Alright, what weapon should Akemi have?

  • Let her keep the gun!

    Votes: 9 33.3%
  • Give her a sword!

    Votes: 10 37.0%
  • More Magic!

    Votes: 6 22.2%
  • Hand to Hand!

    Votes: 2 7.4%

  • Total voters
    27
  • Poll closed .
My one gripe with this is that you solely made this with only pokemon in mind. If we're going to something like this right, then the setting should have been a crossover with another monster-centric series, like Digimon or Monster Hunter.
As i said I had Pokemon in the head. But now im kinda mad i didnt think abou tdigimon (Spirit evolution/Biomerge/Armors?) Or MH (That would be so RAW) Dibs on Razewing Rathalos.
 
Solar. WHY?! That's 4 in the span of 1-2 updates!
IT CAME TO ME AS I SLEPT YESTERDAY! IT DIDNT LEAVE ME ALONE! Hell I was originally planning on also making a part 3 to the Void within with a slight Halloween twist! I was gonna Have Crysbel claw a enemies chest open for intimidation porposes as Piggie fought a Megatron Expy for their Third Armor!

Edit: out of context it sounds bad, now that i said this out loud...
 
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As i said I had Pokemon in the head. But now im kinda mad i didnt think abou tdigimon (Spirit evolution/Biomerge/Armors?) Or MH (That would be so RAW) Dibs on Razewing Rathalos.
I have ideas for archetypes (idk for digimon):

The Common (essentially the "light" version of KR and MG):
  • Trainer (you who brings out the very best in them)
  • Hunter (you who fights against nature to bring balance)

And the Obscure (essentially the "dark" version of KR and MG):
  • Burst Warrior (you who draws power from their very best)
  • Rider (you who fights alongside nature to bring balance)
 
I have ideas for archetypes (idk for digimon):

The Common (essentially the "light" version of KR and MG):
  • Trainer (you who brings out the very best in them)
  • Hunter (you who fights against nature to bring balance)

And the Obscure (essentially the "dark" version of KR and MG):
  • Burst Warrior (you who draws power from their very best)
  • Rider (you who fights alongside nature to bring balance)
Oh... thats gooood. Hmm... I would say trainer is perhaps weaker than most but best in traing monsters.
Hunter is perhaps the Stronger than most except Burst Warrior But has plenty of resources.
Burst Warrior is the most powerful, but you probably are not liked by the other faction plus elders may hate you outright.
Rider is like an inbetween Tainer and Hunter, way more variety than hunter but weaker than them.
 
…holy shit, that's an impressive amount of writing. Solar, you can probably take a break until… 2.14, you've done enough. Maybe write for Project Prometheus for a bit, pls?

+50 EXP, +10 EP, -A Bit Of Kermie's Sanity :V
Sorry for the sanity damage lol. I think the main reason I started to go so hard here its because Im.. kinda low on ideas for Project Prometheus, I still have the BtH special for JU once the rest of the team make their public apperance. And maybe one or two other ideas? Ill need to see since i have a couple of projects coming up. But sure ill stop feeding Rei OExp for now.
 
Imagine burst hearts the contain Elder Dragons in this setting. That would real hype. Dibs on PriMalzeno if that's the case.
Deal. Also, guys stop giving me ideas for omakes. I wont post more to save kemies sanity and anu semblance of balance in this quest but now I have 3 omake ideas. Part 3 of the game AU and a Digimon and MH versions of the quest I just posted.
 
Hmm... I i think for Burst hearts maybe the REALLY strong Elders are villain exclusive or not available. Things like Safijiva, Alantreon, Oltura and Fatalis for example.
 
I believe this is supposed to be Charcadet? I assume you mean the pre-evo of Armorouge and Ceruledge?

