Our eyeballs probably only help against visual genjutsu. Even then, it probably isn't completely effective. We can probably see through visual genjutsu...if it isn't being used on us directly.

Like if you're trying to get past security via illusions, you don't use illusions on the security camera. You use them on the guy behind the camera.

...If it wasn't obvious, our brain is the guy and our eyes the camera in that metaphor.
Visual Genjutsu is BY FAR the most common genjutsu, and even if our Eyes won't let us see if a smell is fake or not, it WILL let us look at OUR OWN CHAKRA NETWORK, and realize if we are under the effects of a Genjutsu. It can spot the effects of the Kotoamatsukami, one of the most powerful genjutsu in existence. Then it would be childs-play to dispell, since the Gentle Fist is ALL ABOUT being able to very finely manipulate people's chakra, so even if we can't just chakra-flex away the Genjutsu we could just poke ourselves a few times.

The Byakugan is PRETTY infallible. Like, Ranmaru's Kekkei Genkai is noted to cause VERY powerful Genjutsu, BECAUSE it can overcome the Byakugan. The fact that it can is what makes it extremely noteworthy. The only other Genjutsu known to share that acclaim, is the RInnesharingan. So I HIGHLY doubt you can just "go for the brain", not without being THE BEST Genjutsu Specialist, period.
 
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Life
Life:

-[X]Spar: You want to fight one of your teammates, to get a feel for their abilities against you. (increases Teamwork) Rolled: 1D100 => 59+50=109

"So my cute little Genin… what would you like to do today?" Kakashi asked.

"We want to steal your mask." You said quietly.

Kakashi-sensei's eye seemed to frown. "Really, there isn't really much to see." He replied.

You disagreed, and the spar was awesome.
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You almost had it. You had your hand on his mask… but he just electrocuted you before you were able to pull it down.

You, Futaba, and Itachi together were left like crumpled garbage.

"Well, that was fun," Kakashi stated. "You almost pulled off my mask." He then gave a laugh. "Ahh, you know what, I'll show you all that's underneath my mask since you all did such a good job."

He pulled down the mask… to reveal another mask.

"Are you kidding me!" Futaba complained.

Well, you should have seen that coming.

Reward: Teamwork increased by 20. Teamwork now at 80/100. If you fail a dodge or attack roll, you automatically gain a free reroll from your teammates.

-[X]Train Taijutsu: Your training continues. You will be a master of your Taijutsu, and hopefully, it will be great. Rolled:1D100 => 75+50=125

Uncle Hiashi could only do one thing to help you. And that was to force you to live every moment in your life for the month in the gentle fist. He said that if you could master that.

And you succeded.

Reward: The Gentle fist is now at Kage Rank. There is no way that this style can be learned better.

Gentle Fist (Kage Rank): A taijutsu technique that inflicts internal damage through attacking the body's Chakra Pathway System, subsequently injuring organs that are closely intertwined with the area of the network which has been struck. The user surgically injects a certain amount of their own chakra into the opponent's chakra pathway system, causing damage to surrounding organs due to their proximity to the chakra circulatory system. (With the Byakugan, this character gains a +50 to attack rolls. If the enemy gets hit, jutsu's cannot be performed unless they pass a saving throw.)


New Action Available.

-[X]Train Teamwork: Kakashi wants to see some of the Teamwork he's been hoping you have been practicing in your spare time. Rolled:1D100 => 56+50=106

"Ahh… we have a cute little genin who thinks they are better at teamwork now… Show me." Kakashi stated.

You did, showing him an incredibly choreographed spar, just to show the amount of trust that you had for each other.

Reward: Teamwork at 100/100.

For all combat rolls with your teammates, you get a reroll. No matter what. Any fatal blow will turn into an injury roll as long as you are not ambushed.

-[X]Spend Time with Hiashi: Uncle Hiashi… why are you looking at me like that? Is something wrong? Rolled:1D100 => 91+20=112

"Uncle...what's wrong?" You asked.

