@DragonParadox
I salute you! Your portrayal of Broken Seeker is incredible.
He is at once both an eldritch horror beyond true human comprehension. A beast that lurks in the dark and has done so through ages. A dark legend and a creature of such might that true defeat of it has never been possible before. Yet also have you managed to show his motives, given him personality that fits the thing he is and all that without taking away from his aspect of a demonic legend.
Just before Molly thought about it I thought that the whole talk almost sounded Seeker was enjoying the banter just a bit too much....and then Mollys notices he is flirting with her!!
You almost managed to make him an, if not likable, at least relatable Person! And then the moment when he delivers Izzy and Alec and the description of what he looks/smells like hammers home that this THING is.....beyond mortal.
Thank you for taking the time to write and share this quest with us. It is a tremendous pleasure to read and partake!