Firebird, a Worm AU/Xover?

Can I sig this? It's hilarious! :rofl:
"Sig what thou wilt" is the whole of mine law.

I concur with this wholeheartedly. Doesn't even have to be a physical conflict, since Taylor either already stomps or will soon be able to stomp potential threats. Just something other than her angrydepressedbetrayed mood that has been going on for...what, eight or nine chapters?
Yeah it'd be kinda cool to see homeless Taylor trying to get along like Lisa did, maybe even using similar tactics because her precog and provocation powers are kinda bullshit for a social venue.

For the reader and commentor, not having anything relatively new to talk about for eight or so chapters leads to what happened here: a circuitous ethical argument that led know where because all the participants had their own steadfast opinions.
Feh.

We do that kind of thing anyway.
 
Well, from Piggot's point of view, she likely can't just lose the paperwork. It was filed, recognized, and likely digitally logged into the PRT network. Which means she would likely have to jump through several legal hoops and explain both to the legal department, Danny, and anyone else who asks why she has reneged on the application.

And she can't leave Taylor alone. She said as much in the meeting that if the papers were signed and Taylor legally became a Ward, then her safety and activities as a Ward become the legal purview of the PRT/Ward Program. If she does, Piggot runs the risk of someone finding out about the situation and demanding that Piggot take extreme measures to fix it, because that's her job.

Which means Piggot has a problem. She likely wants and knows that in order to progress peacefully, she needs to keep her distance. But at the same time, she has regulations and procedures and the backlash from not following them. She has to keep Taylor monitored and under some level of control. Even if she shredded and sent the paperwork back, it's now redundant. It's been digitally copied and spread around the departments both in and outside of Brockton. I believe Piggot even said as much during the meeting that if the paperwork is signed, it's more of a problem for them then it is for Taylor. Likely because from the PRT/Wards side of things, they need a credible reason to not accept Taylor as a Ward.

So from this standpoint, Piggot is doing pretty much the best she can. She has the Protectorate and Wards looking out for Taylor. If they find her, they hang around a bit, make sure that she's not getting herself or anyone else killed. The Wards make small talk, and the Protectorate try to ask her to come in, or in the case of A&B, likely make small talk.

And that's a thing. The Wards don't appear to be trying to bring her in. As they said, all they try to do is talk and chat with her, like they've been ordered. And Taylor, while not reacting positively, is not reacting absolutely negatively. Some of the Wards even comment that they get positive reactions or middling ones, and they are the ones that really do just want to talk.

The ones that view it as a chore are the ones getting the majorly negative reactions from Taylor.

Which means that from a standpoint, the process is working by sheer exposure. While not instantly becoming friends, Taylor does appear to be warming up to a select few of the Wards. Except Browbeat. Browbeat just confuses her.

And again, the process is working. We can see Taylor wearing down as she finds that her freedom is only so free, and that her choices in trying to be independent are making a whole new box to be afraid of. She even considers for a moment just trying it, giving in and letting it happen before she goes 'fuck no' because she hasn't reached a point yet where she is really willing for it.

Which is likely all part of Piggot's plan. Spend some time tossing the Wards and Protectorate at Taylor. Find out who Taylor doesn't immediately hate, and then start backing down and tossing only the ones that get less of a negative reaction at Taylor and find out who gets small positive reactions. Then toss those exclusively at Taylor. Which seems to be how Piggot is playing it. The Wards talk about how a select pair each night is chosen to talk to Taylor.

In the end, we have to remember that Piggot isn't an end-all-be-all in Brockton. She still has to answer to higher bureaucracies and fear the power of paperwork and red-tape. Her hands are as likely tied as anyone else, and she's just trying to not let it detonate. Or if she does foresee one, she's trying to control and limit it.
 
I know, but this way the lottery is actually being useful to someone instead of just being a money sink.
Taxes from the lottery are often spent on improving public works. A lotto is one of the oldest ways for a government to raise income. They date back to prior to the discovery of America. A lotto was one of the ways the US paid off it's war debt after the Revolution. The lottery is good for plenty.
 
I concur with this wholeheartedly. Doesn't even have to be a physical conflict, since Taylor either already stomps or will soon be able to stomp potential threats. Just something other than her angrydepressedbetrayed mood that has been going on for...what, eight or nine chapters?

