Really? did we need to import Reverse Flash?
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A bit weird, but it'll be interesting to see where you're going with this. In the meantime, have some errors and improvements:
i => it
possibly 'infinity' instead of 'infinite' but the original can work too, I think
within => without?
i => it
possibly 'infinity' instead of 'infinite' but the original can work too, I think
fairly certain that you should use 'mind-numbingly' here
belise => belies
Can use a comma after 'Emma'
Maybe use either single quotation marks or cursive, or both, to denote thoughts?
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Actually, I went back and reread everything, I think I know where the Reverse Flash is from. And it has to do with the Hard People making Hard Decisions.
Contessa snagged a half full cup of tea that Taylor had been drinking in San Fran. Ergo, DNA, and they probably have some cape or Tinker machine that can create clones, albeit temporary clones, that have powers. Think about it, what better way to create fake evidence to force a parahuman into the Protectorate, and under the PRT's thumb. After all, there "is" no such thing as an evil clone, so the parahuman in question "had" to be the one who did it.
Contessa snagged a half full cup of tea that Taylor had been drinking in San Fran. Ergo, DNA, and they probably have some cape or Tinker machine that can create clones, albeit temporary clones, that have powers. Think about it, what better way to create fake evidence to force a parahuman into the Protectorate, and under the PRT's thumb. After all, there "is" no such thing as an evil clone, so the parahuman in question "had" to be the one who did it.
FTFY, IIRC the text editor for posts on SV can't do cursive.
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Matematically speaking that "infinite" is still only 1 in 52.
And Reverse-Flash...hmmm. You know "Emma Barnes" is phonetically similar to "Eobard". And Eobard was obsessed with Barry Allen, to the point of having mutlipe cosmetic alterations to pass as a twin for him.
As has been stated repeatedly on SB, Shards can't do anything to the speed force. And this taylor is using negative speed force.
There's also a ton of stuff that can be used to prove the flash didn't do any crimes committed by the evil one. Like Armsmasters lie detector. Also cell phone pings and knowledge of the flashes personality.
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Sorry, despite the hook, the last chapter really didn't do anything for me. Flash has some interesting villains (Captain Cold, Mirror Master, etc) in his roster but I never felt Reverse-Flash (at least in any of the incarnations I knew) was interesting or even fun to read about - even before all the "It was me, Barry!" memes.
Part of that might be the hook's resolution - Madison is from a family that escaped an Endbringer cult?
Woah, wonder what ramifica- uh, Taylor, what, uh, wut. Madison's unexpected history was far more interesting to me than Evil Goatee Taylor (TM), and then the latter immediately made it all moot.
I'm still going to keep reading, though, in case you manage to pull this off.
Part of that might be the hook's resolution - Madison is from a family that escaped an Endbringer cult?
Woah, wonder what ramifica- uh, Taylor, what, uh, wut. Madison's unexpected history was far more interesting to me than Evil Goatee Taylor (TM), and then the latter immediately made it all moot. I'm still going to keep reading, though, in case you manage to pull this off.
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Well... fuck. And you had to make Madison more interesting before killing her off! Damn you.
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Well... fuck. And you had to make Madison more interesting before killing her off! Damn you.
Killing boring people is boring.
Also everything is not what it appears to be. Remember the lesson of Jerry.
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Whoohooo! Love me some flash!!!
Now i can say it! "Flash! Aha she's gonna save every on of them!!!" sorry couldn't help myself. Fav B movie theme song.
Now i can say it! "Flash! Aha she's gonna save every on of them!!!" sorry couldn't help myself. Fav B movie theme song.
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Heh, Arc 4 Arc. Your wife sounds like an awesome person and has a great sense of humour.
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She's put up with me for 15 or so years :-D
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Dam, this really picked up quick. Maybe I missed it but when were the heroes made aware of her ability to phase through mater? Or better yet when did Taylor figure out she could do that? The ability to literally reach into anyone's head and pull something out has massive implications. Unless I'm forgetting something this is the first it's come up in the story.
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Edit: two chapters how???
Edit: No, three!
Edit: two chapters how???
Edit: No, three!
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Are you sure about that?
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...but what happens afterwards?
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Nah, he's just a Terry Pratchett fan.
That's not cursive, that's italics. There is, in fact, a difference.
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Oh whoops, you're correct. I got my terms mixed up.
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I'm also missing Sütterlin in the editor
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It was at the end of the last arc. Clockblocker tried his handshake prank, but Flash was faster than the timelock and the Speedforce said fuck you and kept him frozen to his glove. Taylor had to figured out the phasing trick to get him out of the time lock glove. Than Explosians shook the room and was like fuck it im out. Ran through the wall in front of all of them. There you go.