Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Omake Writer Instructions:

There are four fields you need to fill out.

Omake Link, which is just a link to your first omake for the turn. This makes it easier for me to read them as I do the update - without this it's tough to know off the bat which omake were written this turn, and to properly

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You could try combat level, it is simple and accurate
The thing is, is that what is being discussed is actually stepping away from the sort of scope of "how killy" and this is trying to quantify "How effective are you?" and "What are you most effective at?" because the clan has poison masters, array engineers, terraformers like Vitruvian, alongside the combat folks.

You can still record how effective you are in combat because this Impact measure is supposed to cover that as well, but Chron and Alectai are effectively trying to blanket expand it.
 
Aurelius Mancinus [DEAD] - Good seed submission.
Aurelius Mancinus - Good seed submission.

Physical Description:
Of average height, he keeps his beard and head shaved as taking care of it otherwise seems a waste of his time and energy. He is more a scholar than a warrior, but considers his body to be part of his foundation and so keeps himself in good health. With green eyes and creased brows already from frowning over scrolls. Fingers often inkstained due to the copious notes he tends to take. Has lightly magnified glasses for reading and to see objects of study with more detail.

Background: Aurelius is the son of a mortal family. Both of his parents are architects, skilled at building structures even amidst the shifting sands of the desert they live within. Among other mortals, they are well known for their skill. They are not privy to the secrets necessary for the greater constructions of cultivators, not having a cultivator in their line for hundreds of years. However, they did teach Aurelius something very important indeed, something that has stayed with him ever since he was a child. The foundation you build upon is the most important part of any task. A truth he has kept in his heart for as long as he could remember. Something he's seen the proof of every year of his life. Other's less focused on the foundation of their constructions found them collapsing as the sands shifted or as battles shook the very earth around them. But the home of his family never failed, having been built on a foundation costing more than the entire rest of the house, decades of effort from his parents, banking contribution points to save up for the work and the materials to be utilized.

As Aurelius grew from a small child he looked around him at the world, at how others did things and how they compared. Seeing again and again, the foundation, the beginning of every action and every plan being such a key component in the success or failure of the endeavor, especially anything meant to last long term. By the time he way 10, Aurelius was convinced that this truth applied to everything in life: buildings, relationships, business, and of course the clan itself. Yet what the foundation of something is wasn't always clear to him. The foundation of the clan especially was something that he found himself wondering over and over again. Was it the people themselves, the elders, the contribution system, or something else?


While his parents intended to teach them what they knew of architecture and construction and he was a dutiful son and learned from them, his heart was not in it. He became obsessed with the question, what is the foundation of the Clan? He read the clans histories, at least those available to a child such as him, searching for an answer he could finally be satisfied with. In the process of this he at first only looked to the past, but as time passed and he failed to find an answer that felt true, he began to pay more attention to more contemporary works. Instead of thousands of years ago, moved to hundreds, then tens. And it was here that he finally found the answer he had searched for.

The bloodline of the clan. It was so obvious to him now. The bloodline of the clan kept them all together, it gave them strength, it identified them to each other, ensured that throughout everything they remained family. It wasn't the only thing, there were certainly cultivators within the clan who didn't share the bloodline, but they were not the foundation of the clan, but embellishments added to it. No it was the bloodline was the foundation of the clan. With that understanding he craved to learn all he could of it. Every piece of information regarding the bloodline of the clan he could get his hands on he devoured, every scroll, every lecture, every piece of art depicting it. Everything. He soon realized though, that the foundation of the clan was flawed, there was a dire weakness to it, something that pervaded the bloodline and effected everyone in the clan. While the Blood of Bronze made the Golden Demon Clan strong and resilient it also made them slow. This lit a fire within Aurelius, no wonder his clan had been so devastated, no wonder they were in such a dangerous position, teetering on the brink of destruction. The foundation of the clan was flawed!

Upon this revelation Aurelius knew what he had to do. For his clan, for his family, for himself. He would repair the foundation of the clan. He would fix the flaws in the Blood of Bronze, removing its weakness. He did not know how such a thing could be possible, he didn't know how long it would take, had no idea of how the bloodline worked, or what caused it. He did know however, that it would take far longer than a mortal life could possibly last, would require skills beyond anything a mortal could possibly attain. Such a path could only be tread to completion by a cultivator. Something he had not previously thought important to him, he could simply have been an architect, lived a good life, had a family. But he could not truly help his clan. Could not repair its foundation that way.

The foundation of every endeavor is an important one, the more so the longer the foundation needs to last. On the path to fixing the foundation of the Golden Demon Clan, his own cultivation and his understanding of bloodlines and the Blood of Bronze in particular were the two aspects of the foundation all further progress would be built on. And so he began to study this new task, to learn of it what he could, and found in himself the potential to cultivate. It was but the beginning, but he was patient and he would not stop, he would create the best foundation for his path that he could, and he would see his clan grow strong again.

Unique Cool Thing: Really good with Bloodline research, especially Blood of Bronze: Intended to be beneficial towards his goal of improving the foundation of the clan, the Blood of Bronze. Even more specifically, keeping it from slowing down those who have it, though any improvement is better than none.

Current Cultivation: 1st Heavenstage, total noob.

@occipitallobe
 
Why? This was the original part that made Good Seeds worth writing for. Without these, only LSTs, Healing, and Cultivation Boost are left.

