Have no idea what's going on with this chapter. is way more disjointed than even your normal.
So, Team Gai did notice things were off, but pretended not to because they were going to strategize. But, since they don't know Sakura, and Sakura doesn't know them, this was not communicated and Sakura decided to confront the "innkeeper" herself, thus the battle.

Neji finds some hostages, who show gratitude with drinks, and find out Sakura has surprisingly low tolerance for alcohol.
 
Sakura has surprisingly low tolerance for alcohol.

A low alcohol tolerance implies a person's body can't break down alcohol very fast, and thus they get drunk very easily.

Sakura did not get drunk. She violently expelled the substance before she could even swallow it.

It seems the taste is just absolutely revolting to her to the point it made her sick.
 
I don't think this adds up to an explanation yet either. People don't taste things with their lips. Frankly, if we're meant to take the line at face value, this has to be more "system breaking the rules of physics" stuff.
Since she didn't actually want to drink alcohol, this counted as an Academy-level hostile attack and she automatically dodged it?
 
It could also be that the system enforces age restrictions just like her games do. She should check if she can gamble and view adult content (preferably offscreen, for the safety of the thread).
 
incapacitating her with a few missing parts so they could interrogate her
Bit hard to incapacitate someone who can weaponise their hair.

She'll ask Iruka back home maybe, unhelpful as he was before, he probably has tons of experience with this exact thing.
Who will once again refer you to Kakashi.
Yes yes I know he is a dick but he does have the answers you are looking for.

"Ah…" Sakura trails. That's a pretty accurate, reasonable, and harsh criticism actually. Neji comes off like a complete pompous ass but he's not dumb. She's smart, really smart, but she's not thinking about other people enough. She's forced her team to work with her by memorizing the kind of thing she'll do and predict her, but that's not how a healthy teamwork should go.
Impressive self-reflection. We shall see if it comes to anything.

I have already looked into it with the Byakugan to ensure it's not poisoned further
…he can see solvent compounds? Hax! Hax I say!

There was that whole year where one of their extra classes just kind of poisoned them every day. Not a lot, just enough to give them a good idea of what being poisoned feels like, and to raise their natural tolerances. It was normally during chakra training, so that their bodies could get used to manufacturing a chakra response to illicit substances.
Didn't that evil teacher put her through exaggerated conditioning? Might have messed up more than her pain tolerance.
 
I think her reaction to the booze, is because it was poisoned... Judging by her thoughts about the training to teach them if something is poisoned, and the reactions to it.

So...yeah, Neji seemingly failed...quite badly at that. Cause the alcohol seems to have come, pre-poisoned. Which is one way to get one over the Byakugan...
 
Tenten might actually have a scroll for that. Ninja tools and seals are pretty good at locking things up, if nothing else.
There's a corpse-storing seal, but canon doesn't let you seal living things (magical artefacts and other late-Shippūden nonsense notwithstanding). Regardless, the issue is incapacitating her to begin with. Once you're in a position to think about locking her up, you could just shave her bald.
 
I liked this chapter! The main vibe I got from it was that even in an ambush scenario Sakura is now capable enough to handle herself (even pulling off "dumb anime shit") but is still inexperienced enough with her power and the ninja lifestyle that she didn't manage to incapacitate instead of kill an inferior opponent, had a guilt response to said killing, and didn't think to communicate with her allies instead of charging ahead, something she intends to work on in the future and seems to understand the ramifications of not doing so.

All-in-all a lot of development happened in a short-span of time and we as the reader know more than Sakura about where she is is always nice. This development all happened while keeping to the general theme of grounded wackiness the story has. I do think it would probably benefit from a bit of a re-write to make the action clearer in the future but I clicked as soon as I saw the update and have enjoyed this nugget of story :)
 
There's a corpse-storing seal, but canon doesn't let you seal living things (magical artefacts and other late-Shippūden nonsense notwithstanding). Regardless, the issue is incapacitating her to begin with. Once you're in a position to think about locking her up, you could just shave her bald.
You never know when you're going to need that hair growth-inhibiting seal.
 
Have no idea what's going on with this chapter. is way more disjointed than even your normal.
The one before last was pretty simple: The innkeeper was shady so Sakura tried to question her (alone, like a moron) and then she attacked Sakura with her hair.

This chapter, Sakura impaled the innkeeper (who was a secret ninja) on a tableleg when she kicked a table at her, only intending the table as a distraction so she could hit her with her sword, had a moment of regret, then went to talk to Team Gai about it.
 
So, Team Gai did notice things were off, but pretended not to because they were going to strategize. But, since they don't know Sakura, and Sakura doesn't know them, this was not communicated and Sakura decided to confront the "innkeeper" herself, thus the battle.

