The only real question is does he control them through the Undersiders or Directly.
Also, this is why I had hoped for Lisa's perspective!
H+ Mayhem (Worm)
- Thread starter Jurric
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Also, this is why I had hoped for Lisa's perspective!
- Location
- USA
- Pronouns
- He/Him
Malum
feel
Move the dialogue tag to the beginning. You always want to make it clear upfront who is talking. So:
"Same here," Trickster said. "Or it would be, if we controlled territory."
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Also, you need a newline before "Obviously".
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One more! Specialty.
- Location
- norway
can't he just make a superior body and brain and implant the mayhem protocol into that?
consequences
Not A Nice Person At All
- Location
- Jerkville
For someone whose chosen name was supposed to be synonymous with the culture of human improvement, he's really quite shit at it, even before we get into trying to determine if there is anyone in the world who can challenge him for the silver medal in the 'ruining the idea in the public mind' Olympics.
The problem with trying to do a full body conversion on Noelle is...getting close enough to Noelle without either getting eaten, or ripped apart.
I think that's a risk Trickster is more than willing to have others take.
Or maybe she's intuiting that Mayhem is not responsible for half the things he's known for. Mayhem is responsible for that.
Mayhem is being subtly manipulated.. by Mayhem.
Mayhem has human augmentation active that improves him in to.. a brain damaged amnesiac Mayhem
or just the normal fact that he's done self-surgery on his brain to mess with his emotions and tells is probably enough to illicit that reaction from Tattletale really.
And then hopefully intuit from that that hes created a rampant biological AI ..running on his own brain..
Mayhem is being subtly manipulated.. by Mayhem.
Mayhem has human augmentation active that improves him in to.. a brain damaged amnesiac Mayhem
or just the normal fact that he's done self-surgery on his brain to mess with his emotions and tells is probably enough to illicit that reaction from Tattletale really.
And then hopefully intuit from that that hes created a rampant biological AI ..running on his own brain..
Novel thought: Maybe it's that he's even more suicidal than canon-Taylor, and suicidal people are one of her hot button issues.
Tisaku
Head Chief Thinkomancer
- Location
- Brazil
That would certainly push her to pressure Grue into accepting.
Especially with Taylor herself there.
TW33K
Generic Title
- Location
- where the wild things aren't
Coil may need to change his pants in the other timeline, I doubt he could be happier with that outcome. Two of the most powerful capes in the bay want to help put him in charge.
nah, I like not knowing for now. having Lisa do the narrating would take the fun out of trying to guess if Lisa is having a freak out over Mayhem being crazy or if she's just getting mixed signals
it's Coil, why not both!The only real question is does he control them through the Undersiders or Directly.
Also, this is why I had hoped for Lisa's perspective!
nah, I like not knowing for now. having Lisa do the narrating would take the fun out of trying to guess if Lisa is having a freak out over Mayhem being crazy or if she's just getting mixed signals
- Location
- Brazil
The Stormbringer
Worm Fanfic & Crack Connoisseur
- Location
- Spaaaaace~!
Just pump her full of sedatives, cut her in half, pop out her brain and plop it into a an artificial body. ezpz
- Location
- Brazil
Her actual self is deep inside the monstrous half.Just pump her full of sedatives, cut her in half, pop out her brain and plop it into a an artificial body. ezpz
Not to mention it's like trying to do surgery on Crawler, her body will actively fight every step of the way.
And we really don't want Mayhem clones that are even eviler.
The Stormbringer
Worm Fanfic & Crack Connoisseur
- Location
- Spaaaaace~!
No...? The actual Noelle is the piece on top. That's where her brain is located.
- Location
- Australia
Thanks, fixed.
Thanks, fixed.
Probably not actually, considering it grew back once it was destroyed in the Echidna arc. I don't remember the exact quote, but I think Tattletale called it a false body. A decoy.
That Tattletale is horrified/confused by Mayhem isn't too surprising. After all, he's done an awful lot that would elicit that sort of reaction in others.
"He does brain surgery on himself!"
"He gives away Tinker-toys like candy at a parade!"
"He wants to suicide-nuke the Slaughterhouse Nine!"
"He's sort of dating Cricket!?"
"Cricket plays Robot Unicorn Attack!?"
There are a lot of possibilities, is what I'm saying.
"He does brain surgery on himself!"
