Starship Design Bureau

I am hoping to work on the science ship before the modular ship.

I'd like to work on a prototype sensor or shield. At least something useful for science. That way, we can have the modular ship be next-gen in all purposes.
 
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2341: Project Ambassador (Retrospective: Part Two)
After Action Report: Battle of Narendra III

Belligerents:
USS Enterprise, Captain Rachel Garrett commanding.
Romulan Warbird 1, unknown.
Romulan Warbird 2, unknown.
Romulan Warbird 3, unknown.
Romulan Warbird 4, unknown.

All times synchronised with Starfleet standard (San Francisco).

1309: Enterprise receives a distress call from Narendra III declaring they are under attack and defences are failing. Captain Garrett orders a change in course and increase to Warp 8.6. XO objects based on Starfleet directive to not enter Klingon Space, Garrett overrules based on Starfleet regulations regarding distress calls. XO withdraws objection.

[Starfleet Judge Advocate General concurs with Captain Garrett.]

1327: Narenda III unresponsive to hails and distress call ceases. Captain Garrett orders increase to Warp 8.8.

1328: Shipwide yellow alert issued.

1412: Enterprise detects disruptor signatures from weapon discharges at Narendra III. Captain Garrett orders increase to Warp 9.

1418: Shipwide red alert issued.

1423: Enterprise drops out of warp at the orbital insertion point for the Narendra III colony and detects four Romulan Warbirds of unknown classification. Captain Garrett opens a general hail ordering a halt to the attack and requesting an open dialogue.

1424: Romulan Warbirds cease fire and reposition towards Enterprise. Captain Garrett orders weapons cold and helm ready for evasive manoeuvres.

[Running weapons cold is in violation of Starfleet directives regarding non-communicative starships with known hostile activity. Starfleet Judge Advocate General cites Captain's Prerogative and declines to issue formal censure.]

1425:43: Romulan Warbirds open fire. Captain Garrett orders evasive manoeuvres and return fire.

1425:49: Enterprise returns fire with phasers and breaks off. Warbirds split into two wings and begin pursuit.

1426:12: Enterprise executes course change, 162 mark 030, turning to starboard and sweeping above the trailing edge of Romulan pursuit formation. Warbird 4 is hit with five phaser beams (dorsal, 1426:14-16, ventral 1426:18-20, ventral aft 1426:20-21, and dorsal aft one and two 1426:23-24). Aft launcher fires full torpedo spread 1426:25, scores four hits 1426:27. Torpedoes three and four impact hull and destroy target.

1426:34: Warbird 1 cloaks. Enterprise initiates evasive pattern beta two-three, firing with aft phasers.

1426:37: Enterprise shields at 27%. Enterprise executes course change, 310 mark 180.

1426:41: Warbirds 2 and 3 fire plasma torpedoes. Enterprise engages Warbird 2 with dorsal phasers.

1426:44: Plasma torpedoes impact. Torpedo one diffused by shields, torpedo two impacts deck three diplomatic section.

1426:45: Explosion on the bridge. Romulan disruptors score direct hits on saucer section decks four through seven, engineering section deck eighteen, and starboard nacelle. Enterprise rolls ninety degrees to starboard.

1426:53: Captain Garrett and Lieutenant Callisto assume control of all bridge functions due to casualties. Lieutenant Callisto remains at helm, Captain Garrett takes tactical. Medical teams called to bridge.

1426:57: Enterprise takes major damage to port engineering section and nacelle strut. Warp plasma leak begins from port nacelle. Enterprise retargets Warbird 2 with ventral phasers and executes course change to 270 mark 000 to intercept target warbird.

1427:02: Enterprise takes damage across bow and main engineering section. Navigational deflector disabled. Enterprise fires phasers (ventral 1427:02-04, dorsal 1427:03-05) and forward photon spread (1427:04). Torpedo four impacts hull 1427:06 and inflicts major damage. Warbird 2 remains powered but becomes unresponsive.

1427:08: Enterprise passes above Warbird 2. Ventral aft phaser targets power core and triggers gravitational shear effect in hull. Warbird 2 destroyed by secondary explosion.

1427:11: Warbird 1 uncloaks direct forward and fires plasma torpedo.

1427:15: Plasma torpedo impacts main deflector and causes major secondary explosion in engineering hull. Enterprise loses main power.

1427:23: Warbird 3 fires plasma torpedo.

1427:26: Plasma torpedo impacts saucer section and destroys secondary impulse thruster. Captain Garrett orders abandon ship and broadcasts surrender.

1427:31: Disruptor fire opens hull breaches, decks four through eight and ten through sixteen.

1427:42: Escape pods begin launch.