Your uncle was looking into your eyes, as you noticed the glowing reflected off oh the knife he was using to prepare some incense. "Shiro… when did your eyes begin to glow like they are now?" His question was an order.

"A month ago sir." You stated.

He paused examining you closer. "I was wondering if the glow behind your eye was a side effect of the seal, an unintended side effect…. But, it is not. Only you exhibited such a glow." He stated. "Shiro… do you feel pain?"

"No sir." you stated.

"Good." He stated, and his face looked relieved as if he was about to ask something of you and he felt better, knowing that you were not in any way effected. "I am going to ask something of you, something you may not agree with… but it is for the good of the clan."

"What is it?" You asked.

"I need you to train Hinata when she's old enough." He stated. "The branch house… some of the more angry clan members... they want to kill her." Those words made you clench your teeth.

"Why don't you stop them?" You asked.

"I told you that I would not use the Caged Bird seal on this family again." He stated. "They are afraid, and my words nor your actions will not stop them."

"Why not just talk to them. Let them know you will listen to them." You stated.

"Because I don't think I can," Hiashi stated. "I can't talk to them because they are right."

You sighed. "Yes, you can uncle. They wish to harm their family, so you do not harm theirs… show them how hypocritical they are. Do not be afraid."

Hiashi sighed before he gave you a hug. "Thank you."

Reward: The potential Coup in the Hyuga clan has been headed off for the moment. Hinata's life is in danger from the more extreme elements of the Branch who wish to kill her to break Hiashi.

You have been tasked with training Hinata to protect herself.

New Action Available.

-[X]Care for Neji: Your brother may be raised by your aunt… but you will not accept being away from your brother. You need to begin to truly teach him the way of being a genius… without the whole… clan dispising you for being a cripple. Rolled:1D100 => 82+20=102

You sat down next to Neji, his face holding a smile as you ruffled his hair. "Hey buddy, how's everything going?" You asked.

"It's going great. Uncle Hiashi says I might be good enough to spar with some of the older kids." He stated.

"Do you want to do that?" You asked.

"Yeah!" He replied excitedly. "Some of the elders are saying that I might be able to beat you."

You smiled. "I'm sure you will Neji." You then saw him pout. "What's wrong."

"Everyone says mean things about you, and every time I try to defend you, they just pick on me for being small." He said. "They say that you are a traitor."

You narrowed your eyes. "A traitor to what?"

"To the Branch… they say that you sold yourself out to Uncle Hiashi… and that the seal on your head is just a trick to make everyone accept him as the leader." He replied.

You nodded, feeling ashamed at the Branch clan at that very moment. Even after all Hiashi sacrificed… all he risked and all he tried to do to repair the damage that the clan had long-held… They do not see it as enough.

"Neji." Your tone shifted. "Do not visit the branch again… not until I tell you you can."

Neji nodded. "Okay… can we spar now."

You shook your head. "I'm sorry Neji." You placed a hand on his shoulder and looked him straight into his eyes. "Maybe next time okay. I promise."

Reward: Neji tells you things. Neji is considered a prodigy in the Gentle Fist.

The Branch is preparing something, and they consider you a threat to that plan.

New Action Available.

-[X]Care for Hinata: Hinata is a quiet baby… but she needs more care than what Auntie Hana can provide. Rolled:1D100 => 62+20=82

Hinata was smiling and you smiled back. You cradled her in your arms and felt anger… why would anyone want to harm a little girl who has done nothing but bring beauty into this world?

It filled you with anger.

But you knew you made a promise. She would be safe.

As you cared for her, you realized she knew who you were. And always made sure that you knew she felt safe with you.

Reward: Hinata is a cute baby, who needs to be protected at all costs.

Hinata instinctively knows that you are her protector, and will rush to you if she cannot get to Neji, her mother or her father.

-[X]D-Rank: Hospital Shifts: Since you know Healing Palms and are a ninja, you can intern at the hospital without having to go through the painful and time-consuming training period. Apparently, someone put a good word in for you Rolled:1D100 => 7+10=17

You awoke in a hospital bed. "Ow." you groaned. "What happened?"

