By the by, should I open a new thread for this?
I'm not sure what music would be best, but as far as splitting it into it's own thread, I figure just keep posting here until you feel it's more convenient to seperate them. That way you'll avoid the whole 'subconscious discontentment leads to loss of motivation' pitfall that we've all witnessed causing the end of some author's better stories.
Personally though, I'm happy either way as long as you're happy to keep writing.
 
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Zouken is not Goauld. He can't access to Sakura's senses. Also, naive of Shirou give Sakura access to his workshop while she has those bugs in her. Not even creating a bounded field that lessened the connection between the bugs used by Zouken.
 
Zouken is not Goauld. He can't access to Sakura's senses. Also, naive of Shirou give Sakura access to his workshop while she has those bugs in her. Not even creating a bounded field that lessened the connection between the bugs used by Zouken.
Ofcourse he can't access sakura senses. He simply knowns the general location of where sakura is.
 
Well, Zouken is fucked, Kuro's style has the potential to kill him after the HGW begins... Just to be completely sure try to get a catalyst to summon Medea.

Her two versions have a noble phantasm capable of fix Sakura and with that a world-ending threat is null too. If I remember correctly there was a guy on the Beast Lair that said that it was theoretically possible for Sakura to consume Angra Mainyu and get his shinnies but it was basically a lot of theoretical things that somehow made sense about using the Origin of Sakura aka Imaginary Numbers aka Domain of Absence that was erased some time ago.
 
The End of self insert into Shirou Emiya and the Beggining of Kuro Emiya
With more money pouring in than I knew what to do with I could finally get the things I needed for my projects.

By the end of the second month, I had spent over a million dollars buying things.

Not useless things.

Things to prepare.

This was not a story.

This was real life and I needed to prepare for everything.

I could get killed at any moment.

With my physical at their limits, I now turned to other things I began working on other ways to gain more power and get stronger.

The shed was in the corner of the house was not my workshop.

No, it was now simply the entrance to my workshop buried deep underground.

I finally cracked the code.

You know my excitement when I came to the conclusion that magical energy was simply a type of energy and would follow the law of Energy = Mass x the Speed of light squared?

Yeah turns out my theory was only partially correct.

Magical Energy was the state in between Matter and Energy.

It was in a Superposition.

All it needed is to be directed and it can be turned into matter like earth or energy like Laser beams like how Caster did.

For an equation describing a physical phenomenon, the superposition principle states that a combination of solutions to a linear equation is also a solution to it. When this is true the equation is said to obey the superposition principle. Thus, if state vectors f1, f2 and f3 each solve the linear equation on ψ, then ψ = c1 f1 + c2 f2 + c3 f3 would also be a solution, in which each c is a coefficient. The Schrödinger equation is linear, so quantum mechanics follows this.
For example, consider an electron with two possible configurations, up and down. This describes the physical system of a qubit.



where the coefficients are complex numbers describing how much goes into each configuration.

The general principle of superposition of quantum mechanics applies to the states [that are theoretically possible without mutual interference or contradiction] ... of any one dynamical system. It requires us to assume that between these states there exist peculiar relationships such that whenever the system is definitely in one state we can consider it as being partly in each of two or more other states. The original state must be regarded as the result of a kind of superposition of the two or more new states, in a way that cannot be conceived on classical ideas. Any state may be considered as the result of a superposition of two or more other states, and indeed in an infinite number of ways. Conversely, any two or more states may be superposed to give a new state...

.....

....

Ahem...Sorry about that I was lost in thought lets skip the technicalities.

So according to my calculations the if I plug in magical energy into the equation

E=mc² is the equation for a particle which has mass.

However light and energy don't have mass.

Objects that are mass-less travel at the speed of light.

So replace the mass with momentum and remove the square.

And we get E=pc for mass-less particles where p = momentum of the object in question.

Putting together this gives the formula for

E² = p²c² + m²c^4

From my research, if I plug in magical energy into the equation.

(Ti x D)/3 = E² = p²c² + m²c^4

Simplyfying the equation again we get (Ti x D)/3 = E = mc².

Where Ti is the amount of magical energy and D is the density of said magical energy.

This...

Yes..

This solves any problem might have with prana shortage.

Hahahaha

Storing prana in jewels?

Fuck it.

I can use the energy I get from fusion to create all the magical energy I need.

It also opens up a whole new box of possibilities.

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Right now I was attempting something I was looking forward to and yet something I dreaded.

I was about to uncover my Origin and Element.

Sakura was beside me holding my hand to comfort me.

This was a dangerous operation.

I could lose my life.

But I had to do this if I wanted to proceed further.

I began the casting Structural Analysis.

This time not on anything physical.

Rather on the concept of my origin...

I do not know how to describe what I experienced.

I found myself in front of something.




My breath hitched in my throat as I began to understand where I was.

This was my origin the way my mind was able to comprehend

I couldn't help but be mesmerized.

My eyes snapped open to see a concerned Sakura holding my hand as my head lay on her lap.

