Rectifying Mistakes and Clearing Misconceptions I: Den and the Marching Mare
Rickshaw
Officially a Boss Mob
- Location
- The Land of Boots and Ten Gallon Hats
*Awakens* Ah yes, I am well rested now and can properly answer any questi-
Okay, while it was nowhere near as obvious as I wanted it to be, the only thing Mary did is put you in the humbler room. Den preemptively offered to open the tavern (i.e. wipe tables in the morning) out of his own concern that he might be kicked out. If I had been more awake, the conversation would have gone something like.
Den: So it turns out I have this Seal thing and I'm supposed to let you know.
Mary: Oh, alright. Well, I'm required to put you in separate housing by law, so you can have one of the side rooms across from mine. As a precaution, you should probably sit away from other customers so they don't notice my bard has a Seal. Actually, it might just be better off if-
Den: No, wait! Please don't kick me out!
Mary: Wha-
Den: I'll do anything! Anything at all! Just don't take away my music!
Mary: I didn't say a-
Den: I'll help you open in the mornings! I'll wipe down all of your tables while I'm here, for free! Just please, don't send me away...!
Mary: ...I was gonna say you should probably not tell anyone you're Tainted, but I'm not turning down free labor.
Mary: Okay kid you got yourself a deal.
But I was dead tired from 8 continuous hours of travel to sell a chair on Craigslist, plus filming for a project, and it was midnight when I began writing. My mind was, shall we say, absent.
Going to your actual questions, Mary would want to keep Den because booking another bard/entertainer in a city where most people musically inclined are indoctrinated into the church is a difficult task. So far in the story, both of the entertainers who have played in the Marching Mare have been foreigners. Might be a trend, might not be, you'd have to wait until the week is over and you're no longer the designated bard. And as a thing which I forgot to put down in the update, you do get tips from playing so you are earning money. There weren't a lot of customers there (Mondays are never very lively) but you got a few coins that made up for at least a day or two of your total rent. You are playing, mostly, to keep a roof over your head and earn a little extra, as your coffers are big enough for you to afford food and lodging for a time but not much more.
Going back to the post you made from a previous update, I am surprised that you connected a tourist trap with high class. It makes sense in hindsight, but I didn't make that connection since in my town, our "tourist trap" hotels are a block away from an adult store, a liquor shop, and a nightclub. Not obvious ones, but if you were to peek into the windows of the commercial center next to them you'd figure it out real fast. Just because something seems fancy and nice doesn't mean it isn't infected to the core with corruption. And hey, that's one of the themes of this story.
Your point about pricing was accurate though. I'd love to give you all exact numbers so that you could see relative values, but as I'm still fixing the kinks and editing coinage values to reflect a mix between "true value" money (the "bronze, silver, gold" trope) and a "representative value" system (using common metals to manufacture coins that symbolize certain monetary values despite not actually being worth that much). Suffice to say that I made edits to the monetary system in response.
If anyone has further story concerns, don't hesitate to ask. I'll be near a computer most of the day and should be able to answer questions that don't require me spoilerizing anything that should be addressed in-story.
Oh, son of a motherless goat. Let me grab my notes.
Okay, while it was nowhere near as obvious as I wanted it to be, the only thing Mary did is put you in the humbler room. Den preemptively offered to open the tavern (i.e. wipe tables in the morning) out of his own concern that he might be kicked out. If I had been more awake, the conversation would have gone something like.
Den: So it turns out I have this Seal thing and I'm supposed to let you know.
Mary: Oh, alright. Well, I'm required to put you in separate housing by law, so you can have one of the side rooms across from mine. As a precaution, you should probably sit away from other customers so they don't notice my bard has a Seal. Actually, it might just be better off if-
Den: No, wait! Please don't kick me out!
Mary: Wha-
Den: I'll do anything! Anything at all! Just don't take away my music!
Mary: I didn't say a-
Den: I'll help you open in the mornings! I'll wipe down all of your tables while I'm here, for free! Just please, don't send me away...!
Mary: ...I was gonna say you should probably not tell anyone you're Tainted, but I'm not turning down free labor.
Mary: Okay kid you got yourself a deal.
But I was dead tired from 8 continuous hours of travel to sell a chair on Craigslist, plus filming for a project, and it was midnight when I began writing. My mind was, shall we say, absent.
Going to your actual questions, Mary would want to keep Den because booking another bard/entertainer in a city where most people musically inclined are indoctrinated into the church is a difficult task. So far in the story, both of the entertainers who have played in the Marching Mare have been foreigners. Might be a trend, might not be, you'd have to wait until the week is over and you're no longer the designated bard. And as a thing which I forgot to put down in the update, you do get tips from playing so you are earning money. There weren't a lot of customers there (Mondays are never very lively) but you got a few coins that made up for at least a day or two of your total rent. You are playing, mostly, to keep a roof over your head and earn a little extra, as your coffers are big enough for you to afford food and lodging for a time but not much more.
Going back to the post you made from a previous update, I am surprised that you connected a tourist trap with high class. It makes sense in hindsight, but I didn't make that connection since in my town, our "tourist trap" hotels are a block away from an adult store, a liquor shop, and a nightclub. Not obvious ones, but if you were to peek into the windows of the commercial center next to them you'd figure it out real fast. Just because something seems fancy and nice doesn't mean it isn't infected to the core with corruption. And hey, that's one of the themes of this story.
Your point about pricing was accurate though. I'd love to give you all exact numbers so that you could see relative values, but as I'm still fixing the kinks and editing coinage values to reflect a mix between "true value" money (the "bronze, silver, gold" trope) and a "representative value" system (using common metals to manufacture coins that symbolize certain monetary values despite not actually being worth that much). Suffice to say that I made edits to the monetary system in response.
If anyone has further story concerns, don't hesitate to ask. I'll be near a computer most of the day and should be able to answer questions that don't require me spoilerizing anything that should be addressed in-story.
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