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Adhoc vote count started by Magoose on Jan 22, 2020 at 9:09 PM, finished with 51 posts and 24 votes.

  • [X]Plan: Amazing changes
    -[X]Train Ninjutsu: You need some more ninjutsu in your arsenal, Kakashi-sensei compiled by giving you one.
    -[X]Train Teamwork: Kakashi wants to see some of the Teamwork he's been hoping you have been practicing in your spare time.
    -[X]Recive a Medic Certificate: Now that you are a ninja, and have received medical training from the academy, the Hospital needs to do some paperwork with you, to make you a certified combat medic. It's just a formality, but they do need it for record-keeping and assignment post genin or sensei career.
    -[X]The Megas: Your eyes glowed red. "Um, Atlas… what's going on? Why are my eyes glowing like yours?"
    -[X]Help Others: You will go to the Hospital and demand they set up a psych ward. There are several people within these walls that are lacking psychological help.
    -[X]The Brother: You were asked by Itachi to help take care of his little brother Sasuke.
    -[X]D-Rank: Lab Clean up: So Orochimaru needs some assistance cleaning the blood of his equipment… Try not to faint or puke, otherwise, he might experiment on you for dirtying up his lab.
    [X] Plan Teamwork
    -[X]Spar: You want to fight one of your teammates, to get a feel for their abilities against you. (increases Teamwork)
    -[X]Train Taijutsu: Your training continues. You will be a master of your Taijutsu, and hopefully, it will be great.
    -[X]Train Elemental Jutsu: Since you have lightning, Kakashi is braking out a few older scrolls that belonged to his father. Something about training yourself to become lightning.
    -[X]The Megas: Your eyes glowed red. "Um, Atlas… what's going on? Why are my eyes glowing like yours?"
    -[X]Care for Neji: Your brother may be raised by your aunt… but you will not accept being away from your brother. You need to begin to truly teach him the way of being a genius… without the whole… clan dispising you for being a cripple.
    -[X]Care for Hinata: Hinata is a quiet baby… but she needs more care than what Auntie Hana can provide.
    -[X]D-Rank: Hospital Shifts: Since you know Healing Palms and are a ninja, you can intern at the hospital without having to go through the painful and time-consuming training period. Apparently, someone put a good word in for you.
    [X] Plan Responsibility
    -[X]Train Ninjutsu: You need some more ninjutsu in your arsenal, Kakashi-sensei compiled by giving you one.
    -[X]Train Elemental Jutsu: Since you have lightning, Kakashi is braking out a few older scrolls that belonged to his father. Something about training yourself to become lightning.
    -[X]Receive a Medic Certificate: Now that you are a ninja, and have received medical training from the academy, the Hospital needs to do some paperwork with you, to make you a certified combat medic. It's just a formality, but they do need it for record-keeping and assignment post genin or sensei career.
    -[X]The Megas: Your eyes glowed red. "Um, Atlas… what's going on? Why are my eyes glowing like yours?"
    -[X]Spend Time with Hiashi: Uncle Hiashi… why are you looking at me like that? Is something wrong?
    -[X]The Brother: You were asked by Itachi to help take care of his little brother Sasuke.
    -[X]D-Rank: Lab Clean up: So Orochimaru needs some assistance cleaning the blood of his equipment… Try not to faint or puke, otherwise, he might experiment on you for dirtying up his lab.
    [X]Train Teamwork: Kakashi wants to see some of the Teamwork he's been hoping you have been practicing in your spare time.
    [X] Plan: Different Path
    -[X]Spar: You want to fight one of your teammates, to get a feel for their abilities against you. (increases Teamwork)
    -[X]Train Taijutsu: Your training continues. You will be a master of your Taijutsu, and hopefully, it will be great.
    -[X]Train Genjutsu: Your genjutsu skills are lackluster… in fact, they are almost nonexistent.
    -[X]Wander the Village: You want to wander the village. You're old enough to find your way home after all.
    -[X]Care for Neji: Your brother may be raised by your aunt… but you will not accept being away from your brother. You need to begin to truly teach him the way of being a genius… without the whole… clan dispising you for being a cripple.
    -[X]Help Others: You will go to the Hospital and demand they set up a psych ward. There are several people within these walls that are lacking psychological help.
    -[X]D-Rank: Babysit Naruto: Kushina has asked ou all to babysit her son so she can get a day off. Why do you have a bad feeling about this?
    [X]Train Ninjutsu: You need some more ninjutsu in your arsenal, Kakashi-sensei compiled by giving you one.
    [X]The Brother: You were asked by Itachi to help take care of his little brother Sasuke.
    [X]D-Rank: Lab Clean up: So Orochimaru needs some assistance cleaning the blood of his equipment… Try not to faint or puke, otherwise, he might experiment on you for dirtying up his lab.
    [X]Plan: Pierce the heavens!
    [X]Fly me To the Moon: You look at the Last Pilot… at you, and smiled. "Do you want to fly?"
    [X]The Tip of the Spear: Futaba is requesting your help… something about looking for some meteoric iron at the border of the Land of Fire and the Land of… Where are we going again? Wave?
    [X]D-Rank: Cat Problems: The Fire Daimyo's cat is loose again… now you have to find it without killing it. Shouldn't be that hard?
    [X]Help Others: You will go to the Hospital and demand they set up a psych ward. There are several people within these walls that are lacking psychological help.
    [X]The Megas: Your eyes glowed red. "Um, Atlas… what's going on? Why are my eyes glowing like yours?"
    [X] Plan PV
    -[X]Train Ninjutsu: You need some more ninjutsu in your arsenal, Kakashi-sensei compiled by giving you one.
    -[X]Train Teamwork: Kakashi wants to see some of the Teamwork he's been hoping you have been practicing in your spare time.
    -[X]Spar: You want to fight one of your teammates, to get a feel for their abilities against you. (increases Teamwork)
    -[X]Fly me To the Moon: You look at the Last Pilot… at you, and smiled. "Do you want to fly?"
    -[X]Help Others: You will go to the Hospital and demand they set up a psych ward. There are several people within these walls that are lacking psychological help.
    -[X]The Tip of the Spear: Futaba is requesting your help… something about looking for some meteoric iron at the border of the Land of Fire and the Land of… Where are we going again? Wave?
    -[X]D-Rank: Hospital Shifts: Since you know Healing Palms and are a ninja, you can intern at the hospital without having to go through the painful and time-consuming training period. Apparently, someone put a good word in for you.
    [X]Recive a Medic Certificate: Now that you are a ninja, and have received medical training from the academy, the Hospital needs to do some paperwork with you, to make you a certified combat medic. It's just a formality, but they do need it for record-keeping and assignment post genin or sensei career.
    [X]Spar: You want to fight one of your teammates, to get a feel for their abilities against you. (increases Teamwork)
 
