I think Infinite's best chance at redemption is A Mr. Tinker situation where he genuinely doesn't remember his last life at all beyond subconscious stuff
Yeah that's probably what's happening rn
Take away all mention of his past in my onake and replace "reformation" with rehabilitation amd you probably get what's gonna be cannon here if infinite is being redeemed
 
Oh, and just an idle thought, but If I was a negaquester behind Sonic, hearing Eggman's running a racing tournament would make me vote to go crash the party.
 
It's only been 3 turns and people have written more than 400 omakes for the quest in a couple of months.

It's crazy, granted I'm also guilty but I only wrote a single fixer page.

Edit: Actually with media and spreadsheets it's likely a whole lot more.
Yeah the Fixers for the Riot Office definitely get a lot of omakes, glad I was able to join the third vote this time.
 
Pretty good. However, since you are asking for advice I do think it feels a tad bit fast. I think it needs a bit more doing rather than saying. Usually if you want to communicate something in a story, actions are better than dialogue, and dialogue is better than narration or thoughts.
Yeah it's a problem I tend to have
I've only ever written drabbles and tech document style omakes before

Narrative ones I struggle with
 
Eggman's refusal to use mystical objects beyond power sources and ways to mess with sonic means Eggman himself couldn't do it. Could absolutely see... ~80% of our heroes doing it.
I don't know...if the result is of the mystical being's own power trapping them in their personal hell for all eternity to stew in the fact that HE was the one who did it to them....

...I think Eggman's Ego would make an exception for such a case :p
 
OK, what's the plan of attack? We know, honey is definitely gonna zero in on the angry red man.

Who should we focus? We know that we're definitely zeroing in on him as well. But that leaves our other hero units. We need someone to distract metal sonic and silver sonic well us and honey and probably caana try to knock him out

Because the only reason metal still under control is because the angry red man is focusing on him so if we knock him out, metal comes back to us silver sonic still has Chuck's virus in play and that still needs to activate. So right now I think we should have two people, distracting metal sonic one person handling, silver sonic

If we think he's a power hero unit and if we're correct that means he probably has the same amount of HP Zomzom had when he was uninjured in wave one so Zavok has possibly 5 hp

If there are three hero units wailing on him we have the possibility of dealing three damage to him and if one of the hero units crits, we could do 4 damage
 
I don't know...if the result is of the mystical being's own power trapping them in their personal hell for all eternity to stew in the fact that HE was the one who did it to them....

...I think Eggman's Ego would make an exception for such a case :p

I think another part of it is Sonic inflicted the worst punishment he could think of on Djinn. At least, I would assume Sonic would hate being immobilized for all of eternity above most other ways you could theoritically punish sonic.
 
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