Eh, as long as we're not just reading about her angrydepressedbetrayed mood, I don't have any problem with that as a backdrop to wherever @chibipoe decides to take this next. And that wasn't the case even in this chapter: you've got one short section of combined action/introspection (with a small amount of on-screen angst), followed by three sections with a wangst quotient of essentially zero.

That said... I will be very interested to see what happens the next time Taylor meets up with Vicky and her boyfriend Dean, since Gallant has clearly just figured out Sirin's secret identity based on her empath-proofing. Awkward...
 
Taxes from the lottery are often spent on improving public works. A lotto is one of the oldest ways for a government to raise income. They date back to prior to the discovery of America. A lotto was one of the ways the US paid off it's war debt after the Revolution. The lottery is good for plenty.

The lotto tends to burn me every time I try it so I have a lot of pent up negative feelings about it and don't care about all the good a lotto does.

I will also not change my feelings about this even if you keep on digging up things the lotto helped solved.
 
My only complaint is that I would have liked to see the introduction between all of her friends, as well as some of the interactions surrounding them.
I'd have really liked to see this, too.
The scene with the Wards was nice to see, even if Clockblocker was being a dick. I particularly liked that we finally get to see Gallant make a connection between the emotional voids he gets from Taylor and Sirin.
Is THAT what he was talking about? It didn't even occur to me because I thought it was literally impossible he wouldn't have figured that out the instant he met Sirin.
 
and explain both to the legal department, Danny, and anyone else who asks why she has reneged on the application.

The wording right there gives her an out.

Sure the paperwork gets fed into the database but it's as simple as stamping it and making a note/flag on the file that the application has been Rejected.

Sure she would have to explain to Danny just why it's rejected, and some people in the PRT would wonder what the heck happened.
 
Ah, one of the curses to not having a full story to read. I suggest you not read the story for about 8 or ten chapters then bulk read it later.
Feh.

We do that kind of thing anyway.

Actually, I'm all for reading a chapter when it comes out, and then dissecting it and talking about certain parts or the overall chapter. It's something that I enjoy immensely, as an English major. But that doesn't really matter when all that is being talked about is, like I said before, a circuitous argument that went on for so long the author had to step in (multiple times I think), and even a mod stepped in at one point I think.

Eh, as long as we're not just reading about her angrydepressedbetrayed mood, I don't have any problem with that as a backdrop to wherever @chibipoe decides to take this next. And that wasn't the case even in this chapter: you've got one short section of combined action/introspection (with a small amount of on-screen angst), followed by three sections with a wangst quotient of essentially zero.
This chapter I'm fine with, as we get a few new perspectives, and we know something big is looming on the horizon with the E88.
Except everyone is talking about the attitude of a 12 year old.
And doors.
And Lotto tickets.

Why am I surprised by this?
 
The wording right there gives her an out.

Sure the paperwork gets fed into the database but it's as simple as stamping it and making a note/flag on the file that the application has been Rejected.

Sure she would have to explain to Danny just why it's rejected, and some people in the PRT would wonder what the heck happened.
"We can't expose the identity of actual participating Wards to reluctant and unwilling applicants." The world doesn't end.
 
Taxes from the lottery are often spent on improving public works. A lotto is one of the oldest ways for a government to raise income. They date back to prior to the discovery of America. A lotto was one of the ways the US paid off it's war debt after the Revolution. The lottery is good for plenty.

It's one of those do the pro's outweigh the cons. There have been plenty of studies done that so for the most part they do but there are some serious issue why some people dislike them.

Remember guys she is doing scratch offs too. The government pretty much never loses any money off scratch offs because they know exactly how many winning tickets there are.
 
Another point is any of the big money tickets are going to be rare. She'd have to pre-cog going into every store in town to maybe have a chance at one. Also most stores just hand you a ticket, you don't get to pick yourself beyond the brand. So it might be a good way to get 100 bucks or so every few days, but it's not something she could live on for long.
 
It's in the post you quoted. That's from SB's WOG thread.

No it very specificly is not in any post I quoted. A citation allows one to go to the source of the quotation, and check it for accuracy.

Edit for clarity:

"Four Score and seven years ago" is a quotation.

"The Gettysburg Address may be found here" is a citation.

A request for a citation is often given in response to a quotation or statement of fact that is given as a sumation of some written work or other evidence. A request for a citation is very much different from a request for a quotation.
 