IIRC Orochimaru wound up having a kid with no spouse and unknown trouser equipment.
I'm having very conflicting feelings trying to come up with an answer for that.

Therefore, I will not.

Also @veekie I must ask... How in the ever loving hell, do you manage to show up everywhere seemingly at once? do you have Shadow Clones or something? Are you immortal? Are you reading my mind!?
 
The Last Goodbye
The Last Goodbye:

(Jiraya POV)

You hated this place… the mournful silence, the ever downpour of rain as if the gods themselves are weeping for the souls of this place. The dead were going to walk the very earth, and have nothing but the mud, the water, and the clouds to greet them.

Those children you mentored… they were not children anymore… and they were not the children you mentored. They were consumed by violence, and death.

Why? That was the only question that mattered to you.

Why would she come here?

Hopefully, soon, you would find out. And bring her home.

The sounds of footsteps behind you put you on edge, but the smell of snake both relived you from the worry of an ambush and infuriated you. "What are you doing here Orochimaru?" You asked.

"This is a team affair." He stated, his voice somehow calmer than before. Angrier.

"And you didn't bring Sensei?" You questioned.

"The old man deserves to be with his wife, for what little time he has left," Orochimaru stated. "I didn't want to trouble him with this news."

"I thought you said you didn't want to come? That it was a waste of time?" You replied.