"He gives away Tinker-toys like candy at a parade!"
"He wants to suicide-nuke the Slaughterhouse Nine!"
"He's sort of dating Cricket!?"
"Cricket plays Robot Unicorn Attack!?"
There are a lot of possibilities, is what I'm saying.
The Stormbringer
Worm Fanfic & Crack Connoisseur
- Location
- Spaaaaace~!
When would that have happened, though? Didn't she start off normal and parts started growing on her? Would her brain have shifted locations without her knowing? I always took it as the lower half of her body growing a separate brain since it was completely messed up.
- Location
- Vancouver
If she has access to the PRT files like in cannon, she probably already knows his intentions.
Mizu
Software Developer
- Location
- Victoria, Australia
on Trickster's
too clever a statement
Because with Skidmark... comes Skidmark's REEK.
Well, that's because they're already used to sucking, see.
Mayhem: "I can fix that for you! Let me go get my axe...."
A situation that would take all of... four and a half seconds to correct.
Oh, he is just ADORABLE! Can we keep him? I promise I'll change his litter box every day and talk him for walks and EVERYTHING!
And now I'm picturing Purity as Dirty Harry.
*puerile giggle*
*crosses fingers* C'mon, 'Mayhem's Mayhemery!' I would also accept 'Please don't hold our former Nazi against us.'
Mayhem: "Mmmm, you are SO sexy to me right now.... Let me get my axe and help you with that...."
Also, I liked this bit. You're doing a really nice job of giving Faultline a very distinctive internal voice. Well done!
I notice how they don't say anything about not having prostitution, GIVING drugs to children, or aggravated disregard of human life.
Oh, pull your lips off Accord's dick, you ass weasel.
No, we just do that because it's FUN! ...hey, fuck you. Puppies know what they did. THEY KNOW.
Purity: "Which are the crimes WE'RE trying to-"
Mayhem: "NO. I know what you're about to say and NO."
Well... I'd say that puts the turd in the punchbowl, but Coil's been here for quite some time already! ZING!
And that just about sums Trickster up neatly. (Mention that he's an asshole and you'll have him COMPLETELY summed up.)
That's because you're a follower, Mayhem expects to be dead or completely subsumed by his combat protocol, Circus doesn't give a shit, Skitter is plotting to turn you all in, and Sveta will probably be too busy slaughtering the chucklefucks who survived Adam's attack on the S9.
Purity: "Though we disagree on what that philosophy should be. *I* thought it should be 'No Dar-"
Mayhem/Skitter/Circus: "NO."
I know WHY Faultline is thinking this, but... I'm willfully going to ignore it in favor of suggesting that she just wants more girls in skin-tight outfits hanging around her! (Maybe ones she can suggest dress up like dames from film noir movies!)
Only if Adam finally had that Talk with her!
Noelle: "Hey! Was that a fat joke, you bitch?!"
Awww, how cute! He thinks he counts as people! That's... kinda sad. Tsk.
Or else a couple of Irish boys show up and shoot you in the fucking face!
Oh, man. I would give a right arm to see this from Tattletale's perspective. ...not MINE. But A right arm. Which should count, I feel.
"If I open my mouth, Mayhem will fuse my jaw shut. He already has the glue picked up. He's decided against glue. He's decided on a nail gun. He's decided against the nail gun. He's decided on a welding torch. He's already designed a suction system to keep my blood from spoiling the weld. He's-"
You know, when Cricket shoves a laser-scythe through him lengthwise, I'm not gonna be sorry in the least.
Let's... let's not talk about Coil's dreams. I don't have enough sanitizer. There's not enough on the PLANET.
*puerile giggle* Yeah, I've had a few dates that ended like that. Jager, amirite?
Hey! He's not evil! He's just... morally pragmatic. EXTREMELY morally pragmatic.
consequences
Not A Nice Person At All
- Location
- Jerkville
Yeah, we had a wizard who claimed to be 'efficient' all the time in one of our games. The players weren't buying it. The GM wasn't buying it. Demonstrably, the gods themselves both in and out of game weren't buying it, since my Paladin managed to fumble three times in a row to power attack stab him to death from full health, at a probability of roughly 1 in 512000.
Were this a universe with any justice in it, I would expect spears of frozen urine ejected from a plane saved by Scion to take out Mayhem, Coil, and Jack Slash all at once, unfortunately this is Earth Bet.