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Another point is any of the big money tickets are going to be rare. She'd have to pre-cog going into every store in town to maybe have a chance at one. Also most stores just hand you a ticket, you don't get to pick yourself beyond the brand. So it might be a good way to get 100 bucks or so every few days, but it's not something she could live on for long.

Yeah. The store across from me get scratch offs in stacks of 200 for each game. From what the guy that runs it has told me there might be only one hundred dollar winner in that stack if that. That's a 10-20 dollar a ticket game. Wish I had one of them, they give your the odds of winning on the back. I think on some of them a free play is about 1 in 5 or 10 chance. Actual money rewards are like 1-20+.
 
'I want to bring it down on their heads,'
All I can think is that Dauntless got really lucky that Taylor was in something that could, comparatively, be called a good mood. Because sometimes, if you have a really shitty day, anything can set you off. Which probably wouldn't go well in the long run:

(I did a thing)
"Sirin, wait," he said, his voice firm. I could feel traces of exasperation and annoyance flowing through his thoughts, which almost startled me for a moment; Annoyed and exasperated with me? Fuck them. I'd told them repeatedly to leave me alone, and it was hardly fair to blame me if they couldn't work out I didn't want anything to do with them.

"'Wait'?" I asked him rhetorically, rising slightly off the rooftop to drift towards tonight's PRT mouthpiece. "You're really going to ask me that when it was all I ever asked anyone?"

He was a good little mouthpiece though. "We need to talk."

"We really don't," I corrected, crossing my arms as I felt a scowl draw across my face. Why did it have to be tonight? One more thing, following on from a shitty day where everything had gone wrong. This was supposed to be my release, supposed to relieve some stress, and now here I was; stuck dealing with the PRT. Again.

No.

I grabbed his armor in my telekinesis, pulling the strings on my brand new puppet taunt until he was standing straight and tall. He started to call out again and I clamped his mouth shut. Did he bite his tongue? I really didn't care.

"You need to talk. You want me to wait." They really want to push this, well, I can push this. I started wrenching strips of his armor apart, grasping individual bits and peeling them like layers off an onion, starting at his boots. "All I ever asked was for time and to talk. Time to talk to my father. Time to talk to the PRT. Time to work out what I wanted and what you people wanted."

I'd finished with his boots now, leaving plain black socks showing holes in a few toes that I knew weren't my fault. There was a pile of twisted refuse around his feet that he couldn't see. I left it there and started on the legs.

"And I talked, but all I got back was lies. Piggot trying to leash me so she could use me like the rest of you. D- Danny pushing me away because he couldn't even start to understand my feelings." Who the hell did they think they were to want to order me around like that? "Where was the time to make up my mind? Will you give it to me now, here? Let me make up my mind and make a choice, change what's been choosen for me?"

Tight half pants were all that remained, a plain black, and the pile around Dauntless was larger still. I started on the top half of his costume. They wouldn't let me chose, they thought they knew better.

"No. I'm nothing to you. I'm a tool for Piggot to use, a feather in her cap. Just another soldier. If I wasn't strong enough to fend for myself, if I wasn't strong enough to fend off you, she would have ordered me brought in by now. And I'm nothing to my fa. Fuck, I'm nothing to Danny. What does he know? He never listened, never cared what I wanted, never thought I might have my own opinions, know better then him."

I'd made quick work of the arms of his suit, and there wasn't much left of the chest piece at this point.

"Certainly never thought about what he was doing. Neither did you. I read about your power online, you know. Kind of a pain for you isn't it? A small trickle of power into something each day, slowly adding up over, what was it? 'Time'? Must really suck to have the effort you put in rendered completely pointless by someone who thinks they can control you."

The stripped pile of fabric and metal was a mound around his feet at this point. I'd felt him struggling against my grip the entire time. It was nothing, barely anything compared to the way my powers had increased in strength. But I felt the struggles increase when he felt me start on his mask.

"It occurs to me, you all know who I am. You know my face, my name, my history." I plucked the back of it apart first. Nothing major, just everything that held it in place. Now the only thing that kept his identity secure was me. "I suppose, considering the way everyone has been treating me, that's par for the course." I could feel him shacking now. We were hardly alone, and the three gang members were hanging on my every word. Laying on the ground between us, eyes flicking back and forth, if I dropped his mask they'd have clear line of sight to his face. Did I want that?

