Firebird, a Worm AU/Xover?

Unlikely. Danny is oblivious, but at least in canon it was fairly clear he had no idea that Emma was a bully to her, he just thought that they had drifted apart. In other words, he probably wouldn't notice anything if she didn't tell him it straight up, but depressed or not he still loves her and wouldn't brush away that kind of accusation. Taylor just never really committed to telling him about it. He still should have noticed though, it was really pretty obvious.

We'll, how do you feel about Taylor saying things like "Dad, can we talk" or "Dad, I need to talk to you" and him replying with a "Not now Taylor" or a "We'll talk later baby" and never doing so? After something like that happens a few times a child would likely give up and it does fit with what Chibipoe wrote.
 
We'll, how do you feel about Taylor saying things like "Dad, can we talk" or "Dad, I need to talk to you" and him replying with a "Not now Taylor" or a "We'll talk later baby" and never doing so? After something like that happens a few times a child would likely give up and it does fit with what Chibipoe wrote.
While sad, that doesn't not change the fact that he almost certainly was never told who was bullying her, or even straight out that she was being bullied. I am not trying to say it's Taylor's fault at all, but if she had insisted and told him straight up, he probably would have listened.
 
Quite true. However, that depends on intent. Is he trying to do this because he believes it is best for Taylor if she's somebody else's responsibility or because doing so means he doesn't have to accept responsibility for her.

Believing it's best for Taylor because he is incapable is not something I can find faulth with.

Not wanting to accept responsibility I do consider to be wrong. Considering that in this story she tried to tell him about the bullies and he was feeling too sorry for himself to pay attention and that he did not notice anything during the period Emma bullied her despite her change in personality I'm not giving him the benefit of the doubt. I see it as him not having tried to act as a parent should since his wife died and not wanting the responsibility of having to do so now.



Why wouldn't he try if he cares about her?



And again, why wouldn't he try if he cares about her?



I don't know about whether it is true in Firebird, but in the original story she was a chatterbox before the bullying started. Hang on a moment. (Searches a bit.) Here you go, Interlude 19 shows her as being a chatterbox before Emma started bullying her. I wasn't going to search for her possibly skipping grades, but I'm stupid that way sometimes. Tangle 6.9 has that. So before being bullied she was a chatterbox and did very well at school.



And in Firebird we're told that she tried to tell him. Maybe after a couple of months he would have listened, but he did not listen when she tried.



Ok, you are repeating the post I replied to almost verbatim. Look you can not ignore canon characterization while at the same time using the PRT's canon sins against it.

Taylor has proven to be an unreliable narrator, and if you refuse to see any other point of view we are just going to go in circles.


Fact Taylor is sneaking out and lying about it.
She refuses to stop
Danny cannot control her
The. Protectorate can.

Even if she runs away, which Danny cannot stop, they can watch her.
 
Honestly... I am going to ignore this thread until the next update.

The debate about Danny Taylor and the PRT being evil mustache twirling villains has gone on in complete circles.
 
Honestly... I am going to ignore this thread until the next update.

The debate about Danny Taylor and the PRT being evil mustache twirling villains has gone on in complete circles.
Eh, I've done it before. Later.

Taylor has proven to be an unreliable narrator, and if you refuse to see any other point of view we are just going to go in circles.


Fact Taylor is sneaking out and lying about it.
She refuses to stop
Danny cannot control her
The. Protectorate can.

Even if she runs away, which Danny cannot stop, they can watch her.
Of course acknowledging that argument acknowledges that Danny's goal here isn't just keeping her safe it's controlling her. If he just wanted her to be safe then he'd be more open to the alternatives she has available (and may or may not have brought up because ambiguous precog attempts). Looking at it from the perspective of him being in the right for doing it is looking at it from the perspective that Taylor is solely responsible for the situation which has been established as not true. Maybe the wards are the "best choice" from the frame of reference Danny and Taylor have and based off Danny's motives and goals (as opposed to Taylor's), I know that placed in Taylor's position (to the maximum amount I am capable of projecting myself into her position) I would go straight to the wards, except that's not the point. The point is that joining the Wards is something which will color her entire future and career as a cape whether in a good or bad light and someone else is trying to make that choice for her for their own selfish reasons and that cannot be okay.
Edit- and yes Taylor's an unreliable narrator but there's a limit to how far you can take that unless you are putting forth that Taylor has had an insanity break and is imagining actual conversations instead of just the motives behind them and that strikes me as something that should be the basis of its own other fic.
 
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Ok, you are repeating the post I replied to almost verbatim. Look you can not ignore canon characterization while at the same time using the PRT's canon sins against it.

