[X] Facts Beat Eloquence

Flowery motions hold no meaning in a fight old man! Adaptation and efficiency is all there is and only then can you style!

ACTIVATE THE STYLEBENDER!

If he comes in with the long fist forms of the northern style? Shut that down with Eskrima concepts that flows into boxing.

Too close for comfort, yet he still opts for Northern style kicking? Muay Thai knees and elbows for days!

He offers sweeping arms and clotheslines? Wing Chun MukJung poster boi love wrap and subsequent side kick to have him overshoot his obvious counter leg sweep!

Southern Style bursts? Trap it in Silat limb isolations then bridge that into chain wrestling and take it down via Judo.
 
If he comes in with the long fist forms of the northern style? Shut that down with Eskrima concepts that flows into boxing.

Too close for comfort, yet he still opts for Northern style kicking? Muay Thai knees and elbows for days!

He offers sweeping arms and clotheslines? Wing Chun MukJung poster boi love wrap and subsequent side kick to have him overshoot his obvious counter leg sweep!

Southern Style bursts? Trap it in Silat limb isolations then bridge that into chain wrestling and take it down via Judo.
...doesn't Zane only practice one style of martial arts- Jeet Kune Do? So, I'm not sure he'd be Able to follow through on this proposal.


Since I have no idea which option to pick and would just add chaos to the vote, I feel no apprehension at all about wasting my vote on a joke which Zane probably can't follow through on even if it somehow won.
[X] Employ the Rufescent Warrior's Martial Art of choice, known for its focus on knocking your opponent down and jumping off their chest, repeatedly.
(as illustrated here and here.
)
 
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...doesn't Zane only practice one style of martial arts- Jeet Kune Do? So, I'm not sure he'd be Able to follow through on this proposal.


Since I have no idea which option to pick and would just add chaos to the vote, I feel no apprehension at all about wasting my vote on a joke which Zane probably can't follow through on even if it somehow won.
[X] Employ the Rufescent Warrior's Martial Art of choice, known for its focus on knocking your opponent down and jumping off their chest, repeatedly.
(as illustrated here and here.
)

Jeet Kun Do is more of a philosophy than martial style. At the time before mma was popularized, it was considered radical among the traditional chinese arts to even mix up other martial philosopy than that of their own or that to consider to break traditinal forms/katas at the initial stages of training be done.

Bruce Lee changed that by popularizing the what is essentially the mind set of "what works for you". Sure, Jeet Kun Do has core principles rooted in Wing Chun. But over time he made it so that he could incorporate other styles of fighting, making it modular enough that his students could use whatever style they'd want depending on the given situation.

Dan Inosanto, one of his long time friends and officially one of the three people he'd appointed passing on Jeet Kun Do taught Bruce his style of Eskrima which influenced some of his approaches in weaponry and empty hand combat. James Glover and Gene LeBell expanded Bruce's ground game via Judo and Wrestling. Jhae Goo Rhee- a Taekwondo master taught Bruce the intricacies of the kicking arts, especially the side kick.

Some other examples:
-Bruce's Footwork in moving to and fro was essentially based off from the Boxing- Muhammad Ali's
-When facing him long range, he opts to adopt the southpaw bladed stance in the instead of squaring up- this is taken from Fencing.
-He's a fan of the Pehlwani Wrestler, The Great Gama and would incorporate his physical regimen with the wrestler's exercises along with other methods commonly attributed to Weight Lifters.

He's technically the Father of Modern MMA as we know it.

However, one thing I'll do note is that you need to dedicate yourself in one aspect- be proficient in more than one martial art to bring the full capabilities of Jeet Kun Do.

You might have the mindset and framework for it to work. But you still need the skill and proficiency to really put the meat on those bones especially when you're facing foes who are more than amateurs and that you have to apply pressure testing as well to refine them in the chaos of combat.
 