Neji finds some hostages, who show gratitude with drinks, and find out Sakura has surprisingly low tolerance for alcohol.
I also needed this refresher, thank you.

…he can see solvent compounds? Hax! Hax I say!
If the Uchiha can make fire that burns for 7 days without any additional fuel, conceptually, warp, resurrect, trap people for days, and make a giant suit of mech.
Neji can check for solvent compounds.

Didn't that evil teacher put her through exaggerated conditioning? Might have messed up more than her pain tolerance.
He did, yeah.
I think her reaction to the booze, is because it was poisoned... Judging by her thoughts about the training to teach them if something is poisoned, and the reactions to it.

So...yeah, Neji seemingly failed...quite badly at that. Cause the alcohol seems to have come, pre-poisoned. Which is one way to get one over the Byakugan...
I can at least confirm, it was not poisoned.
Alcohol is poison though.
There's a corpse-storing seal, but canon doesn't let you seal living things (magical artefacts and other late-Shippūden nonsense notwithstanding). Regardless, the issue is incapacitating her to begin with. Once you're in a position to think about locking her up, you could just shave her bald.
It does however, let you teleport people using seals. We learn that in the Chunin exams, and then never again.
I do think it would probably benefit from a bit of a re-write to make the action clearer in the future but I clicked as soon as I saw the update and have enjoyed this nugget of story :)
I was actually running a Quest specifically to try and increase my fight scene writing abilities.
But that died because I'm stupidly busy with work. The story's patreon is really kicking off lately though, if it gets a lot higher, I might have the time again.
 
It's shounen/a coming of age story.

If the adults were competent, the kids wouldn't really have a lot to do lol
That's true.

"Why didn't Kakashi go in the dungeon with Sakura and Sasuke?"

"Cuz uh... fuck you." Genuinely all I got.
It's a story about kids, I dunno what to tell anyone.
I know it doesn't make sense, I fuckin.
I get it XD
 
It's shounen/a coming of age story.

If the adults were competent, the kids wouldn't really have a lot to do lol
Yeah, there's only so much story you can get out of "The kids then informed the Local Authority and the plot was neatly resolved."

I think Animorphs is one of the few stories that had young teens resolve the plot without making the adults look like morons.
 
Right that is true.
But yeah the scrolls in the chunin exams summon exam proctors.
Which woulda been cool for everyone to know, given Orochimaru running around, but they didn't want the kids to know that.
Because everyone in Konoha is incompetent.
I always assumed that there where a lot of restrictions on those otherwise the 4th was kinda a hack.
 
Well... It was also Naruto's dad's whole thing.
Ehh... not exactly. FTG is a ninjutsu first and foremost. The seals are also applied as ninjutsu rather than scribed (cf. Minato vs Tobi). More generally, Kishimoto is super vague on what is and isn't a seal (unless you want to just say "magic + writing = seal"). In the anime, Minato's FTG seals aren't even mystical--they're literally the phrase "sword of shinobi love", written in kanji.
 
It does however, let you teleport people using seals. We learn that in the Chunin exams, and then never again.

A far more reasonable explanation is Iruka having hidden himself in the chamber (or outside, cameras are a thing) to observe, and then jutsu in.

Same effect, but without creation of a seal far more advanced than FTG (since we're talking FTG that is also seal-side activated, bicomponent, needs no chakra application or precise arrangement of components, has interchangeability of components. And, possibly, geolocked/proximity locked activation of as well as having realised some sort of list with sorting function attached or some such so that an appropriate proctor is summoned) while also being a terrific security risk (since any enemy getting their hands on it could summon and kill your ninjas).

Since FTG is by itself borderline-impossible hax in setting, assuming there's no more advanced mass-produced version is prudent with evidence in favor this dubious.
 
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Ehh... not exactly. FTG is a ninjutsu first and foremost. The seals are also applied as ninjutsu rather than scribed (cf. Minato vs Tobi). More generally, Kishimoto is super vague on what is and isn't a seal (unless you want to just say "magic + writing = seal"). In the anime, Minato's FTG seals aren't even mystical--they're literally the phrase "sword of shinobi love", written in kanji.
Didn't he literally throw objects with seals inscribed on them to places he wanted to teleport? At least in the early stages of the technique, for all I know he refined it later.

I don't trust the anime on that, any more than I assume the newspapers people are reading are literally meant to be gibberish when I freeze frame them and that's what I see.
Same effect, but without creation of a seal far more advanced than FTG (since we're talking FTG that is also seal-side activated,
While some of the other features you bring up may add complexity, I think this one is probably simpler. The majority of seals we see are seal-side activated. I suspect the remote activation was one of the reasons no one else ever got the technique down.
 
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