Orochimaru sighed. "We were there for her through all her troubles." The image of Dan, and Nawaki flashed through your mind. "We'd be shoddy teammates if we weren't there for her now."

He walked up to you and placed a hand on your shoulder. "Now come on Jiraya."

"You know… I always suspected you would be the one who would defect, on your quest for immortality." You stated.

Orochimaru gave a smile. "Shut up Jiraya… It seems the village has far more to offer me than it did under Sarutobi… Plus with Danzo gone, there's no more threat of dying."

"For that, I think we can both agree." You stated.

You both started walking towards the Rain village. "Remember when we used to blame Danzo for everything that went wrong during my pranks?"

"How could I forget… funniest time we ever spent time together." Orochimaru stated. "That, and seeing you getting the shit kicked out of by hundreds of women."

"They don't understand the true literature I write!" You complained. "And how I am lovingly describing their bodies with my prose."

"Keep telling yourself that."
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Tsunade was waiting for you, along with Shizune… a battered and tortured Shizune.

Your eyes narrowed and you felt the wrongness of this situation. The wrongness and the evil that reeked from this wretched place just kept reminding you of Hanzo, and his near-unstoppable onslaught.

You hated this place… and what it turned people into.

There was a person standing beside her, but cloaked in shadow, and hiding beneath a hat, it was impossible to tell. Though he looked like an old man… and while you didn't want to make an assumption on a traitor… it wouldn't be wise at this moment.

"Tsunade," you stated your teammate's name firmly. "What the hell have you done?"

Tsunade looked terrible. The genjutsu that she always wore, a mirror of beauty and strength had faded, showing how old she had become. She looked so old… so tired of everything that had destroyed her life. Her hair grey as mist, her eyes sunken, her skin, covered in scars.

She said nothing, but she looked down at Shizune. "Take her home Jiraya. She doesn't want to be here." Her voice sounded robotic, like the life was gone from it, sucked away, as she finally snapped, and cursed the world for keeping her alive.

Orochimaru was silent, but he walked forward and scooped the girl up. She was shivering and you could see the wounds that she suffered, healed… but not by Tsunade. She would need a medic to be sure she was not infected.

"What happened to you Tsunade?" You asked.

The man must have said something, as she sighed and looked back to him. "Be quiet. The only reason I haven't killed you is because Pain forbade it."

She turned back and looked at you. "I'm tired Jiraya. I'm tired of this world taking things away from me. I'm tired of seeing the same damn thing happen, over and over again."

"Than just stop… come home, and just… stop. There is nothing scary about taking a rest when you feel you've done enough."You replied empathetically. You knew what she was talking about.

"I can't…" she paused, and tears fell from her face, mixing with the rain. "They can bring them back… these people can bring back Dan, and Nawaki from the dead, and make them stay alive. And for them, I can't leave. They can finally see a world at peace. Grandfathers dream will be a reality."

You were floored. It was impossible. "Tsunade… they are lying to you, what they promise is impossible. "

Orochimaru seemed intrigued, but instead, he just said this. "It requires sacrifice Tsunade. Nothing comes in this life for free. You may lose a part of yourself… a part you cannot get back."

Wait… when did Orochimaru gain a conscience? Who was this person and what have you done to your snake bro?

"You think I don't know that Oro? Are you so blinded by your own mission for immortality that you don't care about anything but yourself?" She stated.

"No… I merely realized the risks I would have to take in order to achieve it." Orochimaru stood up straight. "And you Tsunade… you were the best of us… a person who is far better then she believes. You are not a person willing to kill, murder and destroy to get what she wants. You are not that person."

Tsunade sighed before she nodded. "Maybe you don't know what person I am, and neither do I." Her choice was clear. "Leave… this is your final warning before I come and kill you both."

You frowned… before you saw the necklace in her hand. "Hand over the necklace then."

Her eyes widened. "What?"

"If you don't believe in your grandfather's dream or legacy… stop holding onto his legacy." You stated.

The pain flashed in her face, and her face morphed through anger, sadness, and finally regret. The necklace flew across the sky and you caught it. "Leave."

You nodded. "Very well."