Mechanically, things are changing. You're not losing out on cool stuff in terms of story. The problem is my original approach which was 'address each Cool Thing individually and think about it in every situation' does not scale.

Last turn was huge, and the Good Seed number keeps increasing. For the quest to continue and actually work, I need to implement some changes. My original system was designed to service five Good Seeds.

I figured it'd be fine with ten, if somehow I got that many. It seemed incredibly unlikely, but it would work for big numbers like ten, right? Problem solved.

Now we're in the mid-50s.

So my current focus is "How do I make this system sustainable to avoid me burning out and moving to Antarctica where there's no internet?'.

Rather than having me personally quantify everything per roll per person per turn, I'm trying to quantify everything in one number. This isn't 'exactly how good your character is all the time', but rather 'how impactful are they on average?'

So good Fate will just be 'you got to use your ultra spear and murdered everyone.'

Bad Fate will be 'you're a great spearman but you got ambushed by a poison master, spear didn't matter, sorry."

The background stuff will still exist, cool stuff will still exist (the new system is going to get rid of cultivation boost entirely and make it part of Fate, but more on that later), but the quantification will be up-front and on a table rather than having me calculate it anew for each item each Good Seed has each turn.

Sorry to threadgoers that things are slow. It might be a few days or even a week (hopefully not nearly that long) before the new system is ready to go, but it makes sense to slow down now and make the system workable rather than keep lumbering forward with a system that seriously can't keep pace.
 
So how many good Seeds are active omakers? Because I can tell you Alex and Ajax are unlikely to get an Omake any time soon.
 
12th stage is cool and all, but I don't want to be stuck as a Qi cultivators for the next 150 years.

Can someone who have spreadsheet access update Demetrius cultivation goal to be the 11th stage.
 
Huh, how are previously issued Cool Things translated into this fighting advantage?
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 7 - Antonius
Behold! Antonius! @ReaderOfFate I summon you! Attend to me!
[Antonius]
An AEE Omake


Heaven may bless me
If it gives with it's right hand
It takes with it's left

When he decided to create his own Legion, Alcaeus had thought to create a strong and professional army. He had chosen to take in body cultivators of all types of course, because that was what he practised and he had ensured that they did not neglect their minds because only a healthy mind could maintain a healthy body.

Largely, he had succeeded in his efforts. His legion was always drilled to perfection and incredibly well-behaved. His men regularly pushed their bodies to perfection and could debate the merits of each other's methods with a strong theoretical grounding.

Yet what he hadn't anticipated and perhaps should have was the fact that different men had different definitions of perfection and even if they understood where the other was coming from they could still disagree. Vehemently. Constantly.

He still considered his greatest accomplishment the implementation of his competitions. He told them that they could simply prove their theories using the strength of their bodies and then he created a culture where they were so engrossed in the competition that their disagreements were quickly forgotten.

They were always a joy to watch but something else had caught his attention today. He was drawn away from the cheering and challenges of the gymnasium by a peculiar and familiar scent. It had the clear scent of bronze that had turned green with age yet was paired - impossibly - with that particular frailty of mortals.

He ended up following it to the entrance to the gymnasium and found one of his new juniors arguing with a mortal. It was young Oriana if he wasn't mistaken. She was perhaps a bit too quick to argue and had begun doing so with the young boy. As you listened you realised that the argument was over recruitment. It seemed like the young boy had come here instead of heading to general training.

He took a sniff. Yes, the boy was the source of the smell. Interesting. He was large and had strong features though he didn't look like a fighter. What drew his attention was the green bronze coating his hair. The bloodline manifesting itself as mortal was common enough but to have already turned green with age? That he had never heard of.

And his features were surprisingly familiar. It took him a moment to place it. Ah, so that was Emmanuel's son. How nostalgic. Ancaeus could remember the same look of determination he wore in young Ambrosius so well. Perhaps with such a peculiar case, he could justify giving it a bit of his own attention.

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Antonius wasn't having an entirely good day. It had been over a week since he had found out that he was dying and his parents had been busy discussing what to do ever since. They needed to do something, not just talk about it. So he had to take it into his own hands.

He didn't know how to get recruited into the Sect but he knew where his father's legion was stationed. So he went there to get some help. Unfortunately, rather than recruiting him or telling him where he could get recruited, the first woman he had met instead spent the time lecturing him.

"Look kid, this isn't the recruiter's office." She told him for the tenth time. "You need to head down there to join up and go through basic training. If you're a good fit for us, then we'll recruit you."

"Okay, ma'am." He answered, trying to project his helplessness. Then just tell me and I'll be on my way! "I would appreciate it if you could give me directions."

She rolled her eyes. "I don't know. I haven't been there for decades. Look, I-" She froze mid-sentence and whirled around to look behind her. "Sir! I didn't see you there. Is there something you need?"

Antonius looked behind her and noticed the largest man he had ever seen. Somehow, he hadn't spotted him before the woman drew his attention to him. That fact made the bear-sized man only more intimidating. "Sir?" He repeated out loud, looking up at the very large man.

"Indeed," The man rumbled in answer. He took a moment to examine you and then nodded at the woman next to you. "Leave this to me, Oriana. You may return to your training."

The woman - Oriana - looked at him, then back at the man who was smiling at her encouragingly. She nodded uncertainly and slowly walked away, giving the two of them a worried look as she left. Antonius stood still, looking up at the eye of the sir. "Hello, sir. I am Antonius. I was hoping to join your legion?" The man raised an eyebrow at his answer.