Taylor has proven to be an unreliable narrator, and if you refuse to see any other point of view we are just going to go in circles.


Fact Taylor is sneaking out and lying about it.
She refuses to stop
Danny cannot control her
The. Protectorate can.

Even if she runs away, which Danny cannot stop, they can watch her.

What can I say, I haven't changed my opinion. I believe that the main reason Danny wants to sign her up as a Ward is not because he believes it would be better for her but because he doesn't want the responsibility. I've given my opinion and the reasons why I believe it. (Nicholai has also posted something about this that I found quite insightful.)

As to Taylor being an unreliable narrator, did her father dispute what she said? I did not read it that way. Which means that until we get this from another angle there is no reason to doubt it. Her words to him may by biased but should be considered to be based on facts until we learn differently.

I'm also not arguing about the facts as given by yourself. (Taylor is sneaking out and lying about it, refusing to stop, Danny being unable to control her or the PRT/Protectorate being able to do so in his eyes.) I'm talking about Danny's motivations and why I have a problem with the way he attempted to sign her up for the Wards.

As to cannon characterization, what do you believe she was like before being bullied in the original story?

I believe she was a chatterbox, although a bit less so than before her mothers death. (Interlude 19)

"Emma!" The voice on the other end was breathy, excited. There was a babble of other voices in the background. She could imagine the other youths lined up to use the pay phones.
"Taylor," Emma said, smiling.
"Ok I gotta talk fast because I only have two minutes and I need my other fifty cents to call my dad. We rowed across the lake this morning to this waterfall, only it wasn't exactly a waterfall, more like a water stair, and we were all taking turns sliding and falling down this set of slick rocks, and Elsa, she's this girl wearing a bikini, she's been spending the last three days acting like she's hot stuff, she slides down the wrong part, and it catches on the strap, right? It doesn't tear it off, but it stretches, so it doesn't even fit her anymore"
Emma laughed, leaning back against her car seat.
It was something of a relief, to hear Taylor getting excited about something, to hear her getting excited over nothing. She'd lost her mother a year ago, and hadn't bounced back, not entirely. Her smiles not quite as wide, she was a second later to laugh, as if she had to wait, to give herself permission to do it, had to hold back. Before, it had been almost no holds barred. Anything went, however they wanted to amuse themselves, whatever they wanted to talk about. Complete and total openness. Lately there had been too many movies, too many activities and topics of conversation, that Taylor preferred to avoid.
It hadn't been easy, Emma mused, as Taylor yammered on. Sometimes she'd call, they'd do their customary hanging out, and she'd feel like the time was wasted, afternoons and weekends spent with her best friend that she didn't enjoy.
Not that Taylor was a wet blanket, but, like, maybe she was a damp blanket?
This? This inane, aimless, stupid, one-sided conversation where she'd said one word? This was the good stuff. It gave her hope that things could get back to normal.

I also believe she was did well at school. (Tangle 6.9)

"I don't know if you know this," he spoke, "But when your mom was alive, and you were in middle school, the subject of you skipping a grade came up."
"Yeah?"
"You're a smart girl, and we were afraid you were bored in school. We had arguments on the subject. I-I convinced your mom you would be happier in the long run attending high school with your best friend."

Being bullied changed her. A great deal. Danny did not notice.
 
It's pretty clear that both Taylor and Danny are at fault. And you know what? That's something for them to work out together, after they manage to not self-destruct their relationship. And with the pieces falling into place, things will probably work out.

There's the mildly successful independent heroes, who are her friends, who have survived in no small part due to their ex-military leader, who also happens to be a dad.

There's the mother of her other friend, a Parahuman lawyer and leader of an independent hero team who's more than capable of articulating her opinions of the PRT/Protectorate. In other words, "What's that my (favorite) daughter? A friend of yours is being railroaded into the Wards after having every layer of privacy systematically dismantled by the PRT/Protectorate? To arms!"

And finally, there's the girl with all the answers who legitimately needs Taylor's help and, if worst comes to worst, serves as a perfect example of what could happen if Danny checks out of being a parent.
 
It's pretty clear that both Taylor and Danny are at fault. And you know what? That's something for them to work out together, after they manage to not self-destruct their relationship. And with the pieces falling into place, things will probably work out.

There's the mildly successful independent heroes, who are her friends, who have survived in no small part due to their ex-military leader, who also happens to be a dad.

There's the mother of her other friend, a Parahuman lawyer and leader of an independent hero team who's more than capable of articulating her opinions of the PRT/Protectorate. In other words, "What's that my (favorite) daughter? A friend of yours is being railroaded into the Wards after having every layer of privacy systematically dismantled by the PRT/Protectorate? To arms!"