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for inktober, I've elected to make a series of animations depicting combat between the silververse person from the soul override animations a while ago, and DefJOE. presumably they somehow found a way back to the silververse, and then back out, somehow.
This .Gif contains Inktobers 1 through 3, though most of it is taken up by Wastefully High-Effort Entry Animations by both participant characters.
(The accessibility of various powers, beings or items shown in the following animations is not representative of their actual accessibility in the silververse and assumes a near-arbitrary capability for things to be made manifest if they fit the latest inktober prompt. For instance, the systemic shard probably doesn't normally await the beck and call of a random powerful, but not universe-busting, rufescent mage, and then attempt to isekai people on demand. Power levels are also not representative; it is generally demonstrated, with some exceptions, that later prompt effects can override previous prompt effects completely and then keep going. Exceptions in the plans so far include: The first two prompts, which made the characters, and the fifth prompt, the effects of which are probably obvious.)
 
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Chapter 9 - Punches Like Scattered Petals
Punches Like Scattered Petals

At first, Shen didn't approach or move, simply remaining in one of the standard positions for kung fu and eyeing Zane warily - a gesture which the boy reciprocated, in a looser fighting stance of his own, almost like a boxer's stance with the fists up a little below the eyes.

The only real motion was that of Shen's chest rising and falling, as he breathed. At the distance of five meters, when Shen finally started to move, his approach wasn't sudden and unexpected or explosive - it was slow and measured, like a cobra slithering up to its prey, or a wolf moving at an oblique angle to attack its victim from the side. It was abrupt enough, however, that Zane was alerted and on the lookout for any physical tells that his uncle was about to strike. The distance between them decreased with a worrying pace, and Shen even tested Zane's reactions, stepping forth and then back, one or two steps outside of his reach, to see if Zane would charge, over-extend himself, or lunge desperately. He didn't do anything of the sort.

"Cheap," Zane simply commented, in a plain voice, standing motionless like a statue of firm stone against his uncle's tests. Shen didn't react.

Several moments passed, during which Shen and Zane observed each other, only three or four effective steps from being within striking range. All of this foreplay caused Zane to feel a little anxious, feeling a tight kind of energy in his calves, as if they were eager to jackhammer into the earth to release his pent-up uneasiness.

Desiring to rid himself of this concern, it was Zane who seized the initiative. He stepped forward once - and Shen backed away with raised eyebrows - then stepped forward again before his uncle finished the motion, and then hopped forward to create a brief opening to tempt Shen into striking, before hopping back out. Shen hadn't struck.

And back to watching one another.

"Man, this is fucking dumb," Zane said, lowering his guard slightly. "If we're just going-"

It was apparently the opportunity that Shen was after. As soon as Zane's fists came below the level of his chest, Uncle Shen practically leaped forward in a sacrificial lunge, gambling his own victory on the altar of speed. Zane barely reacted in time, moving back and then throwing his left hand up in a desperate block against the first punch, blocking the following second, third, and fourth. Shen threw a kick to follow-up but he was almost out of reach, and when Zane attempted to counter with his knee, Shen moved his leg away and stepped back away with a sudden thud of unbalanced footsteps. Shen looked briefly surprised.

"I can see you haven't been slacking, nephew," Uncle Shen said, carrying that note of surprise in his tone.

"Yeah. Pick something else than Tai Chi to fight me with," Zane responded as he chuckled cruelly. A bit of a joke - his uncle wasn't using Tai Chi in their last exchange of blows. Just the opposite, really.

And so, their fight started in earnest, right there. And like any of their fights, it was fast-paced, brutal, down-to-earth, and yet expertly calculated. As his uncle abandoned the principles of yielding to counters and making calculated blows, he started to fight more and more like a musician beating a drum in a steady, quick rhythm.

Zane was unsurprised to see that his uncle tried a few more cheap shots - the man had never subscribed to notions of honor in combat - including what might've been a particularly painful side-jab to the kidney and a palm blow made for the nose or throat. Zane expertly repelled each of the strikes, mostly by dodging or parrying them.