"Yes." The man replied, looking down at him with his smile gone. "I heard all of that. Why haven't you gone to the recruiter's office?"

"I… didn't know, sir." He replied, staring into his now-impassive face. "It was my mistake. I can go there right now."

"Wait," He said, holding up a hand. "Why did you come to my legion?"

Antonius found his eyes widening at the way the man said it. His legion. "I… know someone who is a part of your legion. That's why I knew to come here." He answered truthfully.

"Is that so?" The man's eyes sharpened. "And who might this person be?"

'My father'. That's what he almost said, but then it occurred to him that maybe his father could get into trouble for this. "I… don't wish to say, sir." Antonius finally replied.

The man - the legate perhaps? - raised an eye. "I see." The man said in a tone that was hard to decipher. "Then why don't we return to the previous question then?"

"Which question?" He asked, slightly confused. Hadn't he addressed all of them? "...Sir." He added a moment later.

"Why did you come to my legion?" The Legate asked again and Antonius realised that he was asking for his reason for joining. He thought for a moment, unsure if he should say anything.

"I have a condition, sir." He finally told him. "My bloodline is killing me and the only way to live longer is for me to cultivate."

"Interesting situation." The legate observed. "The bronze is calcifying in you even as a mortal. I can see why cultivation may extend your life."

"It's a unique mutation, sir." Antonius explained. "The physician said that he hadn't seen the like before."

"Hmmm." The man nodded. "I think I'm beginning to comprehend your situation."

Antonius nodded along, relieved. "Thank you for understanding me, sir."

"I understand why you want to join the legion," He continued, as if he hadn't heard you. "But why should we want to recruit you?"

Antonius blinked at that. "I don't understand, sir."

The Legate just looked down at him and he suddenly seemed to loom even more. "My legion is my family and you want to join just to survive. It takes resources to cultivate, boy. How can you justify us spending resources on you? Why shouldn't I bar you from joining? Or perhaps I should just end you now and save both of us the trouble."

With every word, the man seemed to grow bigger and the air seemed to grow thicker. Antonius shivered and his heart beat like thundering drums. "I-" He hesitated. What could he even say here to justify himself?

"Speak up," The man rumbled. "Tell me, boy." Antonius realised that he had taken a step back from the man. He felt like he was going to die…. But he'd been feeling that all week. Either way, he'd die.

Don't retreat. The only way is through. He forced himself to take a step forward and look into the eyes of the man judging him impassively. Then, as his heart beat ever louder, he said the first thing that came to his mind.

What could he say? "My name is Antonius…" What else was there? "...Son of Legionnaire Emmanuel Ambrosius and the Auxiliary Eleanora..." Didn't he just try to keep his father's name a secret? Damn it all. "Both of them are a service to the sect and they have raised me well. I will prove worthy of the legion or die trying."

There he had said it. That was all that he could think of. He tried to ignore the consequences his mind conjured and did all he could to stand his ground. At least this way, he'd die doing something. Then, the legate nodded and suddenly he was a lot less intimidating. "Good to know," He replied, smiling cheerfully.

"...Sir… what?" He just looked at the man without a shred of comprehension. "What just happened?"

"I was merely questioning a junior," The legate said, grinning. "Now were you not about to leave for the recruiter's office?"

Antonius' eyes widened. That felt like a dismissal. "Yes, sir." He said, carefully. "Should I leave?"

The legate considered the question. "No, no." He said, waving his hand dismissively. "Since you are here already, we'll handle the whole thing now."

"But..." Antonius looked around for a moment but there was no one in sight. "I thought it was done in the recruitment office. Not here."

"You'll still have to go through basic training. But we can get you started here," The man replied, nodding to himself. For some reason, this new persona felt far more intimidating than the last one. But before he could argue, the man placed a giant hand on his shoulder. "Come along now."

Antonius tried to protest as best as he could but he despite everything he was pulled along. Any protestations both physical or vocal are easily deflected as he guides you to where he wants you to go. All along the way, the legate was smiling.
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The legate - Alcaeus, he said his name was - had brought him to an empty sparring room. There were several raised square platforms with a ring made inside them. He stepped into one of those rings and then gestured for you to follow. Somehow, you found yourself unwillingly standing across from him and wondering where you went wrong.

"Come at me," Alcaeus said, gesturing with his hand. Antonius looked at the large grin on his face and realised he wasn't getting out of this. Fine. So he decided to do the only thing he could do. He just took a deep breath and he charged.

The legate raised a hand and Antonius found himself charging into it. A palm struck his stomach and he fell to the ground heaving. "Never been in a fight then," Alcaeus noted idly as he recovered. Antonius kicked him in his legs and bit back a shout when his shins ached like he just kicked a tree-stump.

"Tenacious though," Alcaeus commented as he lay on the ground. "However, you should be a bit more careful where you hit."

Antonius glared up at him, forgetting that he was facing a legate. Then he pulled himself up with a muttered "Yes, sir". Then half-way up, he jumped straight into an attack. The legate easily moved aside and then put his leg forward.

Antonius found himself tumbling into the ground once more. "You lack balance," The man observed, "Get up, show me your stance." Realizing that none of it was working, he complied and stood up into a fighting stance.

The legate was suddenly in front of him and he nearly stumbled in surprise. He would have if one bear-sized hand hadn't touched his fist to steady him. Antonius did the first thing that came to his mind. He punched him in the face with his free hand.