You saw a ninja waiting on you. And your hand hands in cuffs. "Genin, I am requesting you stay calm, and please tell me what happened in surgery suite 5."

"Why am I cuffed?" You asked. "Did I do something wrong?"

"Because you nearly killed Hayate Gekko in surgury."

What... no, that wasn't possible... no, the poison in his system!

(Continue in: Malfunction.)
 
-[X]D-Rank: Hospital Shifts: Since you know Healing Palms and are a ninja, you can intern at the hospital without having to go through the painful and time-consuming training period. Apparently, someone put a good word in for you Rolled:1D100 => 7+10=17

You awoke in a hospital bed. "Ow." you groaned. "What happened?"

You saw a ninja waiting on you. And your hand hands in cuffs. "Genin, I am requesting you stay calm, and please tell me what happened in surgery suite 5."

"Why am I cuffed?" You asked. "Did I do something wrong?"

"Because you nearly killed Hayate Gekko in surgury."

What... no, that wasn't possible... no, the poison in his system!

(Continue in: Malfunction.)
... OUCH, do we not benefit from our +50 to our Mystic Palm Technique, since we are healing people?
 
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... OUCH, do we not benefit from our +50 to our Mystic Palm Technique, since we are healing people?
It was a surgury, something that we could not use the Mystic palms on because it would not have been effective in said surgury.

Edit: Also, we obviously missed something crucial that even the Mystic Palms could not counteract.
 
It was a surgury, something that we could not use the Mystic palms on because it would not have been effective in said surgury.
I mean... I have a hard time seeing how Mystic Palm wouldn't be applicable to any kind of surgery, but alright. Does the Mystic Palm skill not just represent our over all Medical Skill? I thought you were just giving us that to encompass ALL medical stuff, so you wouldn't have to write down half a dozen different medical techniques. With no bonus, it's basically the same as us being untrained, unless there's a phantom stat lowering DCs.

For all combat rolls with your teammates, you get a reroll. No matter what. Any fatal blow will turn into an injury roll as long as you are not ambushed.
Is that instead of the +50 mentioned earlier, or in addition to?
 
Is that instead of the +50 mentioned earlier, or in addition to?
In addition to it.
Does the Mystic Palm skill not just represent our over all Medical Skill?
There are the Chakra Scalpels you need to learn, and there is a hidden medical stat that you have that Atlas Affects at the moment.

Due to the nature of the poison affecting Hayate, he cannot offer as much assistance as he would like.

And there is an omake coming up that will... Well, you'll see that things may be okay in the end.
 
There are the Chakra Scalpels you need to learn, and there is a hidden medical stat that you have that Atlas Affects at the moment.

Due to the nature of the poison affecting Hayate, he cannot offer as much assistance as he would like.

And there is an omake coming up that will... Well, you'll see that things may be okay in the end.
So there is more to learn, alright. I find it odd we didn't learn it earlier, but oh well, least I know now.

And just wana make sure I'm clear, I'm not complaining or trying to criticize you or anything, I'm just trying to figure out what is going on. Your writing is great, if it wasn't I wouldn't even be here.
 
There are the Chakra Scalpels you need to learn, and there is a hidden medical stat that you have that Atlas Affects at the moment.

Due to the nature of the poison affecting Hayate, he cannot offer as much assistance as he would like.

And there is an omake coming up that will... Well, you'll see that things may be okay in the end.
Now we need to focus all attention on healing techniques, and loving family.
 
So there is more to learn, alright. I find it odd we didn't learn it earlier, but oh well, least I know now.

And just wana make sure I'm clear, I'm not complaining or trying to criticize you or anything, I'm just trying to figure out what is going on. Your writing is great, if it wasn't I wouldn't even be here.
Well no one asked because we were succeeding all the time, so I didn't think there would be any need to.

I should have told you, to be a good QM, but you guys were succeding so much that I didn't feel the need to until after this came up.
Now we need to focus all attention on healing techniques, and loving family.
Hurah!
 
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