1427:45: Warbird 1 fires on escape pods and launches plasma torpedo.

1427:47: Plasma torpedo impacts main engineering. Auxiliary power fails. Bridge controls shift to emergency mode.

1427:58: Captain Garrett authorises thirty second self destruct sequence.

1428:01: Lieutenant Callisto concurs.

1428:05: Disruptor hit, main bridge. Sensor feed ends.

1428:26: Enterprise data recorder's internal chronometer logs jettison sequence.

1428:31: Self-destruct sequence completes.

Wreckage analysis indicates Enterprise was destroyed by antimatter pod containment breach consistent with activation of self-destruct mechanism. Accordingly the Enterprise is recorded destroyed at 1428:31.


End Result:
Enterprise-C lost with all hands.
2 Romulan Warbirds destroyed.
Narendra III colony destroyed.


It is the conclusion of this report that Captain Garrett showed exemplary performance and decision making. Recommend posthumous application to Karagite Order of Heroism and immediate award of the Christopher Pike Medal of Valour for Captain Rachel Garrett for her demonstration of the highest dedication to the values of Starfleet. Recommend award of the Star Cross to Lieutenant Richard Callisto. Recommend award of Legion of Valour to all Enterprise-C command staff. Recommend Starfleet Award of Valour and Silver Palm for all Enterprise-C crew.

 
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That fight was brutal. If it had been 3-on-1 I think the Enterprise could have clutched out a close (but costly) victory, but that fourth bird was just one too many.
 
I wonder if it would be in character for Starfleet to experiment with making a ship powered by a singularity drive like the Romulans have.
 
1 thing that confuses me. How does this not start a war with the Federation? They have proof of escape pods being fired at and the clear hostility from Romulans attacking first.
 
1 thing that confuses me. How does this not start a war with the Federation? They have proof of escape pods being fired at and the clear hostility from Romulans attacking first.

I am like, 95% certain this might actually trigger said war. The Romulan's originally planned to blame the Enterprise for the colony's destruction if my memory isn't failing me. With the amount of damage sustained by these birds however combined with the flight recorder, and the Klingons apparently showing up after the fight to either finish or drive off the Romulans, i honestly expect this might change the course of history just a bit.


Unless my memory has failed me completely and i have forgotten why war wasn't caused by this incident.
 
Romulans We're probably forced to make concessions originally and this time, they might make even more out of fear of a squad of Ambassadors leading a Federation charge into their space, with Klingons hitting another flank
 
1 thing that confuses me. How does this not start a war with the Federation? They have proof of escape pods being fired at and the clear hostility from Romulans attacking first.
The Feds and Klingons aren't allies at this point so the Federation isn't obligated to declare war. The Enterprise had no business being where it was, meaning that the Romulans firing first mattered a lot less. Now if the Federation wanted to start a war over this, it probably could.have, but it wouldn't take much for the generally peace-seeking Federation to write this off as an international incident rather than causus belli.
 
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1 thing that confuses me. How does this not start a war with the Federation? They have proof of escape pods being fired at and the clear hostility from Romulans attacking first.

The Earth-Romulan War never ended. The treaty of Algeron established the neutral zone and some guarantees from the Coalition of Planets re: cloaking devices and so on in exchange for a ceasefire. There's a reason when Subcommander Tomalok catches the Enterprise-D in the neutral zone he announces his intention to take the crew as prisoners of war.

But would you go to war with an enemy of unknown strength for an attack that took place outside your own territory, and in the territory of a nominal rival to boot? I think that even the most hawkish members of the top brass would consider Narendra III a colossal defeat for the Romulan Empire - it singlehandedly made a Klingon War against the Federation completely impossible for decades, and it destroyed the pro-Romulan faction in the Klingon Empire. If it was the Romulans getting off scot-free in terms of repercussions I think it would have been a different story.

I am like, 95% certain this might actually trigger said war. The Romulan's originally planned to blame the Enterprise for the colony's destruction if my memory isn't failing me. With the amount of damage sustained by these birds however combined with the flight recorder, and the Klingons apparently showing up after the fight to either finish or drive off the Romulans, i honestly expect this might change the course of history just a bit.


Unless my memory has failed me completely and i have forgotten why war wasn't caused by this incident.

The Klingon Empire of the time was basically divided between pro-Romulan and pro-Federation factions. Not in the sense that they liked one side more than the other so much as which they considered to be a better target. The Federation was the traditional enemy, the Romulans the traditional allies. But no Klingon actually respects a Romulan, while some Klingons do respect the occasional Starfleeter. So there was a real political divide. The Enterprise-C showing up and then disappearing (apparently running away) from the Romulan attack apparently solidified opinions that the Federation was an easy target and dishonourable. Hence the alternate timeline with the twenty-year war.
 