"Good," Alcaeus said, stopping the motion with his other fist with a hand. You struggled to attack, beginning to breathe heavily as this farce of a battle continued. "You are attacking weak points. And your form is not completely terrible. So you have at least seen fights before. However, it could be better." He lightly kicked Antonius' foot and pushed him into a different stance. "Better, now consider that the obvious weak point may not be a weak point."

Instead of lightly blocking as he had done so far, Alcaeus let you punch him and you felt your fist connect under his chin. Unable to hold it back, you screamed out loud as pain lanced through your hand and you stepped back, shaking it trying to ease the pain.

He let Antonius recover before he continued. "Now, if I hadn't moved my chin back, it would have shattered your hand. You must always consider your assumptions in a battle between cultivators. Still, it's good to learn common wisdom. Let me show you where to strike."

Alcaeus gestured for him to return to his stance and hesitantly did so, still nursing his hand. He was then guided through several stances and potential avenues of attack, all emphasised as not being always reliable. "You want to anticipate your enemy but very often that comes with experience and study."

Antonius was getting tired. He was breathing heavily and his body was beginning to feel heavy. He still forced himself to stare back up at the legate. For some reason, he only studied him."What else?" Antonius asked him.

The legate nodded. "You are about ready." He replied. "Let's focus on your breathing."

He looked at him with a frown. "What do you mean?"

"Be conscious of it. Breathe like I do. Move like I do." He commanded. He held your hands and began taking you through some motions. "Come on now."

Antonius found himself following the man as he turned it from a mock battle to a dance of light attack and defence. His body was pushed and stretched and he breathed as it happened. He was guided through the motions, and corrected wherever something went wrong.

His body already ached from the one-sided battle and he felt light-headed as the exertion caught up to him. It was in a near-feverish state of mind that Antonius got drawn into his own body. He could feel the tall-tale burn of his stomach and the sound of his heartbeat slowly consumed his mind.

But everything got drowned out in the monotony of the exchange. Then something clicked. It was like someone poured a glass of fresh water down his throat and he pulled on it, drank greedily. It flowed into the pit of his stomach and seemed to intensify. He drew it to his aching body and found himself moving faster and hitting stronger.

His mind sharpened once more and he used the moment of consciousness to attack. He moved faster than he had ever moved before and he hit harder than he had ever hit before. Even then, the legate caught it as easily as he had done before.

Still Alcaeus had a wild grin on his face. "Remember this feeling, young Antonius!" He rumbled. "This is qi. This is the first step of your goal. Remember the way it flows through you and never forget!"

Antonius stared at him with wide eyes and then slowly, it made its way through his mind. He realised that at least for now, he had a reprieve. That shadow of certain death that had haunted him since that moment a week ago, it was gone.

Then his focus broke, he didn't have the will to keep conscious. The tiredness from the battle and the week and everything just rushed in when he had nothing keeping it back. The world spun, and he fell into two strong hands. Get up. A part of him still insisted. But he no longer needed to listen.

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Waking up was strange. His mind felt groggy and his body hurt all over. But when he breathed in that particular way, he felt the breath travel down to the pit of his stomach and then spread across his body. It flowed rhythmically through his body in tune with breath and filled his body with strength and his mind with strange images of the world. There were three presences in the room. Two felt familiar but the closest was unfamiliar. He had a strange metallic tinge to it and his aura seemed to vibrate with excitement. It felt like it would burst out if it wasn't for a tinge of hesitance and fear keeping it in check.

"Are you sure about the results?" It was his father's voice. He stood slightly away from you and he felt similar to the unfamiliar one. The tinge of metal was so much more. It traced his body like a bronze statue. Bronze. The legion. His heart tightened as he realised that he must be at a healer's. He'd disappeared and his parents found him unconscious and part of the legion? What was father thinking? What was he going to say to you?

"Yes, sir." An unfamiliar male voice replied. It was incredibly professional, but he could still sense the excitement in his aura as he spoke. "All the damage has receded. No, better. It's integrating with him. It might even be helping boost his growth. Sure, it's lowered his lifespan in absolute terms but-"

"How is his dying later better than his dying now?" A voice interjected sharply. His heart beat faster as he realised who it belonged to. His mother was by far the strongest in the room and her presence was impossible to decipher. All he felt was this sense of intensity. He felt a shiver travel down his spine as he realised that she might be angry.

"Well, if you let me study it." The unknown male spoke again. You could feel his excitement overpowering his caution even though a touch of fear remained."Maybe I can mitigate it or at least record it for posterity-"

"Leave." Her voice was sharp and her presence flared. Antonius flinched. Fear dominated the stranger's aura and he heard a crash and then a shuffle of feet. Finally, the door opened and then slammed shut. The man's presence quickly grew too distant.

"Eleanora," His father said placatingly. "It's not his fault."

His mother growled. "He wanted to study him like-" She stopped suddenly and somehow Antonius knew that she was looking at him. Then his mother's voice continued. "Antonius. I know you're awake. Up."

Antonius opened his eyes. He got up slowly, pretending to be overcome by wariness. It gave him a chance to see where he was - a blank white room with several instruments he couldn't recognise. He was laying on a bed and got up to sit.

