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Perhaps For Love, Or Maybe Justice (A Tokusatsu/Magical Girl Quest)

Alright, what weapon should Akemi have?

  • Let her keep the gun!

    Votes: 9 33.3%

  • Give her a sword!

    Votes: 10 37.0%

  • More Magic!

    Votes: 6 22.2%

  • Hand to Hand!

    Votes: 2 7.4%
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There we go... Managed to edit all of the Tsuki's into Yorumi's. Thanks for the advice Kermie, Ashen Cross and Zetakille.
 
SolarGemX said:
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It may take a while but by god am I going to figure out a way to put these two (well more like seven) in the story. I have plans for something with them but that'd require me to tell you all about something that hadn't happened yet. +50 EXP, +5 EP.
 
Kermie said:
It may take a while but by god am I going to figure out a way to put these two (well more like seven) in the story. I have plans for something with them but that'd require me to tell you all about something that hadn't happened yet. +50 EXP, +5 EP.
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Glad you like them! To be honest I cant beleive I wrote SO much. I tried Implmenting what you showed me about plurals. Went with the Trauma angle and alters, and by the time I added Makoto to the Mix it was already 3k words...and then I wanted a rival... and then I un intentionally made a Novelle reference and it just spiraled from there...
 
Ok, so I'm done finalizing drafts for the Eiganjo questlines and some of the two parter questlines y'all may or may not do. Outlining sucks for me, never really managed to do it well.

I'm just gonna put something up to you guys tho rn. Would you all be ok with me replacing one of the Ninjas with Dormouse in your five-voice ensemble during Eiganjo? Considering all the capitalism jokes I've made with her. Not a full vote, just asking.
 
Kermie said:
Ok, so I'm done finalizing drafts for the Eiganjo questlines and some of the two parter questlines y'all may or may not do. Outlining sucks for me, never really managed to do it well.

I'm just gonna put something up to you guys tho rn. Would you all be ok with me replacing one of the Ninjas with Dormouse in your five-voice ensemble during Eiganjo? Considering all the capitalism jokes I've made with her. Not a full vote, just asking.
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I dont mind. Besides I pretty much thought you decided which voices got the spotlight for the chapter. Let the Anti capitalist Hacker talk I say! Who knows maybe they will give some good insight?
 
It's normally a random wheel but in this case she can get slotted in specifically if you want.
 
In general I like deepening the characterization of certain voices — there's a lot of breadth but sometimes it's hard to remember which is which. Giving one some time closer to the spotlight, in a narratively resonant way, makes sense to me.
 
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In general I like deepening the characterization of certain voices — there's a lot of breadth but sometimes it's hard to remember which is which.
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Yeah, that's a common problem I've had. Like some voices are recognizable from a mile away (Dormouse, Cheshire), but for some people like, say, Fuma, there's a lot of overlap. Fuma's supposed to be the silent one of the SSS trio (Hatsume is another foil to Rei like Atry, Kizaru is surprisingly well adjusted dude) but that doesn't really work when a. Gargoyle is there and b. The whole gimmick shared between all the voices is "oh shit! (THING) is happening! (Helpful advice/commentary)" He also has a disguise specialty but Rei doesn't really have any way to do that at the moment, so 🤷
 
HOLY FUCKING SHIT?! I know this is somewhat off-topic, but I COULDN'T just not share it:
WE'RE GETTING THE LORE ANIMES BITCHES!!!!!!!!
SKY STRIKER AND THE WHITE STORYLINE ARE GETTING ANIME SERIES STARTING IN APRIL NEXT YEAR!

For those unaware, the "White" storyline is the setting where Fallen of Albaz and Ecclesia are from. Ecclesia being the spirit we'll be getting once Cleric is fully awakened.
 
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    • Well, that's interesting. Rolls tomorrow once I finalize a few other things. We're going to Japanese Floating Palm Springs, everybody!

    (Oh, and Akemi's finally going to get to use that perk of hers. How fun.)
     
    ....you are milking yhe Alice in Wonderland stuck in the internet 24/7 personas huh?
    Mind you Im enjoing it.
     
    @ing everybody right now. Dice rolling starts in 5 minutes, at .
     
    This update won't have any combat or BIG revelations, that's for Pt. 2 or maybe Pt. 3, so don't be too worked up if you hit low numbers. In fact, there's a roll I want you to fail just for the joke.
     
    First up. One d100 mental check (would have been technical, but Akemi's sworn off using any search engines after all the inconvenient porn that somehow popped up the last time she tried)
     
    1 EP, (yes really) gets that up to next level. Also goddammit I wanted her to accidentally read lesbian CEO/secretary smut, there's always next time.

    Mental check again, this time for Rei.
     
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