I tend not to have strong opinions on stuff like this. Though I'm not sure I much like EVA's pair. But that's more because they have character traits I dislike than anything else.
And I'm glad you didn't stick with the Dorito body, we make fun of people who skip Leg Day for a reason.
That looks really good! Though I do have to agree that the pelvis and stomach don't look like they fit very well. And he does need poleyns.Just finished drawing up a (somewhat messy/cruddy) concept of Phenom Sable ver. Fyr actually. Took some of the hints on making him bulkier and blockier, and using more of the F-type design instead of normal Eva armour.
Of course, it's just a concept-- I'm gonna have to tweak and change several parts of the design before I'm satisfied, so that it looks 1) good, and 2) not like two and a half giant robots smushed into one. Still, it's a start.
Some of my own thoughts:
- Pelvis/stomach looks way too much like an Eva. That's gonna be the first thing I change, because it also turned out awful.
- Legs are also gonna get a minor revamp, so they don't have massive unarmoured weakpoints in the knees.
- The CMP-5s and Combat Sabatons still look like the ones on Jagdhund, and yet seem... strangely appropriate.
- Arms could be longer and larger, but otherwise look pretty decent.
- The vents could be moved around a bit. The ones on the arms look kinda off, as do the thigh ones, but the chest and knee vents work together nicely.
- With the head, I was trying to add in two pairs of fake 'eyes' above and below the visor, to kinda mirror the headlights on Jho's Sable pic and Eva-02's eye cameras. Still could use some work, but the head does look fairly nice.
Those might just be my favorite version of BIGGER, SCARIER HANDS so far. They're not perfect, mind. Still not sure why they inconvenience it from wielding weapons, as the smaller hands still look fairly unimpeded for gun use. But I've had that problem with a lot of these drawings, and this is the probably the most scary of the bunch, and also fairly large.Just finished drawing up a (somewhat messy/cruddy) concept of Phenom Sable ver. Fyr actually. Took some of the hints on making him bulkier and blockier, and using more of the F-type design instead of normal Eva armour.
Of course, it's just a concept-- I'm gonna have to tweak and change several parts of the design before I'm satisfied, so that it looks 1) good, and 2) not like two and a half giant robots smushed into one. Still, it's a start.
Some of my own thoughts:
- Pelvis/stomach looks way too much like an Eva. That's gonna be the first thing I change, because it also turned out awful.
- Legs are also gonna get a minor revamp, so they don't have massive unarmoured weakpoints in the knees.
- The CMP-5s and Combat Sabatons still look like the ones on Jagdhund, and yet seem... strangely appropriate.
- Arms could be longer and larger, but otherwise look pretty decent.
- The vents could be moved around a bit. The ones on the arms look kinda off, as do the thigh ones, but the chest and knee vents work together nicely.
- With the head, I was trying to add in two pairs of fake 'eyes' above and below the visor, to kinda mirror the headlights on Jho's Sable pic and Eva-02's eye cameras. Still could use some work, but the head does look fairly nice.
Actually, it just occurred to me that it's probably because it turns the smaller hands off. Jaeger's are humanoid to better match the native nervous-sysyem of the pilots, after all, and I don't know all that many people with four hands. Activating the talons probably switches the "hand" signals from "small hands" to "bigger, scarier hands". So it's less that the talons get in the way and more that they can't operate the gun themselves.
Hm. I suppose that makes sense. But I still think the smaller hands should be handled better. Maybe have them fold inwards at the wrist, when the talons are active. Otherwise, they'll interfere with the talons. After all, I don't recall too many humans with large lumps on their palms. And such a thing would certainly be a pain when trying to grip something.
Eh, the Banshee's aesthetics are nice, but not exactly what I was looking for. A bit too blocky for my tastes.
Close, but not quite. Most of the time, the Talons are actually going to mirror what the smaller hands do-- though both are capable of moving independently-- which tends to get in the way of using handheld equipment. The splitting signals also causes the smaller hands' fine motor skills and pressure sensitivity to suffer a little (though that isn't much of a problem when the talons are being used how they're supposed to).
Interesting in theory, but I think the smaller hands are more going to get in the way than anything else. They're going to impede the talons from closing fully, given the current layout. Or, worse, the talons might crush the more fragile hands. I think my previous suggestion of having the hands fold inward at the wrist while the talons are active would fix that rather neatly.
] Charles S. Atlas and Yamada Saitama
] Left and Right sides, respectively.
] Hot-blooded/disciplined and Kind/Eccentric 
] Charles is a man who was inspired by his famous namesake into trying to become the strongest man alive, leading him to becoming a bodybuilder and, later, a pro MMA fighter, achieving much fame for both his name and fighting skill. Saitama, on the other hand, dreamed of being a hero and defending the weak, and eventually joined the Tokyo Metropolitan Police. Both were on vacation with their families in Seattle when the Tod der Jaeger happened. The one thing both men have in common is their dedication to training, learning new techniques and improving themselves, all in name of achieving their dreams.] Charles is a handsome black-haired man with huge muscles and a friendly, jovial disposition. Saitama, on the other hand, looks like an unassuming Japanese man, but his slimmer build hides a wiry musculature. He has black hair, somewhat unkempt, but much to his alarm the hair on the back of his head is starting to thin and he fears he will soon get a bald spot there.
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I am not sure how much of this is a joke.
But just imagine what they could do if they did go the wrestling route!
That would be pretty awesome.
Given that half of his duo might be an anime expy, I dunno if that's the choice you want it be making.