He looked at his father first as he did so, who turned to his mother and winced. Antonius followed his gaze and found his mother staring at him with a face that betrayed no emotion. "Yes, mom. I-"

"What were you thinking!?" He flinched at the tone of her voice. It wasn't the cool anger that he had expected. It lacked the control her aura and demeanour had suggested. Her voice was cracking with a shrill edge.

Antonius scrambled to think of an explanation. He'd gone over this conversation so many times in his head. "I-," It was the obvious solution. "It was-" It was the only way. But there was a lump in his throat. He opened his mouth, but none of the logical reasons came out. "I'm sorry." He finally said.

The words were like a release. Once they left his mouth, everything else he didn't want to say seemed to follow in its wake. "But I was scared," He explained, staring at his parents. His mother hesitated and his father had his hand out unsure whether to reach for him. "You weren't doing anything. I didn't know what else to do!"

It felt like an accusation. "I had to do it myself! You should have been there!" Why did he sound like he was ten again? He understood, he wanted to say to the shock on his mother's face. He knew that it was hard for them but still, he couldn't stop himself from saying it.

His mother moved. A second later, he felt her arms wrap around his body and he struggled to get free. She pulled him tight and he felt the wetness of his own tears on her clothes. He hugged her back and let the tears flow freely.

"I'm here," She told him. "I'm here to protect you."

That anger rose again. He struggled out from her grasp and looked into her face. Through tear-stricken eyes, he stared at her accusingly. "You can't." His heart ached at the anger in his own voice and even he wasn't sure whether he was angry at her or the world.

His mother looked stricken and regret filled him. Why did he say that? Her aura floundered with emotions but then it clamped back under control and her face filled with resolve. "Then I'll teach you," She said, some fire in her voice. "I'll teach you everything. You will never need protection from anyone again."

Antonius just looked at her, feeling lost and unsure. What could he say to that? What did he want to say to that? He felt his father come closer and then he felt two large arms wrap around the both of them. "I'm here too. I'll teach you everything that I know."

His mother looked down at him and smiled. He could see the glimmers of tears in her eyes but she looked so strong. "You are like a candle, little one." She told you, looking into your eyes. "A candle in the dark. Even if you only burn half as long, I promise you - you will burn twice as bright."

So many emotions ran through him but the determination in her eyes kept them at bay. That. Antonius decided. I want to be like that.
 
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Mildgyð is 30 which is old for someone to begin cultivating. But I realized that most good seeds are over 80 at this point, but not a single one of them seems to have gotten married or had any children yet. Then again I might have missed it. Haven't read all of them.

Therefor it seems only right that Mildgyð should have a wife just to break the trend. Is it alright if I say first step elixir works on her? She obviously will not be good good seed level cultivator, but it would odd if Mildgyð didn't raise up his wife if he can.

Actually @Alectai isn't Rina supposed to have the the strongest manifestation of the clan bloodline seen in generations? I would be kind of surprised if the the clan didn't put some pressure on her to have few kids before she risks her tribulation. I mean 13th stage stage tribulation is close to certain death for most.
 
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@Quest I can threadmark that for you. Any particular title?

Edit: Looked at the other titles. Put it as Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 7 - Antonius 1. Let me or one of the other collaborators know if you have a different title in mind and we can change it for you.
 
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@Quest I can threadmark that for you. Any particular title?

Edit: Looked at the other titles. Put it as Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 7 - Antonius 1. Let me or one of the other collaborators know if you have a different title in mind and we can change it for you.
Just put it as Antonius since it's his introduction. It's at the top of my post. Now that I've begun actually writing stuff for my good seed I'll be putting proper titles for them or at least trying to.
 
Huh, how are previously issued Cool Things translated into this fighting advantage?
Once the System is finalized and live, i believe there's going to be a exchange system
Mildgyð is 30 which is old for someone to begin cultivating. But I realized that most good seeds are over 80 at this point, but not a single one of them seems to have gotten married or had any children yet. Then again I might have missed it. Haven't read all of them.

Therefor it seems only right that Mildgyð should have a wife just to break the trend. Is it alright if I say first step elixir works on her? She obviously will not be good good seed level cultivator, but it would odd if Mildgyð didn't raise up his wife if he can.
It should be fine, as long as the cultivation remains averagey i think. But just be prepared on maybe moving the Qi Realm around depending on Occi's reples.

Antonius found himself following the man as he turned it from a mock battle to a dance of light attack and defence. His body was pushed and stretched and he breathed as it happened. He was guided through the motions, and corrected wherever something went wrong.

His body already ached from the one-sided battle and he felt light-headed as the exertion caught up to him. It was in a near-feverish state of mind that Antonius got drawn into his own body. He could feel the tall-tale burn of his stomach and the sound of his heartbeat slowly consumed his mind.

But everything got drowned out in the monotony of the exchange. Then something clicked. It was like someone poured a glass of fresh water down his throat and he pulled on it, drank greedily. It flowed into the pit of his stomach and seemed to intensify. He drew it to his aching body and found himself moving faster and hitting stronger.

His mind sharpened once more and he used the moment of consciousness to attack. He moved faster than he had ever moved before and he hit harder than he had ever hit before. Even then, the legate caught it as easily as he had done before.

Still Ancaeus had a wild grin on his face. "Remember this feeling, young Antonius!" He rumbled. "This is qi. This is the first step of your goal. Remember the way it flows through you and never forget!"

Antonius stared at him with wide eyes and then slowly, it made its way through his mind. He realised that at least for now, he had a reprieve. That shadow of certain death that had haunted him since that moment a week ago, it was gone.