"How long?" How long was I out?

"Just a few minutes."

I let out a sigh.

Good.

I recalled the information I just gained.

My origin was Begin/Advance.

A dual Origin like Kiritsugu.

The good news was that I was also an Average one.

Sakura looked at me her eyes curious.

"Well, I have a Dual Origin, Begin and Advance. And I believe I am an average one."

Her eyes widened. "Just like nee-san."

I nodded. "Yeah." I nodded.

An Idea popped into my head.

"Hey Sakura, I have an idea."

And so I told her the ridiculous Idea that just entered my head.

Her eyes shined with joy and hope. "Kuro-kun you're watching too many movies."

"No really. It might actually work, so you in?"

She nodded and smiled hope filling her heart.

If this works I might be able to rid Sakura of all the crest worms in her and rid the world of Zouken Matou completely.

It would be ridiculously expensive but for Sakura, it was worth it.

"Alright then come on." I began to drag her to my shed.

It looked like a extremely ordinary shed.

Except it was the entrance to my workshop underground.

Standing in the center of the shed with Sakura beside me I pulsed my prana in morse code through the ground.

... .- -.- ..- .-. .- .. ... -... . ... - -.- --- .... .- .. ·-·-·-

A few seconds passed and mechanical whirring began as the floor opened in front of us and a cylindrical lift made of glass rose and opened, once we both were in, I pressed the big red button and the lift began to descend and accelerate, the floor of the shed covered above us leaving no trace that we were there.

As the lift descended for about a minute the workshop finally came into view and the lift began to decelerate.

My workshop built with Sakura's help.

I couldn't have come this far without her.

An advanced complex where technology and magic built things that would boggle the minds of the modern-day magus.

Large were grown within the workshop to keep the air breathable and self-sufficient even without going to the surface.

A nuclear reactor powered everything here.

It was a workshop with many different workshops. Each one for a different specialization and now we was heading to the Robotics Workshop.

Why?

To build the ultimate anti-Zouken Weapon and to free Sakura.

Nanites.

or Nano-robots to be exact.

A year and 2 Months Remaining

 
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huh, well that's one way to deal with the Zouken issue I presume, although wouldn't he start to take precautions around a recently wealthy magus in Fuyuki? actually I'm interested to see how Rin reacts.
 
huh, well that's one way to deal with the Zouken issue I presume, although wouldn't he start to take precautions around a recently wealthy magus in Fuyuki? actually I'm interested to see how Rin reacts.
An aneurysm about how a self taught, more or less, magus is one of the most bullshit masters? Or how basically is the husbando of her sister and she never knew it?
 
The Beginning of Kuro Emiya Part 2
Today was a Saturday.

I woke up bright and early at dawn and began stretches and light exercise.

Once I finished my daily exercises I took a bath and headed to the kitchen to begin preparing a meal. This was for Taiga, so she has something to eat.

Today was a special day.

I was going to go on a date with Sakura.

Yes, you heard it right!

Sakura was now officially my Girlfriend.

I was going to make today a memorable day for Sakura.

Something she can look back fondly.

I have everything planned out.

Once the meal was done I placed a lid on the pan and switched off the stove and began to get ready for my date.

Heading to my dresser I picked out the clothes I had prepared specially for this occasion.

Something special...

Wearing the clothes I turned to the mirror to take a look.

A black leather jacket with a fur collar and spiked shoulders. A simple black necklace. Two pockets on both sides of my coat and two golden stripes on the jacket stretching from my shoulder to my hand. Black leather fingerless gloves. A black leather pant with yellow lightning stripes on each leg.

Combing my hair back a bit I was ready.

Oh almost forgot my gold-rimmed pink sunglasses.

The only things I didn't have were golden braces and a belt with an engine, oh and a cigarette. Otherwise, my suit is perfect.

Hmm, I wonder if this could be considered cosplay?


Naah.

Since he exists in this universe I don't think this counts.

Wearing my black boots and locking the door behind I walk up to the shed and pulsed a prana morse code into the ground.

.--. .-. --- .--- . -.-. - ---··· - . -.-. .... -. --- -... . .- ... -

With a mechanical whir, the ground parted and my ride rose out of the ground.

The Yamaha V-Max.

Now Reinforced beyond ridiculousness.

Seriously I reinforced every single thing I could find and even some concepts on some of the parts.

The tyres had their [Grip] and [Durability] concept reinforced.

The Chasse? Reinforced it's [Integrity].

Engine? [Power] and [Efficiency].

Transmission? It had the concept of [Transmission] so I reinforced that. I highly doubt there was going to be a bike in the world that could shift as fast as this baby.

Fuel tank? [Preservation] and [Containment].

Brakes? [Conduction] and [Friction]

Radiator? [Conduction].

Handles and throttle? [Control].

Lights? [Clarity].

Seats? [Comfort] for comfy butts. The most comfortable Motorbike seat.

The nitrous system? [Power].

