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Ride the Lightning (Worm / DC Comics Cross Over)

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GameDragon said:
Police Explorers, huh? Well, it may not be a forensic scientist, but its a wonderful start. Also, great way to figure out what she did wrong, and learning how to fix it.
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Our Taylor is a smart girl, but a scientist she is not (all praise to THE TECHNO QUEEN may she smile upon me). I figured this was both age appropriate, made sense given how I was taking her out of school, and was a sensible thing for Danny to suggest.

Fingers crossed I can make it work.
 
I'm a Boy scout (almost eagle rank) so I can safely say that there are a lot of ways that this can work.
 
GameDragon said:
I'm a Boy scout (almost eagle rank) so I can safely say that there are a lot of ways that this can work.
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Awesome! Good luck on getting your Eagle.

I'm a member of a Venturing Crew based out of Fairbanks, Alaska and have spent a couple of summers as the Camp Health Officer for Boy Scout Camp. Since I moved down here my schedule hasn't allowed me to stay active, but I always to to be supportive.
 
Shadowcub said:
I like it..........no lightning bolts?
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To be fair, she is standing still.

I have been debating how I want to work the lightning into the story. So far I haven't had her generating any. I'm trying to decide if there should be a speed threshold, or if it's something that should show up over time as her connection to the speed force increases.

EDIT: Just realized you may have been referring to the costume.
 
Intriguing take on Taylors first night, in most fics she does something that has a very high impact on the local scene but you sir have flipped that and made it so instead of being a large battle that she can point to with pride it will instead be seen as just another case of street violence. I guess what I'm trying to say is you sir have done some thing innovative and I am now watching this with interest
 
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Heads up:

When I finish the first arc (couple of chapters plus interlude left) I will be in the market for a beta reader. Please shoot me a message if interested. I am working all weekend, but will respond as I am able.
 

so here is the version with the insignia gow is it? sorry i couldnt make her skinner every time i tried she looked weird later when i wake up will probibly do another design though and that may work
 
Just a recommendation, if Taylor is very muscular (or at least athletic) she probably wouldn't be so thin in the abdomen. Otherwise that looks pretty good!
 
edmantgoog said:

so here is the version with the insignia go is it? sorry I couldn't make her skinner every time i tried she looked weird later when I wake up will probably do another design though and that may work
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You probably should have her hair tied or pulled back, or probably some kind of head covering instead.(for practical reasons) Also you could go with a more of a golden yellow or darker secondary color to compliment her brown hair if you go for the bare head look.
 
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will-fan-out said:
You probably should have her hair tied or pulled back, or probably some kind of head covering instead.(for practical reasons) Also you could go with a more of a golden yellow or darker secondary color to compliment her brown hair if you go for the bare head look.
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i did the bare head look because in cannon taylor loved her hair and had it exposed too even with her skitter mask
 
Noxturne90 said:
I think the first looks the best. The second is too minimalist, the third is too flashy, but the first is just right. Nice coloring, looks functional. Has both minor decorative while not overdoing it.
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I hate that pleather costume that the tv show flash has on it look uncomfortable as hell the color is wrong and it looks like it would restrict movements much less run in it. But I chose the female flash costume to show also. How they picked maroon as a red flash outfit I will never know.

I know just a boatload of complaints.:whistle::ninja:
 
Still working on the last chapter for arc 1. I did finish a small interlude that was supposed to be for later, but I can post it now if people want.
 
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Anyone else think that earth bet is like the injustice verse in that it tried to militarize but shit went worse too fast?
 
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Future!Taylor Tries warn Legend of the end of the world...

What will Legend do when he meets Present!Taylor?
 
thecoffeeguru said:
I plan on having him keep this close to his chest. There is also the fact that she won't be in this costume for awhile and that I have laid off the speed lightning so far. I do have a plan for when he realizes 2+2 = 4.
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Legend hated the idea that he was being handled. He should be used to it now. Legend is one of the three hero's in Worm I want desperately to like but he's satisfied with the way things are going. Maybe he gets a real heads up this time.
 
Well shit. So much for getting a proper message to the past. I wonder if it's Jack Slash causing the Apocalypse again? :l
 
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