trying to track her by the webs she just leaves hanging around. Bit concerned. She should start leaving from different areas, probably. Sewer travel?
Oh, so Liv's actually dating Mayday. Hi Mayday!
(Actually this is probably just another roleswap. Still.)
Can anyone remind me who Liz is? Not Officer Knight, probably. One of the anarcho-catgirls running Athena's warehouse?
Lol, if RWBY is an anime, then So is W.I.T.C.H.
The W.I.T.C.H. GNs were actually quite good. I've heard the Disney adaptation was deeply unworthy, though.

Anyway, things I'd like to get around to:
The Darkhawk Crystal is basically an AI Liv is keeping prisoner. The aftermath of Aaron might be a good time to pull it out and give it a proper hearing? Kind of a really terrible thing to have forgotten the possibly-sapient alien, honestly.
Tech trade with Justine. Getting access to her nerve hookups should help with Custom Prosthetic 3.0, she should get Liv's help optimizing her stuff, and it's about time Liv got a wingsuit and stealth systems. The Arc Reactor might be a bit too militarily-useful to try fronting through Justine, but getting her a copy might also be good?
Oh, and copying the plasma concussives from I-don't-actually-know-the-name in the UK would be cool. Possibly not as useful as making another Romanoff Special fully-automatic-webtaser, but more options are always good, right?

Interrogating the Darkhawk Crystal is kind of a big deal, though. Why has Liv just been sitting on that for a year, when it's a solid lead on the dimensional experiments? Was this covered in stuff that didn't get threadmarked?

As for the anime vote. For the Classic one, it's a tossup between the mecha show I've barely heard of and Eizouken, so - actually, is it okay if I approval-vote? If yes, I'll vote for both.
[X] Something ancient. Metal Skin Panic MADOX-01? That's the coolest robot you've ever seen!
[ ] Something recent-ish. Heh, you like that girl's hat, let's try Keep your hands off Eizouken!

For the write-in, I've been thinking. Heroman isn't terrible, but does feel very appropriate on a meta level. Is it an acceptable write-in, @open_sketch? It may not be the experience you're looking for, but it seems so appropriate that I want to rec it anyway.
[ ] Heroman
 
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The Darkhawk Crystal is basically an AI Liv is keeping prisoner. The aftermath of Aaron might be a good time to pull it out and give it a proper hearing? Kind of a really terrible thing to have forgotten the possibly-sapient alien, honestly.
I didn't think we knew that it was anything other than a weird alien power crystal in character? But it's been a while; I may be misremembering.
 
I didn't think we knew that it was anything other than a weird alien power crystal in character? But it's been a while; I may be misremembering.
We know it was giving whatshisname, Chris I think, instructions on tech to steal. And said that there was some kind of dimensional signal.

Incidentally, I have just come across a new rec: Fate/Apocrypha. Haven't seen it yet, so I cannot judge it on goodness or terribleness, but Astolfo seems like... good civilization? The sort of character @open_sketch, and by extension Liv, might appreciate. Hopefully I'm right about that.
 
[X] Something really retro. Serial Experiments Lain? Looks relatable.

[X] Write in something terrible. The most wretched anime you can think of.
- [X] GATE

Wow, forgot that GATE was just straight up militarist nationalist propaganda. That's a winner.
 
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[X] Something really retro. Serial Experiments Lain? Looks relatable.

[X] Write in something terrible. The most wretched anime you can think of.
- [X] GATE

Wow, forgot that GATE was just straight up militarist nationalist propaganda. That's a winner.
Welp, that's all I needed.

[X] Write in something terrible. The most wretched anime you can think of.
- [X] GATE

...okay, that's a bit of a lie. What I also need is Liv's brutal shredding of the aforementioned wretchedness.
 
Being based on a comic book, there's very much a cluster of common and easily-alliterated names that seem about all over the place, but honestly I kind of like that. Mary is a common name, so it's not weird that there's three people with variations/similar sounding names in her life, just weird for fiction.

Aunt Elizabeth is not a canon Marvel character, but the name comes from an alias used by canon Mary Walker during the time when she was a nun for some reason? So I grabbed it.

Plural Stuff is kind of a big theme of this story (sort of how the first story was trans stuff + superhero origin and the second was disability, obligation, and burnout) so expect to see more of Walker & friends. Typhoid Mary is like, probably one of the most prominant plural characters in modern fiction, and also one of the fucking worst examples of the 'superpowered evil alter' bullshit that 99% of plural characters tend to be, so it's my goddamn duty writing this story to try and salvage something from that. My goal is to make her a character that is still recognizably, in origin and general dynamic, a version of the canon character, just... not an incredibly horrifying and offensive caricature.

Christ, everything I read researching her for this story pissed me off more.
 
We know it was giving whatshisname, Chris I think, instructions on tech to steal. And said that there was some kind of dimensional signal.
*my statement was incorrect, correction down below.*

Edit: now I'm doubting myself... one moment while I go back and double check.

Edit2: ... well duck. Okay, yeah, a communicator with suggestions for machine tools to build other machine parts. Only he started with robbing banks. And we grabbed him during a spoiled laundry mat robbery. And yes the name was Chris. So, yep, you were mostly correct. There was communication, but it didn't tell him to steal tech. It listed what he needed to make tech, and he decided to steal money to buy the manufacturing machines.