Then his focus broke, he didn't have the will to keep conscious. The tiredness from the battle and the week and everything just rushed in when he had nothing keeping it back. The world spun, and he fell into two strong hands. Get up. A part of him still insisted. But he no longer needed to listen.
Nice! He has awaken his Qi and begun his journey as a Cultivator! Time to burn bright young Antonius!

His mother growled. "He wanted to study him like-" She stopped suddenly and somehow Antonius knew that she was looking at him. Then his mother's voice continued. "Antonius. I know you're awake. Up."

Antonius opened his eyes. He got up slowly, pretending to be overcome by wariness. It gave him a chance to see where he was - a blank white room with several instruments he couldn't recognise. He was laying on a bed and got up to sit.

He looked at his father first as he did so, who turned to his mother and winced. Antonius followed his gaze and found his mother staring at him with a face that betrayed no emotion. "Yes, mom. I-"

"What were you thinking!?" He flinched at the tone of her voice. It wasn't the cool anger that he had expected. It lacked the control her aura and demeanour had suggested. Her voice was cracking with a shrill edge.

Antonius scrambled to think of an explanation. He'd gone over this conversation so many times in his head. "I-," It was the obvious solution. "It was-" It was the only way. But there was a lump in his throat. He opened his mouth, but none of the logical reasons came out. "I'm sorry." He finally said.
This is nice! I like the relationship being shown of Parents that care and a Son that wants them to stop worrying.
"I'm here," She told him. "I'm here to protect you."

That anger rose again. He struggled out from her grasp and looked into her face. Through tear-stricken eyes, he stared at her accusingly. "You can't." His heart ached at the anger in his own voice and even he wasn't sure whether he was angry at her or the world.

His mother looked stricken and regret filled him. Why did he say that? Her aura floundered with emotions but then it clamped back under control and her face filled with resolve. "Then I'll teach you," She said, some fire in her voice. "I'll teach you everything. You will never need protection from anyone again."

Antonius just looked at her, feeling lost and unsure. What could he say to that? What did he want to say to that? He felt his father come closer and then he felt two large arms wrap around the both of them. "I'm here too. I'll teach you everything that I know."

His mother looked down at him and smiled. He could see the glimmers of tears in her eyes but she looked so strong. "You are like a candle, little one." She told you, looking into your eyes. "A candle in the dark. Even if you only burn half as long, I promise you - you will burn twice as bright."

So many emotions ran through him but the determination in her eyes kept them at bay. That. Antonius decided. I want to be like that.
Excellent ending showing his determination and support system! I find the problems mentioned in the Discord no longer there! Although there are some aspects that make me think he's pretty young, so i'm not sure if that's intended
 
Excellent ending showing his determination and support system! I find the problems mentioned in the Discord no longer there! Although there are some aspects that make me think he's pretty young, so i'm not sure if that's intended
To an extent. He's just sixteen after all and compared to other good seeds he's pretty sheltered. It's probably going to be around until the trials.
 
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If only 5 good seeds were expected and we have about 50 does that mean that despite everything the future of the clan is actually looking bright?
 
If only 5 good seeds were expected and we have about 50 does that mean that despite everything the future of the clan is actually looking bright?
It's more the scale getting out of hand. Like even if it was 5 good seeds, the rest would have taken a NPC role with most of the Plot drivers being the Seeds. With 50, the impact is the sameish, but now has to take into account that many plot drivers
 
Are these fifth sea invaders all from the same clan? Wondering if Mildgyð should come across some common bloodline as he processes the corpses.
 
Xiuying 2 - The First Step
Xiuying 2 - The First Step

Xiuying stayed prostrated before the cultivator, her forehead not leaving the ground for a moment, in a bid to become their student and learn how to create beautiful cuts like the one that decapitated over a dozen men from a distance at the same time. Up until ten minutes ago, her dreams for the future had amounted to mastering the art of making noodles, having lots of children and teaching them how to make noodles, and then die happily and peacefully surrounded by loved ones.

Yet in a single moment, in a single cut, she'd abandoned such saccharine fantasies for the sake of learning how to do one thing - Cut.

After the man's outbreak, they were silent in thought. If Xiuying could see the cultivator's face, they would see him obviously conflicted by Xiuying's actions. Finally, after what felt like an eternity, the cultivator let out a sigh of resignation before properly breaking the silence between him and Xiuying.

"I would like to have a second bowl of noodles before we continue." The swordsman requested. Immediately, the noodle vendor instincts within Xiuying revved back into action. Practically jumping back onto her feet, Xiuying gave the cultivator a quick bow.

"Understood, Master! Right away, Master!"

"Oi. I haven't decided on anything yet. First noodles then we can talk."

"Ah! Right! Understood! One bowl of our special spicy noodle soup coming right up!" With that, Xiuying quickly jumped into action to prepare her family's signature dish for the man who saved her village and showed her something greater than noodles.

Minutes later, a new hot steaming bowl of noodle soup was placed in front of the swordsman who nodded in approval at the sight of his meal. The man reached to grab his chopsticks before noticing the eager expression on Xiuying's face. Letting out a sigh, the man flicked his hand and something dropped behind him. Blinking in confusion, Xiuying made her way back to the front of the shop and saw what looked like a sword stabbed into the ground.