Every now and then, when Shen became too winded from his attacks, Zane would take the opportunity like a ruthless tiger leaping at the throat of an exposed herbivore, striking with decisive and powerful blows, extending his reach as much as possible; sometimes even stepping forward right as he struck, all to force his uncle to block, rather than evade; to batter his own arms and bruise them away to uselessness over time. Either he was too weak, or Shen simply fought through the pain, because this cycle repeated for a while longer, with Shen regaining his breath and moving in for another flurry of strikes as if unaffected.

But Shen's barrages weakened over time. As he continued to launch blows, one after another, they'd become weaker and slower; slow enough that Zane could sneak in a brutal response of his own, weave a punch between two blows in a combo, and occasionally even turn the tables.

As time passed, Shen needed to take longer and longer breathers, with his assault timeslot only reducing.

And in the stark end, neither Zane nor Shen landed one proper, decisive blow on another. It was a loss of stamina that caused Zane's uncle to raise a hand in surrender.

"I forfeit," Shen declared with ragged breath. The old man leaned down, hands supported on the knees, as he ventilated.

"Somehow, it doesn't feel as good as I expected it to," Zane said, walking to the side of the room and picking up a pair of water bottles brought from the kitchen. He tossed one in Shen's direction - his uncle managed to catch it without looking - and opened the other to have a drink.

"You've gotten better," Shen stated, "And I have only become older in the meantime. If we had fought a year ago, it would have been a far different outcome."

"Sure," Zane agreed with no sarcasm, willing to believe that. "Although it's clear I still don't outstrip you in the technique department. It's just that I'm younger. Better physique. You're like a decaying husk in comparison."

"Thank you for the reminder about my exalted age, and the incoming clarion of the underworld," Shen answered with a deep sigh, finally straightening up with one final breath. Sweat was pouring down the old man's forehead in unhealthy amounts. He opened the cheap plastic water bottle and splashed a bit of its contents on his face, before gulping down several, greedy mouthfuls of the liquid. As he was done, he put the cap back on the bottle and said, "If this keeps up, I might soon not be for this world."

"Leave me some of those bamboo plants as part of the inheritance. They're a good breed," Zane joked but noticed the grimace on his uncle's face hadn't disappeared. With a slow crease of worry, Zane asked, "Uncle, you alright?"

"Yes... Yes, I'm fine, Zane," Shen answered, slowly turning, grimace fading to neutrality. "Your words simply brought some discomfort to my heart, because they are a poisonous truth. I am rather like a decaying husk. My august years are long passed, and I am drawn in a loop of melancholy, attempting to relieve them. Perhaps rather than focusing on the immortality of the body, I should acquire an immortality of spirit." A small grin appeared on his face, indicating that he was joking in kind.

"Heh. Alright... Look..."

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At the moment, you have 13.5 units of shining Ambrosia. A bit over halfway to an Epic Improvement. If you keep going at this rate, you might even have one before the next Arc properly begins - such a boon would be immeasurable, even if it doesn't stem from a Godcard!

[ ] Show Him Later [+2 Ambrosia] - "I think you don't have to worry about that for another good five years. Not with your workout routine."

Right now, Uncle Shen needs to run his restaurant and yell at his workers, not play around with Godcards. There isn't much point in showing the old man a supernatural ability which he'll reject to use anyway. It's not like any of your Godcards offer eternal youth or an improved bodily condition.

[ ] Show Him - "I did find something on the Zuchezzis back then, and I think it's magical."

Show Uncle Shen the Godcards you've looted and see what powers they will grant him.

Achievement Unlocked: Now, I Am The Master
- Defeat Uncle Shen in a duel.
*Instead of doubling your odds of victory, Brawler of Midwood triples them against opponents who are your superior in at least one form of combat. The combat form may be metaphorical or unofficial, such as improvised combat; or supernatural, such as telepathic combat.
 
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[X] Show Him Later [+2 Ambrosia] - "I think you don't have to worry about that for another good five years. Not with your workout routine."