No.

As much as I'd not had the best run of luck keeping my own identity secret, the PRT hadn't had anything to do with that. At least, not intentionally. With the exception of my-

Well, I would have told Danny anyway. I might blame them for the timing, for the execution, but it would have been wrong to blame them for him finding out at all. Not to mention how much trouble it would cause me if I was responsible for a PRT cape getting ID'd.

We shot up into the air, Dauntless flying along after me until the buildings started to shrink behind us.

"Well?" I questioned him, letting him control his head and arms again. "You'll have to let me know what it's like, you know, actually having the chance to choose who gets to know who you are."

"This... Sirin you've-"

"'Taylor', isn't it? Lets not stand on ceremony, it's just the two of us. Taylor Hebert, age 15, latest Wards member, having a chat with name whatever, age whatever, high and mighty Protectorate member - well, high anyway."

"This isn't something you want to do Siren."

I stopped him there. Locked him up as he was, hands desperately clutching what was left of his mask to his face as if I wasn't already holding it in place.

"What, don't trust me? I think you've got our positions mixed up a bit. You're supposed to be encouraging the wayward Ward to return home, yes?" His hands, still grasping the mask, moved forwards and back whilst I held my phone's camera towards him to make it clear to him he only kept his identity secret at my whim. My point made, we shot across town. "Well, you've done your duty for the night, whoever you are. Just do me a favor:"

We dropped, stomach-wrenchingly fast, towards the PRT building's front doors. The two guards out the front didn't have time to react before I ruptured the containment foam tanks on their backs enough to gum up the entirety of the front doors, Dauntless and them along with it. Carefully, I relaxed my hold on Dauntless and found, as I'd intended, that his arms were stuck just right to hold the mask in place.

One less problem, no matter what tonight would bring. I leaned in close, ignoring the flash of a lone late night tourist snapping a shot along with the meaningless dribble coming from the guards.

"Leave me alone." I tried to make it sound menacing, but I was well aware that I still had the voice of a teenage girl and I doubted it had any effect whatsoever.

Well, I was a firm believer that actions spoke louder than words anyway.
 
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No it very specificly is not in any post I quoted. A citation allows one to go to the source of the quotation, and check it for accuracy.

Edit for clarity:

"Four Score and seven years ago" is a quotation.

"The Gettysburg Address may be found here" is a citation.

A request for a citation is often given in response to a quotation or statement of fact that is given as a sumation of some written work or other evidence. A request for a citation is very much different from a request for a quotation.
*snap snap snap*

You tell em gurl!

....Moving on.

Well, from Piggot's point of view, she likely can't just lose the paperwork. It was filed, recognized, and likely digitally logged into the PRT network. Which means she would likely have to jump through several legal hoops and explain both to the legal department, Danny, and anyone else who asks why she has reneged on the application.

And she can't leave Taylor alone. She said as much in the meeting that if the papers were signed and Taylor legally became a Ward, then her safety and activities as a Ward become the legal purview of the PRT/Ward Program. If she does, Piggot runs the risk of someone finding out about the situation and demanding that Piggot take extreme measures to fix it, because that's her job.

Which means Piggot has a problem. She likely wants and knows that in order to progress peacefully, she needs to keep her distance. But at the same time, she has regulations and procedures and the backlash from not following them. She has to keep Taylor monitored and under some level of control. Even if she shredded and sent the paperwork back, it's now redundant. It's been digitally copied and spread around the departments both in and outside of Brockton. I believe Piggot even said as much during the meeting that if the paperwork is signed, it's more of a problem for them then it is for Taylor. Likely because from the PRT/Wards side of things, they need a credible reason to not accept Taylor as a Ward.

So from this standpoint, Piggot is doing pretty much the best she can. She has the Protectorate and Wards looking out for Taylor. If they find her, they hang around a bit, make sure that she's not getting herself or anyone else killed. The Wards make small talk, and the Protectorate try to ask her to come in, or in the case of A&B, likely make small talk.

And that's a thing. The Wards don't appear to be trying to bring her in. As they said, all they try to do is talk and chat with her, like they've been ordered. And Taylor, while not reacting positively, is not reacting absolutely negatively. Some of the Wards even comment that they get positive reactions or middling ones, and they are the ones that really do just want to talk.