And finally, there's the girl with all the answers who legitimately needs Taylor's help and, if worst comes to worst, serves as a perfect example of what could happen if Danny checks out of being a parent.
Yep should be interesting.
 
Eh, I've done it before. Later.


Of course acknowledging that argument acknowledges that Danny's goal here isn't just keeping her safe it's controlling her. If he just wanted her to be safe then he'd be more open to the alternatives she has available (and may or may not have brought up because ambiguous precog attempts). Looking at it from the perspective of him being in the right for doing it is looking at it from the perspective that Taylor is solely responsible for the situation which has been established as not true. Maybe the wards are the "best choice" from the frame of reference Danny and Taylor have and based off Danny's motives and goals (as opposed to Taylor's), I know that placed in Taylor's position (to the maximum amount I am capable of projecting myself into her position) I would go straight to the wards, except that's not the point. The point is that joining the Wards is something which will color her entire future and career as a cape whether in a good or bad light and someone else is trying to make that choice for her for their own selfish reasons and that cannot be okay.
Edit- and yes Taylor's an unreliable narrator but there's a limit to how far you can take that unless you are putting forth that Taylor has had an insanity break and is imagining actual conversations instead of just the motives behind them and that strikes me as something that should be the basis of its own other fic.


Yes parents control their children, it is one of their jobs. And what other options? She doesn't want to join new wave, and being an independent is not an option Danny will accept. Should could say that she will just stop going out but she has lied about that very recently.

You said that you put yourself in Taylor's position, now put yourself in Danny's. What would you do?


Edit: I think Danny is a flawed but good man, that has little in the way of options, and wants to protect his daughter. Danny doesn't want Taylor to join the wards, he doesn't want her even going out. But she will regardless of what he says. She has already proved that. So wards.
 
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You said that you put yourself in Taylor's position, now put yourself in Danny's. What would you do?
I said that in Taylor's position I'd do what Taylor's not doing way before this came up (probably) but that what I would do didn't really matter because it's not me. I don't know what I would do if I were Danny because I've never really been in the situation Danny's in but I would hope I wouldn't do a lot of things. Not shut down on my daughter in a time of extreme loss. Try to convince her to work with other people and actively ask about the super-heroing she obviously cares about and try harder to convince her to at least work with the Wards or those independents she almost sort of likes or something before trying to law hammer her. I can't be sure I would have the strength of character to do that and I can't be sure it would work but I would hope I would at least try.
Yes parents control their children, it is one of their jobs. And what other options? She doesn't want to join new wave, and being an independent is not an option Danny will accept. Should could say that she will just stop going out but she has lied about that very recently.
Yes but parents forcing their kids to take a certain career path or go to a certain college is frowned upon and they certainly don't have a way to use the law to force it. And if Danny can't accept Taylor being independent even with the possibility of teammates or back-up that's Danny's problem. Heck Taylor didn't originally want to join New Wave but she's at least working with and talking to at least on of them now isn't she? Why? Because no one forced her to but after trying it out she decided she wanted to anyway.
 
And when her battered corpse turns up in the morgue after Lung is through with it I'm sure he'll take comfort that she was making her own choices.

Can she even be burned by fire? Considering she's host to a primordial fire entity made to burn away parts of the universe?
Doesn't mean she can't be smashed by a giant scaly fist, but eh.
 
And Sirin can run away from Lung. Your point?
My point is that she is safer with the Wards. That's established fact in-universe. Wards are far far safer than anyone else out on their own. To Danny Taylor is putting herself in grave danger, and the Wards seems like a way to keep her safe. Any parent would want their child safe over their child being a free and independent soul. If the choice is making Taylor hate him and live and being a fun parent that watches his child die I think he'll choose the former.
 
I'll agree with the overall tone here, that being in groups is safer. Good thing her last few outings were with others (Hanabi, Rockshow, GG) then, right?
And the Wards are safer still. That's not just me saying that. It's a fact, both in Canon and in Firebird that the Wards are the safest capes out there. They're far more supported and they're better equipped than anyone else. Was signing her up behind her back a dick move? Yes, and Taylor has every right to be angry about it, but Danny did it because it was the best way he had that he could feel she was safe.
 
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And the Wards are safer still. That's not just me saying that. It's a fact, both in Canon and in Firebird that the Wards are the safest capes out there. They're far more supported and they're better equip than anyone else. Was signing her up behind her back a dick move? Yes, and Taylor has every right to be angry about it, but Danny did it because it was the best way he had that he could feel she was safe.
And they actively engage less which is great for Danny's selfish goals but not for Taylor's selfish goals.
 
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