So what do we have here:
1309: Enterprise receives a distress call from Narendra III declaring they are under attack and defences are failing. Captain Garrett orders a change in course and increase to Warp 8.6. XO objects based on Starfleet directive to not enter Klingon Space, Garrett overrules based on Starfleet regulations regarding distress calls. XO withdraws objection.

[Starfleet Judge Advocate General concurs with Captain Garrett.]
This looks good Starfleet coming in to safe the day as the bigdam heroes.

1327: Narenda III unresponsive to hails and distress call ceases. Captain Garrett orders increase to Warp 8.8.

1328: Shipwide yellow alert issued.
So after 18Minutes the disstress call ceases. Garrett increases speed and prepares for hostilities. Good call you never know what has crawled out of the woodwork to turn everything to shit.

1412: Enterprise detects disruptor signatures from weapon discharges at Narendra III. Captain Garrett orders increase to Warp 9.

1418: Shipwide red alert issued.
Over one hour after the first distress Signal was recieved you are getting close and detect heavy naval fire. Garret is right to go to Battlestations. Here she should have send out another report to HQ detailing the situations and timestamps of what happened including the likely orbital bombardment of the colony.

1423: Enterprise drops out of warp at orbital insertion point for Narendra III colony and detects four Romulan Warbirds of unknown classification. Captain Garrett opens a general hail ordering a halt to the attack and requesting an open dialogue.

1424: Romulan Warbirds cease fire and reposition towards Enterprise. Captain Garrett orders weapons cold and helm ready for evasive manoeuvres.

[Running weapons cold is in violation of Starfleet directives regarding non-communicative starships with known hostile activity. Starfleet Judge Advocate General cites Captain's Prerogative and declines to issue formal censure.]
So GARRETT KNOWS THESE four unknows bombarded a neutral colony for more than 60 Minutes and her first instinct is to go there weapons off and hail them? I hope she was a Career woman that never procreated that much moronic stupidy should not continue.

She should have come in full speed and killed the first one from surprise. Then continued firing on the second one while ORDERING the remaining ones to get lost or be killed.
Edit: This attack is a clear violation of everything the Federation stands for. Including the hour long orbital bombardment of the colony. So yes there is absolute justification of coming in guns blazing. As the federation espouses high ideals standing by and not doing anything in the name of peace would not have worked either.

1425:43: Romulan Warbirds open fire. Captain Garrett orders evasive manoeuvres and return fire.

1425:49: Enterprise returns fire with phasers and breaks off. Warbirds split into two wings and begin pursuit.
After her stupidy the enemy gets the first hits in. Instead of using her ships high power to charge them firing she turns, opening herself for a pursuit by a numerical superior foe.
What follows is a execution. She is not salvaging this monumental fuck up even with two kills. It is not enough to clear her from the stupidy she showed earlier.
Recommendation: Posthumous degrading Rachel Garrett to Commander, a posthumous black mark on her records and dishonorable discharge for wasting one of our brand new ships. Further we recomend a change in officers schooling to remove the chance that future captains make the same mistake.
 
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1424: Romulan Warbirds cease fire and reposition towards Enterprise. Captain Garrett orders weapons cold and helm ready for evasive manoeuvres.

[Running weapons cold is in violation of Starfleet directives regarding non-communicative starships with known hostile activity. Starfleet Judge Advocate General cites Captain's Prerogative and declines to issue formal censure.]

1425:43: Romulan Warbirds open fire. Captain Garrett orders evasive manoeuvres and return fire.

1427:26: Plasma torpedo impacts saucer section and destroys secondary impulse thruster. Captain Garrett orders abandon ship and broadcasts surrender.

1427:31: Disruptor fire opens hull breaches, decks four through eight and ten through sixteen.

1427:42: Escape pods begin launch.

1427:45: Warbird 1 fires on escape pods and launches plasma torpedo.


😞7

Romulans decided to fuck around and are possibly about to find out.
 
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Yeah I'm pretty the Remulan's firing on escape pods is a straight up war crime to nearly every faction in the quadrant. Capturing escape pods is one thing. Deliberately destroying them especially after they already surrendered. Yeah I don't think the Romulan's are ever going to wash that stain off their reputation.
 
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The thing is the Romulans don't have a reputation to stain. :rofl2:
I would argue they do. It's just a meter of how close they come to being considered the "Nazis" of the quadrant. Or in simpler terms, getting ganged up on by everybody else because they got fed up with their crap. There is not a lot the Romulan's can do if everybody else decides to invade at the same time.
 
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