The ones that view it as a chore are the ones getting the majorly negative reactions from Taylor.

Which means that from a standpoint, the process is working by sheer exposure. While not instantly becoming friends, Taylor does appear to be warming up to a select few of the Wards. Except Browbeat. Browbeat just confuses her.

And again, the process is working. We can see Taylor wearing down as she finds that her freedom is only so free, and that her choices in trying to be independent are making a whole new box to be afraid of. She even considers for a moment just trying it, giving in and letting it happen before she goes 'fuck no' because she hasn't reached a point yet where she is really willing for it.

Which is likely all part of Piggot's plan. Spend some time tossing the Wards and Protectorate at Taylor. Find out who Taylor doesn't immediately hate, and then start backing down and tossing only the ones that get less of a negative reaction at Taylor and find out who gets small positive reactions. Then toss those exclusively at Taylor. Which seems to be how Piggot is playing it. The Wards talk about how a select pair each night is chosen to talk to Taylor.

In the end, we have to remember that Piggot isn't an end-all-be-all in Brockton. She still has to answer to higher bureaucracies and fear the power of paperwork and red-tape. Her hands are as likely tied as anyone else, and she's just trying to not let it detonate. Or if she does foresee one, she's trying to control and limit it.
But none of that really matter because on her next power jump.

She will be a full telepath or at least to the level of image reading.

Contact with Browbeat or Armsmaster at that point is like an 80% chance of Dark Pheonix rising.
 
All I can think is that Dauntless got really lucky that Taylor was in something that could, comparatively, be called a good mood. Because sometimes, if you have a really shitty day, anything can set you off. Which probably wouldn't go well in the long run:

(I did a thing)
"Sirin, wait," he said, his voice firm. I could feel traces of exasperation and annoyance flowing through his thoughts, which almost startled me for a moment; Annoyed and exasperated with me? Fuck them. I'd told them repeatedly to leave me alone, and it was hardly fair to blame me if they couldn't work out I didn't anything to do with them.

"'Wait'?" I asked him rhetorically, rising slightly off the rooftop to drift towards tonight's PRT mouthpiece. "You're really going to ask me that when it was all I ever asked anyone?"

He was a good little mouthpiece though. "We need to talk."

"We really don't," I corrected, crossing my arms as I felt a scowl draw across my face. Why did it have to be tonight? One more thing, following on from a shitty day where everything had gone wrong. This was supposed to be my release, supposed to relieve some stress, and now here I was; stuck dealing with the PRT. Again.

No.

I grabbed his armor in my telekinesis, pulling the strings on my brand new puppet taunt until he was standing straight and tall. He started to call out again and I clamped his mouth shut. Did he bite his tongue? I really didn't care.

"You need to talk. You want me to wait." They really want to push this, well, I can push this. I started wrenching strips of his armor apart, grasping individual bits and peeling them like layers off an onion, starting at his boots. "All I ever asked was for time and to talk. Time to talk to my father. Time to talk to the PRT. Time to work out what I wanted and what you people wanted."

I'd finished with his boots now, leaving plain black socks showing holes in a few toes that I knew weren't my fault. There was a pile of twisted refuse around his feet that he couldn't see. I left it there and started on the legs.

"And I talked, but all I got back was lies. Piggot trying to leash me so she could use me like the rest of you. D- Danny pushing me away because he couldn't even start to understand my feelings." Who the hell did they think they were to want to order me around like that? "Where was the time to make up my mind? Will you give it to me now, here? Let me make up my mind and make a choice, change what's been choose for me?"

Tight half pants were all that remained, a plain black, and the pile around Dauntless was larger still. I started on the top half of his costume. They wouldn't let me chose, they thought they knew better.

"No. I'm nothing to you. I'm a tool for Piggot to use, a feather in her cap. Just another soldier. If I wasn't strong enough to fend for myself, if I wasn't strong enough to fend off you, she would have ordered me brought in by now. And I'm nothing to my fa. Fuck, I'm nothing to Danny. What does he know? He never listened, never cared what I wanted, never thought I might have my own opinions, know better then him."

I'd made quick work of the arms of his suit, and there wasn't much left of the chest piece at this point.

"Certainly never thought about what he was doing. Neither did you. I read about your power online, you know. Kind of a pain for you isn't it? A small trickle of power into something each day, slowly adding up over, what was it? Time? Must really suck to have the effort you put in rendered completely pointless by someone who thinks they can control you."