Orochimaru followed beside you as you both walked.

"I didn't think she had it in her to defect." He stated. He was sad… maybe… you couldn't read him right now.

"I didn't think she would either… guess things changed more than we both thought." You stated.

AN: Enjoy my drunken writing that may somehow fit into canon. Maybe... I'm tired.
 
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The man must have said something, as she sighed and looked back to him. "Be quiet. The only reason I haven't killed you is because Pain forbade it."
Must be someone important, Pain doesn't mind infighting TOO much considering how often Kakuzu killed his partner. He only stopped when he was given one that was literally immortal. Either Danzo or Obito, probably.
 
Must be someone important, Pain doesn't mind infighting TOO much considering how often Kakuzu killed his partner. He only stopped when he was given one that was literally immortal. Either Danzo or Obito, probably.
Just saying, people have power... and that power protects them.
 
That is both really bad for everyone in Konoha and really sad in general, yet it still somehow feels a bit in character with early Tsunade. Very well made.
 
That is both really bad for everyone in Konoha and really sad in general, yet it still somehow feels a bit in character with early Tsunade. Very well made.
I try. I really do.

People who think they know shit about anything about how I run my quests and calling me a bad QM with no context for it tends to bring out my story telling A game.
 
Careful people might get the idea to try to provoke you.
In which I say... If you do provoke me... I'll make you all fucking wish that you would have chosen beginner difficulty, so it would be like we have now instead of hell on earth.

Because I'll bump the fucking difficulty on ya for a turn or two... just so I can watch you all squirm like the ants you are, before you beg me for mercy... or ragequit I don't care which, because you brought it upon yourself.

But enough of my threats to become Old Testament God on this Board smiting you if you begin to poke me like a bear:

How was the omake?
 
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@Magoose I think that you've forgotten something very important about Tsunade, which is that at this time in her life she has hemophobia. She's essentially useless as both a fighter and, more importantly, a healer. While her betrayal only slightly suspends disbelief, the fact that anybody would even want her after finding out about her PTSD induced disorder (Something that would've come up especially with the state Shizune is in) is what truely breaks the scene for me. It is well written though
 
@Magoose I think that you've forgotten something very important about Tsunade, which is that at this time in her life she has hemophobia. She's essentially useless as both a fighter and, more importantly, a healer. While her betrayal only slightly suspends disbelief, the fact that anybody would even want her after finding out about her PTSD induced disorder (Something that would've come up especially with the state Shizune is in) is what truely breaks the scene for me. It is well written though
All I will say is that I did this more for the goodbyes between Jiraya, Orochimaru and Tsunade, and any detail I forgot was... well forgotten as I focused on that only. Could It have been better? maybe, but I still think the product was good enough for the purpose i wrote it for.

Tsunade was actively recruited by them, so they know what's up and don't care. They saw worth in her, even with that issue that hinders her healing capabilities.
 
In which I say... If you do provoke me... I'll make you all fucking wish that you would have chosen beginner difficulty, so it would be like we have now instead of hell on earth.

Because I'll bump the fucking difficulty on ya for a turn or two... just so I can watch you all squirm like the ants you are, before you beg me for mercy... or ragequit I don't care which, because you brought it upon yourself.

But enough of my threats to become Old Testament God on this Board smiting you if you begin to poke me like a bear:

How was the omake?
Kind of enabling trolls to punish the group for the doofs tho
 
I really liked this Omake. I especially liked Orochimaru's lines.

You both started walking towards the Rain village. "Remember when we used to blame Danzo for everything that went wrong during my pranks?"

This too. 'Blame Danzo' meme; I never tire of it. :D
 
Since Plan Responsibility unfortunately has no chance of winning, I'll vote for the plan among the two leading ones which had more overlap.

Let's pray that Hiashi's social action isn't time critical... because neither of the potential winning plans includes that ominously phrased action.

[X]Plan: Amazing changes
 
I will call the vote a little early today if only because I'm worried about the time it will take for people to roll the dice.

Calling the Vote: Plan Amazing Changes wins.

Now on the subject of Rolls.

I need a volunteer to roll seven dice for the turn.
 
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