The suspension? [Rebounding]

The Absorber? You got it. [Absorbtion]!

This bike looks ordinary on the outside.

But on the inside, I highly doubted there was a bike that could rival this one today.

Perhaps in the future? But this is 2002. Almost 2003.

I could imagine Saber in her tuxedo on the bike.


Shaking my head I pushed up my sunglasses and sat on it, inserted the key and kickstarted the engine to life.

The four-cylinder engine purred as I gently rolled it out of the shed and onto the street.

An excited grin split my face as I let pulled on the throttle and felt the acceleration as I zigzagged through the streets at 40 miles an hour.

Any other bike and I would not have been able to do this.

Casting structural analysis on the bike I searched for those memories of Saber riding this baby.

Once I got them I accessed them letting them flow into me as I felt the skills of B-rank riding.

My grin split wider as I accelerated now more confident in "MY" driving skills towards the Matou mansion.

"WOOOOHOOOO! YEAAAA!"

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Coming to a stop in front of the mansion I turned to see Sakura and my jaw fell.

Holy shit! Damn you look Beautiful.

I think I said that out loud from how much Sakura is blushing right now.


"Ahem." I fake coughed before extending a hand.

"Would this Lady Sakura care for a ride?"

....


"Pfttt" She covered her mouth and started giggling. Her giggles were like jingles in the wind.

"Hey!" I felt my cheeks heating up from embarrassment.

"Oh come on. It's not like I've ever gone on a date before." My face fell. But on the inside I was euphoric.

At that Sakura burst out laughing and slowly wiped her tears as she got on the bike behind me.

I was going on a Date with Sakura!

I think my heart was going to pop out of my chest from how hard it was pounding.

I think my heart skipped a few beats when she wrapped her hands around me.

Lifting the kickstand I gently pulled on the throttle as I pulled away from the mansion.

Jesus christ I can feel her breasts against my back. Also, I think I just had a heart attack, if this keeps going on I'm not sure I'll last the whole day but I would die a happy man if I did die from something like this!

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A year and 1 Month Remaining
 
And now the heavens feel route is activated for the holy grail war...
Ah, I can't say I blame you the wholesomeness is exploding me.
I'm curious to see how Shinji and issei feel about this?
P.S I was listening to this while reading thought it fit pretty well.
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wait with the crest worms removed would sakura still be the gate?
 
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What if archer was freed from alaya by a Rob in exchange for him doing a Job.

For example.

Kill Salem.

or perhaps defeat Scion.

or some other impossible task?

Would Archer accept it?
OK, first Rob, what's that?
Second: probably I mean Archer basically wants to stop being a hero right? and continuing to stay under alaya's control doesn't benefit him whereas being 'freed' he can try and kill his past self or end his own suffering.
 
Archer wouldn't believe it, but he would probably accept if ROB says he just wants to watch what he would do for entertainment, now I'm sure Alaya would just take another Emiya Shirou and make him into a new EMIYA.

If ROB says this would be the result of him accepting, only another Emiya Shirou would take his place he probably wouldn't accept.

Now I have another idea, ROB releases Archer, but he gives him a list, is there one of the conditions in ?????? (get a harem) that ROB says he'll find out when he meets this condition

Archer accepts if he does not know that he will only condemn another Emiya Shirou in his place, but the ROB is not required to say that.
 
list
1.Defeat at least 5 evil overlord
2.Save at least 5 dhamsel in distrest
3.Train at least 3 next generation Hero
Bonus
1.get a harem
2.troll at least 3 evil powerful being
 
Worm QA Unleashed
An Idea Popped into my head...

An Idea for a Story or a quest.

Alright, let's begin.

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She cried, sobbed and tore her throat out. She banged the door repeatedly. There was filth all over her with bugs and THINGS crawling all over her. She begged for help. Yet none arrived.

Not even her stalker tried to help her.

Night fell and she was still stuck.

What was the use of living?

Why was she even here?

Crack.

Her mind slowly began to fall apart as she fought to keep herself awake.


She tried to call for help but all that came was a whisper.

Why?

Why?

Why?

Why do they torment her?

Why would they not leave her alone?

Tears had long since stopped falling.

Crack.

What was she supposed to do?

What could she do?

No one wanted to help her.

No one wished to side with her.

She was worthless.

Crack.

No one wanted her.

Despair.

Crack

Her Mind slowly began to sink in the depths of despair faster and faster it broke as one by one everything that made Taylor Herbert, cracked and and despaired.

Crack.
It
It had long passed what it would have usually taken Taylor to trigger but in this universe, Taylor did not trigger. She refused to break, however, this only damaged her mind even further.

Finally, as the clock struck Midnight she finally broke and let go. She had remained and struggled until her last shred of what made her human finally broke.

Destination.

Crack.

Agreement.

Crack.

Trajectory.

Crack.

Agreement.

Shatter.

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The next morning the Janitor would open the locker only to find it filled with all sorts of biohazards, however that is all he would find.
 
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