Right now, Uncle Shen needs to run his restaurant and yell at his workers, not play around with Godcards. There isn't much point in showing the old man a supernatural ability which he'll reject to use anyway. It's not like any of his Godcards offer youth or an improved bodily condition.

Me thinks old man may have heart condition. He shouldn't worry about these things. Plus, more Ambrosia.
 
[X] Show Him

I'd rather show him and get advice on how to integrate it with our fighting style and tactics. And bounce ideas on how to defend against others with supernatural abilities.
 
[x] Show Him

I'll say show him- as it's a good point to bring up. While more Ambrosia is always good.. I'd like to know what's up with the magic cards, and our Uncle would probably know something about it... He seems like that kind of guy, or at least, that's what I'm reading off him. Not Mystical in the sense of "I do Magic" but Mystical in the sense of "When I was a boy, I punched Magic in the face!"

oddly enough, so far, only options with Red text have provided Ambrosia- and they are conflict prone. Not too sure if i'm looking too deeply into things or not.
 
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[X] Show Him Later [+2 Ambrosia] - "I think you don't have to worry about that for another good five years. Not with your workout routine."
 
[x] Show Him Later [+2 Ambrosia] - "I think you don't have to worry about that for another good five years. Not with your workout routine."

ambrosia is shiny
 
I don't see why showing him later should earn us Ambrosia. Maybe the GM just doesn't particularly want to write a team-up, or wants this for future drama?
 
[X] Show Him Later [+2 Ambrosia] - "I think you don't have to worry about that for another good five years. Not with your workout routine."
 
[X] Show Him
Ambrosia is good, but there's a line between sticking to your plans- and it seems rightly, as the man outright said he hoped we weren't here for magical reasons- and hiding your world-changing discovery from the man. None of our godcards gave bodily improvements To Us, but the boons depend on compatibility and excellence, and they are Godcards; it doesn't seem implausible they'd provide some measure of physical enhancement by the nature of gods being immortal. Really, this is the best of both worlds- we show Shen, which was an option worth considering in its own right earlier, and we get the 2 Arete for sticking to our original plans, and also we got an achievement for improved usage of Brawler of Midwood.
 
[X] Show Him Later [+2 Ambrosia] - "I think you don't have to worry about that for another good five years. Not with your workout routine."

Patience my fellows, give it time. We have no need for rushing, flow like water.
 
Inktober 4-6

(The first time faust rolls his eyes, that's an animation mistake involving the zooming-in process which I elected not to fix; the second time is him rolling his eyes at the very slight bow by the Silververse-sided fighter. It implies that Faust, and/or the transporation process into the Raven's Arcana, removes the Knot around the fighter. probably the transportation process, because would Faust really bother freeing this guy who summoned the shop without even planning to buy anything*?
*Except the explodolemons.)
 
Alright - [X] Show Him is the victor. Expect an update in a few days.
 
Chapter 10 - A Good Showing
A Good Showing

"I didn't know you smoke, uncle," Zane commented, almost reproachfully, as he observed the old man take in a drag from his exquisitely ornamental wooden pipe. Both of them were sitting in the quiet staff lounge of the restaurant, as the clock ticked down to midnight.

"My lungs aren't good for much, it seems," Shen replied. His eyes were aimed up at the ceiling as if observing the flight pattern of some invisible mosquito or fly around the chandelier. Under some angles, Zane almost thought he could see a glimmer in them. "If there was ever a time to start smoking, I believe it's right now."

Almost as if eager to ruin Zane's clever plan to bring his uncle's mood up, the Godcards both adamantly refused to bond. Neither scrap of damned paper reacted to Shen's touch.

It was only because he showed off some inkling of his abilities that Shen even believed his nephew that he now possessed magic.

Eventually, Zane found himself speaking out loud a thought that he'd repeated in his head on a loop, for the past half hour. "I can find something else, you know?"

"Something else?" Shen barely looked at him, looking tired.