The sword, if it could still be called that, had clearly seen better days. It was horribly chipped and rusted from what had to have been decades of exposure to the elements. It was so dulled that Xiuying doubted that she could cut steamed carrots with it, that is if it didn't crack and shattered if she tried first.

"If you wish to become my student, then listen well." The swordsman spoke with a serious tone. "Take this blade and do not bother me about becoming my student until you have used it to shave every single hair from your head."

With that command, the swordsman turned back to his bowl of noodles and began slowly eating. Xiuying stared at the sword that was more rust than metal at this point of its existence, before gently picking it up to examine it more closely. The sword, despite its condition, could still cut. It was quite likely that Xiuying would also end up cutting herself in the process of cutting her hair.

Feeling the weight of the sword in her hand carefully, Xiuying closed her eyes, reliving the memory of the beautiful cut that she had seen earlier. Opening her eyes, Xiuying clenched her teeth and brought the blade to her head.

Xiuying's prospective swordmaster was about half-way through his noodles when he smelt freshly spilled blood. He hadn't heard screams of agonizing pain so he'd assumed that the girl had taken the rusted sword to either find a mirror to cut her hair as cleanly as possible (not very due to the nature of the sword) or find a blacksmith to teach her how to restore the sword into a more usable state before attempting to shave her hair off. Turning around, the swordmaster almost choked on his noodles at what he saw.

Xiuying was kneeling on the ground, holding onto the sword's hilt with a careful grip, aware that a tight grip would surely break the blade. Blood flowed freely from the jagged cuts that covered half her scalp. For the last half-hour or so, Xiuying had been solely focused on the task that the swordmaster had set before her - to shave off every single strand of hair on her head with a dull, rusted sword.

And she had been doing so without uttering a single sound.

Tears of pain mixed with the blood trailing down Xiuying's face. And yet she continued to grit her teeth and carefully saw off her hair, bit by bit, cut by cut, ignoring the pain through willpower alone. The white apron that she wore over her work clothes was splattered with blood. Her beautiful locks of black hair that she took pride in were lying on the ground, discarded and bloody. And Xiuying was only halfway done.

Despite their bloody appearance, however, Xiuying was in no danger of dying from blood loss. She was more likely to meet death due to getting an infection or tetanus from the rusted sword.

The swordmaster grimaced at the bloody sight. It reminded him all too well of the day he had stepped onto the path of Sword Law. The sword he had given Xiuying was actually the same sword that he had used to shave his own head. Unlike Xiuying however, he had the common-sense to at least get a mirror to help see where he was shaving. Although it didn't stop his head from getting cut, he didn't bleed as badly and he had fewer scars than his seniors who had done the same. Already, Xiuying was far more hurt than he was back then.

As much as the swordmaster wanted to stop Xiuying from hurting herself further, he couldn't bring himself to deny the effort and sheer concentration she was putting into the task. The only thing he could do, he decided, was to finish his noodles and get ready to clean up and bandage the girl's wounds when she was done.

Time passed and calm settled back down upon the village. The village guards eventually came around to take away the bodies of the blood bandits and thank the cultivator for saving the village. Other villagers too came to pay their gratitude to the swordsman who saved their lives and protected their peace. Quite a few balked at the sight of Xiuying's bloody task and tried to stop her, only to be held back by the swordsman who informed of the situation. Since a cultivator was involved, one who they owed their lives to, the village inhabitants didn't make much of a fuss besides voicing their concerns for the girl's wellbeing.

The sun was setting when Xiuying finally finished her arduous task. Her face was pale from both pain and blood loss. Her clothes were stained with sweat and dried blood. Her bloody wounded scalp, bereft of hair, almost seemed to glimmer in the light of the sunset. Slowly, Xiuying got back onto her feet, ignoring the pin and needles in her legs from kneeling for so long.

No longer completely focused on shaving her head, Xiuying finally noticed that the sword cultivator had long since finished their meal and had been watching her while holding a simple first aid kit in their hands.

"You actually did it. Alright then, let me first help with the mess." Seeing that Xiuying had done as he had requested, the man went over and began cleaning up her wounds. Xiuying hissed as the swordmaster dabbed some kind of medicine on her head after cleaning up the dried blood on her head. A cool soothing sensation soon could be felt on her head after the man wrapped what looked like really high-quality cloth over her injuries.

Satisfied with their work, the cultivator poked Xiuying, and immediately all the blood on her clothes simply disappeared like magic. After looking over her body in amazement, Xiuying turned her eyes to the man, eagerly waiting for him to speak. Seeing Xiuying's innocent eyes, the cultivator grimaced before steeling himself for the next part.

"Girl, what is your name?" He asked. Xiuying frowned before realizing that she had never given her name to the man. How silly of her!

"Xiuying. Um, no family name since we aren't nobles or anything." Like most mortal villagers who were concerned with getting through the day, she didn't have a family name. Her great grandfather said they did once but that was a long time ago. Something about being disgraced and exiled for making terrible noodles and having their family name stripped from the records of some far off land, something like that.

"Xiuying, right. I will tell you this straight out. Right now, you are the biggest idiot under this heaven." The man informed Xiuying. For a moment, Xiuying's heart fell, believing that she had failed. However, she realized that the man's tone was not mocking or insulting but rather, nostalgic. Seeing Xiuying's confusion, the man continued. "Fortunately for you, Sword Law is a Dao that favours idiots such you and I."