Also as far as the Pokemon Rei starts with in this "Void Version", I'd choose Murkrow, Hisuian Zorua, and Shadow Riolu. The Shadow Riolu being what pushed her to action in leaving Umbra, seeing them manage to corrupt a baby pokemon of what should have been a righteous evolution line.
Imagine burst hearts the contain Elder Dragons in this setting. That would real hype. Dibs on PriMalzeno if that's the case.
Lameeeee, I'm just gonna take Nergigante for a +150 to Physical :V
Normies. I'd go for something like-
Hmm... I i think for Burst hearts maybe the REALLY strong Elders are villain exclusive or not available. Things like Safijiva, Alantreon, Oltura and Fatalis for example.
Well damn, Oltura plan fell through. Fallback idea: Voljang from Frontiers. I will wield the Punchy Fire Monkey's power! And if that doesn't work, Brachydios! (Can you tell I love the idea of punching people so hard they suffer consequences?)
 
Sorry for the sanity damage lol. I think the main reason I started to go so hard here its because Im.. kinda low on ideas for Project Prometheus, I still have the BtH special for JU once the rest of the team make their public apperance. And maybe one or two other ideas? Ill need to see since i have a couple of projects coming up. But sure ill stop feeding Rei OExp for now.
You could also always do what I did and pitch your own new Module for EXCEED with an Omake

Also isn't there the uh... Well there is Monster Rancher, that robot one, if you wanted you could do Palworld if you felt like it.
 
Ok. What form of the void will you be using for the MH version, Frenzy Epidemic from MH4, the Black Blight from MH Stories 1 or something original?
Hmm... Maybe a little of both B and C?
Kinship Stones that are tainted by the black Blight and then further enhanced with Elder Dragon Blood. Maybe the Blood of a New Elder Dragon Final boss? Or Fatalis, because that guy can apparently do everything. Maybe make it a Ancient Civilization Technology that was eventually discovered and repurposed?
 
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You could also always do what I did and pitch your own new Module for EXCEED with an Omake
Ill see if i can come up with something later.
Also isn't there the uh... Well there is Monster Rancher, that robot one, if you wanted you could do Palworld if you felt like it.
Never touched those series so probably not.
Also better idea for the blood to enhance/ make the Burst Hearts. The Equal Dragon Weapon. Really make it Eldritch horror here. And make it so Elders DESPISE Burst Warriors, going out of their way to kill them if they know they are in the area. Which makes the Guild come for the BW because of the rampaging angry dragons.
 
Hmm... Maybe a little of both B and C?
Kinship Stones that are tainted by the black Blight and then further enhanced with Elder Dragon Blood. Maybe the Blood of a New Elder Dragon Final boss? Or Fatalis, because that guy can apparently do everything. Maybe make it a Ancient Civilization Technology that was eventually discovered and repurposed?
Oh, so like the second season of the MH Stories anime?

You should probably binge watch it in your spare time.

Also, highlighted your typo.
 
Now here's a funny thing to consider/potentially inspire Omake with... If this version of Earth receives an invite to the Great Race of Oban, how well would they do?

Edit: replaced the link with something that more easily explains what's being referred to.
 
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I just had an idea for an omake:

Perhaps For Love, Or Maybe Justice: The Abridged Quest

I just have no idea for what jokes to put in it.
 
I just had an idea for an omake:

Perhaps For Love, Or Maybe Justice: The Abridged Quest

I just have no idea for what jokes to put in it.
Well you may need to take a personality trait or quirk in the characters and run with it...
Hmm make Rei Talk out loud with her spirits? But nobody but her can hear them and she does a lot of what they say since she wa raised as a assasin and has trouble adjusting to everyday life? But the monsters definition of normal, is everythin but.
Also her friends know she is an assassin and she was hired because "having a assassin working in my shop is totally the plot of a manga".
Akane- Hmm maybe enphasize her sheming personality, making it that she does a lot of "Keikaku" or make her just out and dissapear because she is " the Stealth master".
Himari- just make her more of a gamer or the deadpan snarker a la Abridged Frieren.
Kirata- Uses her portals for everything since she short, or just make her more of a gremlin.

Edit:
Mako: Just go full pirate. But make him absolutely serious for one scene and actually scary when he is.
Jun: hmm IDK, make him even more of the straight man?
 
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