The stripped pile of fabric and metal was a mound around his feet at this point. I'd felt him struggling against my grip the entire time. It was nothing, barely anything compared to the way my powers had increased in strength. But I felt the struggles increase when he felt me start on his mask.

"It occurs to me, you all know who I am. You know my face, my name, my history." I plucked the back of it apart first. Nothing major, just everything that held it in place. Now the only thing that kept his identity secure was me. "I suppose, considering the way everyone has been treating me, that's par for the course." I could feel him shacking now. We were hardly alone, and the three gang members were hanging on my every word. Laying on the ground between us, eyes flicking back and forth, if I dropped his mask they'd have clear line of sight to his face. Did I want that?

No.

As much as I'd not had the best run of luck keeping my own identity secret, the PRT hadn't had anything to do with that. At least, not intentionally. With the exception of my-

Well, I would have told Danny anyway. I might blame them for the timing, for the execution, but it would have been wrong to blame them for him finding out at all. Not to mention how much trouble it would cause me if I was responsible for a PRT cape getting ID'd.

We shot up into the air, Dauntless flying along after me until the buildings started to shrink behind us.

"Well?" I questioned him, letting him control his head and arms again. "You'll have to let me know what it's like, you know, actually having the chance to choose who gets to know who you are."

"This... Siren you've-"

"'Taylor', isn't it? Lets not stand on ceremony, it's just the two of us. Taylor Hebert, age 15, latest Wards member, having a chat with name whatever, age whatever, high and mighty Protectorate member - well, high anyway."

"This isn't something you want to do Siren."

I stopped him there. Locked him up as he was, hands desperately clutching what was left of his mask to his face as if I wasn't already holding it in place.

"What, don't trust me? I think you've got our positions mixed up a bit. You're supposed to be encouraging the wayward Ward to return home, yes?" His hands, still grasping the mask, moved forwards and back whilst I held my phone's camera towards him to make it clear to him he only kept his identity secret at my whim. My point made, we shot across town. "Well, you've done your duty for the night, whoever you are. Just do me a favor:"

We dropped, stomach-wrenchingly fast, towards the PRT building's front doors. The two guards out the front didn't have time to react before I ruptured the containment foam tanks on their backs enough to gum up the entirety of the front doors, Dauntless and them along with it. Carefully, I relaxed my hold on Dauntless and found, as I'd intended, that his arms were stuck just right to hold the mask in place.

One less problem, no matter what tonight would bring. I leaned in close, ignoring the flash of a lone late night tourist snapping a shot along with the meaningless dribble coming from the guards.

"Leave me alone." I tried to make it sound menacing, but I was well aware that I still had the voice of a teenage girl and I doubted it had any effect whatsoever.

Well, I was a firm believer that actions spoke louder than words anyway.

I declare this omake Coil Timeline Canon!
 
Pft in my mind this is alternate canon, dun need no author fiat to substitute your reality with my own.

I believe in the me that believes in myself!
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Yeah I have no idea where any of that came from.
 
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Thank you for the chapter Chibipoe. While it feels shorter than some recent chapters it does show a lot of Taylor's current situation and mindset as well as hints nicely at what the future holds.

I enjoyed how you showed us her emotional state and the way she's gaining more control over her telepathy / empathy. I also enjoyed the Wards segment a great deal. And Kaiser in the last scene, well, depending on what happens it could lead to Taylor showing that she's quite a bit stronger than what is currently believed by everybody except Glory Girl.

I do wonder about what the Protectorate members, excluding Miss Militia and Armsmaster, currently know about her, whether they know her civilian name and why she doesn't like and trust them, but I hope that will be addressed by a scene in a future chapter. (Hopefully before they realize she's a lot more powerful than they thought.)

A comment regarding the Ward portion. It seems that the Wards were told that Sirin was signed up and abandoned by her parents and only Vista noticed and put together that Armsmaster and Miss Militia (and possibly Piggot) was likely involved in alienating Sirin. Which does say good things about her observation abilities, deductive skills and intelligence. What can I say, I like the fact that you wrote Vista as more than childish and / or cute.

Two questions if I may, with only one related to this chapter.

Firstly, regarding Gallant. At first it seemed as if he believed that Taylor is Sirin, if I'm not mistaken.