"Then...are you -"

"Yes. Since you are determined to walk down this path, the least I can do is teach you how to do it properly." The man began, much to Xiuying's delight. "I am Jiang Chen. From this point onwards, you shall be my student."

Xiuying couldn't help but grin. This was it. She was going to learn how to make beautiful cuts.

"Now that you're my student, you'll address me either as Master or Jiang Chen Ten Meti. 'Ten' translates to 'student of'." He continued.

"Then...That would make me...Xiuying Ten Jiang? Master?" Xiuying added, struggling to think of a better, more suitable title for the swordmaster of beautiful cuts. Jiang nodded. "And Meti was your own master?"

"Yes, Meti Ten Ryo, Meti the Destroyer, one of the greatest swordsmen who have ever lived: she was the one who taught me much of what I know about the sword." Jiang paused, making a conflicted expression. "She was also a dirty vagrant who lived in a barrel in my hometown marketplace turned to the side, and was often drunk, blackout drunk, or just a horrible person."

Xiuying didn't know what to say to what her new master just told her about his own master.

"But enough of that old hag, let's talk about more important stuff. Xiuying, what do you know about cultivators?"

Xiuying blinked in slight surprise before taking a moment to try and recall everything she knew about cultivators. "Um, I know only what a few cultivators who were passing by the village told me. That cultivators don't grow old, they practice martial arts and possess magical powers. Oh, and the Golden Devil Clan are a clan of cultivators who protect the land that we live in and are really nice to us mortals. And Blood Path cultivators are monsters who eat people to get stronger,"

"That's...about right, I think. Never heard of the Golden Devil clan but they seem nice, something that is more uncommon than you'd think among cultivators. Never heard of Blood Path cultivators either, eating people was more of a demon thing. At least I don't need to clean your mind of lies." Jiang sounded pleased and a little wistful from hearing Xiuying's answer. "Now listen to me well, Xiuying: Much of what you know of cultivators are true."

Xiuying beamed.

"And most of them are dicks."

"...Eh?" Xiuying was confused.

"In my experience, most cultivators care only about three things: getting more powerful, their reputation, and pleasure." Jiang continued, his tone calm and somewhat stiff, as though he was reciting something from memory. "The major rule upon which their whole society is based on is this: if you're stronger than someone, you're better than them. Thus, the Cultivator World is a cut-throat society where everyone only thinks about getting stronger, where the weak become even weaker and the strong become even stronger. The lucky ones die midway, the sane ones choose instead to become farmers. Or noodle vendors. Or so I was told by my own master."

"But master, you are a cultivator, aren't you?"

"Yes, I am. I am fortunate enough to find satisfaction in a masterful cut, a warm bowl of noodles and other easily obtained pleasures. I have never been particularly prideful or caring about my reputation - in fact I wish I wasn't so famous in my homeland since too many idiots keep thinking they can kill me when in fact they can't. Oh and power is relative I guess."

"Um, okay?" There was a small niggling feeling that her master was not all that he seemed to be but Xiuying decided to ignore that feeling since she wanted to learn how to cut beautifully and she was going to risk not learning to question her master.

"There are many ways, many paths, and many Dao, to become a Cultivator. My own Dao, The Path of Sword Law, is based on mastering the Principal Art of Cutting. Shall I tell you the story that my teacher told me when I first became her student?"

"Ah! Yes please!"

"Right then, how did it go...Okay. Meti, my master, from the age of thirteen practised every day with the straight sword. They followed a strict vegetarian regimen and harsh training of five barefoot sprints between cities, two bells of squats and breathing exercises, and three bells of sword drills and resistance training. By the age of sixteen, their body was a steel edifice. My teacher was so often mistaken for a man that they began to wear their hair long with no pins and unbind their breasts. They could break stone with their hands with no effort, they could sprint between Jinyang and the Southern dominions in a day or less and barely strain their breath. Their mastery of the sword complete, they enlisted in the Army's third legion where they were widely respected as a swordswoman of incredible power."

Xiuying nodded to show that they were following their master's story.

"When it was time for them to face their first real opponent, the Colossus of Sichuan, in their youthful pride and immense skill they brought all their training and mastery to bear. Scarcely half a day passed before my master's sword was shattered into thirty pieces, their right leg was almost torn from its socket, and their honed body was broken pathetically in a hundred and something places. My master defeated their foe by gouging his brain out through their breathing valves. Their thumbs, as they told me, in this case, had proved far more useful."

"Um, so...the moral of the story is that theory and practice turned out to be different?" Xiuying blurted out before she could stop herself.

In response, Jiang lightly flicked her forehead with a smirk. "I said pretty much the same thing but apparently it wasn't the answer. What she told me was that at that moment, with their thumbs in her foe's brain, my master had a revelation. They had trained far too broadly. Existence and the act of combat are absolutely no different, and the essence of both, the purity of both, is a singular action, which is Cutting Down Your Opponent. You must resolve to train this action. You must become this action. Truly, there is very little else that will serve you well in this entire world."

Clapping his hands together to grab Xiuying's attention, Jiang looked at Xiuying with a grave look on their face. "Are you perhaps now encouraged to become a farmer or remain a noble noodle vendor?"

Xiuying blinked in surprise at her master's question before shooting him a determined glare. "No Master."

"Eh, Well I tried. A pity then." Cracking their neck back and forth, Jiang Chen Ten Meti gave Xiuying a nod.

"Let's start your training then."
 
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