"Another card," Zane responded, making Shen take in a deep breath, releasing all of his lung's contents in a sigh. "One that'll bond. Something to suit you. It's not fair that I can be magical and you can't. Especially when you deserve it more than me."

"And what shall I do with such power, Zane? Become an immortal avenger of men? Run a noodle shop forever? Eternally practice martial arts? Bah," Shen scoffed, moving the pipe close to his mouth. "As if I need all that to be myself." He took in a drag from the pipe, holding the smoke in his lungs.

Zane didn't speak - he only watched as his uncle expelled the dark gray smoke from between his lips.

"More importantly, nephew, it is foolish to risk your own life for an infantile dream," Shen replied. "Now, that you have access to power, you should be careful to not let it be your undoing. Otherwise, you might find yourself bitterly disappointed at how life treats you."

At that point, Zane couldn't hold it in.

"What the fuck happened to you? What the fuck happened to this place?" Zane stood from the couch, prompting Shen to tense up and look at him from the chair he was seated on, as placidly as he would observe a man on the street known for his binge-drinking and casual aggression. "You used to have ambition when I was little. Even when life kicked you down, you'd get up to kick it back at twice the speed, twice the power. And right now you're fucking smoking. Give me that." Zane snatched the pipe from his listless, shocked uncle's hand and then tossed it across the room, making it clatter against the shelf.

"Zane..."

"Don't you, 'Zane,' me," Zane said, pointing a finger at the man. "I won't go looking for immortality to hand over to you. I won't risk my life. But you need to stop being so mopey. If there's nothing we can do, there's nothing we can do."

"And now you truly do speak like an old Cathayan sage," Shen mused with a quirked eyebrow, a corner of his lip showing that he was amused but didn't want to show it.

"I surpassed you in proverbs at right about the same time I surpassed you in martial arts," Zane said with a grin, extending a hand to aid the man in getting up from his chair. "C'mon, let's make some tea, you old shriveled-up prune."

"So be it," the man said, accepting the help in standing up, "You foolish little sage..."

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Alas, Shen's compatibility with the Cards you possess isn't high enough... His sole grace was the Combat domain of the Phobos Card, but that concept was tanked entirely when Zane won the fight. At least Zane rolled well on the follow-up check to cheer up his uncle.

At the moment you possess 17.2 Ambrosia (I really enjoyed Joe's animations,) which is - I hope I don't need to say - a rather princely sum.

After making and having tea with Shen, Zane lies down to sleep.

At present, as before, Zane has a day off.

What is going to be Zane's actions for today? Select a maximum of five. However, selecting fewer options means Zane will devote more time and focus to them, providing slightly better opportunities, rolls bonuses, and improved overall results. !Vote By Plan!

[ ] Visit Pawn Shop
- And pawn off all that good shit. Zane knows a local pawn shop owner who'll give him a good price.
[ ] Practice Martial Arts - Where and how? Visit the gym? Visit a dojo? Spar against Uncle Shen? Find a practice dummy? Beat up people?
[ ] Wander Around - Wander around somewhere. (Which district of New York?)
[ ] Visit Uncle Shen - A third visit in as many days? How cute.
[ ] Card Practice - Practice the actual use of the powers given by a certain Godcard. (Which one?)
[ ] Card Progression - Attempt to locate and act upon opportunities that will bolster your compatibility with a certain Godcard. (Which one?)
[ ] Go Shopping - And purchase what?
[ ] Call Mephistopheles [7 Ambrosia] - It's stupid, but you keep hearing these rumors...
[ ] Write-in - Something else?

A stranger has made notice of your actions.

Additional Choices:

[ ] Brawler Charge [7 Ambrosia] - Restore a single use of the Brawler of Midwood perk.
[ ] Brawler's Repute [25 Ambrosia] - Instead of a single use of the Brawler of Midwood perk, you can have three per Arc or major story event. Can't afford; gain more Ambrosia first!
 
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