Gallant looked even more uncomfortable, shifting again. "I can't share Glory's secrets, but… I do think they know each other out of costume." He drew in a long breath. "And… I can't say more than that, because it isn't my secret to tell."

Then, it seems as if he realized Taylor's immunity to his emphatic sense and Sirin's immunity were the same and knew that Taylor is Sirin. Am I reading this correctly or was he thinking of something else at first?

Gallant shrugged, exasperation clear on his face. "I didn't catch on until recently. Most of the time, it's pretty clear what she's feeling just from her voice and body language, so I didn't even notice. It's almost like…" He trailed off, a pensive frown appearing on his face as he sat back and chewed on his lower lip thoughtfully.

"Almost like…?" Clockblocker prompted.

"What?" He blinked and shook his head. "Oh, nothing. Just reminded me of something else, that's all." Gallant grabbed another slice of pizza, devoting all his attention to that.

Lastly Armsmaster. In chapter 2.3 you had him mention that he made a mistake when he didn't research Taylor, her home life and / or their relationship.

"Let me finish," he said firmly. "I truly am sorry. I had hoped that having your father here would make you more amenable to talking about this. My misstep was in not researching as thoroughly as I should have. There are clearly issues I was unaware of at play here."

At the time I considered that merely him making an excuse without any substance on his part.

However, when I looked at Lost Angles again on Monday it does seem as if he believes that he could have researched Taylor's home life.

He turned his attention back to the timeline, his eyes skimming over the sparse facts that he knew were true, trying to piece together where the greatest failings were.

A derisive sound emerged from his throat at that thought. He didn't need to piece together where those were, he knew already. It was his own fault for not properly researching Hebert's situation at home.

This leads me to three different possibilities.
1) He's basically lying to himself. Saying to himself that if only he properly researched Taylor's home life he could have successfully approached her and convinced her to join the Wards when he doesn't want to admit that he's unable to get the needed information and not capable of competently dealing with teens or children.
2) He's overestimating his capabilities. He believes that he's capable of researching Taylor (spying on Taylor) well enough to get all the needed information necessary to work out her and her father's relationship as well as their reactions to various approaches without really considering what is needed.
3) He is capable of spying on Taylor and her father well enough to get all the needed information necessary to work out her and her father's relationship as well as their reactions to various approaches. Since this will likely at the very least require bugging their house and or phone to listen in to their conversations over a period of time and probably having an empath study them both singly and when they interact I find this option rather disturbing.

Would you be able to steer me in the right direction regarding Armsmaster, whether one of these possibilities or something I haven't thought of?
 
It was merely an oversight on his part.

His borderline Asperger's mentality never made him question that Taylor wouldn't enjoy the intrusion.

So while he could have researched her and gotten more information about the situation, he might still have been outpaced by Piggot.
 
Taylor's still not sure of her purpose, beyond the two points of wanting to be a hero and NOT wanting to be in the Protectorate... But her current situation doesn't seem sustainable to her, and it's anyone's guess which of those two is going to fall first.

At the PRT/Protectorate, their hands are effectively tied by Danny's actions. They would likely happily agree to hand Taylor over to New Wave or even Dragon's Guild if they could. Instead they're stuck with a moody youth that's only a Ward in name and only nominally on the same side... and they're likely worried about her going Villain. Having the heroes meet up with her often is a decent enough idea in that respect, though there's a risk of it going wrong if she thinks they're pestering her.

Of course, there's still the Browbeat!Madison revelation to come. You know that feeling Wiley Coyote gets when he's taken a horrible fall and realizes the boulder is still up there? That's Director Piggot, right now. :)
 
Uh....when did he ever come into contact with an endbringer?

Or was that some kind of veiled joke that I missed?
 
To be entirely fair, when you talk to a kid, you bring in their parents. That's non-negotiable. There was no way for him to figure out that would go bad ahead of time, because Taylor was hiding the whole thing from her dad and even bugging their house wouldn't have revealed any more than that.
 
To be entirely fair, when you talk to a kid, you bring in their parents. That's non-negotiable. There was no way for him to figure out that would go bad ahead of time, because Taylor was hiding the whole thing from her dad and even bugging their house wouldn't have revealed any more than that.

To be entirely fair, he might have realized that ferreting out a cape and dragging it into the light might have unintended consequences.
 
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