. . . Soooo, my bad.
 
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What I also need is Liv's brutal shredding of the aforementioned wretchedness.
I do not think that there is that much to shred? Gate's enemies are written specifically to be either defeated or coopted, its setting is written specifically to give the military free rein to do so, along with the injection of fairly simplistic satisfaction-fodder. It is wrong on a very fundamental level, but that also makes its wrongness fairly simple, and thus difficult to put much actual effort into addressing. It's like trying to find specific features in a lump of mash, there really isn't any substance to be shredded.
 
...okay, that's a bit of a lie. What I also need is Liv's brutal shredding of the aforementioned wretchedness.
IMO GATE is just kinda boring. It's got a reasonably cool premise executed badly, with the JSDF military just chewing through the medieval fantasy armies. There's not too much to think about beyond "this is blatant propoganda" and "this is boring/badly made". Also, there already is this.

The Misfit of Demon King Academy is much more interesting in its flaws. There's plenty to complain about, but it's a much more sophisticated complaining (well, aside from "there's no narrative stakes because the main character is blatantly overpowered", but how it uses that is interesting). I'd honestly recommend watching the first 4 episodes since, even if they're not good, they're fascinating. It gets a bit boring after that though, on top of the other flaws.
 
Gate is basically a nerd/otaku version of a Micheal Bay film, a military themed male power fantasy, and I think Liv would identify it as such almost immediately. There is very little in the show that is uniquely anime bullshit (especially in episode 1), we might as well have her watch Transformers. She's seen Gate before even if she hasn't seen Gate before.

The Misfit of Demon King Academy is a distinctly anime power fantasy, and if this is the weebening then it's a pretty good show to dive into the bad and weird aspects unique to anime style power fantasies, and it hits those notes in episode 1.

I don't really think that either are even close to the worst anime has to offer, nor do I think either is particularily interesting in their badness. They are both mostly just bland, deeply mediocre male power fantasies, but if we are going to have her watch a bland male power fantasy, and that looks like the direction the thread has gone in, The Misfit of Demon King Academy seems more interesting to put in front of Liv and Athena. There are at least amusing elements like going straight up to 11 with nonsense violence, positioning the protag among those discriminated against, his deeply weird parents, and some anime tropes that show up very early on.

[X] Write in something terrible. The most wretched anime you can think of.
-[X] The Misfit of Demon King Academy
 
[X] Write in something terrible. The most wretched anime you can think of.
-[x] Nobunagun

Not terrible per se, but disappointingly underdelivers on its premise ("Oda Nobunaga's reincarnation gets superpowers and helps fight off an alien invasion"), the studio spent most of their budget on the first few episodes and was phoning it in near the end. Alas.
 
[X] Something recent-ish. Heh, you like that girl's hat, let's try Keep your hands off Eizouken!
-[x] Athena calls you out for doing the dance by episode 3

[X] Write in something terrible. The most wretched anime you can think of.
-[X] The Misfit of Demon King Academy
 
But why Misfit over an isekai, like 'In another world with my Smartphone', 'How not to summon a demon lord' or 'Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einharjar'?
Those are just offensively bad.
 
I don't really think that either are even close to the worst anime has to offer
Oh definitely. Like I said when I first rec'd it, it's not that terrible, it's actually kinda interesting in parts. It's a reasonably well-executed and unique badness. There's plenty of worse shit out there, but this one is both reasonably tasteful (not overly sexual) and is somewhat enjoyable despite its myriad of issues.

Those are just offensively bad.
In-character these are shows May has recommended to us. I can't see any of those being recc'd a decade in the future to anyone not specifically asking for it, whereas shows that are interestingly bad I could see showing up.

Also, changing my retro choice from Kill La Kill to Serial Experiments Lain. It's just too relevant to Liv, and so much better on the "nerd cred" that she's watching it for.

[X] Something really retro. Serial Experiments Lain? Looks relatable.
[X] Write in something terrible. The most wretched anime you can think of.
-[X] The Misfit of Demon King Academy
 
Possibly Athena's one true glitch is in her fiction recommendations?

Because creating fully sapient AI, ho-hum. Creating an accidental fork of your own consciousness, these are things a comic book tech genius should be able to do.

Creating a reliable content recommendation system? Naaaaah. :p
 
I am surprised nobody threw in Sword Art Online. Familiar of Zero also is still spitting out fanfiction, and is of debatable charm.

Someone said something about the Rising of Goblin Shield Art Online, so.

Familiar of Zero is practically ancient by 2030s standards, and also just bad, not even entertainingly. But sure, let's add it to the pile and see what comes from the other side.

... It's Olivia's villain origin story, isn't it.
 
Possibly Athena's one true glitch is in her fiction recommendations?

Because creating fully sapient AI, ho-hum. Creating an accidental fork of your own consciousness, these are things a comic book tech genius should be able to do.

Creating a reliable content recommendation system? Naaaaah. :p
Or she could recommend schlock because it amuses her. Who knows? Itd have to be something entertainingly bad though.
 
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