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Terrene Spire - Gently ended.

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Dexexe1234 said:
Hah wow.
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You deserve it!:D
Dexexe1234 said:
But yeah im not, bothered, I am sorry for being depressing
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Like said no reason to say sorry all the time.

(Geez is this what I'm like all the time in RL?:p)

We all help each other out here and there are plenty of GMs that have their mistakes pointed out so they can improve. In fact you never improve unless you make mistakes so feel free to make lots and we'll help you fix them!;)

On another note @Dexexe1234 can our crystal constructs be moved independently after we make them? Like if we made a drill can we will it to spin really fast so we can pierce through hard stuff in general?
 
Whoo, I'm a finalist! As for voting:

[1] A
[2] E
[3] B
[4] D
[5] C

Mine last because I'll be biased otherwise, of course.
 
Massgamer said:
You deserve it!:D

Like said no reason to say sorry all the time.

(Geez is this what I'm like all the time in RL?:p)

We all help each other out here and there are plenty of GMs that have their mistakes pointed out so they can improve. In fact you never improve unless you make mistakes so feel free to make lots and we'll help you fix them!;)

On another note @Dexexe1234 can our crystal constructs be moved independently after we make them? Like if we made a drill can we will it to spin really fast so we can pierce through hard stuff in general?
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Any creation made of ectoplasm can essentially be controlled within your area of effect, meaning that when a ghost is possessing something, it should concievably be able to control any part of this possession, even replicated matter through ectoplasm, like with making a Drill or even a Gatling Gun, but, as we tried back then, this matter wasn't that easy.

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A literal hint at how to attain this level of control: Training. You just aren't good enough at matter molding yet.

Yet, hinting at training like this is a bit mean, it's an action needing time to go by before it shows off progress, and we are currently on a timer. I am sorry.
 
Dexexe1234 said:
A literal hint at how to attain this level of control: Training. You just aren't good enough at matter molding yet.
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Makes sense and something we should look into later on.
Dexexe1234 said:
Yet, hinting at training like this is a bit mean, it's an action needing time to go by before it shows off progress, and we are currently on a timer. I am sorry.
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No need to say sorry and it makes sense we don't have time to do it right now with an important mission going on.

I mean firemen don't stop to do push ups in the middle of putting out a fire that would be silly.:p
 
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    • IT'S THE 3RD OF DECEMBER! LET'S END THIS!

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    D) @Genon 's Entry: Umbra Noir - 1 3 1 1 1 1 1 2 1 1 1 1 1 = 16

    As much as I find this angle interesting, It could use some work. This isn't stopping it from being an honest piece of art on its own though!

    Congratulations @Genon ! You've won THE RIGHT TO CREATE A CANON MONSTER!
    Go ahead and PM me about it and we can start crafting!


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    A) @DrumsInTheDeep 's Entry: The Ballad of Zest Lavie - 1 1 1 1 2 2 4 1 2 4 1 1 4 = 25

    An honest effort! A fun little song! A nice character piece! This one has a bit of everything!

    Congratulations @DrumsInTheDeep ! You're won THE RIGHT TO CREATE A CANON MONSTER!
    Let's have a chat about what beastie you're gonna make in the PMs!

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    B) @DaLintyGuy 's Entry: Lore piece: Green Faction - 3 1 3 2 1 1 2 1 3 1 3 4 2 = 27

    A nice concept all around, and an interesting angle to set a story piece from! Very nice :>

    Congratulations @DaLintyGuy ! You've won THE RIGHT TO CREATE A CANON MONSTER!
    Let's keep our talk going in the PMs eh?


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    C) @Familiar 's Entry: The Creation of Zest - 2 4 4 3 3 3 3 3 4 3 2 3 1 = 36

    This is really cool, and the fan-art train Familiar has got going for terrene spire is honestly such an awesome thing to me, thank you, it means a lot!

    Congratulations @Familiar ! You've won THE RIGHT TO CREATE A CANON EISHALON!!
    Get to that PM box and lets get SINISTER!!

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    E) @King_Rule 's Entry: Lesovik - 4 2 2 4 4 4 1 4 1 2 4 2 3 = 37

    And from a surprising left field, Lesovik the Mushroomoid Ordgrown wins the big bout! I really do enjoy this design, it is very delightful!
    Congratulations @King_Rule ! You've won THE RIGHT TO CREATE A CANON HEEEEROOOOOOOO!!!!
    GET TO THEM PM BOXES DUDE!!

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    And that's a wrap people! The Fan-work anniversary contest is over! We got fewer entries and fewer voters than last time, and that's entirely fair. This year has not been a good one for my productivity, but I still thank you all for turning up, submitting entries and keeping the attention going for Terrene Spire!

    I promise it's gonna take a LONG WHILE before the next contest comes. For now, I should focus on delivering these new and exciting entries into the Darosian Canon! I will see you winners in the private messages, and to everyone else:

    Thank you all for reading Terrene Spire!​
     
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    E) @King_Rule 's Entry: Lesovik - 4 2 2 4 4 4 1 4 1 2 4 2 3 = 37

    And from a surprising left field, Lesovik the Mushroomoid Ordgrown wins the big bout! I really do enjoy this design, it is very delightful!
    Congratulations @King_Rule ! You've won THE RIGHT TO CREATE A CANON HEEEEROOOOOOOO!!!!
    GET TO THEM PM BOXES DUDE!!
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    *Strikes Saturday Night Fever Pose* Oh baby! OH BABY! By one whole point. Oh that was so close.

    I'd like thank you all, voters whether you rated me high or low; fellow readers, artists and finalists whom love this series as much as I do; and hands down the Dex man himself for both creating this fabulous fantasy and allowing me to compete in the finals. Again Thank You for I don't believe I'll ever be able to say it enough.


    *Gets on a Horse* TO THE PM BOX SILVER, AWAY!
     
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    • Whoa, really neat lore and really does explain more about what we are.

    We are technically souless but our ectoplasm mimics a soul long enough that after death we can be reborn through the Sarcapholeum.
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    The reincarnation thing I... Kind of got the very basic outline of sorts, but the no soul thing is completely blowing my mind.
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    I know right?

    We are really just ectoplasm with thoughts that are unique among monsters in that we can revive ourselves under the right conditions.
     
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    The reincarnation thing I... Kind of got the very basic outline of sorts, but the no soul thing is completely blowing my mind.
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    We die.

    Our fading ectoplasm briefly becomes soul-alike.

    Our Halo collects this Soul-plasm and sends it to the sarcapholeum via some sort of portal.

    The sarcapholeum takes this soul-plasm and recreates a body for it.

    We live!
     
    What the fuck DOES have a soul, that we know what a soul looks like, and thus know that ectoplasm briefly becomes soul-like?
     
    We are dead but we are also alive!

    We have no soul so we make a substitute!

    Welcome to the experience of being a ghost, nothing makes sense. :V

    Great update. Dexe.
     
    So the only way Ghosts can permanently die is for their Halo to be destroyed or for the Sarcapholeum to be inoperable...plus maybe turning into an Eishalon.
     
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